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外研社八上Module4 Planes,ships and trains模块作文精讲精练
写作要求
本模块的话题是“旅游与交通”。在具体的写作中,学生应做到以下几点:
1.能运用比较级和最高级对不同的交通方式进行比较;
2.能描述一些自己熟悉的风景名胜;
3.能制定旅游计划,并进行分析和比较。
写作积累
【常用句型】
It’s the most comfortable way,but it’s also the most expensive.
The more information we get,the better we will do.
A journey by train is more relaxing than by coach,but a lot more expensive.
Different students go to school in different ways.
I think the best way of going to school is by bike.
It takes me about ten minutes to get to school from my home every day.
范文欣赏
【典型例题】
假如你是某国际学校的学生,最近你校的网上论坛“Travel”版块里有人询问从伦敦到巴黎的旅行方式。请你根据表格里的信息在论坛里发一篇帖子,介绍相关信息。
伦敦→巴黎
旅行方式 长途大巴 飞机 火车
费用 20英镑 80英镑 60英镑
耗时 10小时 1小时 3小时
舒适指数 ★ ★★ ★★★
趣味指数 ★★ ★ ★★★
【审题思路】
1.审人称:介绍旅行方式的优缺点时主要用第三人称。
2.审时态:文章主要介绍旅行方式的相关信息,主要用一般现在时。
3.注意事项:
( 1 )不要仅仅列举表格中给出的具体数字,需通过比较得出结论;
( 2 )注意衔接要自然,可使用适当的过渡连接词。
【写作提纲】
1.开篇点题:You can go from London to Paris by coach,plane or train.
2.主体比较几种旅行方式:
Travelling by plane...but also...
Travelling by...but...and...
3.总结:No dish suits all tastes.You can choose your favourite way.
【优秀范文】
You can go from London to Paris by coach,plane or train.Travelling by plane is the fastest but also the most expensive way.It’s not as interesting as going by coach or by train.Travelling by coach is cheaper than by train or by plane.But it’s the slowest way and not as comfortable as going by train.Travelling by train is the second most expensive and the second fastest way.And it’s the most comfortable and the most interesting way.
No dish suits all tastes.You can choose your favourite way.

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