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2024-2025年九年级英语上期期中高频考点专练（人教版）
09 书面表达30篇
1．（23-24九年级上·江苏徐州·期中）紧张忙碌的初三学习生活已经去两个月，有喜悦也有失意，阳光中学开展“How to Spend Grade Nine”征文比赛，请你根据提示，以“How to Spend Grade Nine”为题，写一篇短文。
鼓足信心 ● 努力，一切皆有可能； ● 灰心，则一事无成；
勤奋细心 ● 勤奋，终将进步； ● 细心，就会……
管理时间 ● 合理安排； ● 劳逸结合；
适当解压 ● 有烦心事时，……(至少两点)
注意：
1. 要点齐全，表达规范，书写工整；
2. 词数100左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 表达中不提及真实的校名或人名。
How to Spend Grade Nine
We have been here in Grade Nine, one of the most important years for us students, for nearly two months. Some of us feel good, while some do not. How should we spend this year
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Spend the year wisely. It is you who shape your life and future!
2．（24-25九年级上·吉林长春·期中） 你校英语广播站正在举办以“Tell your stories in English”为主题的征文活动，请你根据提示信息，以“What the change brought me”为题写一篇短文投稿。不少于80词。
提示：
1．你的性格方面的一个变化；
2．通过一件事来描述这个变化给你带来的感受；
3．这个感受给你的启示。
要求：
1．适当增加细节，行文连贯
2．语言准确，层次清晰，书写规范
3．文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
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3．（24-25九年级上·陕西渭南·期中）假如你是李华，你们班将组织同学们一起参观历史博物馆，你打算邀请交换生Peter参加。请根据以下提示问题，用英语给他写一封邀请信。
提示：1. When and where are you going to meet
2. What are you going to see and do during the visit
3. What rules should you follow in the museum
参考词汇：local culture, traditional artworks, keep quiet, wait in line, no shouting, no photos,...
要求：1. 可使用参考词汇，亦可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4. 词数：不少于70词。（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）
Dear Peter,
How is it going I am writing to invite you to visit the History Museum with my class. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
4．（24-25九年级上·吉林松原·期中）在我们的成长过程中，时常会面对来自父母或老师的提醒与批评，有的同学不理解，如何客观、冷静地对待这种问题，需要我们认真思考。假如你叫李华，你的父母为了能让你更好地学习，制订了些规则，其中包括周末不能出去和朋友玩。你对此规则不是很赞同。请你根据以下要点提示，写一篇英语短文表达你的观点和想法。
要点提示：
1. 青少年应该和同龄人多交流；
2. 周末适当出去玩，放松一下；
3. 朋友可以相互鼓励，努力学习，共同进步；
4. 我认为这个规则应该适当改变。
写作要求：
1. 语言流畅，层次清晰，内容可以适当发挥；
2. 词数90-100；
3. 书写规范，卷面整洁；
4. 文中不能出现考生姓名和学校名称。
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5．（24-25九年级上·江苏盐城·期中）假定你是李华，你班交换留学生 David想了解你进入九年级以来的学校生活。他写了一封邮向你询问相关信息，请你根据邮件内容写封回信。
Hi, Li Hua,
How is everything I’m interested in your school life. I have 3 questions:
1. What’s your problem in Grade 9 How do you solve it
2. Who has influenced you most How has he/she influenced you
3. What’s your future plan
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
David
注意：
（1）词数100左右。邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）邮件需包括所给要点，可适当增加细节，使内容完整通顺；
Hi, David,
Thank you for asking. I’m very happy to tell you something about my school life.
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Best wishes.
Li Hua
6．（24-25九年级上·海南省直辖县级单位·期中）你已经是一名九年级的学生了，你还记得刚升入初中时的自己是什么样子吗？这两年多在你身上发生了哪些变化？请以“My changes”为题写一篇英语作文，请你根据下面的要求完成作文。
要求：写你三个方面的变化，用上 used to 结构
How I’ve changed!
My life has changed a lot in the last few years. I used to _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7．（24-25九年级上·重庆北碚·期中）传统春节与现代春节之间存在差异，庆祝方式的多样化、饮食习俗的变迁、文化氛围的多元化以及消费观念的改变，都体现了时代变迁和人们生活方式的改变。学校英语日报正在举办“用英语讲中国春节”的征文活动，体现中国传统春节的变化。请根据下面提示信息，写一篇征文。
要求：1.80—120词；文章开头已给出，不计入总词数内；
2.文章中不得出现班级、姓名等真实信息；
3.根据图片和表格对比春节变化，并谈论你的感受和看法。
参考信息：
In the past Now
set off fireworks no fireworks
enjoy the Spring Festival Gala (晚会) play phone games
…
your ideas about the changes of the Spring Festival
Chinese people have been celebrating the Spring Festival for centuries. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8．（24-25九年级上·广东深圳·期中）为了营造书香社会，提升市民素质，建设学习型城市，学校将结合深圳读书月（Shenzhen Reading Month）开展各种丰富有趣的活动，假设你是学生会成员，请你结合以下要点，写一篇80词左右的短文。
1. 活动时间、地点；
2. 活动目的；
3. 活动内容（至少2个）。
Hello, everyone. I am going to introduce a meaningful activity designed by our school.
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We encourage everyone to join in the activity and take this opportunity to enrich your school life.
9．（23-24九年级上·湖南娄底·期中）上周你班召开了一次“告别陋习，走向文明”的主题班会，会上老师让你们谈谈身边同学的变化。请你根据表格里的内容写一篇有关王明同学的文章。
过去的表现 现在的表现
经常和同学打架 与同学相处融洽
花很多时间玩电脑游戏 积极参加各项活动
经常吃垃圾食品 健康的生活习惯
在课堂上吃东西、睡觉 认真听讲，按时完成作业
考试不及格 各门学科学得很好
注意：
1. 文章必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥，使短文的意思连贯，语句通顺；
2. 词数：80词左右；（文章的开头已给出, 不计入总词数）
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名及地名。
参考词汇：take part in activities 参加活动 fight with 打架
Wang Ming is my classmate. He has made great progress this term. In the past
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10．（24-25九年级上·吉林长春·期中）春节是中国的传统节日之一，代表着团圆和幸福。扫房子、挂灯笼、贴春联、包饺子等，这些都已成为固定的风俗习惯。请根据以上提示，写一篇不少于80词的英语短文，介绍这个中国的传统节日。
要求：
1. 语句通顺，条理清晰，书写规范，卷面整洁；
2. 可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名或校名。
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11．（24-25九年级上·吉林长春·期中）假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter最近学习中文有困难，他向你咨询如何学好中文。请根据以下要点和要求，用英语写一封不少于40词的建议信。
要点：
1. 大声朗读中文；
2. 听一些中文歌曲；
3. 多阅读中文书籍；
4. 写中文日记。
要求：字迹工整；要点齐全；表述通顺；简洁得体。
Dear Peter,
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Yours,
Li Hua
12．（23-24九年级上·上海浦东新·期中）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation（根据以下情境写一篇不少于60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
假设你是李华，你校校报正通过邮件评选最受欢迎的一个栏目（section），备选栏目如下：
●School sports
●Crossword puzzles（填字游戏）
●Campus life（校园生活）
●Book or Film reviews
●Poems by students
请给校报主编Jackson写封邮件，谈谈你的选择，并说明理由。
（注意: 1. 信中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息, 否则不予评分。2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。）
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13．（23-24九年级上·四川内江·期中）时光如梭，转眼大家已经步入九年级。回想过去两年的初中生活，你是否觉得自己改变了许多？请你根据以下提示，以“Some Changes in My Life”为题写一篇英语短文，谈一谈自从上初中后，你在哪些方面发生了变化。
提示：
(1)介绍你生活中的变化：
①过去瘦小，现在中等身材；
②过去安静内向，现在性格外向开朗；
③过去不喜欢运动，现在喜欢打乒乓球、游泳；
④过去讨厌学习，害怕考试，现在努力学习，相信能通过考试。
(2)谈谈你对这些变化的看法。
要求：
(1)包括以上内容要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；
(2)100词左右。标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Some Changes in My Life
How time flies! It has been two years since I went to the middle school. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
14．（23-24九年级上·黑龙江双鸭山·期中）“没有规矩，不成方圆” (No rules, no standards.)，假如你是班长，你们班周二要去参观电影博物馆，请你把需要注意的事项告诉大家。(任选5条规则) (注意：文中不能出现考生真实姓名、校名和师名，否则不得分)
入馆需知：欢迎来到我们博物馆参观，请遵守以下规则：
1.禁止在馆内吸烟；
2.保持安静，禁止大声喧哗；
3.保持馆内清洁卫生；
4.禁止拍照；
5.如想了解展品的详细情况请咨询导游；
6.不得随意触摸展品。
提示词：……的细节：the detail of；展品： exhibit；咨询：consult；导游：tour guide
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15．（23-24九年级上·黑龙江双鸭山·期中）图示作文：现在，全国启动了“文明餐桌行动”，号召全国人民“文明用餐，节俭惜福”。请结合图片，联系实际，适当发挥，以“Save Food and Eat Healthily”为题， 写一篇80-100词的英语短文。文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。
Save Food And Eat Healthily
The government has called on the people to save food and eat healthily so that we can enjoy our happy life. We middle school students should do something for it.
To save food, we_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
16．（23-24九年级上·黑龙江双鸭山·期中）“谢尔曼将军”巨杉树（The General Sherman tree）是世界上最大的树，它生长在美国的落基山脉（the Rocky Mountains）上，高达近百米，树龄4000多岁，和金字塔（Pyramids）年代相当， 这棵树还可以再活2000年。巨杉如此长寿和粗壮，人们对此很感兴趣，它也是自然界的奇迹之一。
要求：
（1）词数在80-100之间；
（2）字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。
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17．（23-24九年级上·海南省直辖县级单位·期中）在下周将要举行学习经验交流活动，学校邀请你给同学们分享学习英语的方法。请你以“How to learn English”为主题写一篇英语短文，把你三年来的英语学习经验介绍给同学们，说说英语学习的重要性并给出你对他们学习英语的建议。
提示词语: important, as much as possible, write down
提示问题: 1. Do you think learning English is important Why
2. What is your advice on learning English
要求: 1. 短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 短文中不得涉及真实的人名、校名和地名；
3. 词数: 约 80。
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18．（23-24九年级上·湖南娄底·期中）10月8日，杭州第19届亚运会圆满落幕。在本届亚运会上，最引人注目的“黑科技”之一，是田径赛场上的“显眼包”——机器狗。两只可爱的四足机器狗，以铁饼“搬运工”的身份，忙碌地奔跑着，深受网友喜爱。请你根据以下内容提示，写一篇英语短文，向你的英国朋友Peter介绍这只机器狗。
外形：四足机器狗
产地：中国
发明公司：杭州宇树科技有限公司（Unitree Robotics）
功能：1. 搬运铁饼（discus）；2. 握手，打招呼；3. 走路，跑步，跳舞；4. 未来还能用于救援和帮助残疾人士。
要求：
（1）文中不能出现真实的校名和姓名等；
（2）语言要通顺，表达要正确；
（3）要求包含所有要点提示；
（4）词数不少于80个英语单词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
The 19th Asian Games was rounded off in Hangzhou on October 8th, and a robot dog got great attention.
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19．（23-24九年级上·贵州铜仁·期中）请结合下图内容及提示，以“My changes”为题，根据写作要求，写一篇不少于80词的短文。
写作要求：
1. 短文须包含图中所有信息，并适当拓展。
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
My changes
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20．（23-24九年级上·湖北黄冈·期中）班上在评选“班级学习之星”，假如你是班长，请根据以下中文提示写一篇短文，来推荐你班上的同学李华。内容要点如下：
1.李华以前很害羞，不敢当众说英语。
2.去年暑假他去了美国，发现那里有很多中国制造的产品，感到很自豪。
3.通过和美国朋友交流，他的英语口语有了明显提高。
4.补充一至两点个人想法。
注意：1.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；
2.内容连贯，不要逐条翻译。
3.词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：in public当众 communicate v. 交流 spoken English 英语口语
Hello，everyone！Now let me tell you something about our classmate, Li Hua._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
21．（23-24九年级上·广西柳州·期中）每个人在成长的过程中都可能会遇到各种各样的困难， Tony写信说他最近也遇到了一些困难，假如你是Amy，请你写一封回信给Tony给予帮助。内容要点：
Tony的困难 你的建议
父母不理解，对父母的要求感到厌烦。 多与父母交流，互相理解
在学习上有困难，课堂上感觉困倦 多向老师求助，课后进行体育锻炼……
与好朋友吵架了 不用太担心，朋友间有不同看法是很正常的事情，向朋友诉说你的感受和想法
注意：
1.内容必须包含表格中的所有信息；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不得透露个人信息；
4.词数80左右。
参考词汇： understand (理解), have a quarrel with…(与…吵架), feelings and thoughts (感受和想法)
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22．（23-24九年级上·辽宁鞍山·期中）目前学校存在少数学生考试作弊现象。某英文杂志社拟对此现象向中学生征文，标题是“My opinion on cheating on examinations”， 请根据下列提示用英语写一篇征文稿。
要点如下：
My opinion on cheating on examinations
主要原因 个人看法
考试偏多偏难；不用功，懒惰；取悦父母，老师。 作弊不对，违反校规；要诚实，努力学习；……
注意：1.词数：80~100词；标题与开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.短文必须包含所有内容要点，可适当发挥；
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
My opinion on cheating on examinations
It is well known to us all that some students cheat on examinations at school. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
23．（23-24九年级上·湖北恩施·期中）为提高同学们的环保意识，你校公众号拟刊发一批以“保护环境从我做起”为主题的美文。根据下列思维导图，写一篇英语短文投稿，谈谈你对中小学生保护环境的具体做法。
要求：
1.短文必须包含思维导图中提到的所有要点，另至少补充一条你自己的观点；
2.语言表达准确，语意通顺连贯；
3.词数为80词左右：短文开头已经给出，但不计入总词数。
The earth is the only on e place that we can live on. It’s our duty to protect the environment. As students, we should do what we can to protect the environment in our daily life.
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24．（23-24九年级上·新疆巴音郭楞·期中）假如你叫李华，现在的你和以前已经改变了许多。请根据表格提示写一篇短文，介绍一下你的不同之处。词数不少于80。
In the past Now
Appearance short, fat, short hair tall, thin, long hair
Personality shy/silent outgoing/active
Study ask the teacher for help study with a group
Favorite festival The Mid-Autumn Festival The Spring Festival
Hobbies like…/hate … like…/hate..
How I’ve changed!
My life has changed a lot in the last few years.
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25．（23-24九年级上·湖北十堰·期中） 假如你是李华，你的英国好友Jack想了解中国的传统节日——中秋节，请你根据以下内容要点给他写一封电子邮件。
内容：★ 介绍你今年过中秋节的经历；
★ 你对过传统节日的看法；
★ 询问有关你想了解的一个西方节日。
要求：★90词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
★文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
Dear Jack,
How is everything I’m writing to tell you about our traditional festival—the Mid-Autumn Festival.
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Li Hua
26．（23-24九年级上·湖北黄冈·期中）请根据表格内容，以 Changes in my hometown 为题。写一篇介绍你的家乡变化的短文，不少于90词。
我的家乡发生了巨大变化 过去 1.村民外出靠自行车；2.村里有一口水塘(pool)，但上面漂浮垃圾；3.村后有一个光秃秃的小山(hill)；4.晚饭后人们待在家看电视。
现在 1.人们开车上下班，学生坐校车上学；2.水塘四周绿树环绕，塘中鱼儿戏水(swim)；3.小山如今茶树满山。春天村民忙于采茶；4.晚饭后，人们到村里文化广场(culture square)) 去唱歌、跳舞；孩子们打乒乓球或篮球。
Changes in my hometown
Great changes has taken place in my hometown.
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27．（23-24九年级上·湖北孝感·期中）由于父母工作变动，Tom两年前随父母来到了中国湖北，他想给远在加拿大的祖父母写信讲述他来中国后的各种变化，并告知他们自己的新年计划。请你根据表格内容，代替Tom完成这封信。
要求：100字左右，开头已经给出。
In Canada In Hubei
交际 常和祖父母聊天，去公园散步 父母忙着工作，没时间在一起；
饮食 早餐：面包和牛奶；中餐：汉堡和牛肉 早餐：习惯了热干面(Hot- Dry Noodles)；中餐：鱼、蔬菜、水果，很丰盛。
运动 不喜欢运动 对乒乓球和广场舞(square dancing) 感兴趣
新年计划……
Dear grandparents,
How is it going ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Tom
28．（23-24九年级上·四川眉山·期中）假如你是Linda，你分别多年的朋友Alice想要了解你近几年的变化，请你给Alice写一封信。
过去 现在
外貌 胖、不戴眼镜…… 中等身材、近视（short-sighted）……
性格 安静、不敢与人交流…… 幽默、敢公开演讲……
爱好 看动画片…… 对剪纸感兴趣（介绍制作材料、过程及意义）……
学习 英语口语不好、上课听不懂 掌握学习方法、爱上英语课
要求
1.给出要点要求写完。不要简单翻译，要做适当阐述，多利用教材词汇、句子。
2.结构：必须合理分段，100词左右。开头结尾不计入总词数。
3.书写工整美观。
Dear Alice,
Long time no see. My life has changed a lot in the last few years.
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Yours,
Linda
29．（23-24九年级上·四川眉山·期中）假设你是李鑫，下周是你小学班主任许老师的生日。你为她画了一幅画，这张画的纸是你自己做的，原材料是旧书。请你写一封电子邮件向许老师简单介绍一下这份礼物，并说说初中以来你的变化，要点如下：
1. 今昔对比（外貌；性格；兴趣爱好）；
2. 学习上的进步（两个学科，每个学科描述至少一个进步）。
要求：1. 写作应包含所有要点。2. 正确使用被动语态。3. 可适当增加情节使文章内容通顺、合理。4. 词数100词左右，开头结尾已给出不计字数。
参考词汇：used to do sth make progress in in public connect...with...
Dear Mrs. Xu,
I’m emailing you to say happy birthday to you. I miss you so much. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Xin
30．（23-24九年级上·广西梧州·期中）孝道是中华民族的传统美德。月光中学正在举办以“感恩父母”为主题的演讲比赛。假如你是Lisa，请根据表格中的内容写一份题为“A letter to my parents”的演讲稿。
你的感谢 父母给予你生命、养育你、每天为你做饭、生病时照顾你
父母是你的第一任老师，信任你、关心你的感受、遇到困难鼓励你、让你学会坚强
你的决心 帮父母分担家务、努力学习
你的祝愿 祝愿父母健康快乐
写作要求：
1.内容包含所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2.文中不得透露真实个人信息；
3.词数80左右（短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：
给予生命give me life；养育raise；照顾take care of；信任trust；关心care about；鼓励encourage；处于困难中be in trouble
A letter to my parents
Dear Mum and Dad,
I’m writing to express my thanks for all your care and love.
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Love,
Lisa
参考答案：
1．例文
How to Spend Grade Nine
We have been here in Grade Nine, one of the most important years for us students, for nearly two months. Some of us feel good, while some do not. How should we spend this year
First of all, it’s important to be confident. We should believe that nothing is impossible. Don’t lose heart, or you can achieve nothing. Secondly, hard work is essential. If we work hard enough, we are sure to make progress. We should also learn to be careful because carelessness leads to low marks. Thirdly, we should plan our time well and keep a balance between work and play. Finally, it’s crucial to know how to manage stress effectively. When we’re upset, we can chat with friends or teachers, play sports, or do fun stuff to relax. Keeping your worries to yourself can make them worse.
Spend the year wisely. It is you who shape your life and future!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点和开头结尾部分已给出，考试应注意要求中的内容，充实细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，提出应该如何度过关键的九年级；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从保持自信、努力学习、合理安排时间、学会压力管理等方面一一阐述；
第三步，书写结语，提出倡议，鼓励大家行动起来。
[亮点词汇]
①confident自信的
②essential必要的
③make progress取得进步
④carelessness粗心
⑤lead to导致
⑥keep a balance保持平衡
[高分句型]
①We should believe that nothing is impossible. (宾语从句)
②If we work hard enough, we are sure to make progress. (条件状语从句)
③We should also learn to be careful because carelessness leads to low marks. (原因状语从句)
2．例文
What the change brought me I have changed a lot. I used to be shy. When I entered middle school, I didn’t know how to get along with new classmates. I felt lonely. I missed my old friends, but I knew I had to fit in. But now I’m not shy anymore. Last year, I gathered the courage to invite my classmates to my birthday party. At first, I thought they might refuse. To my surprise, they all agreed. Gradually, I enjoyed the company of my new classmate. I am happy with this change.
From this experience, I get to know change brings challenges as well as opportunities. When change comes, we should face it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍自己性格方面的一个变化；
第二步，通过一件事来描述这个变化给自己带来的感受；
第三步，阐述这个感受给自己的启示。
[亮点词汇]
①used to be曾经是
②get along with sb.与某人和睦相处
③fit in适应
④gather the courage to do sth.鼓起勇气做某事
⑤as well as以及
[高分句型]
When I entered middle school, I didn’t know how to get along with new classmates.(when引导时间状语从句)
3．例文
Dear Peter,
How is it going I am writing to invite you to visit the History Museum with my class.
My school will visit the History Museum on Friday. We are going to meet at the school gate at 8 o’clock in the morning. There will be a great exhibition, and a lot of traditional artworks will be on show. We can learn a lot about local culture there. I’m sure you will like it. If you come with us, there are some rules you should follow. We can’t take photos. While visiting, we should wait in lines. When we are in the museum, we need to keep quiet and can’t shout. I really hope you can come with us.
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏“要点”中需要告知对方在博物馆应该遵守的规则，注意不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，介绍将去历史博物馆，并告知对方集合时间和地点；
第二步，介绍历史博物馆的活动以及大家能够做什么；
第三步，介绍在博物馆应该遵守的规则。
[亮点词汇]
①a lot of许多，大量
②on show展示
③take photos照相
[高分句型]
①There will be a great exhibition, and a lot of traditional artworks will be on show.（There be句型）
②If you come with us, there are some rules you should follow.（if引导条件状语从句）
③I really hope you can come with us.（省略that的宾语从句）
4．例文
In order to let me study better, my parents make some rules for me. I don’t agree with one of them, which doesn’t allow me to go out to play with my friends on weekends, because they think it’s a waste of time.
However, I think teenagers should be allowed to go out with their friends because teenagers should communicate more with their peers. Moreover, going out to play at the weekend for a proper time can make me feel relaxed. I can also learn the advantages of my friends, and this is helpful to my studies. In addition, friends can encourage each other to study hard and make progress together.
As far as I am concerned, this rule should be changed properly. If I’m allowed to go out to play with my friends on weekends, I can do even better in my studies.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：这是一篇材料作文，为议论文；
②时态：主要是一般现在时；
③提示：基于父母制定的规则，阐述自己不同意该规则的理由，包括青少年需要与同龄人交流、适当放松有利于学习、朋友间能相互鼓励共同进步等，最后呼吁规则应适当改变。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头提出父母为了让自己学习更好制定了一些规则，其中周末不许和朋友出去玩这一规则自己不同意；
第二步，详细阐述不同意该规则的理由。一是青少年应该与同龄人多交流；二是周末适当出去玩能让自己放松，还能学习朋友的优点，有助于学习；三是朋友之间能相互鼓励共同进步；
第三步，表明自己的观点，即这个规则应该适当改变，若允许周末和朋友出去玩，自己学习会更好。
[亮点词汇]
①be allowed to被允许做……
②communicate交流
③make progress取得进步
④as far as I am concerned在我看来
⑤properly适当地
[高分句型]
①I don’t agree with one of them, which doesn’t allow me to go out to play with my friends on weekends, because they think it’s a waste of time. (which 引导非限定性定语从句；because 引导原因状语从句)
②If I’m allowed to go out to play with my friends on weekends, I can do even better in my studies. (if 引导条件状语从句)
5．例文：
Hi, David,
Thank you for asking. I’m very happy to tell you something about my school life.
I worry much about my study, because my parents just focus on marks. It has caused bitter arguments between us. Luckily, Ms White, my English teacher, suggests I open my heart to them. It works. Our relationship really gets improved. Ms White also has influenced me in other ways. She helps with my English patiently and I have made great progress. I think she is the most responsible and devoted teacher. I want to become a person like her in the future. To realize my dream, I’ll be more hard-working from now on. I will make better use of my time and improve my learning efficiency.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes.
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“邮件内容”的要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出要介绍自己学校生活的话题；
第二步，具体阐述自己的学校生活。从“遇到的问题、谁对自己影响最大以及未来的计划等”几个方面重点介绍具体情况；
第三步，书写结语。表达“期待对方回信”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①worry about担忧
②focus on sth.集中在某事上
③from now on从现在开始
④ make use of利用
[高分句型]
①I worry much about my study, because my parents just focus on marks. (because引导原因状语从句)
② I think she is the most responsible and devoted teacher. (省略that的宾语从句)
6．例文
How I’ve changed!
My life has changed a lot in the last few years. I used to be overweight but I’m not anymore. I lost a lot of weight after I started playing tennis. Playing tennis three times a week is very good exercise. Now I’m fitter and healthier. The biggest change in my life was becoming much better in English. Thanks to my English teacher, Mrs. Wang, who gave me an interesting book to read. I enjoyed it so much that I started to read other books. This is the most important change because I am no longer afraid of the English language and I am doing better in my exams. This has made my parents even prouder of me. What’s more, I’m more outgoing than I used to be. I used to be afraid of speaking in front of people. But now I can give a speech in public. I’ve also made many friends.
These changes have enriched my life and made me a better person.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：本文应使用“现在完成时”，“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，应注意不要遗漏题干中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，借用文章开头，介绍自己的生活发生了很大的变化；
第二步，根据题干中的要点，描述自己的三点变化；
第三步，点评这些变化，并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①a lot of很多
②no longer不再
[高分句型]
①Playing tennis three times a week is very good exercise.（动名词作主语）
②This is the most important change because I am no longer afraid of the English language and I am doing better in my exams.（because引导的原因状语从句）
7．例文
Chinese people have been celebrating the Spring Festival for centuries. In the old days, we used to set off fireworks and watch the Spring Festival Gala on TV. But now, things are different. We don’t set off fireworks much anymore because we want to protect the environment. Instead, we play games on our phones and chat with our family and friends online.
The food we eat during the Spring Festival has also changed. We still eat dumplings and fish, which are symbols of good luck, but we also try different kinds of food from all over the world.
I think these changes show how our lives are getting better and more colorful. Even though some old ways are gone, I like the new ways because they make the Spring Festival more fun and interesting. It’s a time to remember our traditions and also to enjoy the new things that come with the modern world.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已明确，包括传统春节与现代春节的差异，如庆祝方式、饮食习俗、文化氛围和消费观念的变化，并要求谈论个人感受和看法。
[写作步骤]
第一步，延续开头并引出主题。从“中国人庆祝春节的历史悠久”出发，引出春节庆祝方式的变化；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。对比传统春节（如放烟花、看春晚）与现代春节（如不玩烟花、玩手机游戏）的差异，可简要提及饮食习俗、文化氛围和消费观念的变化；
第三步，书写个人感受和看法。表达对春节变化的理解，并强调春节团聚的核心意义不变。
[亮点词汇]
①celebrate 庆祝
②set off 点燃
③protect the environment 保护环境
④symbols of 好运的象征
⑤show 显示
⑥more fun and interesting 更有趣
[高分句型]
①Chinese people have been celebrating the Spring Festival for centuries. (现在完成进行时)
②We still eat dumplings and fish, which are symbols of good luck. (which引导的定语从句)
③I think these changes show how our lives are getting better and more colorful. (宾语从句)
8．例文：
Hello, everyone. I am going to introduce a meaningful activity designed by our school. To create a strong reading atmosphere and improve students’ reading ability, our school will carry out various activities during the Shenzhen Reading Month, which will last for one month from November 1st to November 30th. Let me share some details with you!
First, there will be a book-sharing session where students can exchange their favorite books and reading experiences. Second, a reading competition will be organized. Students will read aloud and be judged on their pronunciation and expressiveness. These activities will surely arouse students’ interest in reading. Not only will the activity broaden our eyesight, but also enhance our ability to read.
We encourage everyone to join in the activity and take this opportunity to enrich your school life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：本文时态为一般将来时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，学生应避免不要遗漏提示的要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简要介绍活动的时间、地点、目的等情况；
第二步，详细介绍活动的内容；
第三步，总结并表达期望。
[亮点词汇]
①carry out various activities开展各项活动
②arouse students’ interest激发学生的兴趣
③broaden one’s eyesight拓宽视野
④enhance one’s ability增强能力
[高分句型]
①To create a strong reading atmosphere and improve students’ reading ability, our school will carry out various activities during the Shenzhen Reading Month, which will last for one month from November 1st to November 30th.（to do作目的状语；which引导非限定性定语从句）
②Second, a reading competition will be organized. Students will read aloud and be judged on their pronunciation and expressiveness.（一般将来时的被动语态）
9．例文
Wang Ming is my classmate. He has made great progress this term. In the past, he always fought with others. He used to spend time playing computer games. And he often ate junk food. In class, he either ate or slept. He could never pass any exam. But now, he has changed a lot. He can get on well with the other students. He takes an active part in all kinds of activities. He has healthy living habits He always listens to the teachers carefully in class and finishes his homework on time. And he does well in all subjects. We all like him now.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，写作开头已给出，写作时可直接写王明同学的变化。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，主要围绕“过去的表现”、以及“现在的表现”展开，适当补充，丰富细节。
第三步，书写结语，表达感受。
[亮点词汇]
①make great progress 取得大的进步
②In the past在过去
③used to do sth过去常常做某事
④spend time doing sth花费时间做某事
⑤get on well with和……相处得好
⑥on time准时
⑦take an active part in积极参加
⑧all kinds of各种各样的
[高分句型]
①He always listens to the teachers carefully in class and finishes his homework on time. (and连接并列谓语)
10．例文
Of all the festivals in China, I like Chinese New Year most. Chinese New Year falls on the first day of the first lunar month. The celebrations last 15 days.
Before the start of the festival, Chinese people clean their houses to sweep away any bad luck. Then, on New Year’s Eve, all brushes are put away so that good luck cannot be swept away. People put up Spring Festival couplets and hang red lanterns. On New Year’s Eve, all of us will make dumplings and eat group meals together. After dinner, adults will set off firecrackers.
In short, I like Chinese New Year better than any other festival. It gives me more pleasure than I can imagine.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：本文主要是介绍春节，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，具体介绍春节的信息；
第四步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①sweep away扫除
②put up张贴
③In short总之
[高分句型]
Then, on New Year’s Eve, all brushes are put away so that good luck cannot be swept away. （so that引导的目的状语从句）
11．例文：
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. Here are my suggestions.
First, you can speak Chinese loudly. When you talk with your friends, you can speak Chinese. It is important to take a Chinese course, as you will be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. Besides, it should be a good idea to sing Chinese songs because you can learn and remember Chinese words more easily by doing this. You can also keep a Chinese diary. Try and write to me in Chinese next time.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏要点中的提示，并适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
①第一步，表明写作意图。借用“很高兴收到你的来信”来引出下文中对建议的介绍；
②第二步，具体阐述写作内容，重点介绍如何学好中文；
③第三步，书写结语。希望彼得能用中文写信。
[亮点词汇]
①ask for 询问
②be able to 能够
③learn from 向……学习
[高分句型]
①When you talk with your friends, you can speak Chinese.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②It is important to take a Chinese course, as you will be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students.（as引导的原因状语从句）
③Besides, it should be a good idea to sing Chinese songs because you can learn and remember Chinese words more easily by doing this.（because引导的原因状语从句）
12．例文：
Dear Jackson,
How are you doing I like reading our school newspaper, but my favourite section is Campus life. In this section, I can know about what has happened in our school. From this section, I can learn about the feelings of our classmates during having lessons and taking exams. Especially, we can show our wishes in this section to speak out our dreams. I hope that our school newspaper will be better and better.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中你最受欢迎的一个栏目的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“请给校报主编Jackson写封邮件，谈谈你的选择，并说明理由”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“最喜欢的一个栏目的名字、原因、希望等”几个方面重点介绍你最受欢迎的一个栏目的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语，表达“我希望我们的校报会越来越好”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①know about了解
②have lessons上课
③take exams参加考试
④speak out说出
[高分句型]
①I like reading our school newspaper, but my favourite section is Campus life. (动名词作宾语)
②I hope that our school newspaper will be better and better. (that引导宾语从句)
13．例文
Some Changes in My Life
How time flies! It has been two years since I went to the middle school.
My life has changed a lot. Firstly, I used to be small and thin, but now I am of medium build. I was once quiet and introverted, but now I am more outgoing and cheerful because I have made many new friends. Secondly, I didn’t like sports before, but now I enjoy playing ping-pong and swimming, which help me relax. What’s more, I hated studying and was afraid of exams before. Now, I study hard and believe I can pass them.
I think these changes are positive, and I feel more confident and happier about my future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“现在完成时”、“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。根据文章已给出的开头，引出主题；
第二步，具体阐述生活中的变化。包括身材、性格、爱好和学习方面；
第三步，书写结语。谈谈对这些变化的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①used to be曾经是
②medium build中等身材
③What’s more更重要的是
④be afraid of害怕
[高分句型]
①I was once quiet and introverted, but now I am more outgoing and cheerful because I have made many new friends. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②I didn’t like sports before, but now I enjoy playing ping-pong and swimming, which help me relax. (which引导的定语从句)
14．例文：
We are going to visit the Film Museum on Tuesday. Here are some museum rules we need to know.
First, smoking is not allowed in the museum. Second, taking photos are forbidden. Third, keep quiet in the museum. Don’t shout or make any noise. Fourth, please keep the museum clean and tidy. Finally, if you want to know the details of the exhibits, you can consult the tour guide.
I am sure we will have a great time and learn something meaningful during the visit.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇小作文；
②时态：主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应根据提示规则，任选5条规则即可。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点名写作主题是博物馆规则；
第二步，具体阐述5条规则；
第三步，总结。
[亮点词汇]
①keep quiet保持安静
②have a great time玩得开心
③something meaningful有意义的东西
[高分句型]
Finally, if you want to know the details of the exhibits, you can consult the tour guide. (if引导条件状语从句)
15． Save Food And Eat Healthily
The government has called on the people to save food and eat healthily so that we can enjoy our happy life. We middle school students should do something for it.
To save food, we shouldn’t waste any of our food. We should eat up all the food. We shouldn’t order the food more than we can eat while dining out, because many people in the world don’t have enough food to eat. To eat healthily, we shouldn’t eat junk food but healthy food. It’s good for our health to eat a balanced diet. We’d better not eat in small restaurants. The food and the oil they use are not clean or healthy enough. We’d better eat at school or at home if we have time.
In short, food is greatly important, so let’s take action to save food and eat healthily together!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇看图作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“图文信息”中节约食物，健康饮食的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明政府呼吁大家去节约粮食，引出我们应该为此做一些事情的话题；
第二步，具体阐述我们“节约食物，健康饮食”的具体行动；
第三步，书写结语，呼吁大家采取行动去节约粮食，保持饮食健康。
[亮点词汇]
①eat up吃光
②be good for对……有好处
③in short简而言之
④take action采取行动
[高分句型]
①We shouldn’t order the food more than we can eat while dining out, because many people in the world don’t have enough food to eat. (because引导原因状语从句)
②To save food, we shouldn’t waste any of our food. (动词不定式作目的状语)
16．例文
The General Sherman tree is the biggest tree in the world. It grows on the Rocky Mountains in the US. It’s nearly 100 metres high. It has grown for over 4,000 years, and it’s as old as the Pyramids. It may live for another 2,000 years. People are interested in the General Sherman tree because the tree can grow so strong and live such a long life. And it’s one of the wonders of the natural world, too.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应根据提示要点，不要遗漏重要信息，可适当添加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明巨杉树的重要地位；
第二步，介绍巨杉树的具体情况；
第三步，再次阐明巨杉树的重要价值。
[亮点词汇]
①as old as和……一样老
②be interested in对……感兴趣
[高分句型]
People are interested in the General Sherman tree because the tree can grow so strong and live such a long life. (because引导原因状语从句)
17．例文
How to learn English
Although we students all know the importance of learning English, quite a few students have difficulty learning it, such as word memorization, pronunciation, and grammar. So it is important for us students to know how to learn English efficiently.
In my opinion, we should make good use of different periods of time to learn English. In English classes, we should follow teachers and actively participate in classroom activities. After class, we should use short periods of time. We can memorize new words before eating and going to bed. Besides, we should focus on reading English articles, listening to English tapes and doing some exercises.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出本文的主题，说说英语学习的重要性；
第二步，给出学习英语的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①in my opinion在我看来
②make good use of充分利用
③participate in参与
④focus on专注于
[高分句型]
①Although we students all know the importance of learning English, quite a few students have difficulty learning it, such as word memorization, pronunciation, and grammar.（Although引导让步状语从句）
②So it is important for us students to know how to learn English efficiently.（动词不定式作主语和“疑问词+动词不定式”结构）
18．
例文
The 19th Asian Games was rounded off in Hangzhou on October 8th, and a robot dog got great attention.
It was a cute, four-legged robot dog. These cute machines, made in China and created by Unitree Robotics, stole the show as discus carriers. Not only can they carry discuses, but these robot dogs also shake hands and greet people, showing off their friendly side. They walk, run, and even dance. Even more exciting, they have potential for future use in rescue missions and assisting the disabled, making them become true helpers.
It’s amazing to see how technology like this improves our lives.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并注意适当添加细节，突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍产地和发明公司；
第二步，介绍功能；
第三步，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①four-legged四条腿的
②steal偷
③show off炫耀
④the disabled残疾人
[高分句型]
①Not only can they carry discuses, but these robot dogs also shake hands and greet people, showing off their friendly side.（倒装句+非谓语的使用）
②It’s amazing to see how technology like this improves our lives.（宾语从句）
19．例文
My changes
I have changed a lot. I used to be short when I was young, but now I am tall. I used to have short hair, but now I have long hair. I used to spend a lot of time playing games with my friends, but now I have to study all the time. I’m good at all subjects. I used to be so shy that I didn’t dare to answer questions in class. But now I have overcome my shyness and often answer the questions asked by my teachers. I used to hate English, but now I like English very pared to 3 years ago, I take part in more kinds of after-school activities now, which makes me more outgoing. And now I have more friends at school.
I really have changed a lot. What about you
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，完善表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，以“我改变了许多”为开头；
第二步，从自己的外貌，学习，学校生活等方面介绍自己的变化；
第三步，收尾并询问对方的情况。
[亮点词汇]
①used to do sth过去常常做某事
②spend time doing sth花费时间做某事
③take part in参加
[高分句型]
①I used to be so shy that I didn’t dare to answer questions in class.（so...that引导结果状语从句）
②Compared to 3 years ago, I take part in more kinds of after-school activities now, which makes me more outgoing.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
20．例文;
Hello, everyone! Now let me tell you something about our classmate, Li Hua.
Li Hua was once a shy boy. He used to get nervous easily and didn’t dare to speak English in public. Last summer vacation, he went to America. He found it interesting that so many products there were made in China. As Chinese people, he was so proud of our country. His spoken English has been improved a lot by communicating with American friends.
Li Hua is not only a hard-working student but also a kind-hearted person. He is always ready to help others. I hope everyone can learn from him.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出“我的同学李华”的话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“李华以前的表现、去了美国之后的变化、口语的提高”等方面进行介绍；
第三步，书写结语，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①nervous焦虑的
②hard-working勤奋努力的
③be made in制造于
[高分句型]
①Li Hua is not only a hard-working student but also a kind-hearted person.（not only…but also…引导的并列复合句）
②I hope everyone can learn from him.（省略that的宾语从句）
21．例文：
Dear Tony,
I feel sorry to hear about your problems. In your letter, you said that your parents didn’t understand you and you felt bored with their orders. I think you should communicate more with your parents. You should understand each other. Maybe their orders are good for you. If you have trouble in your study, you can ask your teachers for help. You said that you felt very sleepy in class. I advise you to do some exercise after class, such as running and playing basketball. Doing exercise is good for your study and health. You also said that you had a quarrel with your friend. Don’t be too worried. It’s natural for friends to have different opinions from time to time. You can talk with your friend about your feelings and thoughts. It’s important for you to communicate with each other.
Hope the above suggestions can help you.
Yours,
Amy
【详解】［总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，是一篇书信作文。
②时态：主要为“一般现在时”。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
［写作步骤］
第一步，表明写作意图。开头对朋友的问题表示同情，并表明要给出建议；
第二步，具体针对朋友提到的困难逐项提出建议；
第三步，书写结语。希望上述建议能帮助朋友。
［亮点词汇］
①feel sorry to对……感到遗憾
②communicate with与……沟通
③ask…for help向……求助
④be good for对……有好处
⑤have a quarrel with与……吵架
⑥talk with与……谈话
［高分句型］
If you have trouble in your study, you can ask your teachers for help.（条件状语从句）
22．例文
My opinion on cheating on examinations
It is known to us all that some students cheat in examinations at school. What are the reasons
As students, we often take exa

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