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The sound of glass breaking is instantly recognizable. I’d been telling my best friend Missi a silly story and had spun around in the living room when I heard that sound and froze.
When I looked down at the carpet, it was covered with pieces of sparkling red, pink and clear glass. Missi said. "Oh, no, not the vase.''
"Why What did I do " My face reddened.
"Abby, that glass vase was one of the few items my relatives brought when they came to America, Missi replied nervously. "If you’d broken anything else in the apartment, I would've gladly said I did it. But you're going to have to tell my mom that it was your fault, and she's going to be really mad. ”
I was terrified. I’d destroyed a priceless family heirloom （传家宝）.Why did I have to spin around like that
We gathered up the shattered pieces. I kept saying that maybe it could be fixed, but Missi said gently it didn't look possible. I insisted we keep the pieces. The glass was so fragile, like a colorful, swirly light bulb had exploded. Some of it broke even more as we tried to sweep it up carefully.
Missi said her mom would be home by six. My stomach was in knots. Would her mom yell at me or punish me Would she tell me I couldn't stay in their apartment for the weekend I couldn't stop playing the” fifteen seconds over in my mind, me spinning fast and the sound of glass crashing. The only thing I could think of to say was “I'm sorry. ”
A couple of minutes after six we heard a key turn in the door. Her mom was home. Right from the start, we could see she was in a good mood. Hello! It’s hot today. I want to treat you girls to that frozen yogurt I know you like, Let’s go! ” her mom said. She pointed at the open door.
注意；1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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“Before that, I need to tell you something” I said.
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Hearing my apology, Missi's mother erupted into a loud scream of joy.
文章大意：“我” 在好友米西家客厅玩耍时，因转身不慎打碎了米西家珍贵的玻璃花瓶。这个花瓶是其亲戚从美国带来的传家宝，米西告知 “我” 她妈妈会很生气，“我” 十分害怕。米西妈妈回家时心情很好，还打算带我们去吃冷冻酸奶，而 “我” 却陷入了纠结与不安之中，不知该如何面对她妈妈即将知晓花瓶破碎一事。
伏笔及回应：伏笔 “Missi said her mom would be home by six. My stomach was in knots. Would her mom yell at me or punish me ” 为后文 “我” 紧张地向米西妈妈坦白以及米西妈妈的反应做了铺垫。续写中 “我” 鼓起勇气在去吃酸奶前坦白，而米西妈妈的反应则是对之前 “我” 担忧情绪的回应。
续写要点：
第一段：“我” 鼓起勇气向米西妈妈坦白打碎花瓶的事，描述自己的愧疚心情以及等待米西妈妈回应时的忐忑不安。
第二段：米西妈妈听到道歉后的反应，如先是惊喜后解释花瓶并非珍贵传家宝，最后大家和解并愉快地去吃酸奶。
情感线：开始因打碎花瓶而极度愧疚、害怕与忐忑，向米西妈妈坦白时紧张万分，听到米西妈妈的反应后从惊讶转为释然与轻松。
故事线：“我” 打碎花瓶后，在米西妈妈回家且心情不错打算带我们去吃酸奶时，先坦白错误，而后米西妈妈表明花瓶并非如想象中珍贵，最终大家化解误会一起去吃酸奶。
主旨升华句：
Honesty is the best policy, and it has the power to dissolve misunderstandings and build stronger relationships.（诚实是上策，它有化解误解并建立更牢固关系的力量。）
Admitting our mistakes shows our courage and respect, which can turn a potentially bad situation into a heartwarming one.（承认错误展现了我们的勇气与尊重，能将潜在的糟糕情况转化为温馨的局面。）
True friendship is tested and strengthened when we face difficulties together, and honesty is the key to passing the test.（当我们共同面对困难时，真正的友谊得到考验与加强，而诚实是通过考验的关键。）
The act of confessing our faults is like opening a window to let in understanding and forgiveness.（承认错误的行为就像打开一扇窗，让理解与宽恕照进来。）
In the face of mistakes, our attitude of taking responsibility can transform the negative into a positive and bring people closer.（面对错误，我们承担责任的态度能将消极转化为积极并使人们更亲近。）
写作示范一：
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“Before that, I need to tell you something,” I said. My voice trembled as I recounted the incident, how I had been careless and spun around, leading to the vase's destruction. I apologized profusely, my eyes fixed on the floor, too ashamed to look up. I could feel my heart pounding in my chest, bracing myself for her anger or disappointment. The silence that followed seemed to last an eternity.
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Hearing my apology, Missi's mother erupted into a loud scream of joy. She laughed and said, “Oh, girls, that vase was just a cheap souvenir. I always thought it was ugly, but my relatives insisted on giving it to me. I'm glad it's gone!” I stared at her in disbelief, then relief washed over me. Missi grinned at me, and we all burst out laughing. The tension evaporated, and we happily left for the frozen yogurt shop, our friendship and my courage intact.
写作示范二：
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“Before that, I need to tell you something,” I said. With a heavy heart, I told her about the broken vase, explaining how it happened accidentally. I emphasized my remorse and my willingness to take any punishment. My hands were sweating, and I felt like a criminal waiting for sentencing. I was prepared for the worst, but knew I had to be honest.
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Hearing my apology, Missi's mother erupted into a loud scream of joy. She exclaimed, “You silly girls! I thought it was something serious. That old vase It's no big deal. I was actually thinking of getting rid of it.” I was astonished by her reaction. Missi gave me a reassuring hug. We then followed her mom out the door, the weight of guilt lifted. This experience made me understand that sometimes our fears are much worse than the reality, and honesty can bring unexpected relief.
参考范文
“Before that, I need to tell you something,” I said. “We can talk at the yogurt place," her mom smiled. “No. I need to tell you now. It's important,” I insisted. I could feel my voice shaking and tried not to cry. “What is it, dear " she gently asked, closing the door and walking closer to me. Our hands almost touched. With her eyes studying me, my heart beat faster. “I'm sorry,” I blurted out.“I... I was talking and laughing with Missi when I spun around and accidentally broke the vase.” I further explained that we saved the pieces but tried in vain to fix it. It still looked like small pieces of glass.
Hearing my apology, Missi's mother erupted into a loud scream of joy. She embraced mc, kissing me on both cheeks. “Oh, thank you! I always hated that ugly vase. Now it's gone! You've done me a huge favor!" her mom exclaimed with delight. Although relieved to have apologized, I was still in shock, for this was not at all the reaction I had expected. It wasn't until I reached my adult years that I recognized what a profound gift her mother's generosity in welcoming my apology was. Now, when I receive a genuine apology, I always consider the people's feelings and make sure my response shows them their apology was fully heard and truly appreciated.

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