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Alan and the other campers sat around the fire chewing meat chops. It would be Alan’s first night in a tent, and he was excited but a little nervous.
As they ate, the conservation officer spoke. “Much of the wildlife in this area comes out only at night. So after supper, let’s start a night watch. Volunteers will take turns to stay down here by the fire, away from the tents. Those who take part will get a chance to see a world that many of you never knew existed.”
Alan’s stomach tightened. Then he heard the officer continue, “There are no dangerous animals this close to Cape Town. Any volunteers ”
A tough-looking kid with red hair muttered something about needing a good night’s sleep. Another boy spoke up. “I’ll take a shift.” The kid who’d sat next to Alan on the bus volunteered. Alan sat tight. Then one of the girls raised her hand with a giggle. Alan frowned. If a girl could do it, he could, too. He volunteered.
A few more kids raised their hands, and then the officer explained, “This is how it works. When the rest of you go to bed in a tent, the first watcher takes his or her place by the fire. The duty of watcher is to keep the fire going gently. After thirty minutes, he or she wakes the next person.”
Alan heard his voice asking, “Are you sure it’s absolutely safe ”
The officer looked at him. “The danger is minimal. We wouldn’t have taken you here otherwise. Do you still want to volunteer ” Alan nodded but felt uneasy.
Earlier that day, the officer had challenged the campers to spot animal tracks along the river. That was fun. But being alone in the dark was not. Alan’s flashlight was already fading to a dim glow because he had used it too often. Looking around, Alan thought he saw a large bird swooping (俯冲) and wondered if it was an owl. He had seen small paw prints in the sand by the river. Was the owl hunting for the creature that had made them
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
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Hearing a noise, Alan froze, feeling something was there in the darkness.
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The next morning, the officer asked for reports.
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文章大意
Alan 和其他露营者参加夜间守望活动。Alan 起初有些紧张但还是自愿参加了。之前他们白天沿着河边寻找动物足迹很有趣，但夜晚独自在黑暗中让 Alan 感到不安。他的手电筒光也变弱了，他看到河边有小爪子印，还似乎看到一只大鸟俯冲，他在黑暗中听到声音时僵住了，感觉有东西在黑暗中。
伏笔及回应
伏笔 1：Alan 的手电筒光变弱。在续写中可能会因为手电筒光弱而使他看不清楚周围情况，增加紧张感和未知感。
伏笔 2：河边的小爪子印。后续可能会有相关情节揭示是什么动物留下的印记，或者 Alan 会因为这个印记而对周围的动静更加敏感。
伏笔 3：看到大鸟俯冲。这可能预示着夜晚动物的活跃，在后续情节中也许会有更多关于动物活动的情节，而 Alan 可能会进一步探究或受到这些动物活动的影响。
续写要点
第一段
感情线：Alan 听到声音后非常恐惧，心脏狂跳，脑海中充满各种想象，随后可能会鼓起勇气试图弄清楚声音的来源，情绪可能从极度恐惧逐渐转变为带着一丝好奇和勇敢去面对。
故事线：Alan 听到声音僵住，描述他的恐惧心理和身体反应。然后他可能会借助微弱的手电筒光或者其他方式尝试寻找声音的来源，比如发现是风吹动树枝的声音或者是某个小动物发出的动静等。
第二段
感情线：Alan 经历了夜晚的守望后，可能会有成就感，同时也对夜晚的自然有了新的认识和感受，不再那么害怕，可能还会带有一些兴奋和期待分享自己的经历。
故事线：第二天早上军官询问报告，Alan 讲述自己的经历，包括听到的声音以及自己的猜测和感受等。其他露营者也可能分享他们的经历，然后大家一起讨论夜晚的发现和感受，最后 Alan 可能会对这次夜间守望活动有更深刻的体会，比如认识到大自然夜晚的神秘和美丽，以及自己面对未知时的成长。
主旨升华句
Through this experience, Alan realized that facing the unknown in nature can be both terrifying and fascinating, and it's an opportunity for growth and discovery.
Alan learned that the darkness of the night holds not only fear but also the wonders of nature waiting to be explored, which broadened his perspective.
The night watch made Alan understand that courage is not the absence of fear but the ability to face it and find the beauty and mystery hidden within.
This adventure taught Alan that the world at night is a different realm, full of surprises and lessons, and it's up to us to embrace it with an open heart and a brave spirit.
Alan discovered that the night in the wild is a canvas of mystery and beauty, and by daring to explore it, he painted his own story of growth and understanding.
写作范文一
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Hearing a noise, Alan froze, feeling something was there in the darkness. His heart pounded wildly in his chest. Every hair on his body seemed to stand on end. He strained his ears, trying to figure out what it was. The only sound he could hear was the thumping of his own heart. His grip tightened on the flashlight as he slowly swung its beam around. The weak light cut through the darkness, revealing nothing but the swaying shadows of the trees. Just as he was about to convince himself it was just his imagination, he heard the noise again. This time, it sounded like a rustling in the bushes nearby. Summoning all his courage, he took a few tentative steps towards the sound, his legs shaking slightly.
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The next morning, the officer asked for reports. Alan's hand shot up eagerly. He described in detail the noise he had heard and how he had bravely investigated. He told them about his thoughts that it might have been a small animal in the bushes. The other campers also shared their experiences. Some had seen strange shadows, while others had heard faint sounds like the hooting of an owl. After listening to everyone, the officer smiled and said, "You all did a great job. Last night, you got a taste of the wild at night. It's full of mysteries and surprises. By facing your fears and exploring, you've learned more about nature and yourselves." Alan realized that he had not only survived the night but also gained a new understanding and respect for the natural world. He looked forward to more adventures and discoveries in the future.
写作范文二
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Hearing a noise, Alan froze, feeling something was there in the darkness. His mind raced with thoughts of wild animals and unknown creatures. He held his breath, listening intently. The sound seemed to come from the direction of the river. With his heart in his throat, he slowly walked towards it, the dim flashlight guiding his way. As he got closer, the sound became clearer. It was a gentle splashing sound. He peeked through the bushes and saw a small deer drinking water at the riverbank. The deer's eyes glinted in the flashlight beam, and it looked up startled. Alan remained still, not wanting to scare it away. After a moment, the deer calmly went back to drinking. Alan was relieved and amazed at the same time.
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The next morning, the officer asked for reports. Alan excitedly told everyone about the deer he had seen. The other campers were intrigued. They shared their own sightings and experiences. Some had seen fireflies blinking in the distance, while others had felt the cool breeze carrying the scents of the forest. The officer nodded in satisfaction and said, "Nature has its own way of showing itself at night. You all had a unique encounter. This experience should teach you that there's so much more to discover beyond what we see in the daytime. Alan, you overcame your fear and discovered the beauty of the night. Keep that spirit of exploration." Alan felt a sense of pride and a newfound love for the mysteries of the night. He knew that he would always remember this special night and look forward to more adventures in the wild.
官方范文：
Hearing a noise, Alan froze, feeling something was there in the darkness. A ripple of fear crept up on him as he cast a glance there. Heart beating wildly, Alan made his way to the noise, with both of his legs trembling uncontrollably. A closer look convinced him that it was only a rabbit, which quickly disappeared in the dark. In relief, he felt the gentle breeze rubbing his face. The moon shedding its silver light on the woods, Alan was greeted by the sound of birds and insects. Enveloped by fragrant air, he felt as if in the wonderland.
The next morning, the officer asked for reports. Other campers bragged about their adventure in the dark—how they ran into some “horrible” creatures and bravely scared them off. The officer, wearing a doubtful look, offered no comments. When it was Alan’s turn, he told the truth that there were no scary animals but breathtaking scenery to be explored. A smile blossomed on the officer’s face. That was exactly what the camping was all about. Only after one overcame the fear in his own heart could he embrace the real beauty of nature.

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