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读后续写：人与社会（如何通过与他人的协作，为社会做点贡献）讲义
题目
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I was doing homework with my friend Ollie at his home when he randomly started scribbling （乱画）a fish. But not just any fish. This fish was riding a skateboard and blowing a bubble that said “ I’d rather be skating!” I laughed and drew a sea star saying “Quit fooling around and get to work!”
Just then, Ollie’s grandma Abuela and her friend Mr. Goldberg came into the kitchen. Mr. Goldberg was in charge of the local animal shelter. Abuela poured their tea and inquired about how things were going at the animal shelter. Mr. Goldberg sighed, shaking his head. He explained that not enough people were adopting pets, resulting in too many animals without homes.
Overhearing the conversation, Ollie offered to adopt some excitedly. But Abuela said that one noisy parrot was plenty for this house. “Blue isn’t noisy,” defended Ollie. “He’s just musical.”
“I’d have a whole farm full of animals if I could,” I said. “But my parents say two cats and a hamster（仓鼠）are enough.”
Mr. Goldberg said he kept trying to attract people to adopt animals, but found it hard to get people’s attention these days. Ollie drew a sad whale, and I wrote the words “Please adopt me” in the shape of a whale spout（喷水）. Mr. Goldberg took a look at our drawings and made favorable comments on them, saying that these clever talking animals just might grab people’s attention. And he asked us if we were willing to design a poster for his animal shelter, a proposal we happily accepted. We decided to draw some ideas on our own and meet up again the next afternoon.
That night, when I was sitting in the living room brainstorming ideas for the poster, my little brother brought in our hamster, Mr. Nibbles, to give him a little run – around time. He made a hamster playground out of couch pillows and Mr. Nibbles began to run around merrily.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Suddenly, an idea formed in my mind. ______________________
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We decided to make both Mr. Nibbles and Blue the stars of the poster.
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写作分析
1. 主要人物:
①I
②Ollie
③Abuela: Ollie’s grandma
④Mr. Goldberg: ABuela’s friend, in charge of the local animal shelter
⑤Mr. Nibbles: our hamster
⑥Blue: Ollie’s pet parrot
2. 视角：第一人称
3. 主题：人与社会（如何通过与他人的协作，为社会做点贡献）
4. 突出点：
如何为动物收留站设计一份呼吁人们收养动物的海报
5. 前文故事梗概:
为了让更多的人收养被遗弃的动物，Mr. Goldberg请我和Ollie为他的动物收留站画一张海报。于是，我们欣然答应。我跟Ollie商量，先各自想点子，然后第二天下午再碰面讨论。……
6.续写安排:
第一段: Suddenly, an idea formed in my mind.
①（与前一句衔接）到底是怎样的idea
②（过渡）我和Ollie分别做了些什么
③（承上启下）最终我们的想法是什么
第二段: We decided to make both Mr. Nibbles and Blue the stars of the poster.
①（与前一句衔接）我们一起做了些什么
②（过渡）Mr. Goldberg有什么看法
③（收尾）结果如何
下水文
Suddenly, an idea formed in my mind. Our lovely and naughty hamster, Mr. Nibbles could be fit for the role, who absolutely would bring more people to show concern about adopting animals. Recalling the funny ways Mr. Nibbles had acted, I began to draw the figure based on him, adding the words “Lovely and wise pets! You won’t resist!”. The next afternoon, just as what I had thought of, Ollie came with his musical parrot, Blue, singing soulfully, trying to persuade people to adopt one from the animal shelter. After a heated discussion, we eventually came to the agreement on the draft of the poster. (98 words)
We decided to make both Mr. Nibbles and Blue the stars of the poster. Considering the advantages of Mr. Nibbles and Blue, we had our final design of the poster, in which we had a vivid eye-catching scene inviting people to adopt the animals enthusiastically. We couldn’t wait to show it to Mr. Goldberg, all the way running to him. The moment seeing the poster, he gave us a great thumb, praising us for our hard work and creation. Weeks later, there came the good news that lots of animals in the animal shelter found their homes. And for the first time we had a good taste of the delectation of cooperation. (98 words)

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