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In a small village in the Philippines, there lived a family of five. The parents, Juan and Maria, had three children: two boys and a girl. They lived in a small house made of bamboo, surrounded by many trees and the sound of the nearby river.
Juan and Maria lived a happy life with their three children: Miguel, Jose and Ana. The eldest son, Miguel, was a hardworking young man who helped his father with the farm work. He was responsible and always took care of his younger brother and sister. The couple always told their children that they were happy as long as the family was together. Though Jose and Ana were too young to understand that, Miguel, who treasured a photo of his family, bore that in mind.
One day, while the family was having dinner, they heard a loud knock on the door. It was the village chief, who had come to deliver some bad news: The village was in danger of being flooded due to heavy rain, and they needed to evacuate (撤离) immediately.
Juan and Maria quickly gathered their children and some essentials, and they set off towards the evacuation center. Before leaving for the center, Miguel took the precious family photo in a hurry. The journey was long and full of danger, with the rain pouring down heavily and the wind beating them violently. The children were scared and tired, but Juan and Maria held their hands to reassure them, telling them that everything was going to be alright.
When they finally reached the evacuation center, they were greeted by other families who had also been forced to leave their homes. The center was crowded and uncomfortable, but the family was grateful to have a roof over their heads and some food to eat.
Days turned into weeks, and Juan and Maria grew restless. They missed their home and their farm, and they were worried about what would happen to their crops. Several weeks later, the day came when the floodwaters slowly receded (消退).
注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Juan and Maria decided to take their children back home. __________________________________________
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“No! We still have something precious,” said Miguel. _____________________________________________
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文章大意：菲律宾一个小村庄的五口之家原本生活幸福。因暴雨村庄面临洪水威胁，他们匆忙撤离到疏散中心。数周后洪水退去，父母决定带孩子回家，而疏散中心的生活让他们归心似箭，同时也担心家中农场和庄稼状况。
伏笔及续写回应：
伏笔：Miguel 珍视家庭照片并牢记父母关于家庭团聚就幸福的话。续写回应：在回家途中遭遇危险时，Miguel 想起照片所代表的家庭意义，坚定信念，带领家人克服困难，体现了照片对他的激励以及家庭观念在他心中的重要性。
伏笔：村庄因暴雨面临洪水危险而撤离。续写回应：回家路上桥梁被冲毁，这是洪水造成的后续影响，增加了回家的难度和危险性，使故事产生新的危机与挑战。
伏笔：疏散中心拥挤且不舒适。续写回应：这促使父母急切想要回家，推动了回家这一情节发展，也为后文遇到危险时他们的情绪变化做了铺垫。
伏笔：孩子们在撤离途中又累又怕。续写回应：回家路上再次面临危险时，孩子们的恐惧被唤起，但也在家人相互鼓励下逐渐勇敢起来，展现了家庭凝聚力在困难时刻的作用。
伏笔：Juan 和 Maria 担心家中庄稼。续写回应：他们急于回家查看庄稼情况，所以决定冒险踏上回家之路，引出后续在回家途中的一系列经历。
续写要点：
第一段：
描述回家途中的景象，如洪水过后的破败、道路的难行等。
讲述他们遇到的困难，比如桥梁被冲毁等，以及家人的反应。
第二段：
说明 Miguel 所说的 “珍贵的东西” 是家庭照片，强调照片对家庭的意义。
描述 Miguel 如何凭借对家庭的信念和照片的激励，带领家人克服困难继续前行。
情感线：
开始一家人在村庄生活时幸福美满。面临洪水撤离时，孩子们害怕、父母虽镇定但也有担忧。在疏散中心，父母因思念家和担心庄稼而焦虑不安。决定回家后，起初是对家的渴望与期待，途中遇到危险时则充满紧张与恐惧，在 Miguel 提及家庭照片后，大家又重新燃起希望与勇气，情感随着故事发展跌宕起伏，始终围绕家庭这一核心，展现出家庭在困难时刻给予成员的力量与支撑。
故事线：
Juan and Maria decided to take their children back home. The way back was not easy. The once familiar path was now muddy and full of debris left by the flood. They walked slowly, carefully stepping over fallen branches and rocks. When they reached the river, they found that the bridge had been washed away. Juan and Maria were dismayed. The children started to cry, fearing that they would never get home.
“No! We still have something precious,” said Miguel. He took out the family photo. “As long as we are together, like in this photo, we can overcome anything. This photo is a reminder of our love and unity.” With newfound determination, Miguel led the way. They found a shallow part of the river to cross. Juan carried Ana on his back, and Maria held Jose's hand tightly. Miguel helped them balance. Step by step, they made it across the river and continued their journey home, with the photo giving them the strength to face any obstacle.
主旨升华句：
“In the tempest of life, the family is the lighthouse that guides us through the darkest waters, its love an unyielding beacon.”（在生活的暴风雨中，家庭是指引我们穿越最黑暗水域的灯塔，其爱如永不熄灭的灯塔。）
“A family's bond, like a golden thread, weaves through the fabric of adversity, holding its members together against all odds.”（家庭的纽带，如金线般穿梭于逆境的织锦中，使成员们在重重困难下紧密相连。）
“When the floods of trouble rise, it is the ark of family that shelters us, and the memories within it that give us the courage to sail on.”（当烦恼的洪水涌起时，家庭是庇护我们的方舟，其中的回忆给予我们继续航行的勇气。）
“The family photo, a snapshot of love, becomes a talisman in times of distress, empowering us to reclaim our home and our hope.”（家庭照片，爱的快照，在困苦时刻成为护身符，赋予我们夺回家园与希望的力量。）
“In the journey of life, the family is the compass that points us towards home, even when the path is obscured by the storms of fate.”（在人生旅途中，家庭是指向家的罗盘，即使道路被命运的风暴遮蔽。）
写作示范一：
Juan and Maria decided to take their children back home. The journey was a desolate one. The fields were flooded, and many houses had collapsed. As they walked, they could see the sad remains of their neighbors' lives. They came across a huge tree that had fallen across the road. Juan tried to move it, but it was too heavy. The children looked at their father with worry.
“No! We still have something precious,” said Miguel. He showed them the family photo. “This is our strength. Our family has always been together, and we will get through this. We can find another way.” Inspired by Miguel, they walked around the tree and through the muddy fields. They helped each other over the difficult parts. The photo in Miguel's hand seemed to give them an extra boost of energy. They knew that as long as they had each other and the memory of their happy family, they could face any hardship.
写作示范二：
Juan and Maria decided to take their children back home. Along the way, the landscape was a mess. The roads were almost unrecognizable. They had to climb over piles of rubble. When they reached a stream, they realized it had become a small river due to the flood. Maria was hesitant, but Juan said they had to try.
“No! We still have something precious,” said Miguel. He pulled out the family photo. “Our family is the most important thing. This photo shows our love. We can't give up.” Miguel tied a rope around his waist and the other end to a tree. He then helped his family cross the river one by one. The water was cold and strong, but they held on to each other. With the family photo as their motivation, they continued on their way home, more determined than ever to rebuild their lives and cherish their family.
One possible version:
Juan and Maria decided to take their children back home. The return journey was full of silence and worries. When they finally arrived at the village, they were depressed to see a scene of devastation: Their crops had been destroyed by the flood. Worse still, their house was in ruins and their possessions were washed away. Overwhelmed by emotion, Maria fell onto her knees and burst into tears. Though he wanted to comfort his wife, Juan couldn’t help crying out, “We’ve lost everything!”
“No!We still have something precious,” said Miguel. Then Miguel showed the family photo to his parents and added, “Everything will be OK as long as we are together. Remember ” Miguel looked at his parents with a determined look. “Yes!” Juan responded and turned to his wife, who was smiling. The couple were delighted that their eldest son remembered and reminded them of what mattered most for a family. They held their children’s hands tightly, believing that they could rebuild their home and farm with joint efforts.

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