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Period Ⅴ　Writing——表达观点的文章
一、技法指导
高考英语写作中，发表观点、议论情景是常见的写作手法。发表观点就是通过议论或说理来表达作者的见解和主张，作者对某一问题持有一种看法，为了使读者同意自己的看法，提出若干理由，试图说服他人。
发表观点时，我们要注意三个要素：论点、论据、论证。
二、篇章结构
1.引言(introduction)：由于英语作文受时间和字数的限制，因此，审清题意之后在引言段中作者就必须简单解释要讨论的问题，并明白地亮出自己的观点，如提倡什么、支持什么、反对什么。
2.主体段(main body)：主体段是议论的过程，作者必须有足够的证据(adequate proofs)来论证自己的观点。一般可提出一个或两个proofs，并对此用几句话分别进行阐述。
3.结论(conclusion)：结论段可以用一两句话来结束文章。同时要注意与引言段呼应，但不能照搬前面的原话。
一、亮点词汇
1.have a debate about　　就……辩论
2.vary from...to... 从……到……变化
3.hold different opinions 持不同意见
4.in one’s opinion/view 在某人看来
5.as far as sb be concerned 就某人而言
6.be in favour of/be for 支持……
7.agree with... 同意……
8.be against 反对……
9.be designed/intended to do... 旨在……
10.Everything has two sides. 每件事都有两面性。
11.advantages and disadvantages 优缺点； 利弊
二、高级句式
第一段：提出论点，引入话题
1.Recently our class has had a debate about whether organic farming is good for us. Different students hold different opinions.
最近我们班就有机农业是否对我们有益展开了一场辩论。不同的学生有不同的看法。
2.There are different opinions among students as to organic farming.
对于有机农业，学生们有不同的看法。
3.Opinions about organic farming vary from person to person. Some people are in favour of it while others are against it.
关于有机农业的看法因人而异。一些人赞成，而另一些人反对。
第二段：列举正反方观点及其理由
1.Some students are in favour of organic farming. Firstly，they think the vegetables of organic farming are grown without any chemical fertiliser. Besides，organic farming practices are designed to encourage soil and water conservation and reduce pollution. Last but not least，more and more people are demanding the most natural and nutritious choices for their family.
有些学生赞成有机农业。首先，他们认为有机农业的蔬菜种植没有使用任何化学肥料。此外，有机耕作方式旨在鼓励保持水土和减少污染。最后但同等重要的是，越来越多的人要求为他们的家庭选择最天然和最有营养的食物。
2.However，others are against it because it costs a great deal to develop organic farming.
然而，其他人则表示反对，因为发展有机农业要花费很多钱。
第三段：表明自己的观点
1.As the old saying goes，everything has two sides. It has both advantages and disadvantages.
正如老话说的那样，凡事都有两面性，即既有优点，又有缺点。
2.As far as I am concerned，I agree with the latter opinion to some extent. I think that...
就我而言，从某种程度上讲，我同意后一观点。我认为……
3.For my part，I think it reasonable to... Only in this way can you/we...
对我来说，我认为……是合理的。只有通过这种方式，你/我们才能……
假定你是李华，最近你班开展了主题为“Chemical Farming or Organic Farming”的征文活动。请根据以下内容用英语写一篇短文。要点如下：
1.你的观点：有机农业优于化学农业。
2.作出该选择的理由。
注意：1.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2.开头语已给出，不计入总词数。
In my opinion，organic farming is preferable to chemical farming because of its significant advantages over the latter. Details are as follows.
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
第一步：要点翻译
1.我们应该尽自己所能来保护脆弱的环境。
We should do everything in our power to protect the delicate environment.
2.有机农业不含化肥。
Organic farming is free of chemical fertilizers.
3.有机农业旨在使土壤肥沃。
Organic farming is intended to keep the soil rich.
4.有机农业对自然环境无疑是友好的。
Organic farming is undoubtedly friendly to the environment.
5.被诊断患有癌症的人数在上升，我们应该要更加注意吃的东西。
The number of people diagnosed with cancer is increasing and we are supposed to attach more attention to our food.
6.有机食物富含矿物质和维生素，它确保我们摄入必要的营养，并且减少了患潜在的严重疾病的可能性。
Organic food is rich in minerals and vitamins. It guarantees us the essential nutrition and reduces the likelihood of potential serious diseases.
7.我们都知道化学农业生产出来的食物吃起来没有味道。
We all know that food produced from chemical farming tastes flavorless.
8.有机农业绝对能保全食物的自然风味，继而激发我们的食欲。
Organic farming can definitely secure the natural flavor of food，thus stimulating our appetite.
第二步：词句升级
1.用so...that...升级要点1
The environment is so delicate that we should do everything in our power to protect it.
2.用非谓语动词短语作状语和定语从句升级要点2、要点3和要点4
Intended to keep the soil rich，organic farming，which is free of chemical fertilizers，is undoubtedly friendly to the environment.
3.用with复合结构升级要点5
With the number of people diagnosed with cancer increasing，we are supposed to attach more attention to our food.
4.用形容词短语作状语和as well as升级要点6
Rich in minerals and vitamins，organic food guarantees us the essential nutrition as well as reduces the likelihood of potential serious diseases.
5.用it作形式主语和并列句升级要点7和要点8
It is known to us that food produced from chemical farming tastes flavorless，while organic farming can definitely secure the natural flavor of food，thus stimulating our appetite.
第三步：连句成篇
In my opinion，organic farming is preferable to chemical farming because of its significant advantages over the latter. Details are as follows.
In the first place，the environment is so delicate that we should do everything in our power to protect it. Intended to keep the soil rich，organic farming，which is free of chemical fertilizers，is undoubtedly friendly to the environment.
With the number of people diagnosed with cancer increasing，we are supposed to attach more attention to our food. Rich in minerals and vitamins，organic food guarantees us the essential nutrition as well as reduces the likelihood of potential serious diseases. It is known to us that food produced from chemical farming tastes flavorless，while organic farming can definitely secure the natural flavor of food，thus stimulating our appetite.
In conclusion，with all these factors taken into account，preference should be given to organic farming.
假设你是明启中学高三学生李明，最近在一本英语杂志上读到一篇文章。作者认为“第一印象在人际交往中非常重要”，你对此话题很感兴趣。请写一封邮件给该杂志的“读者来信”专栏。内容包括：
1.你是否赞同作者的这一观点；
2.用具体事例说明你的观点。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
Dear Sir/Madam，
I am your English magazine’s faithful reader.Recently，a viewpoint from an article that the first impression is very important in interpersonal communication has caught my eye.That’s exactly what I am thinking.
On the one hand，first impressions are lasting impressions.People form opinions and make judgments about us the first time they see or hear about us.And these opinions cannot be changed easily later.On the other hand，bad first impressions often lead to unpleasant results.For example，if you are a salesman and have left a bad first impression on your customer，he or she will probably refuse to buy your product.So we should attach great importance to first impressions in our daily life.
I’m looking forward to sharing with other readers or the author more.
Yours，
Li Ming(共21张PPT)
Period Ⅴ　Writing——表达观点的文章
UNIT 5 WORKING THE LAND
点拨 写作技巧
积累 写作素材
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示例 分步写作
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跟踪 落实检查
一、技法指导
高考英语写作中，发表观点、议论情景是常见的写作手法。发表观点就是通过议论或说理来表达作者的见解和主张，作者对某一问题持有一种看法，为了使读者同意自己的看法，提出若干理由，试图说服他人。
发表观点时，我们要注意三个要素：论点、论据、论证。
二、篇章结构
1.引言(introduction)：由于英语作文受时间和字数的限制，因此，审清题意之后在引言段中作者就必须简单解释要讨论的问题，并明白地亮出自己的观点，如提倡什么、支持什么、反对什么。
2.主体段(main body)：主体段是议论的过程，作者必须有足够的证据(adequate proofs)来论证自己的观点。一般可提出一个或两个proofs，并对此用几句话分别进行阐述。
3.结论(conclusion)：结论段可以用一两句话来结束文章。同时要注意与引言段呼应，但不能照搬前面的原话。
一、亮点词汇
1.have a debate about　就……辩论
2.vary from...to... 从……到……变化
3.hold different opinions 持不同意见
4.in one’s opinion/view 在某人看来
5.as far as sb be concerned 就某人而言
6.be in favour of/be for 支持……
7.agree with... 同意……
8.be against 反对……
9.be designed/intended to do... 旨在……
10.Everything has two sides. 每件事都有两面性。
11.advantages and disadvantages 优缺点； 利弊
二、高级句式
第一段：提出论点，引入话题
1.Recently our class has had a debate about whether organic farming is good for us. Different students hold different opinions.
最近我们班就有机农业是否对我们有益展开了一场辩论。不同的学生有不同的看法。
2.There are different opinions among students as to organic farming.
对于有机农业，学生们有不同的看法。
3.Opinions about organic farming vary from person to person. Some people are in favour of it while others are against it.　
关于有机农业的看法因人而异。一些人赞成，而另一些人反对。
第二段：列举正反方观点及其理由
1.Some students are in favour of organic farming. Firstly，they think the vegetables of organic farming are grown without any chemical fertiliser. Besides，organic farming practices are designed to encourage soil and water conservation and reduce pollution. Last but not least，more and more people are demanding the most natural and nutritious choices for their family.
有些学生赞成有机农业。首先，他们认为有机农业的蔬菜种植没有使用任何化学肥料。此外，有机耕作方式旨在鼓励保持水土和减少污染。最后但同等重要的是，越来越多的人要求为他们的家庭选择最天然和最有营养的食物。
2.However，others are against it because it costs a great deal to develop organic farming.
然而，其他人则表示反对，因为发展有机农业要花费很多钱。
第三段：表明自己的观点
1.As the old saying goes，everything has two sides. It has both advantages and disadvantages.
正如老话说的那样，凡事都有两面性，即既有优点，又有缺点。
2.As far as I am concerned，I agree with the latter opinion to some extent. I think that...
就我而言，从某种程度上讲，我同意后一观点。我认为……
3.For my part，I think it reasonable to... Only in this way can you/we...
对我来说，我认为……是合理的。只有通过这种方式，你/我们才能……
假定你是李华，最近你班开展了主题为“Chemical Farming or Organic Farming”的征文活动。请根据以下内容用英语写一篇短文。要点如下：
1.你的观点：有机农业优于化学农业。
2.作出该选择的理由。
注意：1.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2.开头语已给出，不计入总词数。
In my opinion，organic farming is preferable to chemical farming because of its significant advantages over the latter. Details are as follows.
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
第一步：要点翻译
1.我们应该尽自己所能来保护脆弱的环境。
We should ___________________________________ the delicate environment.
2.有机农业不含化肥。
Organic farming ____________________________.
3.有机农业旨在使土壤肥沃。
Organic farming ________________________________.
do everything in our power to protect
is free of chemical fertilizers
is intended to keep the soil rich
4.有机农业对自然环境无疑是友好的。
Organic farming ___________________________________________________.
5.被诊断患有癌症的人数在上升，我们应该要更加注意吃的东西。
The number of people diagnosed with cancer ________________ and we _____________________________________ our food.
6.有机食物富含矿物质和维生素，它确保我们摄入必要的营养，并且减少了患潜在的严重疾病的可能性。
Organic food _____________________________. It _______________________
______________________ the likelihood of potential serious diseases.
is undoubtedly friendly to the environment
is increasing
are supposed to attach more attention to
is rich in minerals and vitamins
guarantees us the essential
nutrition and reduces
7.我们都知道化学农业生产出来的食物吃起来没有味道。
We all know that food _________________________________ tastes flavorless.
8.有机农业绝对能保全食物的自然风味，继而激发我们的食欲。
Organic farming ______________________________________________，thus stimulating our appetite.
produced from chemical farming
can definitely secure the natural flavor of food
第二步：词句升级
1.用so...that...升级要点1
The environment ___________________ we should do everything in our power to protect it.
2.用非谓语动词短语作状语和定语从句升级要点2、要点3和要点4
_____________________________，organic farming，____________________
____________________，is undoubtedly friendly to the environment.
is so delicate that
Intended to keep the soil rich
which is free of
chemical fertilizers
3.用with复合结构升级要点5
_____________________________________________________,we are supposed to attach more attention to our food.
4.用形容词短语作状语和as well as升级要点6
___________________________，organic food ________________________
__________________________ the likelihood of potential serious diseases.
With the number of people diagnosed with cancer increasing
Rich in minerals and vitamins
guarantees us the essential
nutrition as well as reduces
5.用it作形式主语和并列句升级要点7和要点8
________________________ food produced from chemical farming tastes flavorless，______________________________________________________
of food，thus stimulating our appetite.
It is known to us that
while organic farming can definitely secure the natural flavor
第三步：连句成篇
In my opinion，organic farming is preferable to chemical farming because of its significant advantages over the latter. Details are as follows.
In the first place，the environment is so delicate that we should do everything in our power to protect it. Intended to keep the soil rich，organic farming，which is free of chemical fertilizers，is undoubtedly friendly to the environment.
With the number of people diagnosed with cancer increasing，we are supposed to attach more attention to our food. Rich in minerals and vitamins，organic food guarantees us the essential nutrition as well as reduces the likelihood of potential serious diseases. It is known to us that food produced from chemical farming tastes flavorless，while organic farming can definitely secure the natural flavor of food，thus stimulating our appetite.
In conclusion，with all these factors taken into account，preference should be given to organic farming.
假设你是明启中学高三学生李明，最近在一本英语杂志上读到一篇文章。作者认为“第一印象在人际交往中非常重要”，你对此话题很感兴趣。请写一封邮件给该杂志的“读者来信”专栏。内容包括：
1.你是否赞同作者的这一观点；
2.用具体事例说明你的观点。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
Dear Sir/Madam，
I am your English magazine’s faithful reader.Recently，a viewpoint from an article that the first impression is very important in interpersonal communication has caught my eye.That’s exactly what I am thinking.
On the one hand，first impressions are lasting impressions.People form opinions and make judgments about us the first time they see or hear about us.And these opinions cannot be changed easily later.On the other hand，bad first impressions often lead to unpleasant results.For example，if you are a salesman and have left a bad first impression on your customer，he or she will probably refuse to buy your product.So we should attach great importance to first impressions in our daily life.
I’m looking forward to sharing with other readers or the author more.
Yours，
Li MingPeriod Ⅴ　Writing——表达观点的文章
一、技法指导
高考英语写作中，发表观点、议论情景是常见的写作手法。发表观点就是通过议论或说理来表达作者的见解和主张，作者对某一问题持有一种看法，为了使读者同意自己的看法，提出若干理由，试图说服他人。
发表观点时，我们要注意三个要素：论点、论据、论证。
二、篇章结构
1.引言(introduction)：由于英语作文受时间和字数的限制，因此，审清题意之后在引言段中作者就必须简单解释要讨论的问题，并明白地亮出自己的观点，如提倡什么、支持什么、反对什么。
2.主体段(main body)：主体段是议论的过程，作者必须有足够的证据(adequate proofs)来论证自己的观点。一般可提出一个或两个proofs，并对此用几句话分别进行阐述。
3.结论(conclusion)：结论段可以用一两句话来结束文章。同时要注意与引言段呼应，但不能照搬前面的原话。
一、亮点词汇
1.have a debate about　就……辩论
2.vary from...to... 从……到……变化
3.hold different opinions 持不同意见
4.in one’s opinion/view 在某人看来
5.as far as sb be concerned 就某人而言
6.be in favour of/be for 支持……
7.agree with... 同意……
8.be against 反对……
9.be designed/intended to do... 旨在……
10.Everything has two sides. 每件事都有两面性。
11.advantages and disadvantages 优缺点； 利弊
二、高级句式
第一段：提出论点，引入话题
1.Recently our class has had a debate about whether organic farming is good for us. Different students hold different opinions.
最近我们班就有机农业是否对我们有益展开了一场辩论。不同的学生有不同的看法。
2.There are different opinions among students as to organic farming.
对于有机农业，学生们有不同的看法。
3.Opinions about organic farming vary from person to person. Some people are in favour of it while others are against it.　关于有机农业的看法因人而异。一些人赞成，而另一些人反对。
第二段：列举正反方观点及其理由
1.Some students are in favour of organic farming. Firstly，they think the vegetables of organic farming are grown without any chemical fertiliser. Besides，organic farming practices are designed to encourage soil and water conservation and reduce pollution. Last but not least，more and more people are demanding the most natural and nutritious choices for their family.
有些学生赞成有机农业。首先，他们认为有机农业的蔬菜种植没有使用任何化学肥料。此外，有机耕作方式旨在鼓励保持水土和减少污染。最后但同等重要的是，越来越多的人要求为他们的家庭选择最天然和最有营养的食物。
2.However，others are against it because it costs a great deal to develop organic farming.
然而，其他人则表示反对，因为发展有机农业要花费很多钱。
第三段：表明自己的观点
1.As the old saying goes，everything has two sides. It has both advantages and disadvantages.
正如老话说的那样，凡事都有两面性，即既有优点，又有缺点。
2.As far as I am concerned，I agree with the latter opinion to some extent. I think that...
就我而言，从某种程度上讲，我同意后一观点。我认为……
3.For my part，I think it reasonable to... Only in this way can you/we...
对我来说，我认为……是合理的。只有通过这种方式，你/我们才能……
假定你是李华，最近你班开展了主题为“Chemical Farming or Organic Farming”的征文活动。请根据以下内容用英语写一篇短文。要点如下：
1.你的观点：有机农业优于化学农业。
2.作出该选择的理由。
注意：1.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2.开头语已给出，不计入总词数。
In my opinion，organic farming is preferable to chemical farming because of its significant advantages over the latter. Details are as follows.
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
第一步：要点翻译
1.我们应该尽自己所能来保护脆弱的环境。
We should ______________________________________________________
the delicate environment.
2.有机农业不含化肥。
Organic farming _______________________________________________________.
3.有机农业旨在使土壤肥沃。
Organic farming ______________________________________________________.
4.有机农业对自然环境无疑是友好的。
Organic farming ________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________.
5.被诊断患有癌症的人数在上升，我们应该要更加注意吃的东西。
The number of people diagnosed with cancer ____________ and we _________________________________________________________ our food.
6.有机食物富含矿物质和维生素，它确保我们摄入必要的营养，并且减少了患潜在的严重疾病的可能性。
Organic food ________________________________________________________.
It __________________________________________________________________
the likelihood of potential serious diseases.
7.我们都知道化学农业生产出来的食物吃起来没有味道。
We all know that food ______________________________________________
_____________________________________________________ tastes flavorless.
8.有机农业绝对能保全食物的自然风味，继而激发我们的食欲。
Organic farming ________________________________________________________
____________________________________________，thus stimulating our appetite.
第二步：词句升级
1.用so...that...升级要点1
The environment ___________________________________________________ we
should do everything in our power to protect it.
2.用非谓语动词短语作状语和定语从句升级要点2、要点3和要点4
________________________________________________，organic farming，
__________________________________________________________________，
is undoubtedly friendly to the environment.
3.用with复合结构升级要点5
__________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________，we are supposed
to attach more attention to our food.
4.用形容词短语作状语和as well as升级要点6
____________________________________________________________，
organic food ________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________
the likelihood of potential serious diseases.
5.用it作形式主语和并列句升级要点7和要点8
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of food，thus stimulating our appetite.
第三步：连句成篇
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
假设你是明启中学高三学生李明，最近在一本英语杂志上读到一篇文章。作者认为“第一印象在人际交往中非常重要”，你对此话题很感兴趣。请写一封邮件给该杂志的“读者来信”专栏。内容包括：
1.你是否赞同作者的这一观点；
2.用具体事例说明你的观点。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　

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