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写作(共两节，满分40分)
第一节(满分15分)
假设你是李华，你班下周英语课将以“独自学习还是组团学习”(Better to study alone or in a group) 为主题展开辩论，请你就此辩题写一篇发言稿。要点包括:
1.你的观点;
2.你的理由。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear fellow students,
相关句式和表达：
1. 我很荣幸…… I am/feel honored to
2. 分享/发表自己的观点 share/voice my opinions
3. 就我个人而言 personally speaking
4. 宁愿做某事而不愿做 prefer to do rather than do
5. 一方面……另一方面…… for one thing … for another…
6. 有助于 contribute to
7. 不仅……而且…… not only … but also…
8. 时间管理 time management
9. 自律 self-discipline
10. 总之 in conclusion
11. 认为……是… consider …. as…
【范例】
Dear fellow students,
I'm honored to be here to share my ideas on the topic “ Better to study alone or in a group”.
Personally speaking, I prefer to study alone rather than study in a group. For one thing, studying alone avoids being interrupted by others, contributing to an immersive learning environment. For another, studying alone not only promotes good time management but also strengthens concentration and self-discipline.
In conclusion, I consider it a better option to study alone.
Thank you!
第二节(满分25分)
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My head started spinning and my heart began racing a million miles a minute when our teacher gave us the assignment to talk about someone we were grateful for in front of the whole class.
"I'm so nervous that I can hardly catch my breath!" I told my friend Mareya. "You've been in at least three plays," Mareya pointed out. "If you don't get stage fright in front of those big audiences, why are you bothered by a few kids in our class ” “Maybe in a play you're part of a group and you say lines from a script (剧本)." I shook my head. "There are so many people I'm grateful for. There's no way I could possibly pick just one. Plus, even if I picked one, I'd have no idea what to say. Plus even if I figured out what to say, I'm a million-percent positive I'd mess up if I tried to say it out loud! I'd be standing there with everyone staring at me, waiting for words to come out of my mouth." I put my hands over my ears and said, “I don't want to talk about it!”
But one thing about really good friends who know you really well is that they don't always do exactly what you ask them to. She drew a funny elephant on a piece of paper with the word BREATHE coming out of its trunk. “This is Franky,” she giggled, "the ‘everything's going to be all right’ elephant." “Franky's the best," I said, “How about he talks in front of the class so I don't have to ” Mareya held the picture up to her car. “What's that you say, Franky You think Arizona should come over to my house this weekend so we can work on our talks together ”
We met on Saturday and tried to decide on our pick.__________________________________
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Monday morning came.________________________________________________________
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文本分析：在这个续写中，首先要梳理人物关系，“我”是Arizona, 而Mareya是我的好朋友，其中“Franky”只是Mareya为了鼓励我杜撰出来的小象的名字。根据给出的第一段第一句和第二段第一句，不难分析，”我“最后演讲选择的想要感谢的人应该是好朋友”Mareya”,她在“我”遇到困难时不遗余力的相助和无条件的支持让“我”有勇气克服舞台恐惧，站上讲台演讲。因此在第一段，应该描写“我”的内心活动，以及最终确定选择Mareya作为我演讲的主题，但很可能这一点是保密的，作为第二段中出现的一个惊喜和转折。第二段描写“我“站在讲台上的心理以及克服舞台恐惧顺利完成演讲的过程，结尾可以升华主题，突出友谊在我们面对困难时起到的支撑和鼓励作用。
【范例】
We met on Saturday and tried to decide on our pick. The more I racked my brains, the more restless I became. As time ticked away, I still failed to make the final decision while Mareya already got her work clone. To ease my pressure, she kept comforting me and offered some suggestions for my reference. Suddenly, it occurred to me that the person I was grateful for was right before my eyes. Flinging my arms around Mareya's neck, I told her that I had a brilliant idea but I would rather keep it to myself until the presentation.
Monday morning came. With butterflies in my stomach, I waited anxiously for my turn. The moment my name was called, I jumped to my feet and hurtled myself to the stage. Casting a sweeping look at the whole class, I focused my eyes on Mareya and started my presentation. “Among all the people I feel indebted to, I'd like to extend my sincere thanks to my best friend Mareya. Without her support and encouragement, I wouldn’t have been here." The rest of the presentation went smoothly. In the midst of thunderous applause, I came running down the stage and gave Mareya a big bear hug. It is true that a good friend is the one who always keeps you company and backs you up in times of difficulties.
写作参考范文:
第一节
Dear fellow students,
Today, I stand here to champion the advantages of studying alone. While group study has its benefits, I firmly believe that studying alone offers unique advantages that can enhance our academic performance.
Firstly, studying alone allows us to tailor our learning pace to our own needs. Unlike in a group where we must sometimes slow down or rush to match others, studying alone allows us to study at our own pace. Moreover, studying alone minimizes distractions, allowing for deeper concentration and more effective learning.
Let us embrace the power of studying alone, for in the quiet solitude of our own minds, we find the strength and focus to truly excel.
Thank you.
第二节
We met on Saturday and tried to decide on our pick. After a short period of brainstorming, Mareya decided to write a talk about her father who gave her courage and support whenever she needed. I decided on a fifty-fifty split between my mom and my dad. We spent the entire afternoon practicing our speeches, taking turns playing the audience and the speaker. With each run-through, I felt my confidence grow. Mareya's encouragement and her belief in me really touched my heart. I suddenly realized she's the perfect pick for my talk.
Monday morning came. Mareya was so surprised when I showed Franky to the entire class. I took a deep breath and began. “The person I'd like to tell you about is the most thoughtful, understanding, funny friend in the world,” I said, my eyes meeting Maraya's. “She’s the kind of friend who believes in me even when I forget to believe in myself. This person I’m so grateful for is Mareya...” Touched and a little embarrassed, Mareya smiled with tears shining in her eyes. As the class applauded, I knew that our friendship had grown even stronger through this shared experience.
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