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（2024年11月东台市高三上学期第一次模拟）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Eight﹣year﹣old Evan stood by the sidewalk watching as Mrs.Carter opened her flower shop.He felt relieved that the shop hadn't closed forever.Two days ago，when he passed by，there was a closed sign on the door and a note saying Mrs.Carter was sick.Evan was worried that he would never be able to get his "dream job" if the shop remained closed for too long.
① stood by...watching...as...opened...
注意动作链的表达，两个人物，三个动作，谓非谓，as相连。
② feel relieved释然；舒了一口气
Mrs.Carter，an 85﹣year﹣old woman，spotted Evan looking in her shop's direction and waved hello to him.Excitedly，Evan ran up to her and expressed his desire to work at the shop.Mrs.Carter laughed quietly，finding it amusing that an eight﹣year﹣old wanted a job.Evan confidently explained that since his dad passed away，he had learned how to do various tasks，like taking out the rubbish，making sandwiches，and assisting his mom，Stacey，with groceries.He didn't want any payment for his work；instead，he simply wanted a bouquet （花束） for his mom' s upcoming birthday.He believed in working hard for what he wanted，just as his mom had taught him.
① spot v.看见；看到
② wave hello to sb.向某人挥手问好
③ excitedly 副词提前，Adv., sb did sth, doing sth.
Reluctantly, I washed the dish, feeling impatient.
④ didn’t...; instead, ...
当rather/instead单独使用的时候，它们不取反，一般出现在not A；rather/instead, B这样的结构中，我们可以翻译成“不是A，而是B”。这个结构可以等同于我们熟悉的not A but B。
Impressed by Evan's determination，Mrs.Carter agreed to hire him.She asked if he knew how to tie ribbons around flowers，and when she heard Evan's affirmative（肯定的） response，they got down to making bouquets.Evan was excited to assist Mrs.Carter every evening for a whole week，and his presence brought joy to her boring work.Customers found Evan adorable and entertaining，which resulted in increased flower purchases and booming business for Mrs.Carter.
① impressed by...对……印象深刻
过去分词开头，为被动语态句型的省略形式。
② get down to doing sth.开始着手做某事
③ his presence brought joy to her boring work他的出现给她无聊的工作带来了欢乐
注意对比用法，his-her, joy-boring
④ booming business生意兴隆
On Evan's last day，Mrs.Carter felt emotional.Their bond had grown strong，and she saw him as a grandchild.As she prepared a splendid bouquet for Evan's mother，tears welled up in her eyes.She invited him to visit her shop in the future，and Evan promised to tell his mom about her.
① feel emotional有情绪；情绪激动
② tears well up in her eyes热泪盈眶
注意：
续写词数应为 150 左右；
请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
第一段：With the bouquet in hand, Evan rushed home to celebrate Mom's birthday.
第二段：As Evan handed his mom the bouquet, they were surprised to discover an envelope with several hundred-dollar bills inside.
文章大意：八岁的埃文看到卡特夫人的花店重新开业，他因担心花店关门太久而无法得到自己的 “梦想工作”，便向卡特夫人表达了想在花店工作的愿望。埃文的父亲去世后，他学会了很多家务，他想通过努力工作为妈妈即将到来的生日换取一束花。卡特夫人被他的决心打动，雇佣了他。埃文工作了一周，给花店带来了欢乐和生意，最后卡特夫人为他准备了一束花，两人建立了深厚感情。
伏笔及回应：
伏笔 “Evan was worried that he would never be able to get his ‘dream job’ if the shop remained closed for too long.” 续写中埃文顺利完成工作并得到花束回应了他的期待。
伏笔 “He didn’t want any payment for his work; instead, he simply wanted a bouquet (花束) for his mom’s upcoming birthday.” 后文出现花束中有装钱的信封是对他不要报酬但却收获意外之财的情节呼应。
伏笔 “Customers found Evan adorable and entertaining, which resulted in increased flower purchases and booming business for Mrs. Carter.” 这为卡特夫人在信封中装钱感谢埃文做了铺垫，因为埃文的工作给花店带来了收益。
伏笔 “Mrs. Carter felt emotional. Their bond had grown strong, and she saw him as a grandchild.” 卡特夫人把埃文当孙子般对待，所以会在花束中装钱表达对他的喜爱与感激，续写中这一情感得到延续。
续写要点：
第一段：描写埃文回家路上的心情，到家后给妈妈庆祝生日的场景，妈妈收到花束的反应。
第二段：埃文和妈妈发现信封后的惊讶与疑惑，之后埃文决定回到花店向卡特夫人询问情况，展现埃文的诚实与懂事。
情感线：埃文拿着花束回家时充满期待与兴奋，妈妈收到花束先是开心，发现信封后转为惊讶和疑惑，埃文则表现出坚定与诚实，想要弄清楚情况。
故事线：埃文拿着花束匆忙回家为妈妈庆祝生日，妈妈收到花束时发现信封里有几百美元，埃文决定回花店询问卡特夫人原因，故事在意外与疑惑中发展，凸显人物性格与情感。
主旨升华句：
Honesty and hard work are the cornerstones that build a path to unexpected blessings.（诚实和努力工作是铺就意外福祉之路的基石。）
The kindness we sow in our actions often blossoms into unforeseen rewards and deeper connections.（我们在行动中播下的善意常常绽放为意想不到的回报和更深厚的情谊。）
True generosity is not only in giving but also in the way it enriches the hearts of both the giver and the receiver.（真正的慷慨不仅在于给予，还在于它使给予者和接受者的心灵都得到充实。）
In the journey of life, the purest intentions often lead to the most astonishing discoveries of love and fortune.（在人生旅途中，最纯粹的意图往往会引向爱与财富最惊人的发现。）
The value of a child's earnestness lies not only in their deeds but also in the inspiration they bring to the world around them.（孩子真诚的价值不仅在于他们的行为，还在于他们给周围世界带来的鼓舞。）
写作示范一：
With the bouquet in hand, Evan rushed home to celebrate Mom’s birthday. The wind blew gently as he sprinted down the street, his heart pounding with excitement. He couldn't wait to see the look on his mom's face. When he burst through the door, he yelled, “Happy birthday, Mom!” His mom, Stacey, turned around with a big smile. She was deeply touched when Evan presented the beautiful bouquet.
As Evan handed his mom the bouquet, they were surprised to discover an envelope with several hundred-dollar bills inside. Their eyes widened in astonishment. Evan was confused, not understanding why there was money. After a moment of silence, he said, “Mom, I have to go back to Mrs. Carter's shop and ask her about this. It doesn't feel right to keep it without knowing.” His mom nodded in agreement, proud of her son's honesty and integrity.
写作示范二：
With the bouquet in hand, Evan rushed home to celebrate Mom’s birthday. His little feet moved quickly, and his face was flushed with anticipation. As he entered the house, the sweet fragrance of the flowers filled the air. “Mom, look what I got for you!” he exclaimed. Stacey's eyes lit up with joy as she took the bouquet.
As Evan handed his mom the bouquet, they were surprised to discover an envelope with several hundred-dollar bills inside. They both stared at it in disbelief. Evan's mom asked him where it came from. Evan explained it must be from Mrs. Carter. Without hesitation, Evan said, “I'll go back and talk to her. I don't want her to think I took something I wasn't supposed to.” His mom hugged him, seeing his determination to do the right thing.
参考范文
With the bouquet in hand, Evan rushed home to celebrate Mom's birthday. On seeing the gift, his mom was astonished. The bouquet was huge and looked expensive. Instead of being pleased,she worried where Evan had acquired it. "Evan Where did you get the money for this " she inquired, alarmed. With a big smile on his face, Evan told her the whole story and explained that he had once overheard Stacey's conversations, learning she didn't buy herself things to save money for him, so he decided to give Mom a unique gift for her birthday. Mom was moved upon hearing the genuine words. She hugged him passionately, showing love and gratitude.
As Evan handed his mom the bouquet, they were surprised to discover an envelope with several hundred-dollar bills inside. Evan, worried that Mrs.Carter had made a mistake, recommended returning the money. They went to the flower store right away and returned the envelope to Mrs.Carter. She smiled warmly and explained that it was not a mistake, but a birthday gift for Evan's mother. Mrs.Carter persisted on keeping it, claiming that Evan's passion for his mother moved her. Mom, moved by the thoughtfulness, invited her to supper that night and they celebrated Stacey's birthday together.

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