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As the afternoon sun bathed the local beach with its warm, golden rays, four-year-old William sat on the beach with a mix of expectation and confusion. His dad, Steven, sat by his side. They were waiting for William’s friends to arrive and celebrate his long-awaited birthday party. William’s wide eyes, filled with hope and happiness, stared at the shoreline, looking for familiar faces.
He kept asking his dad where everyone was, and Steven just told him “they’re coming soon, ”trying to ease his son’s growing impatience. But the longer they waited, the more hopeless William became. He was extremely disappointed when the two invited families called and said they couldn’t make it to the celebration because of unexpected situations.
Steven watched his son, who had been eagerly expecting his special day for what seemed like ages. This year, William had been more aware than ever of his upcoming birthday, asking throughout the month when his birthday was, eagerly expecting a good time.
Feeling a sense of guilt for his son’s disappointment, Steven decided to turn to social media for help. He posted a lovely picture of him and William on the beach. Their faces were filled with a mix of hope and disappointment. The sincere words with the picture read, “William would love some friends to play with on the beach. To celebrate his fourth birthday, he has Hot Wheels, sand toys, dinosaurs, and we have some snacks and drinks. Any and all welcome. ”
William’s wish for companionship produced a strong response from the local people. They flooded the post with messages of support, birthday wishes, and offers to join the celebration. They were determined to make William’s day special.
“Going there. See you soon, ”one warm-hearted local commented on the post, promising to bring her family along. The message aroused the same feeling from many others, who were quick to follow suit.
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2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Soon, the beach was filled with scenes of joy.
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After hours of laughter and games, the sun began to set.
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文章大意
四岁的威廉和爸爸史蒂文在海滩等待朋友来参加生日派对，可被邀请的家庭因意外不能来，威廉越来越失望。史蒂文心怀愧疚，在社交媒体上求助，发布了和威廉在海滩的照片以及威廉希望有人陪伴庆生的内容。当地民众积极响应，纷纷表示要来参加。
伏笔与回应
伏笔：朋友不能来，威廉失望。
回应：当地人看到帖子后赶来，海滩充满欢乐。
伏笔：大家来参加派对。
回应：派对欢乐进行，最后在美好氛围中结束。
续写要点
第一段：
情感线：欢乐、惊喜、兴奋。
故事线：人们赶来，海滩充满欢乐，大家一起玩耍庆生。
第二段：
情感线：温馨、满足。
故事线：太阳西下，派对结束，威廉度过了美好的生日。
主旨升华句（英文）
Kindness from strangers can turn disappointment into joy.（陌生人的善意能将失望变为欢乐。）
The power of community can make a child's dream come true.（社区的力量能让孩子的梦想成真。）
A little help from each can create a big celebration.（每个人的一点帮助能创造一场盛大的庆典。）
In times of disappointment, the warmth of others shines brightly.（在失望之时，他人的温暖闪耀光芒。）
Social media can be a bridge to connect kindness and those in need.（社交媒体可以成为连接善意和有需要的人的桥梁。）
写作示范
示范一
Soon, the beach was filled with scenes of joy. Children with colorful beach toys in their hands rushed towards William. They built sandcastles together, chased each other along the shore, and played with the Hot Wheels and dinosaurs. William's face lit up with a huge smile. His eyes sparkled with excitement as he laughed and played with his new friends. The sound of laughter and shouts filled the air.
After hours of laughter and games, the sun began to set. The beach was bathed in a beautiful orange glow. Everyone gathered around William to sing the birthday song. As he blew out the candles on a simple but lovely cake brought by one of the families, his eyes were filled with gratitude. It was a birthday he would never forget.
示范二
Soon, the beach was filled with scenes of joy. People arrived with balloons, presents, and more toys. William was quickly surrounded by new friends. They played beach volleyball, dug holes in the sand, and shared the snacks. William's initial disappointment was long gone, replaced by pure happiness. His dad watched with a big smile, relieved to see his son having so much fun.
After hours of laughter and games, the sun began to set. The waves gently lapped at the shore as the party winded down. William said goodbye to his new friends one by one. Tired but content, he hugged his dad. This birthday had turned out to be even more special than they had expected, all thanks to the kindness of the local people.
参考答案
Soon the beach was full of happy scenes. Many families came to celebrate William’s birthday. William’s face was beaming with happiness. In the warm sunshine, the children built a beautiful castle with him on the beach, swam in the sea, and surfed in the sea. It was no wonder that they had a great time. Finally, William’s father brought a big cake. In the singing of Happy Birthday to You, William made a good wish on the cake and then everyone shared the cake happily.
After hours of laughter and games, the sun began to set. Although they didn’t not want to leave, they still had to go home one by one. Only William and Dad were left on the beach. William gave his dad a big hug, kissed him and said, “Dad, this is the best birthday. Thank you.” Under the beautiful sunset, both father and son were filled with a feeling of happiness. At last, with the song of many birds, William and his father went home,extremely happily.

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