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(全国通用）备战2025春考英语写作模拟训练（解析版）
1．假设你是李华，刚刚在网上结识了一位美国朋友Bob，他写邮件询问你的爱好和梦想。请你根据下面的提示要点，给他回一封邮件。
提示要点：1. 爱好：听音乐、看电影……；
2. 梦想：当一名侦探（原因自拟）。
写作要求：1. 包含所有提示要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
参考词汇：神秘mystery
Dear Bob,
I’m happy to get your email. Now, let me tell you something about my hobbies and dream.
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What about your hobbies and dream Please write to me soon.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Bob,
I’m happy to get your email. Now, let me tell you something about my hobbies and dream.
I have a lot of hobbies. For example, I enjoy listening to music, especially classical music and country music. They both help my mind and body relax. I also like watching movies in my free time, and documentaries and detective films are my favourite. From documentaries, I can always learn something. And detective films which are full of mysteries always catch my attention. That’s also the reason why I want to be a detective when I grow up. I hope to help the police solve cases and make our world a safe place to live in.
What about your hobbies and dream Please write to me soon.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：根据要点提示完成写作，注意衔接顺畅，可适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作目的（已给出）；
第二步，详细介绍自己的爱好和梦想；
第三步，结束语，询问对方的爱好和梦想是什么（已给出）。
[亮点词汇]
①a lot of 很多
②enjoy doing sth喜欢做某事
③listen to music听音乐
④watch movies看电影
⑤be full of 充满
⑥a safe place to live in居住的安全地
[高分句型]
①That’s also the reason why I want to be a detective when I grow up.（why引导的定语从句；when引导的时间状语从句）
2．小作文
长春电视台要为校园节目招聘中学生主持人， 邀请形象好，有才艺，善于沟通的同学参加，假如你是李明，请根据以下表格给负责人张女士写一封应聘信介绍自己。（表格内容需要都包含在内）
姓名 李明
年龄 15 岁
学校 长春市第 2 中学，9 年 1 班
外貌 ……
性格 ……
爱好与特长 ……
Dear Mrs. Zhang,
I want to apply for the host job.
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Hope I can get the chance. Thanks.
【答案】例文
Dear Mrs. Zhang,
I want to apply for the host job. I want to introduce something about myself.
My name is Li Ming. I am 15 years old. I study in Class One, Grade Nine of No. 2 Middle School in Changchun. I am tall and thin. I have big eyes. I always wear a smile on my face. I am outgoing. I like to make friends with others. I like doing sports very much because I think they can make me healthy.
Hope I can get the chance. Thanks.
Yours,
Li Ming
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇小作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己写这封信的目的；
第二步，介绍自己的个人信息以及爱好；
第三步，期待得到这个机会。
[亮点词汇]
①apply for申请
②make friends with sb与某人交朋友
[高分句型]
①I like doing sports very much because I think they can make me healthy.（because引导原因状语从句）
3．读下面文章。请根据问题提示，尽可能用自己的话写出大意总结。词数不少于60，不多于80词。注意：在文章后标清你写的字数。
Many teenagers have hobbies. But sometimes these can get in the way of their schoolwork, and parents might worry about their success at school. Teenagers often think they should be allowed to practice their hobbies as much as they want. Do you agree
Liu Yu, a fifteen-year-old boy from Shandong, is a running star. He is on his school team and has always wanted to be a professional runner when he grows up. However, his parents won’t allow him to train so much. “Of course we want to see him achieve his dreams, ” says Mr. Liu. “And we know how much he loves running. My wife and I have supported every one of his races. We have nothing against running! But we think our son needs to think about other possible jobs. He’s getting older now, so he needs to think about what will happen if he doesn’t end up as a professional runner.”
Liu Yu doesn’t really agree. “Well, I think I should be allowed to decide for myself.” he says. “My parents have always taught me how important it is to work hard at school and enter university. I understand this, but I’m serious about running. It’s the only thing I’ve ever wanted to do.”
His parents believe that Liu Yu should study hard in the evenings so they don’t allow him to practice running at night. “Maybe he thinks it’s too strict or unfair, ” says Mrs. Liu. “But we think we’re doing the right thing. He needs to spend more time on his homework because it is difficult to become a professional sports star.”
But Liu Yu still disagree. “I know my parents care about me. They always talk about what will happen if I don’t succeed. But I will! I’m a quick runner! I think I should be allowed to make this choice myself. Only then will I have a chance to achieve my dream.”
1. Who is Liu Yu
2. What is Liu Yu’s hobby
3. What does Liu Yu want to be when he grows up
4. Why do Liu Yu’s parents not allow Liu Yu to practice his hobby at night
5. Do you think Liu Yu should be allowed to practice his hobby as much as he wants Why
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【答案】例文
Liu Yu is a fifteen-year-old boy from Shandong. He loves running and wants to be a professional running star when he grows up. But his parents don’t allow him to practice as much as possible, because they think it can get in the way of his study. I think Liu Yu should be allowed to make his own decision. Only then will he have a chance to achieve his dream. (70 words)
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为小作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据文章内容以及所给的五个问题总结文章的大意，可适当增加细节，突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍Liu Yu是谁以及他的爱好；
第二步，介绍Liu Yu长大后想做什么；
第三步，说明为什么Liu Yu的父母不允许Liu Yu晚上练习他的业余爱好；
第四步，介绍你认为是否应该允许Liu Yu随心所欲地练习他的业余爱好以及原因。
[亮点词汇]
①wan to be想成为
②allow sb to do sth允许某人做某事
③get in the way of妨碍
[高分句型]
①He loves running and wants to be a professional running star when he grows up.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②But his parents don’t allow him to practice as much as possible, because they think it can get in the way of his study. （because引导的原因状语从句）
③Only then will he have a chance to achieve his dream.（倒装句的使用）
4．【写作内容】你是班长李明。你们班将于下周日到森林公园野餐，定于当天上午九点钟在校门口集合，乘公共汽车前往。请你用英语给班上的外国留学生写一封电子邮件，告知上述安排。
【写作要求】正文40个英文单词，文中不可出现你自己的真实姓名、学校等信息。
【评分标准】信息完整，语言规范，语篇连贯。
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【答案】Dear classmates,
I have some good news for you. We will have a picnic in the Forest Park next Sunday. We will meet at the gate of our school at nine o’clock in the morning and go to the Park by bus. Please be on time.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
【导语】本篇书面表达属于写电子邮件的应用文。要求考生给班上的外国留学生写一封电子邮件，告知下周日到森林公园野餐的安排。
【解析】1.词汇积累
一些好消息：some good news
野餐：have a picnic
在我们的校门口：at the gate of our school
准时：be on time
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：We will meet at the gate of our school at nine o’clock in the morning and go to the Park by bus.
拓展句：It is at the gate of our school that we will meet at nine o’clock in the morning and go to the Park by bus.
【点睛】【高分句型1】We will meet at the gate of our school at nine o’clock in the morning and go to the Park by bus. (运用了连词and连接两个并列的谓语动词)
【高分句型2】Please be on time. (运用了肯定的祈使句)
5．春节是中国的传统节日，你在春节期间一定会非常愉快。假如你是刘强，请给你在美国的朋友戴维写一封介绍你过中国春节情况的信。
要求：
1.注意书信格式。
2.词数不少于50。
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【答案】例文
Dear Dave,
I had a happy Spring Festival this year. Spring Festival is the Chinese New Year’s Day.
Before Spring Festival we are often very busy. We clean our houses. On the Eve of the festival the whole family get together for a big dinner. People stay up and eat New Year cakes or dumplings at midnight for good luck. On the first day of Spring Festival, the children greet their parents and get lucky money as new year gifts. Everyone is happy in China on the Spring Festival.
Best wishes to you!
Yours,
Liu Qiang
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：本文主要是介绍自己过春节的情况，可适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，表示自己的春节过得很愉快；
第二步，具体介绍自己过春节的情况；
第三步，表达祝福。
[亮点词汇]
①get together团聚在一起
②stay up熬夜
[高分句型]
On the first day of Spring Festival, the children greet their parents and get lucky money as new year gifts.(and连接两个并列谓语)
6．假设你是 Li Hua，春节将至，你想要邀请你在长春某国际学校就读的美籍好友 Larry 来你家过年，感受中国传统文化，请根据以下信息给他写一份邀请函，用邮件形式发给他。
提示：
时间：1 月 21 日晚
地点：文山路 118 号
活动：……
盼 Larry 及时回复。
要求：
1. 词数不少于 40，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 活动内容自行补充；
Hi Larry,
I’d like to invite you to celebrate the Spring Festival with me in my house. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Hi Larry,
I’d like to invite you to celebrate the Spring Festival with me in my house. Time goes very quickly. The Chinese Lunar New Year is coming. I know you are very interested in Chinese culture. I would like to invite you to take a trip to China during this special days so that you can know more about Chinese traditional cultures. My home is at No. 118 Wensan Road. Please come on the evening of January 27th. We will have a big meal that night. After dinner, we can watch Spring Festival gala on TV together. It must be very interesting.
Look forward to your early reply. Hope to see you soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】［总体分析］
题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
时态：本文时态为一般现在时为主；
提示：注意活动一栏需要自己补充。
［写作步骤］
第一步，总述写这封信的目的邀请对方来过年；
第二步，具体介绍时间地点及活动内容；
第三步，结束语，期待收到回复。
［亮点词汇］
so that为了
［高分句型］
Hope to see you soon! （祈使句）
7．假如你是班长李华，你们班计划举办一场告别初中生活的晚会。请你代表班级用英文写一封邮件，邀请你们的外教David前来参加。
要点提示：
时间：6月30日晚上7:00 地点：本班教室
活动：1. 分享过去三年的美好记忆；2. 谈论未来的梦想；3. 向老师表达谢意。
要求：
1. 字迹工整，语法正确，信息齐全；
2. 不少于5句话，40词左右；
3. 开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear David,
Our class will have a party to say goodbye to our middle school life. I am writing to invite you to join us.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文：
Dear David,
Our class plan to have a party to say goodbye to our middle school life. I am writing to invite you to join us. The party will begin at 7:00 p.m. on June 30th in our classroom. We’ll share our sweet memories about the past three years. We’ll talk about our future dreams. Of course, we want to express our thanks to all the teachers. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件，属于电子邮件写作；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接书信开头，说明写信目的；
第二步，先说明活动的时间、地点以及活动的具体内容，包括分享过去三年的美好记忆、谈论未来的梦想和向老师表达谢意；
第三步，表达期望并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①share sth about sth分享关于某事
②express one’s thanks to sb向某人表达谢意
[高分句型]
①Looking forward to your reply.（信件结尾常用句式）
8．为响应我市“创建全国文明城市”的号召，作为新时代的中学生，请以“Let’s build a green city together”为题，根据以下文字提示，并适当发表自己的观点，写一篇英文演讲稿。
具体做法 方式 益处
1、骑车、坐公交车、步行上学 避免交通拥堵，减少空气污染
2、不乱扔垃圾，不随地吐痰 让城市变得干净舒适
3、植树造林 美化城市，保护环境
你的建议 联系自己的生活实际提出1-2条具体的、合理的建议
要求：
1、词数不少于80词（首句已给出，不计算在总词数内）；
2、文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称及其他相关信息。
参考词汇：吐痰spit；垃圾箱dustbin；交通拥堵traffic jams；
Let’s build a green city together
Good morning, everyone. I’m glad to be here to speak in front of you. As a middle school student of Ya’an, it’s our duty to help build a green city.
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That’s all. Thank you.
【答案】例文
Let’s build a green city together
Good morning, everyone. I’m glad to be here to speak in front of you. As a middle school student of Ya’an, it’s our duty to help build a green city. We can avoid the traffic jams and reduce the air pollution by riding bikes or walking. We mustn’t throw rubbish and spit anywhere. In this way, we can keep our city clean and tidy so that we can live a comfortable life. And we’d better plant more trees to protect the environment and make our city beautiful. In my daily life, I can pick up rubbish and put it into the dustbin wherever I go. I can also save the energy by turning off the lights when leaving the room. In a word, everyone should take an active part in creating the civilized city. We are doing this to make our city more and more beautiful.
That’s all. Thank you.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要求已给出，学生不要遗漏题目中的要点，适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出建设绿色城市的话题；
第二步，介绍具体的做法及益处；
第三步，谈谈你的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①be glad to do sth乐于做某事
②would better do sth最好做某事
③pick up捡起
④In a word总而言之
[高分句型]
①In this way, we can keep our city clean and tidy so that we can live a comfortable life.（目的状语从句）
②I can also save the energy by turning off the lights when leaving the room.（时间状语从句）
9．假如你是Kate，刚来到中国的一所学校读书，你的朋友Jane很担心你在新学校的生活，请根据提示信息给她写一封信，告诉她你适应了并喜欢上了这里的学校生活。
要点如下：
(1)上午7：00到校，有4节课，下午3节课，5：30回家。
(2)喜欢周五，因为有最喜欢的地理和美术课。不喜欢数学，因为太难了。
(3)在学校交了很多新朋友，你们喜欢打篮球。
(4)学校生活忙碌但很有趣。
(5)适当补充或增加1—2条关于学校生活的内容。
写作要求：
1. 内容全面，包含所有要点；
2. 语句通顺，条理清晰，书写工整。文中不出现真实姓名和班级。
3. 60词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jane,
Thanks for your last letter. Don’t worry about me. I’m fine here because I like my school life.
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Yours,
Kate
【答案】例文
Dear Jane,
Thanks for your last letter. Don’t worry about me. I’m fine here because I like my school life. My new school life is busy but interesting.
Every day I get to school at 7:00 a.m. and go home at 5:30 p.m.. We have four classes in the morning and three classes in the afternoon. My favorite day is Friday because I have Geography and Art that day. The two subjects are my favorites. But I don’t like math. I think math is a little difficult.
At school, I also make a lot of new friends. We like playing basketball. After school, we often play basketball together. The classmates are very friendly to me. I like them very much.
Sometimes we have school trips, we go to some interesting places. Last week we went to the city zoo. I got to know animals better.
Yours,
Kate
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封书信；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：根据所给要点完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，感谢对方的来信并介绍自己在新学校的感受；
第二步，详细介绍自己在新学校的学习情况和生活状况。
[亮点词汇]
①a little difficult一点儿难
②make friends交朋友
③be friendly to对……友好
[高分句型]
①My favorite day is Friday because I have Geography and Art that day.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②I think math is a little difficult.（省略that的宾语从句）
10．假如你是李华，Student Times报社“My Hometown”专栏面向学生招募小记者（journalist），请你用英文写一封自荐信。信件内容要包含以下内容：
1. 热爱家乡；了解家乡的历史与文化；
2. 在校报社当过小记者；
3. 性格开朗，乐于交流；
4. 擅长英语，喜欢写作。
要求：字迹工整，表述准确。50词左右。开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear sir or Madam,
I hear that your newspaper needs journalists for the column My Hometown. I hope to be a member of the team. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I think I’m the right person you are looking for. I’d be thankful if I could get the chance.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】范文：
Dear sir or Madam,
I hear that your newspaper needs journalists for the column My Hometown. I hope to be a member of the team.
First, I love my hometown. I know a lot about my hometown, such as its history and culture. Besides, I used to work as a journalist and I did a good job. I’m outing and always ready to communicate with others. Moreover, I have a good knowledge of English and I’m skillful in English.
I think I’m the right person you are looking for. I’d be thankful if I could get the chance.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，表明自己写信的目的；
第二步，介绍自己的个人情况；
第三步，希望自己能得到这个机会。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②used to do sth过去常常做某事
③be ready to do sth乐于做某事
[高分句型]
I think I’m the right person you are looking for.（宾语从句）
11．书面表达
假定你是俞平，请你对法国交换生Alice 的邮件进行回复并给予合适的建议。
To: Yu Ping
From: Alice
Hi Yu Ping,How are you I hope you’re fine and not too busy! I can’t wait to leave for China next week. But could you tell me something about Chinese table manners What great places can I visit when I am in your city See you soon!Alice
注意：1. 文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息；
2. 词数：80~100。3. 短文首句仅供参考，不计入总词数。
短文首句：I’m glad that you are coming to China soon.
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【答案】Hi Alice,
I’m glad that you are coming to China soon.Now I will tell you something about Chinese table manners．It's a good idea to bring a gift with you，such as，some fruits，some flowers．When you eat，you should use your right hand with chopsticks to get and receive food，and you aren't allowed to stick your chopsticks into your food．
There are many places of interest in Beijing，such as The Forbidden City，the Summer Palace，the Great Wall，Tiananmen Square，if you come here，I will show you the places of interest
Yours，
Yu Ping．
【解析】这是一篇书信作文。假定你是俞平，要求你对法国交换生Alice 的邮件进行回复并给予合适的建议。本文首先要仔细阅读邮件，在回信时对邮件中提到的问题要一一回复。文章时态主要用一般现在时和一般将来时，人称主要用第一、第二人称。在写作时，首先要注意书信的书写格式，要连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。
12．假如你是李华，疫情过后，你想要邀请你的英国朋友Amy来你的家乡淮安做客。请根据表格中提供的信息，用英语写一封邀请信。
位置 在江苏，离南京不远
环境 街道干净，空气清新；草木茂盛，鸟语花香
人民善良友好；邻里互相帮助
可能的事 欣赏淮剧（Huai Opera）；品尝美食；……（至少举一例）
注意：
1. 要点齐全；
2. 80词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息。
Dear Amy,
After the epidemic, I would like to invite you to my hometown, Huai’an. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I think you’ll like my hometown. I hope we can meet soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Amy,
After the epidemic, I would like to invite you to my hometown, Huai’an.
Huai’an is in Jiangsu Province, and it is not far from Nanjing. The streets in Huai’an are clean and the air is fresh. There are many trees and flowers in the city. Every day I can smell the flowers and hear the birds sing. Besides, the people here are kind and friendly, and the neighbors help each other. If you come to Huai’an, you can enjoy Huai Opera, taste the delicious food and visit some places of interest here.
I think you’ll like my hometown. I hope we can meet soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍淮安的地理位置；
第二步，介绍淮安的环境；
第三步，说明对方来淮安可以做的事情。
[亮点词汇]
①far from远离
②besides此外
③place of interest风景名胜
[高分句型]
If you come to Huai’an, you can enjoy Huai Opera, taste the delicious food and visit some places of interest here.（if引导的条件状语从句）
13．将下面对话用第三人称概括为一篇短文，40~50词左右
Tony: What are you doing, Lingling
Lingling: I’m making big red lanterns.
Tony: I like them. They are very beautiful. Is your father helping you
Lingling: No, he isn’t. He’s still at work.
Tony: What’s your mother doing
Lingling: She’s cleaning the house and putting things away.
Tony: She’s working so hard!
Lingling: Yes. My aunt is sweeping the floor and my grandma is cooking the meal in the kitchen.
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【答案】例文
Lingling is making big red lanterns at the moment. They are very beautiful. Her father is still at work. Her mother is cleaning the house and putting things away. She is working very hard. Lingling’s aunt is sweeping the floor and her grandma is cooking the meal in the kitchen.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇小作文；
② 时态：时态为“现在进行时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意将对话内容用第三人称概括为一篇短文，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先介绍玲玲正在做什么；
第二步，介绍玲玲的父母在做什么；
第三步，介绍玲玲的阿姨和奶奶在做什么。
[亮点词汇]
①at work在工作
②put away收起，放好
③work hard努力工作
[高分句型]
①Lingling’s aunt is sweeping the floor and her grandma is cooking the meal in the kitchen.(现在进行时；and连接并列句)
14．Write a passage with at least 50 words about the topic “My Favourite Festival”（以“我最喜爱的节日”为主题，写一篇不少于50个单词的短文，内容必须涉及以下三个问题。)
1.Which festival do you like best
2.What do you know about this festival
3.Why do you like this festival
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【答案】例文
My Favourite Festival
There are so many festivals in a year. But I like Children’s Day best. It’s on the first of June. It’s my holiday. On that day, my parents often bring me to some interesting places. We watch TV together. We play together. I can also get some gifts from my parents and relatives. How happy I am on Children’s Day!
【解析】[整体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：采用一般现在时；
③提示：要求包含所有提示内容；
[写作步骤]
第一步：阐述最喜欢的节日是什么、喜欢这个节日什么以及喜欢的理由；
第二步：总结在这个节日的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①bring sb to sp带某人去某地；
②watch TV看电视
[高分句型]
①How happy I am on Children’s Day!（感叹句）
15．假如你是张华，你的英国笔友Lucy正在学习汉语。她在给你的来信中介绍了她的汉语老师的情况。请你根据以下信息用英语写一封回信，向她介绍你的英语老师Ms. Liu。
Appearance （外表） Tall, thin, smart
Personalities （性格） Helpful, friendly
Favorite color Pink
Hobbies Reading, traveling, watching movies
Achievements The first prize in the teaching competition
要求：
1. 不能出现真实的校名、人名等相关信息；
2. 请包含所有英文提示内容，可以适当发挥；
3. 内容完整、意思连贯、符合逻辑、书写整齐；
4. 词数：80-100词。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Lucy,
Thank you for telling me about your Chinese teacher. I think he is such a great teacher. Now let me tell you something about my English teacher, Ms. Liu.
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Please write soon.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Lucy,
Thank you for telling me about your Chinese teacher. I think he is such a great teacher. Now let me tell you something about my English teacher, Ms. Liu.
She is not only tall but also thin. She looks very smart, too. Because her favorite color is pink, she is interested in all kinds of things that are pink. She has a lot of hobbies, such as reading and traveling. So she often goes to the library after school on weekdays and goes to the places of interest on weekends. She also likes watching movies, but she seldom goes to the cinema. She is so excellent a teacher that she won the first prize in the teaching competition in our city. She is helpful and friendly to everyone. We all like her.
Please write soon.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
【解析】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示词语和内容，描写自己的英语老师的情况，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头和结尾融合起来，用第三人称来写作，时态以一般现在时为主，要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。
16．英语写作课上，大家对平时选择哪种交通方式上学进行了讨论。有人选择坐公共汽车，有人选择走路，有人由父母开车接送……假如你叫高琳，你平时喜欢走路上学。请你以“My Ways to Go to School”为题，根据以下提示写一篇英语短文，说明走路上学的原因及益处。
写作提示：1.家离学校不远；
2.走路上学是锻炼的好机会；
3.可以欣赏沿途的风景(scenery)；
4.和朋友一起走路很有趣。
写作要求：1.语句通顺，条理清晰，详略得当，书写工整；
2. 100词左右，题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My Ways to Go to School
I usually go to school on foot. .
【答案】参考范文：
My Ways to Go to School
I usually go to school on foot. My home is not far from school. It takes me about twenty minutes to walk to school every day. I think walking is good for me. First of all, it’s a good way to exercise. I’m busy studying and have little time to do sports, so walking to school is a perfect chance to take exercise. Next, when I walk, the scenery along the way changes every moment, and I can enjoy it. What’s more, it’s fun to walk together with my friends every day. We can talk about something interesting and know each other better. I hope more and more students will enjoy going to school on foot.
【解析】1.题干解读：该题目属于话题作文。题目要求是假如你叫高琳，你平时喜欢走路上学。请你以“My Ways to Go to School”为题，根据提示信息，写一篇英语短文，说明走路上学的原因及益处。要包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥；语句要通顺，条理要清晰，详略要得当，书写要工整；100词左右。
2.写法指导：本文时态为一般现在时，人称以第一人称为主。书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所提示的信息，经整理后展开思维，运用所学的英语知识准确表达出来。所以，要注意不能遗漏要点，写作时，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式；同时要注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。
17．假如你是李华，最近收到笔友Peter的邮件。他想了解你在初中三年里最难忘的一次学校活动。请你给他回邮件，告诉他你最难忘的学校活动是什么，你在活动中做了什么事情以及你的感受。
提示词语：museum, learn, watch, happy
提示问题：1. What was your most unforgettable activity in your school
2. What did you do in the activity
3. How did you feel
Dear Peter,
How is it going I'm glad to tell you_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Peter,
How is it going I'm glad to tell you something about my school activities. There are many school activities in my memory. But among those activities, the trip to the Fragrant Hill is the most unforgettable one.
It was a sunny day. We met at the school gate in the morning and rode to the Fragrant Hill together. It was the first time for us to have a riding trip. After we arrived there, we climbed the hill and took lots of photos. In the afternoon, we had a picnic in the park.
We talked and laughed a lot. We felt so excited. It was really a wonderful time. I will never forget it. I hope we can travel there again.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【解析】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文，假如你是李华，要求你给你的笔友Peter写一封邮件，告诉他在你初中三年里最难忘的一次学校活动。首先要注意邮件的格式，
然后认真审题，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。
2.例文点评：本文主要采用第一人称复数展开叙述，时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主。文章开篇第一段首先点明了最难忘的一次活动是什么；第二段详细说明了活动的内容；最后抒发了自己的感受。文章层次分明、条理清晰。
3.高分亮点：
短语：be glad to，at the school gate，take photos，lots of，a wonderful time，never forget。
句型：It was the first time for us to have a riding trip.这是我们第一次骑车旅行。It is/was first time for sb to do sth.某人第一次去做某事。
I hope we can travel there again.我希望我们能再次去那里旅行。I hope后接宾语从句。
18．自今年九月，国家出台“双减”政策，你的学校生活和家庭生活，学习习惯和生活习惯都发生了些许变化。假如你是李华，你美国的笔友Jim很感兴趣你的变化，请你和他分享一下关于你的好习惯和坏习惯，以及在以后的学习和生活中如何去改进你的坏习惯。
要求：1.写一篇70词左右的英语短文。
2.每种习惯至少列举2个。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
I’m glad to share something with you.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Jim,
I’m glad to share something with you. Since “Double Reduction” was released, I have changed a lot.
I have developed a good habit of reading after school, which benefits me a lot. And also, I begin to take up some exercise. I believe it can keep me healthy.
At the same time, I have some bad habits, such as watching too much TV. I know it is bad for my study and eyes, but I can’t control myself. And then I feel that I don’t make too much progress in the study. I determine to remove these bad habits. I won’t watch TV every day and work hard on the study. I believe I will be better and better.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：本文以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：要求分享好习惯和坏习惯，并如何改进坏习惯；要求包含所有内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，提出变化；
第二步，阐述自己的好习惯；
第三步，阐述自己的坏习惯以及如何改正。
[亮点词汇]
①take up开始从事
②be bad for对……有坏处
③determine to do决定做某事
[高分句型]
①I know it is bad for my study and eyes, but I can’t control myself.（宾语从句+转折句）
②I have developed a good habit of reading after school, which benefits me a lot.（定语从句）
19．由于受到新冠疫情影响，Mr Simon’s Clothes Store进行了闭店前的大甩卖。请根据下面给出的消息，用英语写一则促销广告。
要求：字迹工整，语法正确，信息齐全，不少于5句话，不少于40词。
衣物 颜色 促销价格
毛衣 红色和棕色 $16/件
短裤 蓝色和紫色 $6/条
袜子 黑色 $3/两双
Mr Simon’s Clothes Store
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【答案】例文：
Mr Simon’s Clothes Store
Come and buy your clothes at our great sale. Our name’s Mr Simon’s Clothes Store. We have lots of clothes at very good prices. We have sweaters in red and brown. They are only for $16. We also have shorts in blue and purple. They are on sale. Only $6. We have socks in black. $3 for two pairs.
Come to our clothes’ store now!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇小作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中的所有内容，可适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。直接说明店铺在进行促销活动；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。重点介绍促销的衣物、颜色和价格；
第三步，书写结语。表达希望大家都能来购买。
[亮点词汇]
①at very good prices 以非常优惠的价格
②on sale 特价销售
③lots of 很多
[高分句型]
①Come and buy your clothes at our great sale. (祈使句)
20．假设你是Tina，Peter是你的美国网友。他最近发给你一封电子邮件，询问你的个人情况。请根据以下提示，给他回一封电子邮件。内容包括：
1.你的爱好和特长；
2.你的日常生活习惯(至少两点)；
3.你的主要上学方式以及原因；
4.你对动物的看法；
要求：
1.60 词左右，邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.书写工整、规范。
Dear Peter,
Thanks for your e-mail. I am very happy to tell you something about myself.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Your,
Tina
【答案】例文
Dear Peter,
Thanks for your e-mail. I’m very happy to tell you something about myself.
I like to play the guitar and I can play it well. Every morning, I get up at six o’clock. At 7:00, I usually ride a bike to school. Because it is not far from my home to school. I have lunch at school at 12:00. And I get home at 5:00 pm. I like pandas because they are cute and smart. But they are in great danger. And I want to help and save them.
Can I know more about you I wish to get your e-mail soon.
Your,
Tina
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你的爱好和特长；
第二步，介绍你的日常生活习惯和主要上学方式以及原因；
第三步，最后表达你对动物的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①like to do sth喜欢做某事
②get up起床
③in great danger处于极大的危险之中
[高分句型]
I like pandas because they are cute and smart.（because引导的原因状语从句）(全国通用）备战2025春考英语写作模拟训练（原卷版）
1．假设你是李华，刚刚在网上结识了一位美国朋友Bob，他写邮件询问你的爱好和梦想。请你根据下面的提示要点，给他回一封邮件。
提示要点：1. 爱好：听音乐、看电影……；
2. 梦想：当一名侦探（原因自拟）。
写作要求：1. 包含所有提示要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
参考词汇：神秘mystery
Dear Bob,
I’m happy to get your email. Now, let me tell you something about my hobbies and dream.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
What about your hobbies and dream Please write to me soon.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
2．小作文
长春电视台要为校园节目招聘中学生主持人， 邀请形象好，有才艺，善于沟通的同学参加，假如你是李明，请根据以下表格给负责人张女士写一封应聘信介绍自己。（表格内容需要都包含在内）
姓名 李明
年龄 15 岁
学校 长春市第 2 中学，9 年 1 班
外貌 ……
性格 ……
爱好与特长 ……
Dear Mrs. Zhang,
I want to apply for the host job.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Hope I can get the chance. Thanks.
3．读下面文章。请根据问题提示，尽可能用自己的话写出大意总结。词数不少于60，不多于80词。注意：在文章后标清你写的字数。
Many teenagers have hobbies. But sometimes these can get in the way of their schoolwork, and parents might worry about their success at school. Teenagers often think they should be allowed to practice their hobbies as much as they want. Do you agree
Liu Yu, a fifteen-year-old boy from Shandong, is a running star. He is on his school team and has always wanted to be a professional runner when he grows up. However, his parents won’t allow him to train so much. “Of course we want to see him achieve his dreams, ” says Mr. Liu. “And we know how much he loves running. My wife and I have supported every one of his races. We have nothing against running! But we think our son needs to think about other possible jobs. He’s getting older now, so he needs to think about what will happen if he doesn’t end up as a professional runner.”
Liu Yu doesn’t really agree. “Well, I think I should be allowed to decide for myself.” he says. “My parents have always taught me how important it is to work hard at school and enter university. I understand this, but I’m serious about running. It’s the only thing I’ve ever wanted to do.”
His parents believe that Liu Yu should study hard in the evenings so they don’t allow him to practice running at night. “Maybe he thinks it’s too strict or unfair, ” says Mrs. Liu. “But we think we’re doing the right thing. He needs to spend more time on his homework because it is difficult to become a professional sports star.”
But Liu Yu still disagree. “I know my parents care about me. They always talk about what will happen if I don’t succeed. But I will! I’m a quick runner! I think I should be allowed to make this choice myself. Only then will I have a chance to achieve my dream.”
1. Who is Liu Yu
2. What is Liu Yu’s hobby
3. What does Liu Yu want to be when he grows up
4. Why do Liu Yu’s parents not allow Liu Yu to practice his hobby at night
5. Do you think Liu Yu should be allowed to practice his hobby as much as he wants Why
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4．【写作内容】你是班长李明。你们班将于下周日到森林公园野餐，定于当天上午九点钟在校门口集合，乘公共汽车前往。请你用英语给班上的外国留学生写一封电子邮件，告知上述安排。
【写作要求】正文40个英文单词，文中不可出现你自己的真实姓名、学校等信息。
【评分标准】信息完整，语言规范，语篇连贯。
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5．春节是中国的传统节日，你在春节期间一定会非常愉快。假如你是刘强，请给你在美国的朋友戴维写一封介绍你过中国春节情况的信。
要求：
1.注意书信格式。
2.词数不少于50。
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6．假设你是 Li Hua，春节将至，你想要邀请你在长春某国际学校就读的美籍好友 Larry 来你家过年，感受中国传统文化，请根据以下信息给他写一份邀请函，用邮件形式发给他。
提示：
时间：1 月 21 日晚
地点：文山路 118 号
活动：……
盼 Larry 及时回复。
要求：
1. 词数不少于 40，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 活动内容自行补充；
Hi Larry,
I’d like to invite you to celebrate the Spring Festival with me in my house. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
7．假如你是班长李华，你们班计划举办一场告别初中生活的晚会。请你代表班级用英文写一封邮件，邀请你们的外教David前来参加。
要点提示：
时间：6月30日晚上7:00 地点：本班教室
活动：1. 分享过去三年的美好记忆；2. 谈论未来的梦想；3. 向老师表达谢意。
要求：
1. 字迹工整，语法正确，信息齐全；
2. 不少于5句话，40词左右；
3. 开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear David,
Our class will have a party to say goodbye to our middle school life. I am writing to invite you to join us.
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Yours,
Li Hua
8．为响应我市“创建全国文明城市”的号召，作为新时代的中学生，请以“Let’s build a green city together”为题，根据以下文字提示，并适当发表自己的观点，写一篇英文演讲稿。
具体做法 方式 益处
1、骑车、坐公交车、步行上学 避免交通拥堵，减少空气污染
2、不乱扔垃圾，不随地吐痰 让城市变得干净舒适
3、植树造林 美化城市，保护环境
你的建议 联系自己的生活实际提出1-2条具体的、合理的建议
要求：
1、词数不少于80词（首句已给出，不计算在总词数内）；
2、文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称及其他相关信息。
参考词汇：吐痰spit；垃圾箱dustbin；交通拥堵traffic jams；
Let’s build a green city together
Good morning, everyone. I’m glad to be here to speak in front of you. As a middle school student of Ya’an, it’s our duty to help build a green city.
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That’s all. Thank you.
9．假如你是Kate，刚来到中国的一所学校读书，你的朋友Jane很担心你在新学校的生活，请根据提示信息给她写一封信，告诉她你适应了并喜欢上了这里的学校生活。
要点如下：
(1)上午7：00到校，有4节课，下午3节课，5：30回家。
(2)喜欢周五，因为有最喜欢的地理和美术课。不喜欢数学，因为太难了。
(3)在学校交了很多新朋友，你们喜欢打篮球。
(4)学校生活忙碌但很有趣。
(5)适当补充或增加1—2条关于学校生活的内容。
写作要求：
1. 内容全面，包含所有要点；
2. 语句通顺，条理清晰，书写工整。文中不出现真实姓名和班级。
3. 60词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jane,
Thanks for your last letter. Don’t worry about me. I’m fine here because I like my school life.
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Yours,
Kate
10．假如你是李华，Student Times报社“My Hometown”专栏面向学生招募小记者（journalist），请你用英文写一封自荐信。信件内容要包含以下内容：
1. 热爱家乡；了解家乡的历史与文化；
2. 在校报社当过小记者；
3. 性格开朗，乐于交流；
4. 擅长英语，喜欢写作。
要求：字迹工整，表述准确。50词左右。开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear sir or Madam,
I hear that your newspaper needs journalists for the column My Hometown. I hope to be a member of the team. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I think I’m the right person you are looking for. I’d be thankful if I could get the chance.
Yours,
Li Hua
11．书面表达
假定你是俞平，请你对法国交换生Alice 的邮件进行回复并给予合适的建议。
To: Yu Ping
From: Alice
Hi Yu Ping,How are you I hope you’re fine and not too busy! I can’t wait to leave for China next week. But could you tell me something about Chinese table manners What great places can I visit when I am in your city See you soon!Alice
注意：1. 文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息；
2. 词数：80~100。3. 短文首句仅供参考，不计入总词数。
短文首句：I’m glad that you are coming to China soon.
12．假如你是李华，疫情过后，你想要邀请你的英国朋友Amy来你的家乡淮安做客。请根据表格中提供的信息，用英语写一封邀请信。
位置 在江苏，离南京不远
环境 街道干净，空气清新；草木茂盛，鸟语花香
人民善良友好；邻里互相帮助
可能的事 欣赏淮剧（Huai Opera）；品尝美食；……（至少举一例）
注意：
1. 要点齐全；
2. 80词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息。
Dear Amy,
After the epidemic, I would like to invite you to my hometown, Huai’an. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I think you’ll like my hometown. I hope we can meet soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
13．将下面对话用第三人称概括为一篇短文，40~50词左右
Tony: What are you doing, Lingling
Lingling: I’m making big red lanterns.
Tony: I like them. They are very beautiful. Is your father helping you
Lingling: No, he isn’t. He’s still at work.
Tony: What’s your mother doing
Lingling: She’s cleaning the house and putting things away.
Tony: She’s working so hard!
Lingling: Yes. My aunt is sweeping the floor and my grandma is cooking the meal in the kitchen.
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14．Write a passage with at least 50 words about the topic “My Favourite Festival”（以“我最喜爱的节日”为主题，写一篇不少于50个单词的短文，内容必须涉及以下三个问题。)
1.Which festival do you like best
2.What do you know about this festival
3.Why do you like this festival
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15．假如你是张华，你的英国笔友Lucy正在学习汉语。她在给你的来信中介绍了她的汉语老师的情况。请你根据以下信息用英语写一封回信，向她介绍你的英语老师Ms. Liu。
Appearance （外表） Tall, thin, smart
Personalities （性格） Helpful, friendly
Favorite color Pink
Hobbies Reading, traveling, watching movies
Achievements The first prize in the teaching competition
要求：
1. 不能出现真实的校名、人名等相关信息；
2. 请包含所有英文提示内容，可以适当发挥；
3. 内容完整、意思连贯、符合逻辑、书写整齐；
4. 词数：80-100词。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Lucy,
Thank you for telling me about your Chinese teacher. I think he is such a great teacher. Now let me tell you something about my English teacher, Ms. Liu.
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Please write soon.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
16．英语写作课上，大家对平时选择哪种交通方式上学进行了讨论。有人选择坐公共汽车，有人选择走路，有人由父母开车接送……假如你叫高琳，你平时喜欢走路上学。请你以“My Ways to Go to School”为题，根据以下提示写一篇英语短文，说明走路上学的原因及益处。
写作提示：1.家离学校不远；
2.走路上学是锻炼的好机会；
3.可以欣赏沿途的风景(scenery)；
4.和朋友一起走路很有趣。
写作要求：1.语句通顺，条理清晰，详略得当，书写工整；
2. 100词左右，题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My Ways to Go to School
I usually go to school on foot. .
17．假如你是李华，最近收到笔友Peter的邮件。他想了解你在初中三年里最难忘的一次学校活动。请你给他回邮件，告诉他你最难忘的学校活动是什么，你在活动中做了什么事情以及你的感受。
提示词语：museum, learn, watch, happy
提示问题：1. What was your most unforgettable activity in your school
2. What did you do in the activity
3. How did you feel
Dear Peter,
How is it going I'm glad to tell you___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Li Hua
18．自今年九月，国家出台“双减”政策，你的学校生活和家庭生活，学习习惯和生活习惯都发生了些许变化。假如你是李华，你美国的笔友Jim很感兴趣你的变化，请你和他分享一下关于你的好习惯和坏习惯，以及在以后的学习和生活中如何去改进你的坏习惯。
要求：1.写一篇70词左右的英语短文。
2.每种习惯至少列举2个。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
I’m glad to share something with you.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
Yours,
Li Hua
19．由于受到新冠疫情影响，Mr Simon’s Clothes Store进行了闭店前的大甩卖。请根据下面给出的消息，用英语写一则促销广告。
要求：字迹工整，语法正确，信息齐全，不少于5句话，不少于40词。
衣物 颜色 促销价格
毛衣 红色和棕色 $16/件
短裤 蓝色和紫色 $6/条
袜子 黑色 $3/两双
Mr Simon’s Clothes Store
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20．假设你是Tina，Peter是你的美国网友。他最近发给你一封电子邮件，询问你的个人情况。请根据以下提示，给他回一封电子邮件。内容包括：
1.你的爱好和特长；
2.你的日常生活习惯(至少两点)；
3.你的主要上学方式以及原因；
4.你对动物的看法；
要求：
1.60 词左右，邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.书写工整、规范。
Dear Peter,
Thanks for your e-mail. I am very happy to tell you something about myself.
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Your,
Tina备战2025春考英语写作（技巧+真题）(全国通用）
考点考情研析
写作旨在测试考生在一定的生活和职业场景下英语的应用能力，包括信息理解和加工能力、按要求完成任务的能力、表达能力。考生要能运用所学的英语知识和所掌握的写作技能，完成相应任务。要求表达准确、逻辑性强、语法正确、书写规范、卷面整洁、语篇词数在80～120。
题型应对策略
一、解题技巧
意短文词数不要低于或超过规定的词数太多。
1.审题
写作要切中题意。怎样才能切中题意 就是要认真审题，看到考题后，先不要急于动笔，要仔细看清题目要求的内容。在自己的头脑中构思出一个框架或画面，确定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下笔，看懂题意，根据图画、图表、提纲或短文提供的资料和信息来审题。审题要审格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等。
2.围绕中心，拟定提纲
写作评分原则有四条：
(1)内容要点；
(2)运用词汇和结构的数量；
(3)运用语法结构和词汇的准确性；
(4)上下文的连贯性。
3.语言通顺，表达准确
(1)避免使用汉语式英语，尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。几种句型可交替使用，以避免重复和呆板。
(2)多用简单句型，记事、写人一般都不需要复杂的句型。可适当多使用陈述句、一般疑问句、祈使句和感叹句。不用或少用非谓语或情态动词等较复杂的句型。
(3)注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用。语态、时态要准确无误。主谓语要一致，即谓语的人称和数要和主语一致。注意人称代词的宾格形式。注意冠词用法。注意拼写、标点符号和大小写，还要特别注意汉英的不同。
(4)充分利用写作中所提示的有效信息。把握写作中所提供的信息，进行筛选、转换，部分借用。但要注意人称代词、指示代词、时态等的转换。
由此可见，要点是给分的一个重要因素。为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点，同学们要充分发挥自己的观察力，把情景中给出的各个要点逐条列出。根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，设想几个承上启下的连词，将主要句型、关键词语草草记下，形成提纲。
写作时切忌结构分散，废话连篇，严重跑题。写作，内容广泛，题材多样，要弄清考题的要求是写人、叙事、介绍、评论、图表、书信、日记、通知、便条还是电子邮件、推荐信、求助信等。如果是日记，要写清年、月、日和天气情况；如果是书信，则要注意书信的格式，注意短文词数不要低于或者超过规定的词数太多。
(5)描写人物时，要生动具体，例如：外表特征：tall、short、strong...服饰颜色：red、yellow、blue、black ...内心境界：glad、sad、anxious、interested...感情描写：love、like、hate,..动作描写：come、go、get、have、take...
(6)上下文要连贯。上下文的连贯性也是评分的一条原则，因此同学们应把写好的句子，根据故事情节，事情发生的先后次序(时间或空间),使用一些表示并列、递进等过渡词进行加工整理，使文章连贯、自然、流畅。大家应注意下面过渡词的用法：
①表示并列关系的过渡词：and、as well as、or...
②表示转折关系的过渡词：but、yet、
however ...
③表示时间关系的过渡词：first、second、
third、and then、finally、after、before、after afew days、at last、at that time、later、in thepast、immediately、in the meanwhile、when、while、then、after that ..
④表示空间关系的过渡词：near(to)、far
(from)、in the front of、beside、behind、beyond、above、below、to the right、to the left、on one side、on the other side of、outside...⑤表示比较关系的过渡词：in the same way、just like just as ...
⑥表示对照关系的过渡词：but、still、yet、
however、on the otherhand、in spite of、eventhough...
⑦表示递进关系的过渡词：also、and、then、
too、in addition、moreover、again ..
⑧表示因果关系的过渡词：because、since、
then、thus、otherwise、80、therefore、as aresult ..
⑨表示解释说明的过渡词：for example、in
fact、in this case、for、actually ...
⑩表示强调的过渡词：in fact、indeed、
necessarily、certainly、without any doubt、truly、most important ...
表示目的的过渡词：for this reason、for this
purpose、so that、in order that、so as to、inorder to...
表示列举的过渡词：for example、such
as ...
表示总结性的过渡词：in conclusion、
finally、at last、in brief、as has been stated、ina word、in general 、in all、in a word、generallyspeaking...
4.书写工整，卷面整洁
字迹要清晰，让阅卷人看得清楚，不可字迹潦草，难以辨认，要保持卷面的整洁。
二、写作注意要点
1.不会表达，另辟蹊径
春考作文给分是以要点和语言准确度而定，不完全以文采打分。造句尽量简单准确，避免语法错误。阅卷场上有句话：“错误面前人人平等，文采好得高分”。如遇到个别要点表达不出来或难以表达，可采用变通的办法，化难为易，化繁为简。总之，所造句子正确、得体、符合英语表达习惯，照样得高分。
2.迂回而行
当汉语词义不会用英语表达时，可以想一个与这个汉语词义相似的几种词义。扩展思路，然后从英语中找出一个与其词义相近的代替。这样可有异曲同工之妙。
3.小词大用
汉语中有些语意看来很复杂很文雅，但在英语中可用一些常用词表达。下面这些词可能在你的书面表达中很有用：take、have、get、make、come、go、do、see、show、happy、nice、kind、help等。
4.借花献佛
有时书面表达中需要的单词或词组或许在试卷中的其他地方出现。因为刚刚做过题，记忆犹新，那么就可信手拈来，为我所用。
5.锦上添花，量力而行
如果你还有时间和精力，想把书面表达写得更好，那么,请注意以下几点：
句型多样化，不要I/We...到底，使人觉得乏味。
适当使用一些并列句或主从复合句。进一步描绘人或事物时，适当使用定语从句。适当使用分词或分词短语，烘托谓语动词。偶尔使用一下倒装句，增加新鲜感。适当调换一下状语在句子中的位置，使句子不雷同。
上下句子紧接时，其中完全相同的成分可以省略。
三、评分标准
一、评分原则：
1.本题总分为10分，分5个档次酌情给分；
2.评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次；
3.如书写较差，影响对写作内容的理解，将分数降低一个档次。
二、评分档次和标准：
第一档(很好):(10分)
——覆盖所有要点，内容充实，表达清楚，意思连贯，全文结构紧凑
——语法结构和词汇应用准确，标点使用正确
——80-120词
第二档(较好):(7-9分)
——覆盖大部分要点，内容基本充实
——表达清楚，意思较连贯，全文结构较紧凑
——语法、单词拼写及标点使用错误较少——不少于60词
第三档(一般):(4-6分)
———覆盖部分要点，内容不够充实——表达不够清楚，意思缺少连贯
——语法、单词拼写及标点使用错误较多————不少于40词
第四档(较差):(1-3分)
———覆盖很少要点，内容极不充实
———表达不清楚，句子支离破碎，影响对写作内容的理解
———语法结构单调，词汇贫乏，词不达意——几乎没有有效信息
第五档(差)(0分)
——有意暴露真实身份者——不符合题意，无有效信息
(2024·职教高考)
A
由于种种原因，很多人存在失眠问题，假如你是李华，你的好朋友David给你来信，提到他最近受到失眠困扰。根据以下要点，给他写一封英文电子邮件，邮件内容包括：
1.好睡眠的重要性；
2.改善睡眠的建议。
参考词汇：良好心情a good mood
有规律的睡眠时间a regularsleep schedule
睡前不用电子产品avoid using electronicsatbedtime
注意：1.文中不得出现考生个人真实信
息；2.词数80～100词。
(2023·职教高考)
B
劳动实践能够帮助我们提高生活技能、增长生活见识、体会劳动价值、收获劳动喜悦。假设你是某公司职员李华，在上周末你参加了单位组织的社区劳动实践活动。请根据以下要点，给外国朋友Jack写一封英文电子邮件。邮件内容包括：
1.劳动实践内容；
2.劳动实践感受。
参考词汇：
分捡垃圾pick up litter and sort it清扫道路clean up the paths浇灌树木water theplants劳动价值the value of working
创建美丽社区create a better environmentfor the community
注意：
1.文中不得出现考生个人真实信息；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.词数80～120。
Dear Jack,
How is itgoing I'm writing to sharemy experience of labor practice at lastweekend.
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Yours
Li Hua
（2022年职教高考）
C
某公司为拓展海外市场，决定在公司内部选聘员工，组建海外市场销售团队。下面是公司对团队成员的基本要求。
Requirements for Team Members
Major Marketing,or other relevantMajor(相关的)majors
Education a college graduate
Skills fluent English;computer skills;Skillsteam work;strong communication
Personalities outgoing;creative;responsible
Others at least one year's workOthersexperience;manage time well
假设你是该公司员工Zhao Liang,希望加入销售团队。请根据上述要求，给外方销售总监Simon Logan写一封电子邮件。
要点包括：
1.写邮件的目的；
2.自己具备的条件；
3.表达态度，期盼回复。
注意：1.文中不得出现考生个人真实信息；
2.词数80～120;
3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Date:July 8,2022
From:Zhao Liang
To:Simon Logan,Sales Department HeadSubject:An application for joining themarketing team
Dear Mr.Logan,
I'm Zhao Liang from the SalesDepartment.Glad to know that a marketingteam abroad will be built in our company.
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Yours sincerely,
Zhao Liang
(2021,职教高考)
D
随着中国改革开放持续深人，中外文化交流日益加强。2021年5月7日，一外国师生代表团来山东某国际双语学校进行为期一天的文化交流。以下是本次活动安排：
Arrangement
Time May 7th
Visitors Three teachers and twenty students
Activities 8:00 a,m.—11:30a.m. 1.attend welcoming ceremony2.take a Chinese class3.visit the library
Lunch time enjoy Chinese food
1:30 p.m.—5:00p.m. experience traditional Chinese culture1.learn Kungfu2.enjoy Peking Opera
假设你是山东某国际双语学校本次活动负责人Tina White,请在活动结束后写一篇工作日记。
要点包括：
1.参与人员；
2.活动内容；
3.活动小结。
注意：1.文中不得出现考生个人真实信息；
2.词数80～120;
3.开头已给出，不计入总词数。
May 7h,Friday sunny
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|技法点评|
《英语考试说明》要求考生准确理解一定职业场景下的任务要求，能根据提供的材料分析、选有用信息，策划或执行以职业场景为背景的任务，并以一定的短文形式表达出来，要求任务表达准确，语法正确，书写规范，卷面整洁，词数为80～120个。从2021年春季高考开始，职场应用改成了写作，取消任务一的5道填空题，只保留原任务二中的短文写作。近几年高考写作体栽各异，写作时注意以下做题技巧：①认真审题，把握作文的体裁、格式、内容要点、人称、时态等写作要点。
②在写作过程中，文章的整体结构通常分
为三个部分：开头、中间内容、结尾。注意开头、结尾以及中间段落的一些承上启下的连词等。
③语句表述准确，句式多样。注意单词拼
写正确，不要出现语法错误。语态和时态要准确，主谓语要一致，标点符号也要注意；可适当使用定语从句、倒装句、强调句等句式。
[参考答案]
Dear David,
I am sorry to hear that you have a problemwith insomnia.Personally,I think you need to payattention to the following aspects.
First,I recommend you to keep a good mood,which means that you should hold a positive attitude towards life instead of being anxious frequent-ly.Also,a regular sleep schedule plays a significantrole in your good sleep.A cup of milk before bedmay help you sleep sound through the wholenight.More importantly,it's vital to form a healthybedtime habit.You'd better avoid using electronicsat bed time.
I hope my advice is worth taking and will ben-efit you.
Yours,
Li Hua
B
[参考答案]
Dear Jack,
How is it going I'm writing to share my ex-perience of labor practice at last weekend.There isa labor practice in our company last Saturday,thispractice aimed to help create a better environmentfor our community.
That morning,I got up early to meet my co-workers.To begin with,we started to pick up litterin ourcommunity.The litter wassorted into differ-ent recycling bins.After that,we cleaned up thepaths and watered the plants.
From this labor practice,I realizedthe impor-tance of labor and the value of working for thecommunity.I have made a decision to work as avolunteer in my spare time.I do hope that more people will join me.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
C
[写作分析]本文写作话题：求职应聘；
体裁：电子邮件；
写作内容：邮件的目的、自己具备的条件和表达态度，期盼回复。
写作人称：第一人称；
写作时态：介绍当前情况用一般现在时态；写过去的事情用一般过去时态；写过去对现在的影响使用现在完成时态；写未来的打算用一般将来时态；写作时发生的事用现在进行时态。总之，求职应聘的文章动词时态的应用较为复杂。
写作要求：具体要求已在所给的表格中呈现，在不漏下任意一个条件的前提下，可以稍微发挥应聘人的合理优势。按照简单句的标准句型，适当使用复合句，完成组词造句，合理使用过渡句，连成文章。
[参考答案]
Date:July 8,2022From:Zhao Liang
To:Simon Logan,Sales Department Head
Subject:An application for joining the marketing teamDear Mr.Logan,
I'm Zhao Liang from the Sales Department.Gladto know that a marketing team abroad will be builtin our company.I'm writing to you to apply forjoining the marketing team,because I'm interestedin the marketing abroad.Let me introduce myselfto you.I graduated from Shandong University.Mymajor is marketing.I got high marks in all the sub-jects.I have wide hobbies,and I have had a lot ofskills.I have got the winner in the English speechcompetition and now I can speak English fluently.I'm good at computer programming.I'm outgoingand creative and I'm responsible for my work.I'mfond of communicating with new people and I'mpopular with team work.I have ever worked as asalesperson abroad in a large company for twoyears.I am used to having a schedule for every dayso I can manage time well.I would appreciate it ifI'm offered the opportunity.Thank you for your
consideration.
I'm looking forward tohearing from you soon.Yours sincerely,
Zhao Liang
D
[写作分析]写作体裁：工作日记。
写作内容：
1.参与人员：three teachers and twentystudents。
2.活动内容：表格内3个时间单元的活动。
3.活动小结：参与人员的情感体验以及文化交流带来的作用和意义。
写作人称：第一人称。
写作时态：日记主要记录白天发生的过去的事情。因此主要采用过去时。
[参考答案]
May 7,Friday
sunny
Today three teachers and twenty studentsfrom foreign countries came to our school for aone-day cultural exchange.We had a good time.
We attended the welcoming ceremony at 8o'clock in the morning.Then our foreign friendstook a Chinese class,after which they visited the li-brary.At lunch time,we prepared delicious Chinesefood for them,and they all enjoyed it.In the after-noon,our friends experienced traditional Chineseculture and the activities including learning Kungfuand enjoying Peking Opera.
Through today's activities,our friends not on-ly experienced the Chinese culture,but also learntmore about it.Meanwhile,we developed our friend-ship.What a meaningful day!
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