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读后续写写作素材：47个句子了解15种高分语法现象
15种高分语法现象
一、高分副词
单个副词修饰动词或形容词
①Skating flawlessly on the ice rink, she felt as if a merry bird out of cage.
②The mother searched frantically for her missing daughter, tears of grief welling up her eyes.
③Under the unbearably scorching sun, he was soaked in sweat, but still wore a brilliant smile.
④A smile seems insignificant but it can be quite rewarding, which can make you and others feel boundlessly amazing.
两个副词并列使用
⑤Quietly but rather determinedly, she took the leave and headed for the house.
⑥I crawled into bed, burying myself in the pillow, feeling absolutely, physically and emotionally broken.
二、高分介词短语
⑦When she finished playing, the audience sat in stunned silence before leaping to their feet with an extraordinary outburst of applause.
⑧In an ecstasy of delight, Mike sprang to his feet, throwing his arms around his dad, his heart swelling with gratitude.
三、形容词作状语
⑨Together, triumphant and proud, all 80,000 of us sang the national Anthem with eyes watery.
⑩Realizing his mistake, Mike, embarrassed and guilty, ducked his head in great shame.
四、无灵主语
11.A sense of despair defeated me, and I fell sobbing on the doorstep.《简爱》
12.The next moment witnessed their efforts to make the breakfast without delay.
五、动作链
13.He slipped on the a flight of steps,fell forward and tumbled down the stairs.
14.Mike struggled to his feet, gathered up all his strength and sprinted towards the finish line.
六、It做形式宾语/主语
15.Don’t take it for granted that you can shrug off this responsibility.
16.It suddenly occurred to me that/ hit me that/ struck me that/ dawned upon me that...
七、倒装句 (部分倒装/完全倒装）
17.Hardly had I rose to my feet when a lovely sound arrested my progress.
18.So stunned was they to see xx, totally a stranger standing before us, that we were rooted on the floor.
19.Never in my wildest dream have I ever thought about having this opportunity.
20.Exhausted though/as they were, the children were overwhelmed with immense pride.
21.Had it not been for my teacher’s unremitting support and encouragement, I would have given up writing.
22.Standing outside the door wasLily’s sister, on whose face anxiety was clearly written.
八、强调句 （it is/was+被强调部分+that....)
23.It was at the precise moment that I came to realized that a seemingly trivial detail mattered a great deal.
24.It is love that makes the world go around. Never underestimate the power of love.
九、省略句 （状语从句连词+非谓语动词，主语+谓语）
25.When(you are) confronted/faced with difficulties, brave them and you will find the light at the end of the tunnel.
26.If interested, please submit your entry to the designated email address.
十、虚拟语气 （时态倒退一步）
27.If it had not been for his kind words and faith in me, I would have given up on myself.
28.If only I had followed his advice. = How i wish I had followed his advice.
29.But for my recklessness, the huge loss could have been avoided.
十一、With的复合结构 (with+宾语+宾语补足语）
30.With her heart thumping wildly, she pushed the door open and walked in.
31.The girl smiled with her eyes sparkling with excitement, her long tail dancing in the gentle breeze.
十二、独立主格 （独立主语+非谓语动词， 主语+谓语）
32.Her heart thumping wildly, she pushed the door open and walked in.
33.The girl smiled, her eyes sparkling with excitement, her long tail dancing in the gentle breeze.
十三、非谓语动词
单个非谓语动词（逻辑主语与非谓语从此之间的关系)
34.Beaming a radiant smile, she pushed the door open and walked in.
35.The girl stepped onto the stage, clutching her sleeve tightly.
多个非谓语动词
36.Forcing a fake smile and raising her head up high, the girl stepped onto the stage, clutching her sleeve tightly.
37.Burying her head in the pillows and sobbing uncontrollably, she felt as if the whole world had deserted her.
十四、两大从句 (名从，定从）
38.After what seemed to be eternity, finally, there came the ring bell.
39.What amazes me is that each has exhibited boundless curiosity and is craving for knowledge.
40.Out of the house stood Marry,on whose face concern was clearly written.
十五、修辞手法 (比喻/拟人/夸张等）
41.The country, covered with cherry tree flowers, looks as though it is covered with pink snow.
42.We were so excited that we felt as if time had stretched out endlessly on that day, and the scorching sun seemed to refuse to set!
43.I felt my heart was so sorrowful that it swelled up, swelling up to the point that it almost burst out of my chest.
44.My mind is in chaos, more so than ever before in my life. It feels as though there are over a dozen cats, clawing at my heart with their sharp paws.
45.I'm deeply disturbed, with a knot of tangled rope in my heart that refuses to be untied or straightened.
46.I long, long, long for the release of the exam results, yet I fear, fear, fear that my performance will disappoint my parents and teachers, just like waiting for a court verdict after an appeal.
47.Every day, I gaze at the soil that covers my seeds, imagining them sprouting, growing, blooming, and bearing fruit. Like a mother nurturing life, eagerly anticipating the birth of her baby.

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