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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
“This is my first day delivering food.”
“This is my second day of delivery.”
...
Xiaowen posted his daily vlog online, in which he wore a contagious smile and stammered, “It is my 20th day of food delivery and I’m working hard to earn money for my cochlear implantation (耳蜗植入手术) !”
Recognized as the only means to restore hearing and language ability for people with extremely severe neurological deafness, cochlear implantation involves conducting risky surgery where doctors will put a built-in device in the patient’s head behind the ear and fitting the patient with a wearable signal-receiving device, like an earphone, one month after the surgery. Meanwhile, it costs as high as 300,000 yuan, or over 100,000 yuan when social security reimburses part of it. In Xiaowen’s case, it would mean 10 years of delivery when he just made approximately 100 yuan a day.
Worse still, hearing-impaired, Xiaowen had several narrow escapes with death at the intersection on the roads because he couldn’t hear the horn of the cars behind him! He sighed with a heavy heart when customers complained about his inability to speak on the phone to inform them of the arrival of a delivery. Even so, Xiaowen kindly refused people’s fat tips but accepted their apologies when they found out about his disability.
Born in an ordinary family, Xiaowen, the little chubby boy, was diagnosed with congenital hearing impairment. This was like a bolt from the blue, breaking the family’s beautiful vision of Xiaowen’s future. But it didn’t bring down Xiaowen’s mother. Fearing that Xiaowen couldn’t understand teachers’ instructions, she was always patiently there to help him with lip-reading and guide him to express himself bravely. Thanks to mom, Xiaowen has grown into a self-reliant adult who wouldn’t reap without sowing. One day, Xiaowen watched his mother singing and said with a lisp, “Mom, you must have the most beautiful voice in the world!” “Dear, how I wish you could hear mommy and sing with me...” Mom eyed Xiaowen with tender love, a trace of sorrow flashing over her face. It would be just a long, long time before they could pay that much money.
Mr. B, a well-known blogger, is devoted to charity causes. He and his team happened to see Xiaowen’s posts and they followed him online and decided to help him.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Mr. B invited Xiaowen and his mom to his office and told them the good news. ___________________
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One month later, Xiaowen and his mom went to the hospital to try out the signal-receiving device. ____
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文章大意：
小文因先天性听力障碍，为了筹集高昂的耳蜗植入手术费用开始送外卖并拍摄日常 vlog。他在送外卖过程中面临诸多困难，如路口听不到汽车喇叭声而险象环生，与顾客沟通不便被投诉等，但他依然乐观善良。他的家庭普通，母亲一直耐心帮助他成长。知名博主 Mr.B 看到小文的帖子后决定帮助他。
伏笔及续写回应：
伏笔：小文努力送外卖赚钱做耳蜗植入手术且费用高昂。续写回应：Mr.B 告知他们要资助手术费用，解决了小文家的经济难题，使小文有了恢复听力的希望，推动故事走向转机。
伏笔：小文在路口因听力问题有危险。续写回应：手术后小文能听到路口声音，意识到之前危险，凸显手术对他生活的重要改变，也体现出他重获听力后的感慨。
伏笔：顾客因小文无法电话沟通而抱怨。续写回应：手术后小文能正常与顾客交流，改善了他的工作状况，从侧面反映出手术给他带来的积极影响，也展现了他生活的变化。
伏笔：小文看到母亲唱歌表示母亲声音美但自己听不到。续写回应：手术后他听到母亲歌声，母子能一起唱歌，满足了之前的愿望，使亲情在经历磨难后更加深厚，温暖感人。
伏笔：Mr.B 致力于慈善事业且关注到小文。续写回应：他邀请小文母子并资助手术，体现了其慈善行为的落实，也使故事有了圆满结局，弘扬了乐于助人的精神。
续写要点：
第一段：
描述 Mr.B 告知小文母子资助消息时他们的反应，如惊喜、感激等。
提及准备手术的相关事宜，如安排手术时间、医院协调等。
第二段：
讲述小文试用信号接收装置时的场景和感受，如听到声音的新奇、对周围环境声音的描述等。
表达小文对未来生活的期待以及对 Mr.B 的感恩之情。
情感线：
小文和母亲起初因手术费用高昂而忧愁无奈，但依然怀揣希望努力生活。得知 Mr.B 资助后转为惊喜与感激。手术前是紧张与期待，试用装置时则充满新奇与兴奋，对未来充满信心并感恩所有帮助过自己的人，情感从压抑逐步走向积极向上，体现了困境中得到帮助后的转变与希望。
故事线：
Mr. B invited Xiaowen and his mom to his office and told them the good news. “We are going to pay for your cochlear implantation surgery completely.” Xiaowen and his mom were stunned at first, then tears welled up in their eyes. They thanked Mr. B profusely. Soon, the hospital was arranged, and Xiaowen was prepared for the surgery. The day before the operation, Xiaowen was a little nervous but also full of anticipation.
One month later, Xiaowen and his mom went to the hospital to try out the signal-receiving device. When the doctor turned on the device, Xiaowen heard a variety of sounds for the first time. He could hear the beeping of the hospital equipment, the footsteps in the corridor, and the voices of people talking. He was so excited and said to his mom, “Mom, I can hear! I can hear your voice clearly now.” His mom hugged him tightly, crying with joy. Xiaowen knew that his life would be completely different from then on, and he was deeply grateful to Mr. B for this new lease on life.
主旨升华句：
“In the face of adversity, a helping hand can be the key that unlocks the door to a new and hopeful future.”（在困境面前，援助之手可以成为开启充满希望的新未来之门的钥匙。）
“Kindness, like a beam of light, pierces through the darkness of misfortune, illuminating the path to a better life.”（善良，如一束光，穿透不幸的黑暗，照亮通往美好生活的道路。）
“Even in the deepest valley of despair, the gift of hope can transform lives and create miracles of gratitude and renewal.”（即使在绝望的最深谷，希望的礼物也能改变生活，创造感恩与新生的奇迹。）
“The power of charity lies not only in the material assistance but also in the restoration of dreams and the revival of spirits.”（慈善的力量不仅在于物质援助，还在于梦想的重拾和精神的重振。）
“When kindness and need converge, a symphony of hope and change is orchestrated, playing a melody of a second chance at life.”（当善良与需求交汇时，希望与改变的交响乐奏响，奏响生命重生的旋律。）
写作示范一：
Mr. B invited Xiaowen and his mom to his office and told them the good news. Xiaowen's mom covered her mouth in shock, and tears streamed down her face. Xiaowen was also visibly excited, his eyes shining. Mr. B explained the details of the assistance and assured them that everything would be taken care of. The family was filled with gratitude and relief. They immediately started preparing for the surgery, with Xiaowen's mom constantly comforting and encouraging him.
One month later, Xiaowen and his mom went to the hospital to try out the signal-receiving device. As the sounds entered his ears, Xiaowen was amazed. He could hear the rustling of the leaves outside the window and the soft whispers of the nurses. He turned to his mom and said, “Mom, it's like a whole new world. I can't wait to experience more.” His mom smiled through her tears, and Xiaowen felt a newfound confidence. He knew that he would now be able to live a more normal life and was determined to make the most of this opportunity. He also made a mental note to pay forward the kindness he had received.
写作示范二：
Mr. B invited Xiaowen and his mom to his office and told them the good 消息. Xiaowen's face lit up with disbelief and joy. His mom hugged Mr. B, thanking him over and over. The next few weeks were a flurry of activity as they got ready for the surgery. Xiaowen was a bit scared but also eager to change his life.
One month later, Xiaowen and his mom went to the hospital to try out the signal-receiving device. Xiaowen's eyes widened as he heard the sounds. He heard the clicking of the doctor's pen and the ringing of a distant phone. He said to his mom, “Mom, I can finally hear you clearly. This is a miracle.” His mom held his hand tightly. Xiaowen was filled with a sense of hope and purpose. He realized that there were still many good people in the world and that he could now face life's challenges with a new perspective. He was looking forward to a future where he could communicate better and pursue his dreams.
读后续写参考答案
Mr. B invited Xiaowen and his mom to his office and told them the good news. He said that they’d like to offer money for the implantation. Surprised but grateful, Xiaowen declined the gesture at first, saying he shouldn’t take it without a reason. “But that’s the only way to restore your hearing. And you can return that favor afterwards if you insist!” Mr. B maintained that this upright and unyielding boy should be helped. Holding his mother’s hand, overwhelmed with gratitude, Xiaowen agreed to receive the offer. The operation, the first part of the implantation, went smoothly. With great anticipation, Xiaowen and his mother were waiting for the day when he could hear.
One month later, Xiaowen and his mom went to the hospital to try out the signal-receiving device. The doctor placed the device around his right ear gently. “Beep!” The signal was sent out. Xiaowen shook slightly as if he’d been struck by electricity. “Xiaowen, can you hear mommy ” Mom softly called his name as instructed. Startled by the new voice, Xiaowen turned around and nodded yes, his throat tightening. Mom breathed a sigh of relief and hugged Xiaowen, happy tears welling up in her eyes. Everyone was touched and immersed in the joy of success. And miracles do happen to those who help themselves.

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