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Self-introduction essay collection ①
Topic：
假设你在网上认识了一位英国朋友，请根据下列信息写一篇短文介绍这位新朋友：姓名Kate Smith，年龄13，学校No.3 Middle School,电话号码896-4357，喜欢的颜色是蓝色白色绿色，补充一则其他信息。
(2) Model essays：
The model essays are a little bit challenging, but efforts always pay back. Spend time learning and reciting and try to use what you learn in your writing. Believe it or not, you’re more capable than you think!
Attention: You’ll need your notebook and dictionary.
Polished writing 1
Hello! I am Wen Li. I am a Chinese girl. I have a new e-friend. She studies in No.3 Middle School. And she is in Class 3, Grade 8. She is 13 years old. She is a year older than me. Her telephone number is 896-4357. Her favourite color is white. She likes blue and green. I like blue, too, because blue is the color of the sea and the sky. It makes me feel cool and calm. She can play the piano very well. I can play the pipa. We all like music. She is my good friend. If you want to be my e-friend, too, please call me. My telephone number is 15355662651. You can call me all the time. I will feel very happy.
Hello, everyone! I am Wen Li, a Chinese girl with a new e-friend. She studies in No.3 Middle School and is in Class 3, Grade 8. She's 13 years old, a year older than me. Her contact number is 896-4357. White is her favorite color, along with blue and green. I share her love for blue, as it's the color of the sea and the sky. It makes me feel cool and calm. She's a talented pianist, and I can play the pipa. We both have a passion for music. She's a great friend. If you're interested in becoming my e-friend, feel free to give me a call at 15355662651. I'm always available, and I'd be thrilled to hear from you!
Good Sentences:
I share her love for blue, as it's the color of the sea and the sky. It makes me feel cool and calm.
我和她一样喜欢蓝色，因为它是大海和天空的颜色，让我感到凉爽和宁静。
She's a talented pianist, and I can play the pipa. We both have a passion for music.
她是一位有才华的钢琴家，而我会弹琵琶。我们都对音乐充满热情。
word bank：
share love for (phrase):
English Explanation: To have a mutual appreciation or affection for something.
中文解释: 共同热爱某物。
Example Sentences:
We both share a love for reading mystery novels.
They share a love for spicy food.
have a passion for (phrase):
English Explanation: To have a strong interest or enthusiasm for something.
中文解释: 对某事有强烈的兴趣或热情。
Example Sentences:
She has a passion for painting landscapes.
He has a passion for playing football.
Polished writing 2
Hello! I am a Chinese girl. I have an English friend. Her name is Kate Smith. She is 13 years old.
She is in No.3 middle school. Her telephone number is 8964357. She likes blue, white and green.
She is outgoing. She likes dancing. I think she is a nice girl. Her hair is brown. Her eyes are blue like the sky. My eyes are black. I think the blue eyes are more beautiful than black eyes. This is my good friend Kate Smith. How about you
Hello, everyone! I'm a Chinese girl. I have an English friend named Kate Smith. She's 13 years old and attends No.3 Middle School. You can reach her at 8964357. She loves blue, white, and green, and she's very outgoing. Kate enjoys dancing and is a really nice girl. She has brown hair and blue eyes, just like the sky. I have black eyes, and I think her blue eyes are more beautiful than mine. Kate Smith is a wonderful friend of mine. How about you Do you have any friends you'd like to share about
Polished writing 3
Hello! I am Wen Li. I am a Chinese girl. I'm 13 years old. I am a student. I have a new friend. Her name is Kate Smith. Kate is her first name. And her family name is Smith. She is from the UK. She is good at English. She is 13 years old too. She also is a student. She is in No.3 Middle School. Her phone number is 896-42357. Her favourite color is blue, white and green. Because blue is the color of the sea. White is the color of the snow and Kate likes snow. And green is the color of the tree. Kate likes drawing and dancing. She also likes reading. She always reads in the evening. I like my new friend. She is good.
Hello, everyone! My name is Wen Li, and I'm a 13-year-old Chinese girl. I'm a student, and I have a new friend named Kate Smith. Kate is her first name, and her family name is Smith. She comes from the UK and is very skilled at English. We're both 13 years old and attend No.3 Middle School together. If you need to contact her, her phone number is 896-42357. Kate has a preference for the colors blue, white, and green. She loves blue because it reminds her of the sea, white because it represents the beauty of snow and green because it symbolizes nature and trees. Kate has a passion for drawing and dancing, and she also finds pleasure in reading. She always buries herself in a book in the evening. I really admire my new friend. She's fantastic.
Good Sentences:
She loves blue because it reminds her of the sea, white because it represents the beauty of snow, and green because it symbolizes nature and trees.
她喜欢蓝色，因为它让她想起大海；喜欢白色，因为它代表雪的美丽；喜欢绿色，因为它象征自然和树木。
She always buries herself in a book in the evening.
她总是在晚上埋头看书。
word bank：
preference (n.) / prefr ns/: a greater liking for one thing over another 偏好；偏爱
She has a preference for tea over coffee. 她偏爱茶而不是咖啡。
His preference is to read in the morning. 他喜欢早上读书。
remind (v.) /r ma nd/: to make someone remember something 提醒；使想起
This song reminds me of my childhood. 这首歌让我想起了我的童年。
Can you remind me to call my mother 你能提醒我给我妈妈打电话吗？
symbolize (v.) / s mb la z/: to represent something 象征；代表
The dove symbolizes peace. 鸽子象征和平。
Red roses symbolize love and passion. 红玫瑰象征爱情和激情。
bury oneself in / beri w n self n/: to give all one’s attention to something 埋头于
She buries herself in her work every day. 她每天埋头于工作。
He often buries himself in a good book. 他常常埋头阅读好书。
Polished writing 4
Hello! I am Wen Li. I am a Chinese girl. I have a new friend. Her name is Kate. Kate is her first name. Smith is her last name. She is a 13-year-old girl. She studies in the No.3 Middle School. Her phone number is 896-4357. Her favorite color is blue, white and green. Why Because blue is the color of the sky, white is the color of the cloud, and green is the color of the grass. She likes them all. She has short hair and small eyes. Her skin is as white as snow. She is hard-working and friendly. She often studies with me.
Hello, everyone! I'm Wen Li, a Chinese girl. I am excited to introduce my new friend, Kate. Her first name is Kate, and her last name is Smith. Kate is 13 years old and attends No.3 Middle School. If you need to reach her, her phone number is 896-4357.
Kate has a preference for the colors blue, white, and green. She loves blue because it reminds her of the sky, white because it represents clouds, and green because it symbolizes grass. These colors hold special meaning for her, so she likes them all. Kate has short hair and small eyes. Her skin is as white as snow. She is hard-working and friendly. We often study together, and I'm grateful to have her as a friend.

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