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九年级全册第4单元习作：我们的变化写作思路
写作提纲
引言:
- 成长过程中的羞怯困扰，不敢提问或表达。
- 一位关心的老师觉察到问题，积极鼓励与沟通。
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- 老师建议分享演讲，面对同学的困扰。
- 决心挑战自己，逐渐增加演讲次数。
- 经历改变，透过演讲认识到在公共场合表达并非难事。
- 通过努力和自信，领悟到没有不可能的事情。
结尾:
- 演讲经历成就了更自信的自己。
- 强调通过坚持努力和自信，突破了困难，取得了重要的成长。
满分范文
During my growth, I faced the challenge of shyness, hesitating to ask questions or share my thoughts with classmates. A perceptive teacher noticed this and actively communicated with me, encouraging me to overcome my timidity. She suggested I give a class speech. Although daunting, I was determined to challenge myself. With each speech, my confidence grew.
Undoubtedly, this experience significantly transformed me. Through public speaking, I realized that expressing oneself in public is not as challenging as it seems. More importantly, I learned that with persistent effort and self-belief, nothing is impossible.
参考译文
在成长历程中，我曾陷入羞怯的困境，不敢提出问题，更不敢在同学面前表达自己。一位关心我的老师察觉到了这一点，积极与我沟通，鼓励我克服胆怯。她建议我在班上分享一次演讲。虽然面对全班同学我感到困难重重，但我下定决心要挑战自己。随着演讲次数的增多，我逐渐变得更加自信。
毫无疑问，这次经历改变了我很多。透过演讲，我认识到在公共场合表达自己并非难事。更为重要的是，我领悟到，只要努力尝试，坚信自己，没有什么是不可能的。
学习要点
重点词汇、词组、固定搭配和常用表达：
1. Faced the challenge of: 面临...的挑战
2. Shyness: 害羞
3. Hesitating to:犹豫是否...
4. Perceptive teacher: 敏锐的老师
5. Actively communicated with: 积极沟通
6. Encouraging me to overcome: 鼓励我克服...
7. Timidity: 胆小
8. Suggested I give a class speech: 建议我做一个班级演讲
9. Daunting: 令人畏惧的
10. Determined to challenge myself: 决心挑战自己
11. With each speech: 每次演讲
12. Confidence grew: 自信增长
13. Undoubtedly: 无疑地
14. Significantly transformed me: 显著地改变了我
15. Expressing oneself in public: 在公共场合表达自己
16. Persistent effort: 持续的努力
17. Self-belief: 自信
18. Nothing is impossible: 没有什么是不可能的
丰富的句式：
1. During my growth, I faced the challenge of...: 在我的成长过程中，我面临了...
- During my growth, I faced the challenge of shyness, hesitating to ask questions or share my thoughts with classmates.
2. A perceptive teacher noticed this and actively communicated with me...:一位敏锐的老师注意到了这一点，并积极与我沟通...
- A perceptive teacher noticed this and actively communicated with me, encouraging me to overcome my timidity.
3. Although daunting, I was determined to challenge myself：
尽管令人畏惧，我决心挑战自己。
4. With each speech, my confidence grew: 每次演讲，我的自信增长。
5. Undoubtedly, this experience significantly transformed me: 无疑地，这个经历显著地改变了我...
6. Through public speaking, I realized that expressing oneself in public...: 通过公共演讲，我意识到在公共场合表达自己...
- Through public speaking, I realized that expressing oneself in public is not as challenging as it seems.
7. More importantly, I learned that with persistent effort and self-belief...: 更重要的是，我学到了通过持续努力和自信...
- More importantly, I learned that with persistent effort and self-belief, nothing is impossible.
地道英语写作技巧和经验：
1. 揭示个人成长过程：通过描述面对害羞和犹豫的挑战，突显了作者的个人成长历程。
2. 强调教师的积极作用：引入一位敏锐的老师，强调了教育者在学生成长中的重要作用。
3. 使用形容词强化表达：通过使用形容词如"daunting"、"perceptive"、"persistent"等，使文章更具表现力。
4. 以经历总结成果：通过以"Undoubtedly"开头，总结经历对作者的显著改变，增强了文章的结论性。
5. 使用并列结构强调观点：使用"And"、"More importantly"等连接词，使句子结构更加丰富，强调关键观点。
总体而言，这篇作文通过生动描写个人经历，结合教育者的作用，强调了挑战自我的决心和通过努力和自信实现目标的重要性。同时，采用多样的句型和表达方式，使文章更富有表现力和地道性。

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