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第1讲　Unit 1—Unit 3
(含Starter Units)
七年级上册
话题3　自我管理
2025年中考英语写作专题复习
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单元话题整合
维度1　自我认识 八上　Unit 3　I’m more outgoing than my sister.
维度2　自我提升 九全　Unit 4　I used to be afraid of the dark.
维度3　自我管理 九全　Unit 7　Teenagers should be allowed to choose
their own clothes.
[2024贵州中考]成长的道路上,我们努力改变以提升自我。假如你是李华,你校英语广播站正在开展主题为“The Change Made Me...”(改变让我……)的征文活动。请参考图文信息,积极投稿。
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典例
要求:
1.补全标题;
2.内容积极向上,不少于80词;
3.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
The Change Made Me 　　　　(Better/Improve/...)
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主题:改变让我　　　　　　　　　　　　　
人称:第一人称为主
时态:一般过去时为主 文体:记叙文
拔高点:经历与感受
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A.【教材短语】
1. 过去常常　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
2.　 　　　　　　　　某人脸红
3. 敢在人群前唱歌
4.　 　　　　　　　　得到很多关注
5. 小心做某事
6. 和朋友闲逛
7. 通往成功的路
8.　 　　　　　　　　放弃
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used to
one’s face turns red
dare to sing in front of crowds
get tons of attention
be careful to do sth.
hang out with friends
give up
the road to success
9. 成功登顶,出人头地
10.　　　　　　　　　在……有困难
11. 缺席
12.　　　　　　　　　亲自
13. 以……自豪
14.　　　　　　　 　　被允许自己做决定
15. 被允许自己做选择
16.　　　　　　　　　没门
17. 强烈意愿
18.　　　　　　　　　坚持
make it to the top
have difficulty in　
be absent from
in person
take pride in
be allowed to make one’s own decision
be allowed to make one’s own choice　
no way
a strong will
stick to
19. 意识到
20.　　　　　　　　　不反对
21. 最终,结果
22.　　　　　　　　　只要
23.　　　　　　　　　显现出来
be aware of
have nothing against
end up
as long as
bring out
B.【高分表达积累】
谚语:
·Facts speak louder than words.
·Hard work pays off.
·A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step.
·Nothing is impossible to a willing heart.
·One today is worth two tomorrows.
·Never say die.
·Success belongs to the persevering(坚韧不拔的人).
·The early bird catches the worm.
·Time lost cannot be won again.
·Pride goes before, and shame comes after.
·Think twice before you do.
·Everyone has his price.
·All roads lead to Rome.
·Opportunities always come to those who are prepared.
开头句:
·The journey to success is not smooth. It is full of challenges and
difficulties. We should be brave to face them.
·The beauty of life lies not only in enjoyment, but also in experience.
·...is a treasure, but ...is the key to it.
中间句:
·There are no secrets to success. It is the result of preparation, hard work
and learning from failure.
·Behind every successful man there are many unsuccessful years.
·Failure is something that everyone experiences at some point in life.
·It is a part of our growth and learning process.
·If you work hard, your efforts will pay off sooner or later.
结尾句:
·In conclusion, ...is not the end but a new beginning.
1.As she got better, she dared to sing in front of her class, and then for the whole school.
仿写:随着年龄的增长,我们意识到努力工作的重要性。
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2.I didn’t use to be popular in school, but now I get tons of attention everywhere I go.
仿写:通过努力工作,我们在个人成长和发展方面取得了巨大的进步。

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As we grow older, we realize the importance of hard work.
Through hard work, we make tons of progress in our personal growth and development.
A.【教材句型仿写】
3.Hanging out with friends is almost impossible for me now because there are always guards around me.
仿写:从错误中吸取教训是个人成长和进步的关键。

4.Only then will I have a chance to achieve my dream.
仿写:只有相信自己,我们才能实现目标。

Learning from our mistakes is key to personal growth and progress.
Only by believing in ourselves can we achieve our goals.
The Change Made Me Confident 　　①In my journey of growth, I experienced a significant change and it made me more confident. 　　②Last year, I was very shy and often afraid to speak in public. One day, my English teacher encouraged me to join the　school’s speech competition. At first, I was unsure, but with her support, I decided to give it a try. ①用定语从句改写句子。
②用found it difficult to改写句子。
B.【句子升格】
In my journey of growth, I experienced a significant change that/which made me more confident.
Last year, I was very shy and found it difficult to speak in public.
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During my preparation, ③I practiced every day and received a lot of help from my friends and family. They believed in me, which boosted my confidence. On the day of the competition, I felt nervous but remembered everyone’s encouragement. ④I delivered my speech and surprisingly won second prize!
③用put all effort into改写句子。
④用with all my heart修饰句子增加文章感情。
I put all effort into practicing and received a lot of help from my friends and family.
I delivered my speech with all my heart and surprisingly won second prize!
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　　This change made me realize that with determination and support, I could overcome my fears and become more confident. It was a valuable lesson that I will carry with me throughout my life.⑤It not only improved my public speaking skills but also made me a stronger and more confident person.
⑤Not only位于句首,改成倒装句。
Not only did it improve my public speaking skills but also it made me a stronger and more confident person.
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　　　[2024云南昆明安宁一模]亲爱的同学们,我们都向往积极健康、乐观向上的生活。通过正确合理的自我学习、自我管理和自我提升,我们都能遇见更好的自己。请以“How to Become a Better Self”为题,用英语写一篇短文,叙述你的一次成长经历及感悟或收获,谈谈如何成为更好的自己。
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要求:
1.根据所给题目,写一篇短文,词数不少于80;
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁;
3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名。
How to Become a Better Self
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请在该区域进行审题和写作内容构思。
1.审主题:　　　　 　　　　 2.画思维导图(参考定三段导图) 　
审文体:　　　
审人称:　　 　
审时态:　　 　
审拔高点:　 　　
请根据以上草稿,在该区域书写正文篇章,注意书写和卷面整洁度。
How to Become a Better Self
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书写完后,根据表格对文章进行检查。
内容 1.包含所有要点(成长经历、感悟、收获和方法)
2.增加细节,意思表达完整且清晰
3.词数不少于80
结构 1.有合适的开头点明主题,中间介绍经历和感悟,结尾总结方法
2.有合适的衔接词,句子之间、段落之间过渡自然
语法 1.时态正确:以一般现在时和一般过去时为主
2.语法结构和词汇拼写正确
书写 1.格式正确
2.书写规范
3.卷面整洁,没有或仅有少量涂改痕迹
基础范文
How to Become a Better Self
Dear classmates, we all want to live a positive and healthy life. By learning, managing ourselves and improving step by step, we can become better versions of ourselves.
I want to share my own experience. Last year, I had trouble managing my time. I was always busy with homework and activities. One day, I decided to make a timetable to organize my tasks. At first, it was hard to follow, but after some time, I got used to it. This change helped me improve my grades and gave me more free time to relax.
From this experience, I learned that good planning is very important. To become a better self, we need to set clear goals, stay focused and ask for help when needed. Remember, every small step towards improvement counts. Keep trying and never give up!
高级范文
How to Become a Better Self
Dear classmates, we all want to live a positive and healthy life. By learning, managing ourselves and improving step by step, we can become better versions of ourselves.
Allow me to share a personal experience. Last year, I faced challenges in managing my time effectively. My days were filled with homework and various activities. One day, I decided to make a timetable to organize my tasks. At first, it was hard to follow, but after some time, I got used to it. This change helped me improve my grades and gave me more free time to relax.
From this experience, I learned that good planning is very important. To become a better self, we need to set clear goals, stay focused and ask for help when needed. Remember, every small step towards improvement counts. Becoming a better version of ourselves, in my eyes, is a life long journey. Keep trying and never give up!
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