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Family Members 写作范文集
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(2) Model essays：
The model essays are a little bit challenging, but efforts always pay back. Spend time learning and reciting and try to use what you learn in your writing. Believe it or not, you’re more capable than you think!
Attention: You’ll need your notebook and dictionary.
1※（介绍清晰流畅且语言有亮点）
Look, here is a nice photo of my family. I am glad to introduce my family to you. There are six members of my family.
The man with a poker face is my father. He is a cook. He always cooks various kinds of healthy food for me. My mother is a clerk. She can always take good care of us all. My grandparents are factory workers. They like reading books. I am a girl of 13. My hobby is collecting stamps. The boy next to me is my little brother. He is fond of playing balls with me.
I love my family.
2※（逻辑清晰，性格、职业和补充的说明对应得很好，且语言有亮点）
Hello, everyone! Here is a photo of my family. There are six people in my family. They are my parents, my grandparents, my brother and me. This young woman is my mother. She is a teacher. She is kind and friendly. She is popular with students. My father is a doctor. He is so tall. He is kind to sick people. My grandparents are old but helpful. They are willing to take care of our family. That little boy is my brother. We love him best. His skin is as white as snow.
I love my family deeply, because I have a happy and nice family.
3※（用词丰富，句法多变，建议膜拜）
Hello everyone. I'm Lucy, a 14-year-old junior high school student. I'd like to share the photo of my family with you.
Look at the woman with short black hair. She’s my beloved mother who is good at English. She is tall and slim. That is my father. He is a Chinese teacher. And he is a tough man. He is very popular with his students. The girl and the boy standing in front of our grandparents are my little brother and me. I think I'm kind of shy. I enjoy reading all kinds of books and drawing in my spare time. However, my little brother is quite outgoing. He likes making friends and doing sports.
I have a happy family. I love them from the bottom of my heart.
Polished writing 1
Hello, I’m Lucy! Look, this is a photo of my family. Who are these in the middle of the photo Yes, they are my grandparents. They are old, but they are kind. They often buy gifts for me. This is my brother. He is so cute. These are my parents. They are teachers. They are so clever. Haha, this is me, a lovely girl. My family’s lucky number is six. Because there are six people in our family. This is my family. “Family is not an important thing. It’s everything.” I love my family.
Hello, I'm Lucy! Here is a photo of my family and I'd like to introduce my lovely family members to you.
In the middle of this photo are my grandparents. They are old, but they are kind. They often buy gifts for me. Next to them is my brother, who is absolutely adorable. My parents, who are teachers, are incredibly clever. Haha, and this is me, a charming girl. Our family's lucky number is six, because there are six people in our family.
This is my family. “Family is not an important thing. It’s everything.” I love my family.
Polished writing 2
Hello, I'm lucy. I'm 12 years old. I'm from China. There are 6 people in my family. They are my grandma, grandpa, mother, father, brother and me. This is my family photo. These are my parents, Linda and Bob. They are good English teachers. These are my grandparents. My grandma is kind. She is a cook. He is my grandpa. He can sing English songs. This is my brother Jack. He is 11 years old. He is a student in No.3 middle school. He likes playing pipa and swimming. He is a shy boy. This is my family. I love my family!
Hello, everyone! I'm Lucy, a 12-year-old girl from China. There are 6 people in my family. They are my grandma, grandpa, mother, father, brother and me. This is my family photo. These two are my parents, Linda and Bob. They are both excellent English teachers. My grandparents are also an important part of our family. My kind grandmother is a cook, while my grandpa is a talented musician who can sing English songs. This is my brother, Jack, who is 11 years old. He is a student in No.3 Middle School. He's a shy boy, but he enjoys playing the pipa and swimming. We all love and care for each other, and I feel truly fortunate to have such a wonderful family. I love my family!
Model essay learning record
Hi! I'm lucy. Here is a photo of my family. Those two people who have grey hair are my grandparents. They are old but always willing to take care of my family. This is my father. He is a policeman and I'm very proud of him. The woman in purple is my mother. She is not only beautiful but also hard-working. Look! The boy is my younger brother. He is so cute and cool that everyone likes him. This girl is me. I love my family deeply because it is always full of happiness!
Words & Expressions
willing (adj.): not objecting to doing something; having no reason for not doing something愿意；乐意// be willing to do sth. They are willing to share their knowledge and experience.他们愿意分享他们的知识和经验。
proud (adj.): feeling pleased and satisfied about something that you own or have done骄傲的；自豪的// be proud of somebody/something/yourself for doing sth. He was proud of himself for not giving up.他为自己没有放弃而深感自豪。
not only… but also…不但…而且…
He not only read the book, but also remembered what he read.他不但读了这本书，而且记得所读的内容
deeply (adv.): very; very much很；非常；极其//I deeply regret my error. 我对我的错误深感遗憾。
full (adj.): having no empty space满的；充满的；满是…的// be full of something My suitcase is full of books. 我的提箱装满了书。
happiness (n.) [“≠” means antonym]
(≠ unhappiness)
happy (adj.) (≠ unhappy)
happily (adv.) (≠ unhappily)
(3) Students’ essays：
1
Hello, boys and girls. This is a photo of my family. The little girl is me. My name is Lucy and I am only nine years old. The young man is my father. He is 40 years old. He is a bank staff. He works in ICBC. The young woman is my mother. She is an English teacher. She works in a middle school. She can speak English very well. My grandparents are between my parents. They are 60 years old. They are old, but they still do some housework and cook. I think they are hard-working and helpful. In front of my grandmother is my brother. He is only six years old. I love my family.
2
Good afternoon, my friends! Nice to meet you! I am Lucy.
Here is a photo of my family. Who are these in the middle of the photo Oh, they are my grandparents. They are kind and friendly. Look! This is my father. He is a doctor. This is my mother. She is pretty. My mother is an English teacher. You can see my brother. He is cute and funny. And this is me. I am 14 years old. I am gentle and friendly to others. I hope to become good friends with everyone. My telephone number is one five five five eight five zero zero one. You can call me.
What about your family
3
Hello! I am Lucy. Here is a photo of my family. Look! These are my grandfather Bob and my grandmother Cindy. They live in Shanghai with us. They are old, but they still read some books at home every day. I think they are hard-working. Oh, these are my father and mother. They are English teachers. My mom and I are in the same school and she is my teacher. This boy is my brother. He is 7 years old. He is excellent. He can do many things. This is my family. I love them too much.
4
Hello, everyone! Here is a nice photo of my family. There are six people in my family. They are my grandparents. My grandparents are very kind. My grandfather likes reading. My grandmother likes cooking. She can cook very well. My parents are in the photo, too. My father likes playing computer games. My mother is a Chinese teacher. She likes reading, too. Who is that girl Oh, it's me! The boy who is in front of my grandmother is my brother. His name is Jack. He is only five years old. I have a cute dog. It is not in this photo. I love my family. It's good.
5
Home is a beautiful word. It is the harbor where we live. This is a photo of my family. Let me introduce my family.
There are six people in my family. My mother is a teacher in Beijing No.2 middle school. She has excellent results in teaching, and all her students like her very much. My father is a writer. He published a good book, but I still can’t understand it. Maybe I’m too young. My grandparents are famers. They live in the countryside. We go to the countryside to visit them every weekend. I also have a younger brother. He studies in a kindergarten in Beijing. He is very smart and can add and subtract within ten minutes. This is my family, an interesting and happy family.
6
I have a photo of my family, too. There are eight people in my family. Look! The boy in a blue skirt is me. That man wearing black pants is my father Andy. He's great! He's good at playing soccer. He plays soccer every Sunday afternoon. That woman in a black dress is my mom. She is kind to me. The young girl in white skirt is my sister. She's12. She can sing well. We are in the same school. She is in our school music club. And who's that little girl She is my sister, too. She is very cute. Her dream life is to become an actress. She thinks it's exciting to be an actress. And those old people are my grandparents. They like playing chess very much. And where is the eighth Haha! Coco is in my family, too!
7
Hello, boys and girls! My name is Lucy. And this is a photo of my family. This is my father, and this is my mother. My father’s name is Jack. And my mother’s name is Jenny. They are English teachers. So I am good at English. Those are my grandparents, Tom and Mary. They are old but kind. They still do some housework at home every day. I think they are great. Who is he He is my brother, Bob. He is eight years old. And I'm ten years old. Who is she Oh! It's me! This is my family.
8
Hello, everyone! I am Lucy. “Family is not an important thing. It’s everything.” Let me tell you something about them.
There’re six people in my family. They’re my parents, grandparents, my brother and me. This is my brother. He is 9 years old. He likes blue very much. His cap is also blue. And he is very clever and cute. These are my parents. My mother is an English teacher. She is a teacher in our school. My father is an engineer. He is very kind and friendly. He often goes to work by car. They’re my grandparents. My grandmother is very helpful. I think they are great. I love my family!
9
Hello! My name is Lucy. I am 13 years old. Here is a nice photo of my family. This is my father. He is 32 years old. He is funny and interesting. And this is my mother. She is kind. She is an English teacher. Look! They are my grandparents. They are old, but they still do some housework at home every day. This is my little brother. He is a student. He is clever and shy. His favourite color is blue. So his clothes, his chair and his bed are blue. And this is me. I am happy, because I love my family.
10
Let me tell you about my family. Look! These are my grandparents, Mary and Lisa. They are old, but they still do some housework at home every day. This is my father Tom and this is my mother Ann. My father is 36 and he is a doctor. How about my mother She is 34 and she is a teacher in our school. She teaches English. My name is Lucy. I’m a student in No.3 middle school. In my teachers’ eyes, I am an excellent student because I do well in my studies. This is my brother, Jeff. He is so cool and lovely that everyone likes him very much. I love my family!
11
Hello, boys and girls! I’m Lucy. Look! It is the photo of my family. Let me tell you something about my family members. My father Bob is a teacher. He works in NO.3 middle school. He likes playing sports and singing. He often plays sports and sings songs on the weekend with his friends. My mother is a teacher, too. She and I are in the same school. Her name is Cindy. She is kind. The old man and old woman are my grandparents, Tom and Helen. I am a student. I like reading because I know “No pain, no gain”. My brother Eric is clever. He likes readings, too. He is excellent at studying. He is also good at playing football. I love my family!
12
Hello, boys and girls. This is a photo of my family. There are my parents, my grandparents, my brother and me. So I have a big family. This is my father. He is cool. He is 53 years old, so he is older than my classmates’ fathers. This is my mother. She is very outgoing. She likes purple, and her shirt is purple too！My mother is a worker. But I don’t know why she doesn’t like her job! These are my grandparents. They are very old. Their hair is white like snow. Their eyes are gray like rainy sky. And this is my brother! He is very young! He is so cute like a little rabbit. We all like him. This is my family. I like my family!
13
Hello, everyone! I'm Lucy, an English girl. I'm so excited to introduce my family to you. This is a photo of my family. It's nice, isn't it These are my parents. They look happy. Between my parents, there are my grandfather and my grandmother. How about that boy in the blue shirt That's my brother. He's so cute. The girl next to him is me. My mother has short hair. She likes it. She likes her black eyes too. We all have black eyes. But I don't like it. I think blue is better than black. Because blue represents the sky. And black symbolizes the bad.
Family is not an important thing. It's everything. I Love my family.

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