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Jane was still asleep when the phone rang in the living room. She opened her sleepy eyes and looked at the clock on the table. It was already nine o’clock! Although Jane was still very sleepy, she knew she had to get up because her mother was working in her office and she couldn’t expect her younger brother Tom, who was always sleeping like a pig, to answer the phone. She quickly put on a coat and ran to the living room. When she picked up the phone, on the other end came the warm greeting, “Good morning!”
It was from her father, who was a sailor and rarely came home. Suddenly, Jane’s sleepiness disappeared.
Born into a not-so-rich family, Jane and Tom felt the stress of life, but they were happy to enjoy the family atmosphere. At school, they were straight-A students and took part in various after-school activities. They were the pride of the family.
“Good morning, Dad. Why are you calling us so early on the weekend ” Jane said, pretending to be annoyed. “Tom and I have been very nice recently.” “My dear, today is your mother’s birthday, and I have ordered a cake online and it will be sent to our home late this afternoon. Do remember to take the cake. It is my surprise for your mother.”
Hearing her father’s words, Jane felt a little ashamed. How could she forget her mother’s birthday
While she was chatting with her father, Jane looked around the room and saw a lot of dirty clothes on the sofa. The floor had not been cleaned for days, since her mother had been at work all week.
She looked at the clock again and was sure that she still had enough time to prepare a surprise for her mother.
“Well, Dad, now I’m going to wake Tom up. We will give Mum a surprise, too!” Jane said and hung up the phone.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式作答。
Jane hurried to Tom’s room and shared her plan with him. _________________________________________________________________________
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“Happy birthday, Mum!” Jane and Tom shouted when their mother opened the door. ____________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
文本解读
本文讲述了Jane和Tom出生在一个并不富裕的家庭，但他们很享受家庭温暖的氛围。在学校，他们是全优生，会积极参加各种课外活动。他们是这个家庭的骄傲。这天父亲打来电话告知当天是母亲的生日。Jane在意识到家里很乱后，决定和弟弟Tom一起打扫房子，为母亲准备生日惊喜。
思路点拨
①由续文第一段首句“Jane急忙跑到Tom的房间，把她的计划告诉了他。”并结合原文倒数第三段的内容可知，Jane的计划，即Jane打算给妈妈准备的惊喜，应该是让妈妈回家之后能看到一个干净整洁的房间。接下来可以描写Jane和Tom两人分工合作，一人洗衣服、装饰屋子，一人拖地，将房间收拾干净，并布置得十分漂亮。续文结尾还需描写生日蛋糕也配送到了。
②由续文第二段首句“‘生日快乐，妈妈！’妈妈开门时，Jane和Tom大叫起来。”可知，接下来可描写Jane和Tom给妈妈庆祝生日的经过以及妈妈的反应，可结合妈妈的动作描写和情感描写进行描述。
参考范文
Jane hurried to Tom’s room and shared her plan with him. After hearing the details, Tom volunteered to clean the floor. It took him more than two hours to clean every inch of the house. For the first time, Tom realized how hard it was for his mother to keep the house clean. While Tom worked, Jane washed the dirty clothes and decorated the room with colorful balloons. When the cake arrived, everything was ready for the big moment.
“Happy birthday, Mum!” Jane and Tom shouted when their mother opened the door. Seeing the beautifully decorated room and the large cake on the table, their mother seemed to be very surprised. After Tom and Jane told her what had happened, she could hardly hide her excitement and hugged them tightly. “This is the best birthday gift I have ever had!” said their mother, who then took out her smartphone and took a video. “We should share this moment with your dad!”
亮点词汇
1. volunteer to do sth. 自愿做某事
2. every inch 整体；全部
3. balloon n. 气球
4. hide one’s excitement 掩饰某人的兴奋
高级句型
1. Seeing the beautifully decorated room and the large cake on the table, their mother seemed very surprised.（动词-ing形式短语作状语）
看到装饰精美的房间和桌子上的大蛋糕，他们的母亲似乎很惊讶。
2. “This is the best birthday gift I have ever had!” said their mother, who then took out her smartphone and took a video. “We should share this moment with your dad!”（省略that的定语从句；who引导非限制性定语从句）
“这是我收到的最好的生日礼物！”他们的母亲说道，然后拿出手机拍了一段视频。“我们应该和你爸爸分享这一刻！”

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