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读后续写：个人成长之轮椅女孩抓住机会逆转命运 为他人点亮希望
读后续写（广东省佛山市 S6 高三英语联考）
As a single mother, I’ve never doubted my daughter Jane’s dream to be a singer on the stage. At an early age, she was crazy about singing. Whenever she had a chance, she would sing to her heart’s content. Her sweet and charming voice tended to get people around attracted to her songs.
Living in a small city, I took several odd jobs, determined to do everything in my power to support her. Soon after Jane attended school, her music teacher Mary noticed her talent by chance and volunteered to give her some guidance on how to sing. Jane practiced so hard that before long she made great progress in singing.
Unfortunately, one noon a year later, Jane was crossing the street when a careless driver knocked her down. She was rushed to hospital. When I hurried there, the doctor told me that my daughter would probably not stand on her own feet. I froze with shock, feeling as if I had been thrown into a dark world. Weak and dizzy, I was about to fall to the ground when someone took hold of me.
It was Mary who got the news and raced here. She comforted me, saying firmly, “Grace, Jane needs you. You must stay calm and strong.” I nodded. Having calmed down, I entered the ward with Mary.
That night, Jane recovered her consciousness (知觉) and opened her eyes. Holding her hand, I said, “My dear, everything would be fine.” Mary comforted her gently, “I know you are a strong girl, Jane. Don’t worry. We’ll be standing by you.” I was heartbroken to see tears streaming down Jane’s cheeks.
After two months, we returned home from hospital. Her teachers and friends frequently visited her. Jane eventually accepted the fact that she would have to get around in a wheelchair. Never did she refer to the subject of singing again. I knew she was a nice and understanding girl, who was afraid that talking about her original dream would upset the two of us.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
One day, however, Mary came with good news.
When the host announced it was Jane’s turn, she was wheeled onto the stage.
剖析语篇细节，夯实基础
先读，后写
对提示句P1,P2做逐词逐句的解读，理解其背后深意；
回溯原文，找到对应的文本，确定基本元素，时间，地点，人物，所涉及的物品，细节等信息；
试图对时间线，地点线结合P1,P2的提示句，看是否有所变化，以确定是否需要展开；
构思情节
读懂最后2段尤其是最后1段的信息，合理结合生活实际，构思文章，并完成
成长前的困扰
情境描写+消极情绪的累积→高潮
成长中的蜕变
成长的动机+过程中变化的心情
成长后的升华
成长后的收获+积极情绪(喜悦、满足和骄傲等)
积累原文素材，认真审读原文
原文赏析Find your enthusiasm
As a single mother(状语), I’ve never doubted my daughter Jane’s dream to be a singer on the stage(非谓语动词做后置定语). At an early age(状语), she was crazy about(固定搭配) singing. Whenever she had a chance(状从), she would sing to her heart’s content(可积累的固定搭配). Her sweet and charming voice tended to get(固定搭配) people around attracted to her songs(非谓语动词做后置定语).
Living in a small city(非谓语动词做状语或伴随动作), I took several odd jobs, determined to do everything in my power to support her(非谓语动词做后置定语). Soon after Jane attended school(状语), her music teacher Mary noticed her talent by chance and volunteered to give her some guidance on how to sing(宾从). Jane practiced so hard that before long she made great progress in singing.
Unfortunately, one noon a year later, Jane was crossing the street when a careless driver knocked her down(状从). She was rushed to hospital. When I hurried there(状从), the doctor told me that my daughter would probably not stand on her own feet(宾从). I froze with shock(可积累的固定搭配), feeling dark as if I had been thrown into a world(可积累的固定搭配). Weak and dizzy, I was about to fall to the ground when someone took hold of me(状从).
It was Mary图片 who got the news and raced here(强调句). She comforted me, saying firmly, “Grace, Jane needs you. You must stay calm and strong.” I nodded. Having calmed down(非谓语动词做状语或伴随动作), I entered the ward with Mary.
That night, Jane recovered her consciousness (知觉) and opened her eyes. Holding her hand(非谓语动词做状语或伴随动作), I said, “My dear, everything would be fine.” Mary comforted her gently, “I know you are a strong girl, Jane(宾从). Don’t worry. We’ll be standing by you.” I was heartbroken to see tears streaming down Jane’s cheeks.
After two months, we returned home from hospital. Her teachers and friends frequently visited her. Jane eventually accepted the fact that she would have to get around in a wheelchair.(同位从) Never did she refer to the subject of singing again(倒装句). I knew she was a nice and understanding girl(宾从), who was afraid that talking about her original dream would upset the two of us(定从内部套有宾从).
重点词汇和短语分析
重点词汇短语
1. 语法点分析
动名词作介词宾语
> 示例：She was afraid that talking about her original dream would upset the two of us.
解释：在“be afraid that”结构中，talking作为动名词形式，作“about”的宾语，表示“谈论梦想”这个行为。
He apologized for not telling the truth.
They insisted on staying until the game was over.
分词短语作状语
> 示例：Living in a small city, I took several odd jobs...
解释：“Living in a small city”是现在分词短语，表示原因状语，相当于“Since I live in a small city”。
Having finished his homework, he went out to play.
Not knowing what to say, she remained silent.
2. 重点单词短语
- be crazy about
- 近义词：be enthusiastic about, be obsessed with
- 反义词：be indifferent to, dislike
- 例句：
She was crazy about painting, spending hours on her artwork every day.
Mark is not crazy about horror movies; he prefers comedies.
- to one’s heart’s content
- 近义词：as much as one wants, to the fullest
- 反义词：restrictedly, to some extent
- 例句：
During the holiday, the kids could play to their heart’s content.
The buffet allowed guests to eat to their heart’s content.
- by chance
- 近义词：by accident, accidentally
- 反义词：on purpose, intentionally
- 例句：
She met her old friend by chance at the bookstore.
By chance, he found a valuable painting hidden in the attic.
- recover one’s consciousness
- 近义词：regain consciousness, wake up
- 反义词：lose consciousness, pass out
- 例句：
The patient slowly recovered his consciousness after the surgery.
He lost consciousness due to the high fever.
- stand by
- 近义词：support, back up
- 反义词：abandon, leave
- 例句：
His friends stood by him during the difficult times.
The community promised to stand by the family after their loss.图片
重点语法分析
语法项是写作非常重要的加分点
1. 非谓语动词
文章中频繁使用非谓语动词来简化句子结构或表示原因、方式等。非谓语动词包括分词、动名词和不定式，能够为句子增添连贯性和简洁感。
例句：Living in a small city, I took several odd jobs.
解析：“Living in a small city”为现在分词短语，作原因状语，相当于“Since I lived in a small city”。
例句：Determined to do everything in my power to support her, I took several odd jobs.
解析：Determined to do everything in my power 中的“determined”为过去分词短语，表示原因状语。
高考得分要求例句：
- Feeling tired, she decided to take a rest before continuing her work.
- Encouraged by his friends, he decided to pursue his dream.
2. 强调句
强烈表达主观情感的句子采用了强调句结构，突出“是……做了某事”的含义。
例句：It was Mary who got the news and raced here.
解析：这是典型的强调句结构“it is/was... who/that...”，强调了“Mary”这个人做的动作“got the news and raced here”。
例句：It was Jane’s dream that kept her going, even when things got tough.
解析：It was... that... 强调句结构，突出“Jane’s dream”在文中的重要性。
高考得分要求例句：
- It was the teacher who encouraged me to work harder.
- It was the music that lifted her spirits in difficult times.
3. 定语从句
文章多处使用定语从句，帮助补充说明名词，增加句子信息量，使表达更加生动。
例句：It was Mary who got the news and raced here.
解析：该从句为“Mary”作补充说明，详细描述了Mary的行为，是一个非限制性定语从句。
例句：Jane eventually accepted the fact that she would have to get around in a wheelchair.
解析：“that she would have to get around in a wheelchair”为定语从句，修饰先行词“fact”。
高考得分要求例句：
- He is the one who helped me when I needed it the most.
- The book that you recommended was really interesting.
4. 比喻修辞
文章中使用了比喻修辞手法，以生动的比喻表达情感。
例句：I froze with shock, feeling as if I had been thrown into a dark world.
解析：“as if I had been thrown into a dark world”中比喻了突发事故带来的无助与悲伤，传达了母亲内心的绝望。
高考得分要求例句：
- The news hit him like a thunderbolt, leaving him speechless.
- Her smile was like sunshine, brightening everyone’s day.
Possible version 1
P1: One day, however, Mary came with good news. She told us that a charity concert would be held in town(宾语从句), and she had arranged for Jane to perform. “Jane, you’ll have the chance to sing for a real audience(非谓语动词作后置定语),” Mary said with a bright smile(可积累语料). Jane’s eyes lit up with excitement(宾语从句), but a trace of hesitation crossed her face(可积累语料). “But…in a wheelchair ” she asked softly. Mary and I exchanged glances(可积累语料), both determined. “Your voice is what matters(可积累语料),” I reassured her, “and there’s nothing that can stop you from sharing it(定语从句).” With renewed hope(可积累语料), Jane began practicing with Mary daily, pouring her heart into each note as if to reclaim her dream(状语从句).
P2: When the host announced it was Jane’s turn, she was wheeled onto the stage.
A hush fell over the audience as Jane gripped the microphone(可积累语料), nervous yet radiant. Then, she began to sing, her voice soaring and filling the hall with a sweet, powerful melody(独立主格). Her passion reached every corner, bringing tears to the eyes of those watching. When her performance ended(状语从句), thunderous applause erupted. Overwhelmed(可积累语料), Jane beamed(可积累语料), realizing her dream hadn’t vanished(非谓语动词做伴随动作，且复合宾语从句)—it had only transformed. With her voice(介词短语做状语), she could still shine on stage, inspiring everyone who heard her story(定语从句).
Possible Version 2
P1: One day, however, Mary came with good news. She told Jane about a national singing contest that allowed all individuals to participate, regardless of their physical limitations(定语从句). Jane’s eyes sparkled with excitement(可积累语料), and I could see the hope flicker back in her heart(可积累语料). Mary encouraged her, saying, “Your voice is as beautiful as ever, Jane. You don’t need to stand to sing.” Jane hesitated but eventually nodded(可积累语料), determined to give it her best shot(可积累语料). From that day on, she resumed her practice(可积累语料) with Mary’s guidance, and her singing grew even more captivating(可积累语料) as she poured her emotions into each note(可积累语料，状语从句).
P2: When the host announced it was Jane’s turn, she was wheeled onto the stage. With a deep breath(伴随状语), Jane steadied herself and began singing, her voice filling the hall with raw emotion and resilience(独立主格). The audience fell silent(可积累语料), captivated by her powerful performance(非谓语动词做状语). As the final note echoed through the hall(状语从句), the crowd erupted into applause(可积累语料), moved by both her talent and her strength(非谓语动词做状语). Jane’s face lit up with joy(可积累语料), and I felt a wave of pride and relief(可积累语料). Her dream had not only survived but thrived, inspiring everyone present(非谓语动词做伴随动作). That night, Jane’s voice touched more lives than she ever imagined.
1. Hesitant
- 近义词: uncertain, doubtful, reluctant
- 反义词: decisive, certain, confident
- 联想词: hesitation, pause, uncertainty, second-guess
- 例句:
She was hesitant about attending the event alone.
Despite feeling hesitant, he agreed to give the speech.
2. Reassure
- 近义词: comfort, console, encourage
- 反义词: discourage, unsettle, alarm
- 联想词: assurance, comfort, support, calm
- 例句:
The teacher reassured her students that they had done well on the exam.
He tried to reassure his friend after the difficult interview.
3. Determination
- 近义词: resolve, perseverance, willpower
- 反义词: indecision, doubt, hesitation
- 联想词: courage, ambition, drive, resilience
- 例句:
Her determination to succeed was clear in her actions.
It takes determination to overcome such challenges.
4. Captivated
- 近义词: fascinated, enchanted, absorbed
- 反义词: indifferent, uninterested, bored
- 联想词: attention, interest, intrigue, engagement
- 例句:
The audience was captivated by the speaker’s words.
Children are often captivated by stories of adventure.
5. Resilience
- 近义词: strength, endurance, persistence
- 反义词: weakness, fragility, vulnerability
- 联想词: recovery, adaptability, toughness, flexibility
- 例句:
Her resilience in the face of hardship inspired everyone.
It takes resilience to bounce back after a setback.
6. Applause
- 近义词: clapping, ovation, cheers
- 反义词: silence, criticism, disapproval
- 联想词: recognition, praise, acknowledgment, appreciation
- 例句:
The artist received loud applause for her stunning performance.
The audience erupted in applause after the show.
7. Erupt
- 近义词: explode, burst, break out
- 反义词: calm, subside, quiet down
- 联想词: outburst, reaction, excitement, spontaneous
- 例句:
The room erupted in laughter after the comedian’s joke.
The stadium erupted in cheers as the winning goal was scored.
8. Inspiration
- 近义词: encouragement, motivation, influence
- 反义词: discouragement, demotivation
- 联想词: creativity, idea, stimulus, spark
- 例句:
Her story serves as an inspiration to others facing difficulties.
The speech was a great source of inspiration for young artists.
Possible Version 3
P1: One day, however, Mary came with good news.With a bright smile(可积累语料), she announced that a charity event was inviting Jane to sing(宾从). Excited yet hesitant(可积累语料), Jane looked at us, a spark of hope in her eyes(可积累语料). It was Mary who reassured her(强调句), saying, “Jane, it is you—yes, you—who can inspire others with your voice.” Touched and encouraged(可积累语料), Jane nodded, determination shining through her uncertainty(独立主格). Practicing day after day(非谓语动词做伴随动作), she was like a flower blooming again(非谓语动词做后置定语), each note filled with a heart that refused to give up(独立主格，复合定从句).
P2: When the host announced it was Jane’s turn, she was wheeled onto the stage.There she sat(句式的倒装), under the spotlight, a vision of courage(可积累语料). The audience fell silent(可积累语料), each person captivated by her spirit(独立主格). Taking a deep breath(非谓语动词做伴随动作), she began to sing, her voice soaring like a bird finally set free(独立主格，复合set free 是非谓语动词做后置定语). Every note told a story of resilience, every lyric echoed strength(独立主格). By the end, the crowd erupted in applause(可积累语料), some moved to tears(独立主格). Jane, smiling brightly(非谓语动词做伴随动作), knew her dream was still alive—stronger and brighter than ever(宾语从句).
Possible Version 4
P1: One day, however, Mary came with good news. She excitedly explained that there was a community concert(宾语从句), and Jane had been invited to perform(非谓语动词做目的状语). It was such an opportunity that none of us had expected(强调句+定从的既视感). Jane’s face turned from surprise to joy(可积累语料), though she still worried, “Will people accept me like this ” With a gentle smile(介词短语做状语), Mary responded, “Your voice has always been what matters(宾语从句). Let it be heard!” Inspired and eager(可积累语料), Jane practiced tirelessly, pouring her emotions into each song(非谓语动词做伴随动作), like a painter adding color to a blank canvas(非谓语动词做后置定语).
P2: When the host announced it was Jane’s turn, she was wheeled onto the stage.In that moment, all eyes were on her(可积累语料). Jane’s voice rose, clear and strong, her melody weaving through the air and touching the hearts of everyone present(独立主格). Each word seemed to paint pictures of hope and endurance, as if she were speaking to each listener’s soul(状语从句). By the final note, the audience gave a standing ovation(可积累语料), their applause like waves crashing against the shore(非谓语动词做后置定语). Jane’s eyes sparkled(可积累语料), knowing her dream had not only survived but had also become a source of inspiration for many(非谓语动词做伴随动作且复合宾从).
1. Charity (慈善)
- 近义词: philanthropy, generosity, goodwill
- 反义词: selfishness, greed, meanness
- 联想词: donation, kindness, compassion, fundraiser
- 例句:
- The charity event raised funds to support local schools.
- Her donation to charity reflected her generous nature.
2. Hesitation (犹豫)
- 近义词: reluctance, uncertainty, pause
- 反义词: confidence, certainty, decisiveness
- 联想词: doubt, delay, second thoughts, reservation
- 例句:
- Her hesitation was clear as she considered the big decision.
- After a moment of hesitation, he agreed to the plan.
3. Reclaim (重新获得)
- 近义词: regain, recover, retrieve
- 反义词: lose, abandon, surrender
- 联想词: take back, restore, retrieve, reassert
- 例句:
- He worked hard to reclaim his reputation after the scandal.
- She reclaimed her confidence after completing the project.
4. Radiant (容光焕发的)
- 近义词: glowing, beaming, luminous
- 反义词: dull, gloomy, lackluster
- 联想词: bright, shining, brilliant, sparkling
- 例句:
- She looked radiant in her wedding dress.
- His radiant smile brightened up the room.
5. Captivating (迷人的)
- 近义词: enchanting, fascinating, mesmerizing
- 反义词: boring, unappealing, repellent
- 联想词: charm, allure, attractiveness, intrigue
- 例句:
- The book’s captivating story kept me reading all night.
- Her captivating performance won over the audience.
6. Resilience (坚韧)
- 近义词: strength, toughness, endurance
- 反义词: weakness, fragility, vulnerability
- 联想词: recovery, persistence, adaptability, bounce-back
- 例句:
- Her resilience helped her overcome numerous obstacles.
- The community showed resilience in the face of disaster.
7. Thunderous (雷鸣般的)
- 近义词: loud, booming, roaring
- 反义词: soft, quiet, faint
- 联想词: applause, ovation, intense, powerful
- 例句:
- The stadium erupted in thunderous applause.
- The speaker received thunderous cheers from the crowd.
8. Flicker (闪烁)
- 近义词: glimmer, sparkle, twinkle
- 反义词: steady, constant, shine continuously
- 联想词: flash, blink, wavering, momentary
- 例句:
- The candlelight flickered in the breeze.
- Hope flickered in her eyes as she listened to the news.
9. Erupt (爆发)
- 近义词: explode, burst, break out
- 反义词: subside, calm, quiet down
- 联想词: reaction, outburst, spontaneous, intense
- 例句:
- The crowd erupted in cheers when the winner was announced.
- Anger erupted in him when he saw the injustice.
10. Steady (稳住)
- 近义词: stabilize, calm, control
- 反义词: shake, unsettle, disturb
- 联想词: balance, control, composed, reassure
- 例句:
- She took a deep breath to steady her nerves before the speech.
- He steadied himself after the surprising news.

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