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(共29张PPT)
learning objectives
To read a descriptive paragraph about Ireland.
To write about a place by describing different senses(感官） and using figures of speech(修辞）-- personification（拟人）.
enjoy the beauty of Ireland
How would you describe Ireland
一个不了解自己历史，起源和文化的民族，就如同一棵无根之树。
Big Ben
Westminster Bridge
Reading for Writing
Lead in
Listen to a piece of Irish music
Something about Ireland
Ireland has an incredible history and connection to music. The Emerald Isle is known for her singers and songwriters.
One of the greatest English-language poets of the 20th century.
He received the Nobel Prize for Literature in 1923.
When you are old
By William Butler Yeats
When you are old and grey and full of sleep,
And nodding by the fire, take down this book,
And slowly read, and dream of the soft look
Your eyes had once, and of their shadows deep;
How many loved your moments of glad grace,
And loved your beauty with love false or true,
But one man loved the pilgrim soul in you,
And loved the sorrows of your changing face;
And bending down beside the glowing bars,
Murmur, a little sadly, how Love fled
And paced upon the mountains overhead
And hid his face amid a crowd of stars.
William Butler Yeats
Something about Ireland
Reading for structure
Introduction
Ending(suggestion)
Body(senses)
Read the text and discuss the questions in pairs
1.What makes the Irish countryside exciting and inspiring
Its beauty and how it offers something for all the scenes.
课本P44 Read the text and discuss the questions in pairs
2.What are the best ways to experience some Irish traditions and culture
By stopping by a village pub and relaxing with a drink and traditional meal while listening to music and watching dance.
课本P44 Read the text and discuss the questions in pairs
3. What is the meaning of “breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers while birds greet the new day with their morning song”
It means to not just smell but also breathe in the smell of fresh flowers early in the morning as the birds sing their first song of the new day.
课本P44 Read the text and discuss the questions in pairs
4. What are the best ways to experience Chinese traditions and customs
By travelling to different places and using all your senses to experience everything and by interacting with local people.
课本P44 Read the text and discuss the questions in pairs
Read for details
What does Ireland’s beautiful coutryside have to offer
Tip: Something for each of the senses.
hearing smell taste touch sight
Appreciation
The peaceful landscape of the “Emerald IsIe” and its many green counties is a true feast for the eyes, with its rolling green hills dotted with sheep and cattle.
a true feast for the eyes 视觉盛宴
be dotted with 布满；星罗棋布于
a true feast for the eyes; rolling green hills dotted with sheep and cattle
Emerald Isle
different scenes
sight
Appreciation
And down by the sea, the roar of the ocean waves and cries of the seabirds make up the music of the coast.
burst into roars of laughter/cheers爆发出大笑声/欢呼声
make up the music/ symphony of ....奏响了...交响乐
howling 怒吼声
tinkling 叮咚声
murmuring 低语声
rustling 沙沙声
chatter 打颤声
buzzing 嗡嗡声
humming 哼唱声
personification
personification
a true feast for the eyes; rolling green hills dotted with sheep and cattle
Emerald Isle
down by the sea
the roar of the ocean waves, cries of the seabirds
hearing
sight
different scenes
personification
课本P44 What words does the writer use to describe sensory details
sight: feast for the eyes
hearing: roar, cries, music of the coast, morning song
touch: feel the sun on your skin
smell: sweet scent
taste: delicious
1. 课本P45 Choose one of your favourite places and tell a partner why you think it is interesting, exciting, or surprising.
2. 课本P45 Use the questions below to describe the place you have chosen.
What can you see
What can you hear
How does the place feel
What can you smell
What can you taste there
What does the place make you think or feel
Introduction Make the reader eager to read your writing
A striking image
Something surprising
A quote or question
In my village, every day starts with a “fire”! The houses turn red as the sun rises above the mountains.
3. 课本P45 Use your answers to draft a passage about the place.
3. 课本P45 Use your answers to draft a passage about the place.
Body Transitions
Help the reader follow your ideas
Details and examples
Use sensory details Do not use general words Give examples
In the morning / afternoon / evening；First, second, etc.；
I learnt a lot. What did you learn
There were many things… What
Some people… Who
如何描述你喜欢的地方
描述一个漂亮或者特殊的地方总体上属于介绍事物的说明文。它的要点内容可包括:地理位置、面积、人口、气候状况、著名的景点以及与众不同之处等。
写说明文,时态应以现在时为主，人称以第三人称为主。
Reading for writing
谋篇布局
开头:介绍旅游景点的基本信息，如地理位置、人文环境等;
主体:具体介绍其旅游特色。不宜过多介绍景点。我们可以介绍一下景点的历史、特色以及它在当地的地位等。要注意安排好说明顺序，描述要详略得当;
结尾:总结陈述以吸引读者前去旅游。
坐落于
以…著称，被认为是
宜人的气候（气候宜人）
一座有着悠久历史的城市
不仅……而且
风景名胜
视觉盛宴
给…留下深刻印象
点缀，布满
更好的是
值得做某事
爱上
be located in
be known as
pleasant climate
a city with a long history
not only…but also
places of interest
a true feast for the eyes
leave a deep impression on
be dotted with
better yet
be worth doing sth
fall in love
_____ 是一座美丽城市。（主系表）
_____ is a beautiful city.
_____ 是一个有着悠久历史的美丽城市。（主系表+with复合结构）
_____ is a beautiful city with a long history .
_____ 是一个有着悠久历史的美丽城市，近年来发展迅速。
_____ is a beautiful city with a long history and it has been developing rapidly in recent years.
引入要介绍的地点常用句式
It’s known as ……
Discuss the draft in groups:
Give your comments to your partner and ask him/her to revise the draft.
Homework
Complete your writing and make a class book about your favourite places.

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