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九年级全册第6单元习作：发明写作思路
写作提纲
引言：
- 介绍新发明：智能学习助手
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- 使用先进语音识别技术, 能实时纠正发音和语法错误
- 根据学科需求和进度调整，提供个性化学习计划
- 记录学习习惯，定期推送建议
结尾：
- 相信助手将提高学业水平
- 感谢聆听
03 原创满分范文
Hi, everyone!
I'm excited to share my new invention – the Smart Study Assistant.
It's here to make learning easier for us students. This little device can fix our pronunciation and grammar mistakes as we speak, thanks to its smart voice recognition. It also plans out personalized study schedules based on what subjects we need help with and how we're doing. In addition, the Smart Study Assistant keeps track of our study habits and gives us helpful tips to manage our time better.
I think this little invention will really help us do better in our studies. Thanks for listening!
04 参考译文
大家好！
今天，我很高兴向大家介绍我的新发明——智能学习助手。
这个小发明旨在帮助同学们更轻松地学习和掌握知识。智能学习助手配备了先进的语音识别技术，能够实时纠正发音和语法错误。它还提供个性化学习计划，根据每个人的学科需求和进度进行调整，确保最高效的学习体验。此外，智能学习助手还能记录学习习惯，定期推送学习建议，帮助我们更好地规划学习时间。
相信这个小发明能够让我们在学业上更上一层楼，感谢大家的聆听！
05 学习要点
重点词汇、词组、固定搭配和常用表达：
1. Smart Study Assistant: 智能学习助手
2. Make learning easier: 使学习更容易
3. Fix pronunciation and grammar mistakes: 纠正发音和语法错误
4. Smart voice recognition: 智能语音识别
5. Personalized study schedules: 个性化学习计划
6. Keep track of:跟踪
7. Study habits: 学习习惯
8. Helpful tips: 有用的建议
9. Manage time better: 更好地管理时间
10. Do better in studies: 在学业上表现更好
11. Thanks for listening: 谢谢聆听
丰富的句式：
1. I'm excited to share...: 我很激动地分享...
- I'm excited to share my new invention – the Smart Study Assistant.
2. It's here to make learning easier for us students: 它旨在使我们学生的学习更容易。
3. This little device can..., thanks to…: 这个小设备可以...，多亏了…
- This little device can fix our pronunciation and grammar mistakes as we speak, thanks to its smart voice recognition.
4. It also plans out...based on…: 它还会根据…规划...
- It also plans out personalized study schedules based on what subjects we need help with and how we're doing.
5. In addition, the Smart Study Assistant...: 此外，智能学习助手...
- In addition, the Smart Study Assistant keeps track of our study habits and gives us helpful tips to manage our time better.
6. I think this little invention will really help us do better in...: 我认为这个小发明真的会帮助我们在…上表现更好。
- I think this little invention will really help us do better in our studies.
7. Thanks for listening!: 谢谢聆听！
地道英语写作技巧和经验：
1. 使用新颖的词汇：通过引入"Smart Study Assistant"等新颖的词汇，使文章更有创意和吸引力。
2. 清晰明了地陈述功能：通过使用"can fix"、"plans out"、"keeps track of"等短语，清晰地陈述了智能学习助手的功能。
3. 使用逻辑连接词：使用"also"和"in addition"等逻辑连接词，使文章的逻辑层次更加清晰。
4. 感谢和结束语：使用"Thanks for listening!"表达感谢，为文章落笔提供了友好的结束语。
总体而言，这篇作文运用了一系列常用表达和实用句型，通过生动描述新发明的功能，强调了对学生学习的积极影响，并以感谢表达结尾，展示了作者的热情和对读者的尊重。

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