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Unit 6 Travelling around Asia
Writing 优质课
（沪教版2024）七年级
上
Learning objectives
1
Lead in
Pre-writing
3
While-writing
Post-writing
5
Summary
Assessment
7
Homework
2
4
6
8
1
Learning objectives
By the end of this lesson, you are expected to:
Second
Third
First
Get some information about Hangzhou
Draw the mind-map and use the correct expressions to write a travel guide
Revise and appreciate the travel
guide
How to make a travel guide
Features of a travel guide:
Colorful pictures.
Lively background settings.
Highlighted subheadings.
contents of a travel guide:
Where is it
What is it
What to do (see / eat / drink /buy…)
2
Lead in
2
Lead in
“Travel China 24/7”website wants your travel guides!
We want local people to write travel guides for different cities and towns in China. Please send us your travel guides with travel tips for your city or town.
A local's guide to Hangzhou
Welcome to my hometown-Hangzhou. It is a city with a long history, amazing views and delicious food. There are a lot of things to see and do here.
West Lake is a must-see spot in Hangzhou. The lake is to the west of the old city centre. It is on the UNESCO World Heritage List because of its long history and beautiful landscape. If you go there, you will see the mountains and parks around the lake. There are also many historic sites,such as the Yuewang Temple. It was built in memory of the famous general Yue Fei.
Hangzhou is famous for its local food. You should try some traditional Zhejiang dishes like Xiaoshan chicken.
If you come to Hangzhou, I am sure you will love this beautiful city at first sight.
3
Pre-writing
Match the expressions with their meanings.
部门：XXX 汇报人：xxx
useful expressions
一个必看的景点
在...的西部
联合国教科文组织
世界遗产名录
历史遗迹
为了纪念
以...闻名
第一眼看见
a must-see spot
UNESCO World Heritage List
to the west of
historic sites
in memory of
be famous for
at the sight
3
Pre-writing
historic sites things to do
my local food beautiful landscape
things to do
Hangzhou
(1)_______
(4)_______
(2)_______
(3)_______
(5)_______
things to see
beautiful landscape
historic sites
things to do
try local food
3
Pre-writing
Beginning
Body part
Ending
3
Pre-writing
杭州是一个有着悠久历史，
令人惊叹美景和美食的城市。
(with)
Hangzhou is a city with a long history, amazing views and delicious food.
4
While-writing
西湖是杭州的一个必看的景点。
它在老市中心的西边。
(a must-see spot, to the west of...)
West Lake is a must-see spot in Hangzhou. The lake is to the west of the old city centre.
4
While-writing
西湖被联合国教科文组织列入世界遗产名录。
West Lake is on the UNESCO World Heritage List.
4
While-writing
还有许多历史遗址，如岳飞庙。它是为了纪念著名的将军岳非而建造的。
There are also many historic sites, such as the Yuewang Temple. It was built in memory of the famous general Yue Fei.
4
While-writing
部门：XXX 汇报人：xxx
Now write a travel guide for your city ---Shenzhen
A travel guide for Shenzhen
fa_____________________________
culture and
innovation
tra
location and transportation
green future
fashion and popularity
4
While-writing
Tips: Opening-up in Shenzhen
lies in the south of China
visitors from all over the world:
convenient transportation
It neighbors Hong Kong and Macao.
a network of trade（贸易）
4
While-writing
Tips: Innovation in Shenzhen
Shenzhen quality:
China Hi-tech Fair
Aerospace(宇航的) watch
China’s largest Internet services provider
new energy revolution(革命)
4
While-writing
Tips: Green in Shenzhen
Harmony(和谐) between nature and mankind:
4
While-writing
Tips: Fashion in Shenzhen
A charming modern city:
a popular tourist
destination
a shopping
paradise
International
Model Contest
plenty of
delicious food
4
While-writing
, Ling nan puppet show
Tips: Culture in Shenzhen
A traditional Chinese Culture:
-folk art:
-South China traditions:
-a global model for the promotion of reading
lion dance,
shiwan pottery
Cantonese opera
4
While-writing
Group work: discuss, write & present.
Shenzhen which is in the south of China is famous for its fast economic growth. It neighbors Hong Kong and Macao. It owns convenient transportation, including subways, flights and ships. Many tourists come to visit Shenzhen every year.
If you go to the Shenzhen Museum, you can learn about history of Shenzhen. If you like swimming, you can go to Dameisha. Trying local food is a great choice for you. You can also buy what you like in many big shopping malls. It’s amazing for you to climb Mount Wutong. You’ll enjoy riding on the greenway in Shenzhen.What a relaxing sport when you join in the Shenzhen Marathon!
Why not come and visit Shenzhen It’s well-worth visiting.
5
Post-writing
Everyone is doing their best to make Shenzhen a better place!
Work hard, and try our best to strive for a brighter future of Shenzhen.
5
Post-writing
1. Name
2. Country
Step 4. Appearance
Step 1: Draw a mind map and think about some useful expression and sentence patterns.
Step 2: Organize three paragraphs with the correct words and logical context.
Step 3: Check and revise the writing , then share and present to your classmates.
6
Summary
7
Self-assessment What I have learned today
1.I introduced tourist spots , history and culture in Shenzhen
2. I focused on a clear topic in each paragraph
3. I used the words and expression I learnt in this unit
4. I used correct spelling , grammar and punctuation
Assessment
Compulsory ：
A. Revise your writing carefully.
B. Share your travel guide with your group mates.
Optional :
A. Appreciate your classmates’ travel guides.
B. Design a travel guide for another city.
8
Homework
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