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应用文练习写作：短文(森林火灾)+感谢信(热情款待)+倡议书(共读经典)
应用文写作
（湖南省长沙市湖南师大附中2024届高三上学期月考五）
你校英文报为提高学生对自然灾害的了解，新开设了Natural Disasters专栏，请你以“Forest Fires”为标题，为该专栏写一篇短文。
内容包括：
1.形成的原因；2.造成的危害（至少两点）；3. 呼吁预防。
写作分析
1这篇文章偏说明文特点，介绍性，客观性，呼吁性要兼顾，按照命题要求已经可以很好地划分结构，第一段简介+形成原因，第二段造成的危害，第三段呼吁预防森林大火；不过也可以第一段引出话题，第二段介绍原因和危害，第三段再呼吁；
2语料积累：
形成原因——be caused by.../ result from....; ....lead to/contribute to/ result in/ account for/ bring about....; ... be responsible for.../ ... be to blame for.../.... trigger...
产生的危害——用非谓语动词做结果状语是最常见的：threatening.../worsening.../ causing.../leaving.../affecting...
或者使用总述+分述（with的复合结构或者including列举）的模式：The impacts of forest fires are extensive and far-reaching，with habitats lost, wildlife killled and ecosystem disrupted.
The damage caused by forest fires is immense, inlcuding destroying habitats, killing wildlife and disrupting ecosystem.
呼吁预防——It is high time that we should do sth.或
倒装句：Preventing forest fires is crucial. Only when each of us are mindful of our actions can we significantly reduce the occurrence of forest fires.
One possible version:
Forest fires
Forest fires are a kind of natural disaster that usually occurs in winter and spring, when the dry leaves can be easily lit by any kinds of fire sources.
The fire can burn down a wide range of plants, make animals living in the forests homeless and even take away their lives. Moreover, the greenhouse gases released during the burning will contribute to global warming.
Considering the damage caused by the forest fire, it's high time that the government and all individuals should take measures to prevent it.
The polished version:
Forest fires
Forest fires, powerful destructive flames that spread rapidly and devour everything in its path, cause massive damage every year.
Various factors trigger the occurrence of forest fires, including natural events like lightning strikes and record-high temperature. Whereas, human negligence like leaving campfire unattended or throwing cigarette butts irresponsibly, is to blame for the majority of the fires. The consequences can be overwhelmingly catastrophic, with vast areas reduced to ruins, threatening wildlife and ecosystem, as well as massive amounts of toxic gases released into the atmosphere, worsening air pollution.
Given the damage, it is crucial that we each shoulder our share of responsibility and follow fire safety guidelines to ensure a safer and greener forest.
（202409A9协作体-感谢信）
假设你是李华，假期去留学生Judy的家乡游玩时受到了她的热情款待。请你给她写一封邮件表达谢意，内容包括：1．写邮件目的；2．得到好友的哪些款待；3．表达谢意。
写作分析
1这篇文章传统的感谢信，三段开头点名写作目的，Body部分回顾受到的热情款待，结尾再次表达感谢。学生容易陷入以前的感谢信的经验主义，比如在国外思念家乡得到朋友的安慰，着重描写看到的风景很美等，稍稍偏离款待一说。
2语料积累：写作目的——I am writing to express/extend/convey my most sincere/genuine/heartfelt/profound gratitude/appreciation/thanks to you for your warm hospitality/ tender care/kind help.
回忆款待——定语从句：I'm particularly impressed by the local authentic dishes you prepared, the flavors of which are still lingering on my tongue! （你准备的当地正宗菜肴让我印象深刻，它们的味道还在我的舌头上徘徊！）
倒装句：Not only did you take care of my accommodation and transport, ensuring me a relaxing and enjoyable trip, but also you offered me guided tours, exposing me to breathtaking landscape as well as your profound history and culture.
再次感谢——强调句：It was your warmth and thoughtfulness that brought me a memorable journey. 虚拟语气：Had it not been for you, hardly could I have harvested such a pleasant and fruitful journey. 或者Words alone fails to express my thanks. I am more than pleased to have the opportunity to repay your kindness.
One possible version:
Dear Judy,
I’m writing to express my gratitude for your warm hospitality.
Just in the past summer vacation, I visited your hometown. As a local resident and my close friend, not only did you show me around the scenic spots, but also treated me to various foods, which contributed to my unique and unforgettable journey. What's more, exposed to the cultural festival, I gained knowledge about the local culture. How amazing!
Words fail me when I try to show how grateful I am. Thank you so much! Best wishes!
Yours, Li Hua
The polished version:
Dear Judy,
Having returned home and those fond memories keeping floating in my mind, I can't help but write this e-mail to extend my most profound gratitude for your warm hospitality you have given me.
During my vacation, not only did you show me around London, exposing me to your marvelous history and culture, but also you treated me to authentic local cuisines, which greatly satisfied my tasting bud/ the flavors of which still linger on my tongue, let alone the cozy accommodation and heart-warming atmosphere, which made me feel at home.
Words alone truly fail to express my thanks. Looking forward to meeting with you again in Beijing!
(长郡中学2025届高三月考试卷三）
假定你是校英语俱乐部主席李华，你校正进行读书活动，请你代表俱乐部写一篇倡议书，号召同学们多读中国经典好书。内容包括：1.倡议的目的；2.读经典作品的好处。
写作分析
1倡议应用文的写作结构仍然是三个部分，开头引出倡议，中间描述倡议的目的，好处，结尾再次呼吁大家行动起来。语言风格应该是亲民又同时又富有情感的。
2 语料积累：引出倡议——Representing the school’s English Club, I warmly invite you to join our reading initiative to explore the wonders of Chinese classical literature.
With the reading activity being in full swing, I am, on behalf of the school's English club, appealing for your active engagement/involvement in reading Chinese classics.
倡议目的+好处——The initiative is aimed at..../seeks to ....
The purpose of the initiative, undoubtedly, lies in fostering students’ deeper appreciation for the wealth of wisdom and insights they offer, as well as seeking to boost our cultural confidence.
②倒装句：Not only does reading masterpieces broaden our horizon, exposing us to the richness of our language, but also it cultivates our critical thinking skills with their timeless wisdom, which may come in handy when we face challenges.
③总述+分述：The benefits of reading Chinese classics are plain to see, including significantly enhancing students’ language proficiency as well as shaping students’ character, therefore, making them a wiser and more compassionate man.
④ The more exposed you are to Chinese classics, the more likely you are to enhance your language proficiency, polish your thinking and cultivate your
再次呼吁——① Let’s make reading a habit, delve into Chinese classics and embark on this journey of discovery, learning, and personal growth!② Let’s embrace the joy of reading and make Chinese classics a part of our daily lives.
One possible version:
Dear fellow students,
With the reading activity being in full swing, I am, on behalf of the school's English club, appealing for your active engagement/involvement in reading Chinese classics.
The purpose, undoubtedly, lies in the intention of fostering students' awareness to appreciate Chinese classics, through which students may lavish more time on reading. Benefits of reading Chinese classics are plain to see. Constant exposure to classics cultivates students' character, therefore, making them a wiser and more compassionate man. Plus, reading Chinese classics is obviously in line with the nation's call on growing students' confidence in Chinese literature.
It's definitely high time that we immersed ourselves in the ocean of Chinese classics. I bet we will enjoy this journey!
The polished version:
With the reading activity being in full swing, I am, on behalf of the school's English club, inviting you to join our reading initiative to explore the wonders of Chinese classical literature.
This initiative seeks to promote Chinese culture and help us discover a spiritual refuge amidst the fast-paced modern life. Engaging with classic works not only enriches our minds and enhances our language proficiency, but also stimulates critical thinking and nurtures moral virtue. As the crystallization of the timeless wisdom of our ancestors, classics guides us through time and space, especially the times of darkness.
Let’s all make reading a habit, delve into Chinese classics and embark on this journey of discovery, learning, and personal growth!

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