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假设你是明启中学高三学生李华，你所在的学校即将举行主题为“亲情”的摄影展， 邀请同学们提交一张自己拍摄的照片参展。请你写一封投稿信件给组委会，内容须包括：（1）描述该照片背后的亲情故事；（2）你选择该照片参展的理由。
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一、写作提纲
第一段：引出照片投稿
简要介绍自己的身份（明启中学高三学生李华）以及写信的目的（为学校 “亲情” 摄影展投稿），表达对活动的期待和参与的热情，引起组委会的注意，为下文描述照片做铺垫。
第二段：描述照片背后的亲情故事
详细叙述照片拍摄的时间、地点和场景，如在某个特殊的日子（生日、节日、生病时等），或者日常平凡但充满温情的时刻（家人一起做饭、散步、等待等）。
生动刻画人物的表情、动作和神态，展现亲情的温暖与细腻，例如父母关切的眼神、温柔的拥抱，祖辈慈祥的笑容等。
描述自己当时的感受和内心的触动，突出亲情对自己的深刻影响，使故事更具感染力和情感共鸣。
第三段：阐述选择该照片参展的理由
强调照片所蕴含的亲情主题的独特性和普遍性，说明它如何能够代表亲情的珍贵与美好，引起观众的情感共鸣，让不同的人都能从照片中找到自己与家人相处的影子和回忆。
分析照片的艺术价值，如构图、色彩、光影等元素的巧妙运用，如何增强了照片的表现力和感染力，使其不仅仅是一张记录生活的照片，更是一件具有审美价值的艺术作品，适合在展览中展示，吸引观众的目光并传递亲情的力量。
二、语言积累
I am Li Hua, a senior three student at Mingqi Middle School, writing with great enthusiasm to submit my photograph for the upcoming "Family Love" photography exhibition.
The photograph I am presenting was captured during a memorable moment that encapsulated the profound bond within my family.
It was a sunny afternoon, and the golden rays of the sun streamed through the window, casting a warm glow on the faces of my family members as we gathered around the dining table, sharing laughter and stories.
My father's eyes were filled with pride as he looked at me, while my mother's gentle smile radiated love and care, making that ordinary moment an extraordinary one.
The soft hues of the sunset in the background added a touch of serenity and beauty to the overall composition, enhancing the emotional impact of the scene.
This photo is not merely a visual record; it is a testament to the unspoken yet deeply felt love that exists within my family, a love that has been the source of my strength and comfort.
I firmly believe that this photograph has the potential to strike a chord with the viewers, as it encapsulates the universal and timeless theme of family love, which is an integral part of everyone's life.
Its artistic elements, such as the balanced composition and the harmonious color palette, make it a visually appealing piece that can effectively convey the essence of the moment and the emotions associated with it.
By exhibiting this photo, I hope to share this precious moment of my family with the school community and inspire others to cherish and celebrate the love within their own families.
I am truly honored to have the opportunity to contribute to this exhibition and look forward to seeing how my photograph can add to the collection of heartwarming stories and images that celebrate the beauty of family love.
三、写作示范
第一篇
Dear Committee Members,
I am Li Hua, a student from Mingqi Middle School. I am writing to submit my photograph for the "Family Love" exhibition.
The photo was taken on a chilly winter morning. I was about to leave for school, feeling a bit down because of the approaching exams. As I opened the door, I saw my grandmother standing there with a thermos in her hand. She said, "I made you some ginger soup. Drink it to keep warm and do well in your studies." Her wrinkled face was filled with concern and love. I was deeply moved and took a photo of her at that moment. The steam rising from the thermos and the cold air outside created a contrast that made the scene even more touching.
I choose this photo because it shows the simple yet powerful love of a grandmother. It is a common scene in many families, but it holds great significance. The love and care in her eyes are palpable, and I believe it can remind people of the small but meaningful gestures of love from their own families. Moreover, the composition of the photo, with the focus on my grandmother and the thermos, against the backdrop of the cold morning, is aesthetically pleasing. It can draw the viewers in and make them feel the warmth of family love.
Thank you for considering my submission.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
第二篇
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Li Hua, a senior three student. I am excited to participate in the "Family Love" photography exhibition by submitting my photo.
This photo was snapped during a family trip to the beach. It was a beautiful day, and we were all enjoying the sun and the waves. My younger sister, who had been learning to swim, was a bit scared to go into the deeper water. My father, without hesitation, took her hand and led her gently into the sea, while my mother and I watched from the shore. The smiles on their faces and the trust between them were so precious. I quickly captured that moment. The blue sky, the clear water, and the figures of my family members formed a harmonious and beautiful picture.
I selected this photo because it represents the support and protection within a family. It shows how family members are there for each other in times of fear and hesitation. The bright colors and the dynamic scene make it an eye-catching photo. It can not only display the happiness and love of my family but also convey the positive energy of family unity. I am confident that it can touch the hearts of the viewers and make them appreciate the importance of family love.
Best regards,
Li Hua
第三篇
Dear Committee,
I am Li Hua, a high school student at Mingqi Middle School. I am writing to offer my photograph for the "Family Love" exhibition.
The picture was taken on my birthday last year. I came home from school, expecting a normal day. But when I opened the door, I was greeted by a room filled with balloons and a big cake on the table. My parents and my older brother were standing there, wearing party hats and shouting "Surprise!" Their excited expressions and the warm atmosphere of the room made me feel extremely happy. I took a photo to remember that wonderful moment. The colorful balloons and the bright candles on the cake added a festive and loving touch to the photo.
I decided to submit this photo because it embodies the joy and celebration of family love. It shows the efforts my family made to make my day special. The photo is full of life and energy, which can easily attract the attention of the viewers. It can also make them recall the happy times they spent with their families. I believe it has the power to spread the positive message of family love and make people cherish those precious moments with their loved ones.
Thank you for your attention.
Warm regards,
Li Hua
【示例】
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Wu Lei, a photography enthusiast. When I heard the theme of this exhibition, this photo instantly crossed my mind, which was taken in June 2023 at Pudong International Airport when my older brother was back from the US for his last summer vacation.
This summer was special for us, as the pandemic had separated our family for three years. I still remember the moment I saw my brother coming out from the arrival gate. I waved both of my arms at him, screaming out of pleasure. He hopped ecstatically and galloped like a pony toward us and tried his best to bring my parents and grandparents into his arms. My camera captured the bear hug that everyone had longed for fervently for three years.
I’ve taken many photos of my family, but this one is the best in my heart, not for its artistic quality but for the overwhelming emotions and the love between family members. I appreciate your time reading my story and considering my picture.
Sincerely,
Li Hua

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