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浙江省9+1高中联盟2024-2025学年高三上学期11月期中读后续写——猫咪的呼唤
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Sweat dripped from Callie’s face as she helped her big brother Briggs load hay bales (捆) onto the machine. The machine made loud noise while it carried the bales up to the hayloft (干草棚), where Callie’s dad piled them up.
All was quiet when Callie went inside to feed the horses. But as she filled the water bucket, she thought she heard a faint meow (猫叫声) from the hayloft. She climbed the steps to the loft and listened. The sound seemed to be coming from behind the bales. She ran to get her dad and Briggs. Briggs cocked his head. “It’s coming from outside”, he determined. “Just a bird in a tree.” Callie’s dad agreed. “Probably a mockingbird or a catbird,” he said. “How do you know for sure ” Callie said.
“I guess you’ve just got better ears than you,” Briggs joked. But Callie wasn’t convinced. She checked the hayloft again after supper. “Are you stuck in there, kitty ” she said, pressing an ear to the bales. “Meow!” came a sad cry. Callie raced back to the house. “I heard it again, Dad! Will you please listen once more ” “It’s okay, Callie,” her dad said, comforting her. “I’ll go and take a look.”
A few minutes later, he poked his head into Callie’s room. “The only thing I heard out there was a mockingbird,” he said. “So you can stop worrying.” “OK, Dad,” Callie said. But she woke in the night thinking about what she’d heard. What if a kitten was trapped behind the bales She lay on her back, wondering what to do.
Finally, she changed into jeans and a sweatshirt, and then walked quietly into Briggs’s room. “I need your flashlight (手电筒),” she whispered. “Huh ” Briggs was confused. “I need it to find the kitten,” Callie explained. “I’ll be careful!” Briggs huffed. “You are so stubborn!” “You’re the best,” Callie said.
注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: She grabbed the flashlight and rushed to the hayloft.
Paragraph 2: Thanks to Briggs’s help, the last heavy bale was moved, revealing a tiny, frightened kitten.
原文大意：
小女孩Callie在帮助哥哥Briggs和父亲搬运干草捆时，听到干草棚里传来微弱的猫叫声。她怀疑可能有小猫被困在干草堆里，于是叫来父亲和哥哥帮忙。但他们都认为那只是外面的鸟叫声，并没有在意。尽管家人一再否定，Callie依然无法释怀，晚上还为此担忧，最终决定独自行动。深夜，她悄悄起床，向哥哥借手电筒，准备再一次去干草棚寻找猫咪。
写作构思：
第一段：She grabbed the flashlight and rushed to the hayloft.
Callie借着微弱的灯光，爬上干草棚，努力分辨声音的来源。
环境描写：夜晚干草棚的安静与阴暗。
动作描写：Callie如何搬动干草堆，逐步靠近声音来源。
心理描写：Callie的焦虑与坚定心理。
第二段：Thanks to Briggs’s help, the last heavy bale was moved, revealing a tiny, frightened kitten.
Briggs最终加入，兄妹合作搬开最后的干草堆。
小猫被救出后，兄妹的反应以及对小猫的安抚。
情感升华：从紧张到放松，从疑虑到感动。
写作技巧：
环境描写：利用感官（视觉、听觉等）突出干草棚的氛围，增强画面感。
动作链：细腻描写人物动作（如搬动干草堆、寻找小猫），增加紧张感。
心理描写：展现Callie在行动中的坚持与焦虑，增强人物形象的立体感。
情感递进：通过兄妹的互动，表现团队合作和家人之间的支持与爱。
引导式写作：八步法——1. 情绪
She grabbed the flashlight and rushed to the hayloft.
从第一段提示语“She grabbed the flashlight and rushed to the hayloft.”可知，Callie大半夜一个人拿着手电筒上楼独自去寻找小猫，这个时候想象一下她是什么心情：害怕但坚定。
好句欣赏：The wooden stairs creaked beneath her as she climbed, her heart pounding with both fear and determination.
引导式写作：2.细节
Callie拿着手电筒继续寻找小猫：
好句欣赏：Shining the flashlight over the hay bales, she paused, listening intently.
引导式写作：3. 转折
找了半天，应该有所发现了，要么是看到小猫，要么是听到小猫的叫声。因为从下文知道小猫被草压住了，所以最好是听到。
好句欣赏：“Meow!” The sound was closer now, and Callie felt a renewed sense of urgency.
引导式写作：4. 转机
现在Callie听到猫叫声了，确认猫的位置了，接着就是要把草移开啦。但是第二段的提示语“Thanks to Briggs’s help, the last heavy bale was moved”说明Callie没有搬动：
好句欣赏：Setting the flashlight down, she tried to move a bale but quickly realized it was too heavy.
引导式写作：5. 过渡
情绪描写（嘀咕）： Frustrated, she whispered, “I need help.”
另外一个角色（Briggs）出现：Just then, Briggs appeared in the doorway, rubbing his eyes and holding his own flashlight.
一起努力：Together, they began shifting the bales, one by one.
第二段
Thanks to Briggs’s help, the last heavy bale was moved, revealing a tiny, frightened kitten.
引导式写作：6. 情绪
小猫出现了，那它会是什么样子？又脏又虚弱。
好句欣赏：It was trembling, its fur tangled and dusty, and its big, scared eyes glistened in the flashlight’s beam.
引导式写作：7.想法——做法
看见小猫，Callie会做什么呢？
好句欣赏：Callie carefully reached out, and the kitten let out a soft cry, collapsing into her hands.
“It’s okay, little one,” she said gently, cradling it close to her chest.
引导式写作：8.做法——过程
现在Callie抱着小猫了，不要忘了还有一个角色Briggs的反应。
Briggs sighed, a mix of exhaustion and relief.
“You were right, Callie,” he admitted.
引导式写作：9.做法——结果
现在他们找到小猫了，那要做啥呢？带回家好好照顾！
Back in the house, Callie cleaned the kitten with a warm towel while Briggs fetched some milk.
The kitten purred softly, curled up in Callie’s lap, finally safe.
引导式写作：10.主题升华
让Callie总结一下自己的心情：
As she stroked its soft fur, Callie felt a wave of satisfaction—her persistence had paid off, and she had saved a life.
连句成文：
Paragraph 1:
She grabbed the flashlight and rushed to the hayloft. The wooden stairs creaked beneath her as she climbed, her heart pounding with both fear and determination. Shining the flashlight over the hay bales, she paused, listening intently. “Meow!” The sound was closer now, and Callie felt a renewed sense of urgency. Setting the flashlight down, she tried to move a bale but quickly realized it was too heavy. Frustrated, she whispered, “I need help.” Just then, Briggs appeared in the doorway, rubbing his eyes and holding his own flashlight. “You’re impossible,” he said with a smirk. Together, they began shifting the bales, one by one.
她拿起手电筒，冲向干草棚。木制楼梯在她攀爬时发出吱嘎声，她的心因恐惧和决心而砰砰直跳。她用手电筒照向干草捆，停下脚步，屏息倾听。“喵！”声音更近了，Callie感到一阵新的紧迫感。她放下手电筒，试图搬动一捆干草，但很快意识到它太重了。沮丧之中，她低声嘀咕：“我需要帮助。”就在这时，Briggs出现在门口，揉着眼睛，手里拿着自己的手电筒。“你真让人头疼，”他带着一丝笑意说道。随后，两人开始一捆一捆地搬动干草。
Paragraph 2:
Thanks to Briggs’s help, the last heavy bale was moved, revealing a tiny, frightened kitten. It was trembling, its fur tangled and dusty, and its big, scared eyes glistened in the flashlight’s beam. Callie carefully reached out, and the kitten let out a soft cry, collapsing into her hands. “It’s okay, little one,” she said gently, cradling it close to her chest. Briggs sighed, a mix of exhaustion and relief. “You were right, Callie,” he admitted. Back in the house, Callie cleaned the kitten with a warm towel while Briggs fetched some milk. The kitten purred softly, curled up in Callie’s lap, finally safe. As she stroked its soft fur, Callie felt a wave of satisfaction—her persistence had paid off, and she had saved a life.
在Briggs的帮助下，最后一捆沉重的干草被移开，一只小小的、惊慌失措的小猫露了出来。它浑身颤抖，毛发打结并满是灰尘，那双又大又惊恐的眼睛在手电筒的光芒下闪闪发亮。Callie小心翼翼地伸出手，小猫发出一声微弱的哭声，倒在她的手里。“没事了，小家伙，”她轻声说道，将它抱在胸前。Briggs叹了口气，既疲惫又松了一口气。“你是对的，Callie，”他承认道。回到屋里后，Callie用温热的毛巾为小猫清理身体，而Briggs去端来一些牛奶。小猫发出轻轻的呼噜声，蜷缩在Callie的膝盖上，终于安全了。当她抚摸着它柔软的毛发时，Callie感到一阵满足感——她的坚持得到了回报，她救了一条生命。
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She grabbed the flashlight and rushed to the hayloft. Clutching the flashlight tightly, Callie tiptoed her way to the hayloft. The cold night air nipped at her face as she pushed open the creaky door. The beam of the flashlight cut through the darkness, landing on piles of hay stacked unevenly. "Kitty " she whispered, her voice trembling with both excitement and fear. Another faint meow reached her ears, this time clearer and more desperate. Callie’s heart raced as she followed the sound. Her hands worked tirelessly, pulling apart the prickly hay bales, her arms aching with each heavy push. The flashlight flickered slightly, but the faint cries spurred her on. Just as she began to lose hope, Briggs’s voice echoed from behind her. “Need some help, stubborn ” he said, holding a lantern. Callie turned, relief washing over her. Together, they moved closer to the source of the sound.
Thanks to Briggs’s help, the last heavy bale was moved, revealing a tiny, frightened kitten. With Briggs’s strength, the heavy bales were steadily removed one by one. Finally, a small trembling figure came into view. The kitten’s wide, frightened eyes glistened under the flashlight’s beam, its tiny body pressed tightly against the cold wooden wall. “Gotcha!” Callie exclaimed softly, scooping the kitten into her arms. Its fur was dusty, and it let out a weak but grateful meow. Briggs smiled, brushing off his hands. “Guess your ears are better after all,” he teased, patting Callie’s shoulder. Callie grinned, tears welling up in her eyes as she cradled the kitten. “You’re safe now,” she whispered, her voice filled with relief. As they walked back to the house, Callie felt a warmth spread through her, knowing she hadn’t given up. “Thanks, Briggs,” she said. “Let’s name it Hope.”
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