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Three years ago. I was arranged to work for a few weeks as a dentist in a new dental clinic at Victor Harbor, to the south of Adelaide and an hour further away than my usual workplace. My first day there was rush driving to a new and unfamiliar clinic and getting used to the different rules and clinical environment.
In my worry and anxiety, and feeling a little unfamiliar in the new setting, I removed my three things: my wedding ring, a ring that belonged to my mother and one that was an anniversary gift from my husband. I wrapped them in a tissue (纸巾) and placed them beside my computer.
During my lunch break, I noticed the wrinkled tissue and thought that it didn’t look very neat and dropped it into the rubbish bin. I went about my duties and my day went on well; I met new patients and felt that I had been productive and efficient. Driving home at the end of the day, just moments before I reached my house, I noticed that I was missing my rings. I felt the heart in my body rose, my cheeks burning red. I went inside and tried to calm down. I felt sick to my stomach and I had that sinking feeling in my heart. I spent an hour or so making calls trying to follow the track of my rings. The first people I called was my manager and clinical leader and they gave me a few contact numbers for cleaners. I got in touch with a lady who managed the cleaning services for the clinic and she informed me that the bins had already been collected.
Heartbroken, I knew nothing could be done now. I had lost my wedding ring and one of my most treasured rings my mother’s wedding ring. Had it not been for my carelessness, all this would not have happened. With great sorrow and regret, I just sat there rooted in my chair.
Paragraph 1: After two hours or so, I received a most amazing phone call.
Paragraph 2: I decided to thank the wonderful person face to face.
文章大意
作者作为一名牙医被安排到一个新的牙科诊所工作。由于初来乍到有些焦虑，她摘下了自己的三枚戒指（结婚戒指、母亲的戒指和丈夫送的周年纪念戒指），用纸巾包好放在电脑旁。午餐时，她误将包着戒指的纸巾当作垃圾扔掉了。一天工作结束后，她才发现戒指不见了，打电话询问得知垃圾桶已被清理，她感到极度伤心和懊悔。
伏笔与续写回应
伏笔：作者用纸巾包戒指，这一细节为后文清洁工发现戒指埋下伏笔。作者提到联系清洁服务的管理者，为戒指失而复得的情节发展做铺垫。
续写回应：续写中清洁女工正是在垃圾桶清空之前发现了戒指，而且通过联系诊所相关人员找到了作者。
续写要点
第一段
情感线：从极度绝望到重燃希望的惊喜。
故事线：清洁女工打来电话告知戒指被找到，描述作者接到电话时的激动心情和对女工的感激。
示例：I was overwhelmed with excitement and gratitude. I felt as if I had been given a new lease on life. I asked her where I could pick up the rings and she told me she would be at the clinic the next morning. I couldn't wait to see my precious rings again.
第二段
情感线：感激之情进一步升华，充满温暖。
故事线：作者亲自去感谢清洁女工，可能会有一些感人的互动，比如送礼物或表达诚挚谢意。
示例：I brought a bouquet of flowers to the clinic the next morning. When I saw the cleaner, I rushed to her and hugged her tightly. I thanked her from the bottom of my heart and told her how much those rings meant to me. She smiled and said she was just glad to return them to their rightful owner.
主旨升华句（英文）
Sometimes, even in the darkest moments of our own making, there are angels among us to bring back the light.
Kindness, like a precious jewel, can shine brightly in the most unexpected places and save us from our despair.
In the journey of life, it's the small acts of honesty and goodness that remind us of the beauty of humanity.
A single act of kindness can be a lighthouse in the storm of our mistakes, guiding us back to hope.
Our carelessness may lead us astray, but the kindness of strangers can be the compass to bring us back on the right path.
写作示范一
第一段
After two hours or so, I received a most amazing phone call. It was the cleaner. Her voice was like a beautiful melody in my ears. She said she had found the rings in the bin. I was stunned for a moment, then an indescribable joy filled my heart. I burst into tears of relief. I repeatedly told her how much those rings meant to me. She just said softly that she knew they were precious when she saw them. I asked if I could come to get them right away. She said it was a bit late but she would keep them safe until the next day at the clinic.
第二段
I decided to thank the wonderful person face to face. The next morning, I got up early and prepared a thank - you card and a small gift. When I arrived at the clinic, I saw the cleaner waiting for me. I rushed towards her and held her hands. I handed her the card and the gift, expressing my heartfelt gratitude. I told her that her honesty had saved not only the rings but also my faith in humanity. She smiled shyly and said it was nothing. This experience made me realize that there are always kind - hearted people around us, making the world a better place.
写作示范二
第一段
After two hours or so, I received a most amazing phone call. The caller was a kind - sounding woman who identified herself as the cleaner at the clinic. She said she had a hunch that the tissue - wrapped items in the bin were something valuable, so she opened it. When she saw the rings, she knew she had to find the owner. My heart was pounding with excitement as she described the rings to me. I felt like I was on an emotional rollercoaster, from the depths of despair to the peak of joy. I thanked her over and over again and arranged to meet her at the clinic as soon as possible.
第二段
I decided to thank the wonderful person face to face. I prepared a box of chocolates and a heartfelt letter of appreciation. When I met the cleaner at the clinic, I was almost in tears again. I hugged her and presented the gifts. I told her that her act of kindness was like a ray of sunshine in my darkest hour. She was so humble, saying that she was just doing what was right. This encounter taught me that even the simplest of people can have the most noble hearts, and their actions can have a profound impact on our lives. It also made me more determined to be kind and honest in my own life.
读后续写samples
After two hours or so I received a most amazing phone call. This call was from another cleaner called Jerry, who was working in the rubbish station nearby. He told me that he accidentally found the three rings wrapped in the tissue when he was tidying the rubbish. So immediately, he ran to the nearest telephone booth to call the lady managing the cleaning services for the clinic. The lady told him of my losses and informed him of my telephone number. Thus, he rang me to my home in case of my anxiety.
I decided to thank the wonderful person face to face. I ran to my car in a hurry and drove directly to the dustbin station nearby my clinic, where the cleaner Jerry was waiting for me. I expressed my greatest thanks to him for his kindness and I did want to give him some money as my gift for his behavior. However, he refused my reward, saying that it was his duty and responsibility to give back the loss to the owners. Deeply moved, I thanked him again. At last, I got my treasured rings back happily.

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