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辽宁省名校联盟2024-2025学年高三上学期10月联合考试英语试题
第二节 （满分25分）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
In my childhood, influenced by my parents and friends. I was encouraged to try various creative activities. Of course, I didn’t enjoy all of them equally, whether it was my first attempt or after repeated efforts. However, life has a way of leading us to unexpected passions. You never know when a creative pursuit might change your life.
The name of this activity is “painting”. About ten years ago, I didn’t really see the appeal of sitting in front of a canvas （画布） for hours, trying to recreate scenes or images in my mind. The idea of mixing colors and repeatedly adjusting brushes felt tiresome to me. In fact, I used to think of painting as some sort of “coloring inside the lines” activity that young kids enjoyed, but it was much more difficult because there was no outline to guide you.
However, all that changed when I visited my grandparents during a winter break. My grandmother, an enthusiastic painter, gently persuaded me to join her in her art studio to try my hand at painting. She encouraged me to simply express myself through colors and brushes. Hesitant but curious, I agreed and sat down with her, ready to paint. Before handing me the brushes, she showed me how to mix the colors and create different shades, making the process seem more approachable.
Learning to paint, especially for a beginner like me, can be a difficult task. The act of holding a brush is simple, but creating something meaningful on the canvas is challenging. That’s why it’s called painting, not finishing. But with practice and patience, it becomes more enjoyable and less frightening over time. Patience is crucial in painting. It takes time to find the right combination of colors and to let the image in your mind slowly take form on the canvas.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My grandmother had to repeatedly remind me to be patient.
Word came that a painting competition would be held in our school.
原文分析：红色定从/定语；蓝色宾从；黄色状从，只标连词；下划线标黄单词为需掌握积累单词；从句类会用斜体标注；需积累部分黑体加粗下划线；(定语从句1)
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
第二节 （满分25分）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
In my childhood, influenced by my parents and friends, I was encouraged to try various creative activities. Of course, I didn’t enjoy all of them equally, whether it was my first attempt or after repeated efforts(名词从句). However, life has a way of leading us to unexpected passions. You never know when a creative pursuit might change your life(宾从).
The name of this activity is “painting”. About ten years ago, I didn’t really see the appeal of sitting in front of a canvas （画布） for hours, trying to recreate scenes or images in my mind(非谓语动词做伴随动作). The idea of mixing colors and repeatedly adjusting brushes felt tiresome to me. In fact, I used to think of painting as some sort of “coloring inside the lines” activity that young kids enjoyed(定从), but it was much more difficult because there was no outline to guide you(状从).
However, all that changed when I visited my grandparents during a winter break(状从). My grandmother, an enthusiastic painter, gently persuaded me to join her in her art studio to try my hand at painting. She encouraged me to simply express myself through colors and brushes. Hesitant but curious, I agreed and sat down with her, ready to paint. Before handing me the brushes, she showed me how to mix the colors and create different shades(宾从), making the process seem more approachable(非谓语动词做结果状语).
Learning to paint(非谓语动词做伴随动作), especially for a beginner like me, can be a difficult task. The act of holding a brush is simple, but creating something meaningful on the canvas is challenging. That’s why it’s called painting, not finishing(表从). But with practice and patience, it becomes more enjoyable and less frightening over time. Patience is crucial in painting. It takes time to find the right combination of colors and to let the image in your mind slowly take form on the canvas.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My grandmother had to repeatedly remind me to be patient.
Word came that a painting competition would be held in our school.
第一部分：语法现象分析与语言搭配
1. 高中语法现象分析
时态使用
一般过去时：用于描述过去的事件、行为或习惯。例如：I didn’t really see the appeal... 和 I used to think of painting...
现在时：用于描述普遍的事实或现在的状态。例如：Patience is crucial in painting.
过去进行时：表示过去某一时刻正在发生的动作或状态。例如：I was encouraged to try various creative activities.
完成时：表示过去发生的动作对现在的影响。例如：life has a way of leading us to unexpected passions.
从句
定语从句：...that young kids enjoyed，修饰前面的名词“activity”。
宾语从句：You never know when a creative pursuit might change your life. 用于引导名词性宾语，表示一种事实或观点。
非谓语动词
动名词：sitting in front of a canvas, mixing colors, creating something meaningful 等，表示动作或活动。
不定式：to simply express myself through colors and brushes，表示目的。
并列句
My grandmother, an enthusiastic painter, gently persuaded me to join her in her art studio to try my hand at painting. 通过逗号分隔的非限制性定语从句和不定式结构。
强调句
That’s why it’s called painting, not finishing. 强调绘画本身的过程，且与“完成”不同。
比较句型
It was much more difficult because there was no outline to guide you. 通过对比强调绘画的难度。
2. 常见搭配与可积累语料
常见搭配
try various creative activities（尝试各种创意活动）
join her in her art studio（和她一起去画室）
express myself through colors and brushes（通过颜色和画笔表达自己）
create different shades（创造不同的色调）
take form on the canvas（在画布上呈现出形状）
可积累语料
表达过程：
finding the right combination of colors（找到合适的色彩搭配）
slowly take form on the canvas（慢慢在画布上成型）
make the process seem more approachable（让过程看起来更易接受）
情感/反应：
hesitant but curious（犹豫但好奇）
the process seemed more approachable（过程看起来更亲近）
challenging but enjoyable（具有挑战性但令人享受）
3. 生词短语解析
canvas
词性：名词
释义：画布
近义词：painting surface, board
例句：
The artist painted a beautiful scene on the canvas.
A blank canvas offers endless possibilities for creativity.
shade
词性：名词
释义：色度，阴影
近义词：tone, hue
反义词：brightness
例句：
She created subtle shades of blue for the ocean.
The tree provided a nice shade during the hot summer day.
approachable
词性：形容词
释义：易接近的，可理解的
近义词：accessible, friendly
反义词：unfriendly, intimidating
例句：
Her teaching style made complex topics approachable.
He was known for being kind and approachable.
第二部分：读后续写分析与思路
1. 构思思路
根据原文，续写需要围绕作者在绘画方面的成长、挑战与进步展开。
框架提炼
第一段：描述作者对耐心的逐渐理解，以及在祖母指导下的成长。可以加入学习过程中经历的心理波动和困难，最终体现出耐心与努力的收获。
第二段：描述作者参加学校的绘画比赛，以及获得奖项后的心情。通过比赛的经历来进一步展示作者的改变与成长。
实施方法
承接前文：续写要自然承接文中提到的“耐心”和“实践”的主题。可以通过具体的经历来展现耐心的意义，以及学习绘画给作者带来的改变。
加入情感和细节：可以通过细腻的心理描写和具体的动作描写来增强故事感，帮助读者感受到作者的成长。
注意事项
衔接流畅：从祖母的教导到比赛的经历，需要自然过渡，避免突兀的变化。
突出主旨：通过写作强调耐心和练习的重要性，展现作者的成长和收获。
语言简洁：保持语言简洁、清晰，避免过于复杂的句型。
2. 动作、心理、环境描写推荐例句
动作描写
I dipped the brush into the paint cautiously, unsure of what to expect.
With every stroke, I could see the image on the canvas becoming clearer.
My grandmother’s hands gently guided mine, showing me the right technique.
心理描写
I felt nervous at first, unsure of whether my painting would be good enough.
As the colors came together, I began to feel more confident in my abilities.
Though doubt crept in, I reminded myself to trust the process and keep going.
环境描写
The art studio was quiet, except for the occasional sound of a brush on canvas.
Outside the window, the sky was painted with the colors of the setting sun.
The soft scent of paint filled the air, mixing with the calm warmth of the room.
第三部分：高考续写类型分析与范文
1. 类型分析
该文章属于成长与发现类型，重点描述了作者在绘画方面的探索和进步。续写部分应突出“变化与进步”的主题，展现作者的成长故事。
2. 构思布局
第一段：承接原文的“耐心与创作”主题，描述作者从最初的不理解到渐渐喜爱，最终完成作品的过程。
第二段：聚焦作者通过绘画比赛获得的荣誉，展示其成长和对绘画的全新理解。
3. 续写注意事项
承接与过渡：确保续写内容能自然过渡，尤其是在写作风格和语气上与原文保持一致。
强化主题：强调“耐心”和“自我表达”的重要性，并通过具体事件来展现这些主题。
4. 范文一
My grandmother had to repeatedly remind me to be patient. At first, I felt frustrated as my strokes seemed uncoordinated and the colors didn’t blend well(as状从). But with time, I began to see improvement. Slowly, I started enjoying the process of mixing colors and experimenting with different techniques. Every brushstroke felt more natural, and my paintings began to take shape. As I finished my first painting(as状从), a sense of accomplishment filled me. I realized that learning to paint wasn’t about finishing quickly, but about enjoying the journey(宾从).
Word came that a painting competition would be held in our school. With my newfound confidence, I decided to enter. For days, I worked tirelessly on my painting, trying to perfect every detail(非谓语动词做伴随动作). The competition day arrived, and though I felt nervous, I presented my work. To my surprise, I won second place! The feeling of standing on stage, holding my certificate(非谓语动词做伴随动作), was unlike anything I had ever experienced(定从). It wasn’t just about the prize, but about realizing how far I had come and how much I had grown through patience and practice.
5. 续写积累语料与短语升级
好词好句
a sense of accomplishment → a feeling of achievement
difficult task → challenging endeavor
make the process seem more approachable → simplify the process, making it more accessible
短语升级替换
a blank canvas → an empty canvas, waiting to be filled
creating something meaningful → producing a work of significance
范文 1
第一段：
My grandmother had to repeatedly remind me to be patient. As I struggled with the brushes and colors(as状从), frustration bubbled up inside me. My strokes were uneven, and the colors looked nothing like I had imagined(定从). “It’s okay,” she would say, her voice gentle yet firm. “Mistakes are part of the process.” Gradually, I began to let go of my perfectionism. Each time I adjusted a stroke or experimented with a new shade(each time状从), I felt a little more confident. By the end of the week, I had painted a simple sunset. It wasn’t flawless, but it filled me with pride.
第二段：
Word came that a painting competition would be held in our school. My grandmother encouraged me to give it a try. Nervous but excited, I decided to paint the scene from her studio—a place that had ignited my love for art(定从). For days, I worked on the painting, pouring my heart into every detail(非谓语动词做伴随动作). When the results were announced(when状从), I couldn’t believe my ears: I had won first prize! Holding the certificate(非谓语动词做伴随动作), I realized that painting wasn’t just a hobby anymore—it was a passion that had taught me resilience, creativity, and the value of persistence(宾从+强调句).
范文 2
第一段：
My grandmother had to repeatedly remind me to be patient. “Good art takes time,” she said with a knowing smile. Despite her encouragement, I often felt overwhelmed by the blank canvas in front of me. Slowly but surely, I followed her advice, experimenting with brushes and colors(非谓语动词做伴随动作). Each mistake became a lesson, and each attempt brought me closer to understanding the beauty of self-expression. One day, I completed a painting of a tree standing against a golden sunset(非谓语动词短语做后置定语). My grandmother’s eyes sparkled with pride as she said, “See You’ve got the soul of an artist.(as状从)”
第二段：
Word came that a painting competition would be held in our school. Remembering my grandmother’s encouragement, I signed up. My entry, a depiction of a quiet winter morning, was inspired by my time at her studio. The competition was fierce, and as I stood among other talented students(as状从), doubt crept in. But when the judges announced my name as the runner-up(when状从), I felt a wave of happiness and gratitude. My grandmother’s teachings had brought me here, and I knew this was just the beginning of my journey in art(宾从).
范文 3
第一段：
My grandmother had to repeatedly remind me to be patient. “Art doesn’t come alive in a rush,” she said as she watched me hurriedly splash colors on the canvas(as状从). Her calm presence encouraged me to slow down and focus. Following her instructions(非谓语动词短语做伴随动作), I began blending colors more carefully and sketching with greater intention. Soon, I found myself immersed in the process, enjoying the rhythm of the brushstrokes(非谓语动词短语做伴随动作). My first real painting—a simple bouquet of flowers—was far from perfect, but it was a creation I was proud of(定从), one that spoke of my growing passion for art(定从).
第二段：
Word came that a painting competition would be held in our school. Encouraged by my grandmother(非谓语动词短语做原因状语), I chose to paint a scene from my happiest memories—her studio, with its warm light and vibrant colors. Over several nights, I poured all my effort into the piece, reliving the joy of those moments(非谓语动词短语做伴随动作) as I painted(as状从). On the day of the competition, I was both excited and nervous. When my name was announced as the winner of third place(状从), I felt a surge of pride. Painting had not only brought me closer to my grandmother but had also helped me discover a new side of myself.
语法点与亮点
使用高级句型：
强调句：It was a creation I was proud of.
定语从句：My entry, a depiction of a quiet winter morning, was inspired by my time at her studio.
精炼表达：
Good art takes time. → 主题句，简洁有力。
Painting had taught me resilience, creativity, and the value of persistence. → 总结意义，升华主题。
动作与心理描写细腻：
Each mistake became a lesson, and each attempt brought me closer to understanding the beauty of self-expression.
Over several nights, I poured all my effort into the piece, reliving the joy of those moments as I painted.

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