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Period Ⅴ　Writing Workshop——人物传记
本单元的写作任务是人物传记。传记属于记叙文的范畴，它以写人、记事为主，以叙述和描写为主要表达方式。时态的选择要视情况而定，若写人物的过去就用过去时态，若写人物的现在就用现在时态。
一、亮点词汇
1.graduate v.　　　　　　　毕业
2.devote v. 致力
3.determination n. 决心
4.effort n. 努力
5.be born in 出生于……
6.at the age of 在……岁时
7.have a gift for 在……方面有天赋
8.speak highly of 对……评价很高
9.be awarded the title of... 被授予……称号
10.make contributions to 为……做出贡献
二、高级句式
1.概况
①Madam Curie，a great scientist，was born in Poland on Nov.7，1867.
居里夫人，一位伟大的科学家，于1867年11月7日出生于波兰。
②He，a world champion in swimming，is a youngster of 23 from Hangzhou.
他，世界游泳冠军，是一位来自杭州的23岁年轻人。
2.外貌、性格
①He is a tall and thin guy with thick eyebrows，looking very handsome.
他又高又瘦，眉毛浓密，看起来非常帅。
②Born in Germany，Einstein is a great scientist with extraordinary imagination.
爱因斯坦出生于德国，是一位伟大的科学家，有着非凡的想象力。
3.教育经历
Graduating from the department of English of Sun Yat－sen University，she went on further education and received a doctor’s degree.
从中山大学英语系毕业后，她继续深造，获得了博士学位。
4.生平
①Not only is he interested in science，but also he has a gift for music.
他不但对科学感兴趣，而且也有音乐天赋。
②So hard does he work that he devotes almost all his lifetime to our human cause.
他工作很勤奋，将毕生精力献给了人类事业。
5.评价
①Lei Feng set us a good example，so all the people spoke highly of him and all respected him.
雷锋为我们树立了好榜样，因而所有人都高度赞扬他并尊敬他。
②Mo Yan is one of the greatest novelists in China and will be always remembered as an outstanding man.
莫言是中国最伟大的小说家之一，他将作为杰出人士而被人们永远铭记。
你校英文报Youth新增“名人长廊”栏目。请你根据以下信息写一篇短文投稿。
1.郎平，1960年生于天津。13岁时开始练习打排球；
2.1978年，因在全国排球比赛中表现突出，进入国家队；
3.退役后，成为排球教练。在2016年奥运会上，带领中国女子排球队获得金牌；
4.郎平是中国第一位作为球员和教练均夺取奥运会冠军的人。
注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
第一步　审题谋篇
体裁 人物传记
人称 第三人称为主
时态 一般过去时/一般现在时为主
框架 第一部分：总体介绍郎平的情况； 第二部分：按时间顺序列举郎平的主要经历； 第三部分：总结全文。
第二步　要点翻译
1.郎平1960年出生于天津，是著名的排球教练。
Lang Ping was__born__in__1960 in Tianjin, and she is__a__famous__volleyball__coach.
2.她在13岁时开始练习打排球。
She began__to__play__volleyball at the age of 13.
3.她刻苦努力，获得了很多国际奖项。
She was hard－working, so she__won__lots__of__international__awards.
4.从排球队退役之后，她成为排球教练。
After she__retired__from__the__volleyball__team,__she became a volleyball coach.
第三步　词句升级
1.用定语从句升级要点1
Lang__Ping,__who__was__born__in__1960__in__Tianjin,__is__a__famous__volleyball__coach.
2.用when引导的状语从句升级要点2
She__began__to__play__volleyball__when__she__was__13.
3.用so...that...升级要点3
She__was__so__hard－working__that she won lots of international awards.
4.用省略句升级要点4
After__retiring__from__the__volleyball__team,__she became a volleyball coach.
第四步　连句成篇
Lang Ping，who was born in 1960 in Tianjin, is a famous volleyball coach.She began to play volleyball when she was 13.She joined the national team in 1978 because of her outstanding performance in the national volleyball competition.She was so hard－working that she won lots of internatinal awards.After retiring from the volleyball team, she became a volleyball coach.In the 2016 Olympics, under her leadership, the Chinese women’s volleyball team won the gold medal.She is the first Chinese to win the Olympic championship as a player and coach.She is loved and respected by us all and will always be remembered as a great woman.
假定你是李华，受校英文报约稿，请你写一篇介绍某位名人的英语短文，刊登在校英文报People专栏，内容包括：
1.该人物的生平；
2.他/她的主要事迹；
3.你的评价。
【参考范文】
Yuan Longping，known as the “father of hybrid rice”， was one of China’s most famous scientists.
Born in September 1930, Yuan Longping cultivated the world’s first high－yielding hybrid rice, which has helped feed nearly one－fifth of the world’s population.
After fighting China’s food shortages, he turned his attention to a much bigger challenge，solving world hunger.Since the 1980s, Yuan’s team has offered training courses in dozens of countries in Africa, the Americas and Asia, providing a huge food source in areas with high risks of famine.
Yuan Longping’s legacy is not only the progress of hybrid rice but also his curiosity, devotion, courage, perseverance, diligence, cooperation and selflessness have left indelible spiritual wealth to us all.Period Ⅴ　Writing Workshop——人物传记
本单元的写作任务是人物传记。传记属于记叙文的范畴，它以写人、记事为主，以叙述和描写为主要表达方式。时态的选择要视情况而定，若写人物的过去就用过去时态，若写人物的现在就用现在时态。
一、亮点词汇
1.graduate v.　　　　　　　毕业
2.devote v. 致力
3.determination n. 决心
4.effort n. 努力
5.be born in 出生于……
6.at the age of 在……岁时
7.have a gift for 在……方面有天赋
8.speak highly of 对……评价很高
9.be awarded the title of... 被授予……称号
10.make contributions to 为……做出贡献
二、高级句式
1.概况
①Madam Curie，a great scientist，was born in Poland on Nov.7，1867.
居里夫人，一位伟大的科学家，于1867年11月7日出生于波兰。
②He，a world champion in swimming，is a youngster of 23 from Hangzhou.
他，世界游泳冠军，是一位来自杭州的23岁年轻人。
2.外貌、性格
①He is a tall and thin guy with thick eyebrows，looking very handsome.
他又高又瘦，眉毛浓密，看起来非常帅。
②Born in Germany，Einstein is a great scientist with extraordinary imagination.
爱因斯坦出生于德国，是一位伟大的科学家，有着非凡的想象力。
3.教育经历
Graduating from the department of English of Sun Yat－sen University，she went on further education and received a doctor’s degree.
从中山大学英语系毕业后，她继续深造，获得了博士学位。
4.生平
①Not only is he interested in science，but also he has a gift for music.
他不但对科学感兴趣，而且也有音乐天赋。
②So hard does he work that he devotes almost all his lifetime to our human cause.
他工作很勤奋，将毕生精力献给了人类事业。
5.评价
①Lei Feng set us a good example，so all the people spoke highly of him and all respected him.
雷锋为我们树立了好榜样，因而所有人都高度赞扬他并尊敬他。
②Mo Yan is one of the greatest novelists in China and will be always remembered as an outstanding man.
莫言是中国最伟大的小说家之一，他将作为杰出人士而被人们永远铭记。
你校英文报Youth新增“名人长廊”栏目。请你根据以下信息写一篇短文投稿。
1.郎平，1960年生于天津。13岁时开始练习打排球；
2.1978年，因在全国排球比赛中表现突出，进入国家队；
3.退役后，成为排球教练。在2016年奥运会上，带领中国女子排球队获得金牌；
4.郎平是中国第一位作为球员和教练均夺取奥运会冠军的人。
注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
第一步　审题谋篇
体裁 人物传记
人称 第三人称为主
时态 一般过去时/一般现在时为主
框架 第一部分：总体介绍郎平的情况； 第二部分：按时间顺序列举郎平的主要经历； 第三部分：总结全文。
第二步　要点翻译
1.郎平1960年出生于天津，是著名的排球教练。
Lang Ping ___________________________________________ in Tianjin,
and she _______________________________________________________.
2.她在13岁时开始练习打排球。
She ____________________________________________ at the age of 13.
3.她刻苦努力，获得了很多国际奖项。
She was hard－working, so ____________________________________
_______________________________________________________.
4.从排球队退役之后，她成为排球教练。
After _______________________________________________________，
she became a volleyball coach.
第三步　词句升级
1.用定语从句升级要点1
_______________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________
2.用when引导的状语从句升级要点2
_______________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________
3.用so...that...升级要点3
_______________________________________________________
she won lots of international awards.
4.用省略句升级要点4
_______________________________________________________，
she became a volleyball coach.
第四步　连句成篇
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
假定你是李华，受校英文报约稿，请你写一篇介绍某位名人的英语短文，刊登在校英文报People专栏，内容包括：
1.该人物的生平；
2.他/她的主要事迹；
3.你的评价。
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
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Period Ⅴ　Writing Workshop——人物传记
UNIT 2　SUCCESS
点拨 写作技巧
积累 写作素材
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示例 分步写作
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跟踪 落实检查
本单元的写作任务是人物传记。传记属于记叙文的范畴，它以写人、记事为主，以叙述和描写为主要表达方式。时态的选择要视情况而定，若写人物的过去就用过去时态，若写人物的现在就用现在时态。
一、亮点词汇
1.graduate v. 毕业
2.devote v. 致力
3.determination n. 决心
4.effort n. 努力
5.be born in 出生于……
6.at the age of 在……岁时
7.have a gift for 在……方面有天赋
8.speak highly of 对……评价很高
9.be awarded the title of... 被授予……称号
10.make contributions to 为……做出贡献
二、高级句式
1.概况
①Madam Curie，a great scientist，was born in Poland on Nov.7，1867.
居里夫人，一位伟大的科学家，于1867年11月7日出生于波兰。
②He，a world champion in swimming，is a youngster of 23 from Hangzhou.
他，世界游泳冠军，是一位来自杭州的23岁年轻人。
2.外貌、性格
①He is a tall and thin guy with thick eyebrows，looking very handsome.
他又高又瘦，眉毛浓密，看起来非常帅。
②Born in Germany，Einstein is a great scientist with extraordinary imagination.
爱因斯坦出生于德国，是一位伟大的科学家，有着非凡的想象力。
3.教育经历
Graduating from the department of English of Sun Yat－sen University，she went on further education and received a doctor’s degree.
从中山大学英语系毕业后，她继续深造，获得了博士学位。
4.生平
①Not only is he interested in science，but also he has a gift for music.
他不但对科学感兴趣，而且也有音乐天赋。
②So hard does he work that he devotes almost all his lifetime to our human cause.
他工作很勤奋，将毕生精力献给了人类事业。
5.评价
①Lei Feng set us a good example，so all the people spoke highly of him and all respected him.
雷锋为我们树立了好榜样，因而所有人都高度赞扬他并尊敬他。
②Mo Yan is one of the greatest novelists in China and will be always remembered as an outstanding man.
莫言是中国最伟大的小说家之一，他将作为杰出人士而被人们永远铭记。
你校英文报Youth新增“名人长廊”栏目。请你根据以下信息写一篇短文投稿。
1.郎平，1960年生于天津。13岁时开始练习打排球；
2.1978年，因在全国排球比赛中表现突出，进入国家队；
3.退役后，成为排球教练。在2016年奥运会上，带领中国女子排球队获得金牌；
4.郎平是中国第一位作为球员和教练均夺取奥运会冠军的人。
注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
第一步　审题谋篇
体裁 人物传记
人称 第三人称为主
时态 一般过去时/一般现在时为主
框架 第一部分：总体介绍郎平的情况；
第二部分：按时间顺序列举郎平的主要经历；
第三部分：总结全文。
第二步　要点翻译
1.郎平1960年出生于天津，是著名的排球教练。
Lang Ping ___________________________________________ in Tianjin,
and she _______________________________________________________.
2.她在13岁时开始练习打排球。
She ____________________________________________ at the age of 13.
3.她刻苦努力，获得了很多国际奖项。
She was hard－working, so _______________________________________.
was born in 1960
is a famous volleyball coach
began to play volleyball
she won lots of international awards
4.从排球队退役之后，她成为排球教练。
After _______________________________________________________，
she became a volleyball coach.
she retired from the volleyball team
第三步　词句升级
1.用定语从句升级要点1
___________________________________________________________________
2.用when引导的状语从句升级要点2
___________________________________________________________________
3.用so...that...升级要点3
_______________________________ she won lots of international awards.
4.用省略句升级要点4
___________________________________， she became a volleyball coach.
Lang Ping, who was born in 1960 in Tianjin, is a famous volleyball coach.
She began to play volleyball when she was 13.
She was so hard－working that
After retiring from the volleyball team
第四步　连句成篇
Lang Ping，who was born in 1960 in Tianjin, is a famous volleyball coach.She began to play volleyball when she was 13.She joined the national team in 1978 because of her outstanding performance in the national volleyball competition.She was so hard－working that she won lots of internatinal awards.After retiring from the volleyball team, she became a volleyball coach.In the 2016 Olympics, under her leadership, the Chinese women’s volleyball team won the gold medal.She is the first Chinese to win the Olympic championship as a player and coach.She is loved and respected by us all and will always be remembered as a great woman.
假定你是李华，受校英文报约稿，请你写一篇介绍某位名人的英语短文，刊登在校英文报People专栏，内容包括：
1.该人物的生平；
2.他/她的主要事迹；
3.你的评价。
【参考范文】
Yuan Longping，known as the “father of hybrid rice”， was one of China’s most famous scientists.
Born in September 1930, Yuan Longping cultivated the world’s first high－yielding hybrid rice, which has helped feed nearly one－fifth of the world’s population.
After fighting China’s food shortages, he turned his attention to a much bigger challenge，solving world hunger.Since the 1980s, Yuan’s team has offered training courses in dozens of countries in Africa, the Americas and Asia, providing a huge food source in areas with high risks of famine.
Yuan Longping’s legacy is not only the progress of hybrid rice but also his curiosity, devotion, courage, perseverance, diligence, cooperation and selflessness have left indelible spiritual wealth to us all.

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