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When I was in the fourth grade, my mom gave me a mechanical watch. It had to be rewound every night and didn't tell time as directly as an electronic watch, but it was classy. and eye-catching. As one of the few people who could afford a watch, I wore it everywhere I went, subconsciously showing it off by checking the time every now and then. It left an itchy mark stained with sweat on my wrist after being worn for a long time, but it was totally worth it when I got envious looks from peers.
In order for me to learn to manage time, my mom would casually ask me what time it was. I would roll up my sleeve, look at my watch and, after careful observation, announce the present time. Also, to make sure the was precise, I waited patiently before the TV. When it announced the time on the hour, I meticulously adjusted the hands to ensure the watch synchronized with the TV time.
I only took off my watch before going to bed or taking a shower. It wasn't waterproof. Repairing it would cost a lot of money. My mom constantly reminded me of its value and the importance of treating it with care, saying that, once broken, it was unlikely to be replaced.
On one scorching summer day, despite parents' warnings and threats, I decided to take a dip in a lake to cool off with a bunch of other kids. Before getting in the water, I removed my watch and gently placed it near my sandals. We had a blast there, splashing water, jumping, diving, swimming and frolicking. Suddenly, we heard someone shouting, “Whose family are you kids from How dare you Aren't you afraid of drowning ”
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150左右；
（2）请按照如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Terrified, we scrambled up, hastily put on our clothes and fled in different directions.
I couldn't afford to let my mom know my watch was lost. ______________ . ________________
文章大意
四年级时妈妈给 “我” 一块机械表，它外观精美，“我” 很珍惜并到处炫耀，经常看时间，还会精心校准。“我” 只在睡觉和洗澡时摘表，因为它不防水且维修贵，妈妈也强调要好好爱护。一个炎热夏日，“我” 不顾父母告诫，和其他孩子去湖里游泳，游泳前摘下手表放在凉鞋旁，这时突然有人来呵斥。
伏笔与续写回应
伏笔：妈妈强调手表的价值和易损坏性，为后文手表丢失后的紧张担忧埋下伏笔。提到手表不防水，预示了在水边可能出现问题。
续写回应：第一段中孩子们因被呵斥而惊慌逃走，与开头不顾父母警告相呼应，这种惊慌为手表丢失埋下隐患。第二段中 “我” 不敢让妈妈知道手表丢失，续写内容会围绕 “我” 试图隐瞒或寻找手表展开，回应前文妈妈对手表的重视。
续写要点
第一段
情感线：惊恐、慌张。
故事线：孩子们惊慌失措地穿衣逃跑，“我” 也匆忙离开，完全忘记了手表。跑了一段距离后才突然想起，但回去找又害怕被大人发现，内心十分纠结。
示例：Terrified, we scrambled up, hastily put on our clothes and fled in different directions. I ran as fast as my legs could carry me, my heart pounding with fear. After running for a while, I suddenly remembered my watch. Panic seized me. I wanted to go back, but the fear of being caught by the angry adult held me back. I stood there, torn between going back and just leaving it.
第二
情感线：担忧、害怕、愧疚。
故事线：“我” 不敢告诉妈妈手表丢了，想办法隐瞒，可能会在湖边偷偷寻找，或者试图编造谎言。但内心一直被愧疚感笼罩，也担心谎言被揭穿。
示例：I couldn't afford to let my mom know my watch was lost. So I made up my mind to keep it a secret. Every day, I would sneak back to the lake area to look for it, hoping it was still there. I felt extremely guilty, as if I had betrayed my mom's trust. I was also afraid that she would notice the missing watch and question me. The fear of being found out haunted me all the time.
主旨升华句
Sometimes, our momentary carelessness can lead to great loss and remorse.
Material possessions may be lost, but the guilt of losing something precious due to our own fault lasts longer.
A single act of disobedience can bring about consequences that weigh heavily on our conscience.
In the pursuit of momentary pleasure, we might lose something far more valuable, teaching us the importance of responsibility.
The loss of a cherished item can be a harsh reminder of the value of obedience and carefulness.
写作示范一
第一段
Terrified, we scrambled up, hastily put on our clothes and fled in different directions. I was in such a panic that I didn't even look back. When I finally stopped running, I realized with horror that I had left my watch behind. My mind raced with thoughts of how angry my mom would be if she knew. I was too scared to go back right away, but the thought of losing the watch forever made me feel sick to my stomach.
第二
I couldn't afford to let my mom know my watch was lost. I decided to wait until the next day to go back to the lake. The night was filled with restless sleep as I worried about the watch. When I returned to the spot the next day, I searched everywhere, but it was gone. I felt a deep sense of despair and guilt. I knew I had to face the consequences of my actions, and this experience taught me a hard lesson about responsibility and the value of things.
写作示范二
第一段
Terrified, we scrambled up, hastily put on our clothes and fled in different directions. My heart was thumping wildly as I rushed away. Only when I was a safe distance from the lake did I remember my watch. I felt a chill run down my spine. The thought of losing it was unbearable. I peeked back towards the lake, but the fear of the angry person still lingered. I was caught in a dilemma, not knowing whether to risk going back.
第二
I couldn't afford to let my mom know my watch was lost. I tried to act normal at home, but every time she asked me the time, my heart sank. I secretly hoped that someone might have found the watch and kept it safe. I spent days thinking of ways to get another watch without her suspecting. But deep down, I knew I was just running away from my mistake. This whole ordeal made me understand how precious things can be easily lost because of our own folly.
范文
Terrified , we scrambled up , hastily put on our clothes and fled in different directions. We feared the punishment we would face once our parents found out about our little “ adventure" , The lake was notoriously known for claiming kids' lives every year. My parents had specifically told me to stay away from it and warned me of the consequences should I disobey them. I went back home, worried and frightened, but my parents hadn't got back from work yet.I let out a sigh of relief and rolled up my sleeve to see what time it was, but, to my horror, my watch wasn't there. Oh, no! I must have left my watch on the shore. I dashed all the way back there, but my watch was gone. Someone must have taken it during the chaos.
I couldn't afford to let my mom know my watch was lost. She would kill me. Using my pen, I drew a watch on my wrist and covered it up with my sleeve. For the following month, I avoided mom as much as possible. Meanwhile, I searched around town, hoping to buy a used watch which resembled the one I lost. However, while we were having dinner one evening, my mom suddenly got suspicious and asked me what time it was. I pretentiously looked at my “ watch” and told her the “time". She grabbed my hand and rolled up my sleeve, revealing my fake watch. I had to tell her the truth, but instead of scolding me, she told me it was
just a thing and it was stupid to make all the fuss. My well-being was more important than anything else to her.

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