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2025年高考英语一轮复习强化训练 专题15 写作（一）小作文
一、高考真题
1．（2024·新高考Ⅰ卷） 假定你是李华，上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：
(1)你完成的作品；
(2)你的感想。
注意：
(1)写作词数应为80个左右；
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
I'm writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Chris,
I'm writing to share an extraordinary experience from last Friday when our class had an art lesson in the park. You cannot imagine how meaningful and interesting it was!
We were tasked to draw or paint something that impressed us most. Inspired by the fantastic scenery, I decided to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the park's pond, surrounded by blooming flowers.
The entire experience was incredibly refreshing. Being surrounded by nature not only sparked my creativity but also offered a much-needed break from the usual hustle and bustle of school life. I felt a deep sense of peace as I painted.
In a word, it was not just an art class; it was a moment of connection with nature that I truly cherished. How have your classes been lately I would love to hear about them. Take care and write back soon
Best regards,
Li Hua
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文
【解析】【分析】本题是一封英文邮件，要求考生以李华的名义，和英国朋友Chris分享上周五在公园上的一堂美术课，属于提纲类作文。首先，为了开篇明确并吸引读者的兴趣，我们可以直接提及这次特别的美术课活动； 接着，描述自己完成的作品。由于篇幅有限，我们应简洁而具体地介绍作品内容； 然后，表达自己的感想。感想部分可以围绕这次活动的特别之处、自己的收获或情感体验来展开； 最后，按照邮件的格式，以礼貌的结束语结束信件 。写这篇文章时，要注意文中给出的细节都要包括，不要遗漏。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力，需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】 这篇范文生动地描绘了在公园上美术课的特殊体验。作者通过具体描述自己的作品——一幅水彩画，展示了公园中小桥与周围盛开花朵的美丽景色，使读者能够直观地感受到现场的氛围。同时，作者还表达了在自然环境中创作时的轻松愉悦和内心的平静，使这段经历更加鲜活和感人。 本书面表达要点齐全，上下文连贯，使用一定数量的句式结构，让句子更加生动丰满，同时运用了许多高级词汇个固定短语，提高文章的档次，体现了对英语的熟练的驾驭能力。例如：I'm writing to share an extraordinary experience from last Friday when our class had an art lesson in the park和We were tasked to draw or paint something that impressed us most都运用了定语从句；You cannot imagine how meaningful and interesting it was!运用了感叹句充当的宾语从句； Inspired by the fantastic scenery, I decided to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the park's pond, surrounded by blooming flowers运用了非谓语动词作状语。 此外，作者还以一句"How have your classes been lately I would love to hear about them."巧妙地过渡到询问对方的情况，增加了邮件的互动性和友好氛围。整体而言，这篇范文结构清晰，语言流畅，情感真挚，是一篇很好的英语作文。
2．（2023·浙江）上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。请为校英文报写篇报道，内容包括：
1）活动的过程；
2）收获与感想。
注意：
1）写作词数应为80左右；
2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Getting to Know the Plants Around Us
【答案】Getting to Know the Plants Around Us
Last weekend, I participated in a "Getting to Know the Plants Around Us" activity organised by our Students' Union.
The activity began with a lecture by a local botanist, who taught us about the different characteristics and uses of various plant species. We then went on a natural walk to observe and collect samples of different plants. Throughout the event, I was struck by the incredible variety of plants that exist in our world and learned about plants that are used for medical purposes, as well as those that provide food and shelter for animals. I also gained a greater appreciation for the role that plants play in maintaining the balance of our ecosystem.
Overall, it was a valuable and enriching experience.
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生为校英文报写篇报道。写作背景：上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。 写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）活动的过程；2）收获与感想。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：The activity began with a lecture by a local botanist, who taught us about the different characteristics and uses of various plant species. 运用了非限制性定语从句；Throughout the event, I was struck by the incredible variety of plants that exist in our world and learned about plants that are used for medical purposes, as well as those that provide food and shelter for animals. 运用了被动语态，限制性定语从句；I also gained a greater appreciation for the role that plants play in maintaining the balance of our ecosystem.运用了限制性定语从句。
3．（2023·全国甲卷）你们学校正举办主题为"用英文讲中国故事"的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.人物简介及事迹；
2.意义或启示。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.题目已为你写好。
【答案】One possible version:
Confucius is a well-known figure in Chinese history. His teachings emphasized the importance of moral values, respect for elders, and social harmony. Confucius traveled throughout the country, imparting his wisdom to countless disciples and leaving a profound impact on Chinese society.
The significance of Confucius cannot be overstated. His teachings shaped the moral and ethical foundation of Chinese culture, fostering respect for authority, harmonious relationships, and the pursuit of knowledge. Even today, his ideas continue to guide individuals and communities in China and beyond.
Confucius's life offers valuable lessons. He stressed the self- cultivation, respect for elders, and the pursuit of knowledge, which serves as a guiding light in our fast-paced and interconnected world. His teachings remind us of the importance of integrity, compassion, and social responsibilty.
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿。写作背景：你们学校正举办主题为"用英文讲中国故事"的征文活动。 写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括： 1.人物简介及事迹；2.意义或启示。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：Confucius traveled throughout the country, imparting his wisdom to countless disciples and leaving a profound impact on Chinese society.运用了现在分词作状语；The significance of Confucius cannot be overstated. 运用了被动语态；Confucius's life offers valuable lessons. He stressed the self- cultivation, respect for elders, and the pursuit of knowledge, which serves as a guiding light in our fast-paced and interconnected world. 运用了非限制性定语从句。
4．（2024·全国甲卷） 英语课要求做课堂展示，请你根据所给图片，以 Development of Transport in China为题写一篇发言稿。
注意：
1.词数100左右;
2.题目和首句已为你写好。
Development of Transport in China
From the vehicle of horses to today's convenient transport, Chinese transport has an enormous development.
【答案】Development of Transport in China
From the vehicle of horses to today's convenient transport, Chinese transport has an enormous development. In recent years, we have witnessed remarkable advancements in various modes of transportation.
One such innovation is the shared bicycle, which has revolutionized urban travel. These bicycles are easily accessible and environmentally friendly, encouraging people to adopt a healthier and more sustainable lifestyle. Another significant development is the high-speed rail network. Connecting cities across the country, the high-speed trains offer fast and comfortable travel, significantly reducing travel time. This has greatly enhanced inter-city connectivity and promoted economic development. Moreover, the introduction of new energy vehicles has been a game-changer in the automotive industry. These vehicles run on clean energy, reducing emissions and contributing to a greener environment.
In conclusion, the development of transport in China has brought significant benefits to society, improving convenience, promoting sustainability, and driving economic growth.
【知识点】命题作文；文字式应用文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇英文发言稿，要求考生根据所给的三幅关于共享单车、新能源汽车和高铁的图片，以 Development of Transport in China为题写一篇发言稿，介绍我国公共交通的快速发展。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力，需要注意紧扣文章主题。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本书面表达需要要点齐全，上下文连贯，还需使用一定数量的句式结构，让句子更加生动丰满，同时尽可能运用了许多高级词汇个固定短语，以提高文章的档次，体现对英语的熟练的驾驭能力。可参考使用下列句型和结构，例如：Firstly, shared bicycles have become a popular choice in cities, providing an eco-friendly and cost-effective way to travel short distances和Secondly, the high-speed train network has revolutionized long-distance travel, significantly reducing travel time across the country都运用了非谓语动词短语作状语；The public transport in China, which benefits us a great deal, helps us in various ways 运用了非限制性定语从句；Without shared bicycles，high-speed trains and new energy vehicles，not only would our environment be seriously polluted, but also it would bring much inconvenience to us运用了虚拟语气和部分倒装结构。
5．（2024·浙江）第一节请你写一篇短文向校英文报"Sports and Health"栏目投稿，向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动，内容包括：1. 介绍这项运动；2. 说明推荐理由。
注意： 1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答：
Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody!
【答案】One possible version:
Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody!
Everybody! Are you tired of sitting in class all day How about incorporating some physical activity into your daily routine One great option is the "Stand Up and Stretch" exercise. This simple routine involves standing up from your desk, stretching your arms, legs and back, and taking a few deep breaths. It's a quick and easy way to get your blood flowing and re-energize your body and mind. This exercise is recommended for several reasons.
First, it helps to combat the negative effects of prolonged sitting, such as back pain and stiffness. Second, it can improve your focus and concentration, making it easier to stay engaged in class. Lastly, it promotes a healthy and active lifestyle, which is essential for overall well-being.
So, next time you feel a bit sluggish during class, remember to stand up and stretch! It's a small change that can make a big difference in your day.
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生写一篇短文向校英文报"Sports and Health"栏目投稿，向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动 向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括： 1. 介绍这项运动；2. 说明推荐理由。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如： This simple routine involves standing up from your desk, stretching your arms, legs and back, and taking a few deep breaths.运用了动名词作宾语； It's a quick and easy way to get your blood flowing and re-energize your body and mind.运用了it作形式主语； This exercise is recommended for several reasons.运用了被动语态；Lastly, it promotes a healthy and active lifestyle, which is essential for overall well-being.运用了非限制性定语从句；So, next time you feel a bit sluggish during class, remember to stand up and stretch! 运用了时间状语从句，祈使句；It's a small change that can make a big difference in your day.运用了强调句。
6．（2023·新高考Ⅱ卷）假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 说明问题；
2. 提出建议。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan, I'm Li Hua from Class 3. …… Yours sincerely, Li Hua
【答案】Dear Ryan,
I'm Li Hua from Class 3. I think it's not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training after class. The reasons are as follows.
To begin with, randomly pairing up students may lead to unbalanced language abilities within the groups. This can hold up the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve. Besides, students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don't get along with or have difficulty communicating with.
My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners. This way, everyone can feel more comfortable practicing and improving their spoken English together.
Thank you for considering my suggestion.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇英文建议信，格式为：一般开头应该先是DearMr/Miss，然后就是正文，说明具体问题，然后提出建议，感谢并写上署名。要求考生以校李华 的身份写一封邮件给外教Ryan提建议。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文。写这篇文章时，要注意文中给出的细节都要包括，不要遗漏。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。本文的人称是第一、三人称；时态是一般现在时；文章可以分为共分三段：
第一段：开头：写信的目的（将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题）；
第二段：正文：说明问题（可能每组能力不均阻碍进步；可能每组同学间感情不太融洽）；
第三段：结尾：我的建议（可以按口语能力和学生自愿来分组），然后表示感谢。
【点评】书面表达要求要点齐全，上下文连贯，并使用一定数量的句式结构，让句子更加生动丰满，同时能够运用一些高级词汇pair up，hold up the progress of students，less motivated， 和固定短语The reasons are as follows，have difficulty communicating with，group students based on their language abilities提高文章的档次，体现对英语的熟练的驾驭能力。
7．（2023·全国乙卷）学校英报组织同学们分享自己在假期中学到的新技能，请你以此为主题写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：
1. 简要描述；
2. 体验和感受。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 题目已为你写好。
【答案】The arrival of the holiday gave me a brief break from the tense study life. Therefore, I decided to cook dinner for my parents, and they can enjoy a delicious dinner after a hard day's work. But the problem was that I couldn't cook at all.
The first time I cooked, I decided to make a soup by using mushrooms, eggplants and beef. To ensure my success, I first searched for relevant recipes online. After cleaning the materials mentioned above, I cut them into pieces respectively. Next, I put the beef in the boiling water at first and then the mushrooms and eggplants. With the help of the recipes, I finished it within two hours. My parents were greatly surprised when they tried my delicious soup.
I'm proud of myself and confident that I can cook more tasty food in the future. What a perfect holiday!
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生写一篇短文投稿。写作背景：学校英报组织同学们分享自己在假期中学到的新技能 。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1. 简要描述；2. 体验和感受。考生需要根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），并进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。最后连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点评】本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
8．（2022·新高考Ⅰ卷）假定你是校广播站英语节目"Talk and Talk"的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括：
1）节目介绍；
2）访谈的时间和话题。
注意：
1）写作词数应为80左右;
2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Caroline, …… Yours sincerely, Li Hua
【答案】Dear Caroline,
I'm writing to invite you to be on our broadcast "Talk and Talk". Let me inform you of more details.
"Talk and Talk", started in 2015, has been voted to be the most popular programme among students for 5 years in a row. In the show, we often invite a special guest to share thoughts about recent events. It's our great honour to have you on the air from 12:15 to 12:35 next Monday，during which you will talk about ways to deal with stress as the college entrance examination draws near.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以 校广播站英语节目"Talk and Talk"的负责人李华的身份， 外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。 写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括： 节目介绍；访谈的时间和话题。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：I'm writing to invite you to be on our broadcast "Talk and Talk".我写信邀请你参加我们的广播“谈话和谈话”。运用了不定式作目的状语和宾语补足语； Let me inform you of more details.让我告诉你更多细节。运用了祈使句；"Talk and Talk", started in 2015, has been voted to be the most popular programme among students for 5 years in a row.2015年开播的“Talk and Talk”连续5年被评为最受学生欢迎的节目。 运用了被动语态；It's our great honour to have you on the air from 12:15 to 12:35 next Monday, during which you will talk about ways to deal with stress as the college entrance examination draws near. 很荣幸下周一12点15分到12点35分有你的直播，期间你会聊聊高考临近压力的应对之道。运用了it 作形式主语，非限制性定语从句。
9．（2022·天津）假设你是晨光中学英语口语社的成员李津。为招募新成员，口语社请你用英语为社团纳新活动录制一段短视频。请按照以下提示，撰写视频的文字稿：
1)向同学们发出入社邀请；
2)介绍口语社的主要活动(如英语演讲比赛、观看英语电影等活动)；
3)分享本人入社以来的收获。
注意：1)词数不少于100；
2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。
【答案】One possible version
Hello, everyone! I'm Li Jin, a member of the Spoken English Club of our school. I'm here to invite you to join us. This will be a good chance for all English lovers.
The club offers various interesting activities. We can participate in English speech contests, watch classic English movies, sing English songs and attend inspiring lectures. All of them help to stimulate our interest in learning English and make our school life much more enjoyable.
The club activities have benefited me a lot. I have not only improved my spoken English, but also made a lot of friends.
Now, it's your turn to join us. We are looking forward to having you in the club!
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生以晨光中学英语口语社的成员李津 的身份为社团纳新活动录制一段短视频 ， 招募新成员 。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1)向同学们发出入社邀请；2)介绍口语社的主要活动(如英语演讲比赛、观看英语电影等活动)；3)分享本人入社以来的收获。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如： I'm Li Jin, a member of the Spoken English Club of our school. 运用了同位语；All of them help to stimulate our interest in learning English and make our school life much more enjoyable.运用了不定式作宾语。
10．（2022·北京）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你打算邀请英国好友Jim 为你们班做一次关于英语写作的线上经验交流。请你用英文给他写-封电子邮件，内容包括:
1）建议交流的具体内容及其原因;
2）交流时间和其他相关事项。
注意： 1）词数100左右;
2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】略
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以 红星中学高三学生李华的身份 写-封电子邮件 。写作背景： 你打算邀请英国好友Jim 为你们班做一次关于英语写作的线上经验交流。 写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）建议交流的具体内容及其原因；2）交流时间和其他相关事项。考生需要根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），并进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。最后连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点评】本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
11．（2022·全国甲卷）你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主，举办英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括：
1）海洋的重要性；
2）保护海洋的倡议。
注意：
1）词数100左右；
2）短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
【答案】When it comes to ocean, its pollution is becoming more and more serious. World Ocean Day, falling on June 8th, is aimed at raising awareness of ocean conservation.
Ocean plays a key role in our world. Not only does ocean offer us sufficient food, but also it maintains the balance of nature. Thus, it is imperative to protect ocean. First of all, what we can do is to place importance on our daily actions. For example, garbage can't be thrown into ocean. What's more, we can also hand out leaflets to call on more people to protect the ocean. The more people are involved, the better the ocean environment is.
All in all, it is high time that we devoted ourselves to protecting ocean. To protect ocean is to protect ourselves.
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生 写一篇短文投稿 。写作背景： 你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主，举办英语征文比赛 。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）海洋的重要性；2）保护海洋的倡议。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：When it comes to ocean, its pollution is becoming more and more serious. 运用了时间状语从句；Not only does ocean offer us sufficient food, but also it maintains the balance of nature. 运用了倒装句，并列句；Thus, it is imperative to protect ocean. 运用了it作形式主语；First of all, what we can do is to place importance on our daily actions.运用了主语从句； For example, garbage can't be thrown into ocean. 运用了被动语态；The more people are involved, the better the ocean environment is.运用了“the+比较级，the+比较级”固定句式；All in all, it is high time that we devoted ourselves to protecting ocean.运用了虚拟语气。
二、模考精练
12．（2024高三上·常德模拟）假设你是李华，你应该在本周五提交Mr. Anderson布置的读书报告，但因个人原因，现在无法按时提交。请你给Mr. Anderson发一封电子邮件，内容要求如下：
1.表达歉意；
2.说明原因；
3.提出补救办法；
注意：
1.写作词数80左右。
2.可适当增加细节。
Dear Mr. Anderson,
……
【答案】Dear Mr. Anderson,
I am excessively sorry to say that I won't be able to finish the reading report you assigned to us on time this Friday. Now, I am writing to extend my sincere apology and ask for permission of later submission.
I know I am supposed to finish my homework before the deadline, but unfortunately, I was caught in a heavy rain and had a high fever the day before yesterday and I am still feeling dizzy right now. Therefore, I haven't finished reading part yet, let alone the report.
I hope it would be kind enough of you to allow me to hand in my work next Monday. Sorry again for the inconvenience I'm about to cause and thanks for your understanding.
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份 给Mr. Anderson发一封电子邮件 。写作背景： 你应该在本周五提交Mr. Anderson布置的读书报告，但因个人原因，现在无法按时提交。 写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1.表达歉意；2.说明原因；3.提出补救办法。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：I am excessively sorry to say that I won't be able to finish the reading report you assigned to us on time this Friday. 运用了不定式作原因状语，宾语从句；Now, I am writing to extend my sincere apology and ask for permission of later submission. 运用了不定式作目的状语；I know I am supposed to finish my homework before the deadline, but unfortunately, I was caught in a heavy rain and had a high fever the day before yesterday and I am still feeling dizzy right now.运用了宾语从句，并列句； I hope it would be kind enough of you to allow me to hand in my work next Monday. 运用了宾语从句；Sorry again for the inconvenience I'm about to cause and thanks for your understanding.运用了祈使句，限制性定语从句。
13．（2024高三上·湖南开学考） 假定你是李华，你校计划在暑假期间重修图书馆，校英文报举办主题为"Small changes make an ideal library"的征文活动，向同学们征求意见，请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：（1）提出建议； （2）说明理由。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（1）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Small changes make an ideal library
【答案】（1）One possible version:
Small changes make an ideal library
As a student, I am excited about the upcoming renovation of our library. Among the many possible changes, I particularly hope for two improvements.
Firstly, I envision a cozier reading area with soft lighting and comfortable seating. This will create a relaxing atmosphere, encouraging students to immerse themselves in books for longer periods. Secondly, I believe the addition of more electrical outlets and USB charging stations is crucial. With modern devices becoming indispensable for learning, having easy access to charging facilities will be a great convenience.
These small yet significant changes will undoubtedly contribute to making our library an ideal place for learning and exploration.
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生以李华的身份 写一篇短文投稿 。写作背景： 你校计划在暑假期间重修图书馆，校英文报举办主题为"Small changes make an ideal library"的征文活动，向同学们征求意见 。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括： （1）提出建议； （2）说明理由。 提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如： This will create a relaxing atmosphere, encouraging students to immerse themselves in books for longer periods. 运用了现在分词作状语，不定式作宾补；Secondly, I believe the addition of more electrical outlets and USB charging stations is crucial. 运用了宾语从句；With modern devices becoming indispensable for learning, having easy access to charging facilities will be a great convenience.运用了with的复合结构。
14．（2024·宝安模拟） 假定你是李华，上周六参加了学校为高三学生举行的成人仪式。请根据以下要点，向你的外国朋友David介绍成人仪式的有关情况：
1. 活动过程；
2. 你的感受。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已为你写好。
参考词汇：成人仪式 the coming-of-age ceremony
Dear David,
……
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear David,I hope you're doing well. I'm writing to tell you about a meaningful event, the coming-of-age ceremony for the Senior Three students, marking our journey into adulthood as we've all turned 18.
Our principal initiated the ceremony with an uplifting speech about our future responsibilities and the new stage of life that lies ahead. Then, in a deeply touching part of the program, my classmates and I read letters written by our parents, which were filled with love, advice, and memories. We then took turns to express our gratitude for our upbringing and shared our determination to face adult life with courage and integrity.
Experiencing the ritual made me incredibly excited for what's to come. I am stepping into this new phase with a heart brimming with hope and eyes wide open to the possibilities.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份 ，向你的外国朋友David介绍成人仪式的有关情况 。写作背景： 上周六你参加了学校为高三学生举行的成人仪式。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1. 活动过程；2. 你的感受。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：I hope you're doing well. 运用了宾语从句； I'm writing to tell you about a meaningful event, the coming-of-age ceremony for the Senior Three students, marking our journey into adulthood as we've all turned 18.运用了不定式作目的状语，现在分词作状语，原因状语从句；Our principal initiated the ceremony with an uplifting speech about our future responsibilities and the new stage of life that lies ahead. 运用了限制性定语从句； Then, in a deeply touching part of the program, my classmates and I read letters written by our parents, which were filled with love, advice, and memories. 运用了过去分词作状语，非限制性定语从句；Experiencing the ritual made me incredibly excited for what's to come.运用了动名词作主语；I am stepping into this new phase with a heart brimming with hope and eyes wide open to the possibilities.运用了with的复合结构。
15．（2024·浙江模拟） 假设你是李华。上个月，你参加了学校开展的"职业初体验"(My First Experience in Career)实 践活动。现校英文报正向全校学生征集相关稿件。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1.你体验的一项职业; 2.你的感受。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
My First Experience in Career
【答案】One possible version:
My First Experience in Career
Last month, I had the privilege of participating in our school's initiative, "My First Experience in Career." It aimed to provide students like me with a glimpse into diverse professions.
My journey began at a local hospital, where I shadowed as a diligent nurse for a day. Witnessing her interactions with patients, meticulous care, and swift decision-making, I gained a deeper understanding of the immense responsibility and compassion required in this noble profession. It was an eye-opening experience that left me grateful for the healthcare workers who tirelessly save lives.
This practical experience transformed me, increasing my knowledge and igniting ambition. I'm thankful to our school for organizing such a meaningful program and excited for future opportunities.
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生以李华的身份 写一篇短文投稿 。写作背景： 上个月，你参加了学校开展的"职业初体验"(My First Experience in Career)实 践活动。现校英文报正向全校学生征集相关稿件。 写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1.你体验的一项职业; 2.你的感受。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如： It aimed to provide students like me with a glimpse into diverse professions.运用了不定式作目的状语；My journey began at a local hospital, where I shadowed as a diligent nurse for a day.运用了非限制性定语从句； Witnessing her interactions with patients, meticulous care, and swift decision-making, I gained a deeper understanding of the immense responsibility and compassion required in this noble profession. 运用了现在分词作状语；It was an eye-opening experience that left me grateful for the healthcare workers who tirelessly save lives.运用了强调句，限制性性定语从句；
This practical experience transformed me, increasing my knowledge and igniting ambition.运用了现在分词作状语。
16．（2024高三下·深圳月考） 假定你是李华，你校交换生Mike准备参加"厉害了，中国"(Amazing China) 短视频大赛，特发邮件向你征询视频创意。请给他回一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1．提出建议； 2．阐明理由。
注意：
1．写作词数应为 80 左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
Dear Mike,
……
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mike,
Learning you're going to sign up for the short video competition on the theme of Amazing China, I'm writing to share my ideas with you.
If I were you, I would not hesitate to shoot a short video about China's smart agriculture. Nowadays, you can see modern farmers using cutting-edge technologies and devices for agricultural production, monitoring and management. Thanks to this, the efficiency is greatly improved and the country's grain security is guaranteed. Therefore, I'm convinced that showing the enormous changes in Chinese agriculture will hold much appeal for the viewers.
May your entry stand out in the competition!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文
【解析】【分析】本题是一封英文电子邮件。要求考生以李华的名义，向交换生Mike就他准备参加的"厉害了，中国"(Amazing China) 短视频大赛的创意回信，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）提出建议；2）阐明理由。写这篇文章时，要注意文中给出的细节都要包括，不要遗漏。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力，需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本书面表达要点齐全，上下文连贯，使用一定数量的句式结构，让句子更加生动丰满，同时运用了许多高级词汇个固定短语，提高文章的档次，体现了对英语的熟练的驾驭能力。例如：Learning you're going to sign up for the short video competition on the theme of Amazing China, I'm writing to share my ideas with you运用了非谓语动词短语作状语；If I were you, I would not hesitate to shoot a short video about China's smart agriculture运用了虚拟语气；Therefore, I'm convinced that showing the enormous changes in Chinese agriculture will hold much appeal for the viewers运用了V-ing短语作主语。
17．（2024·广东模拟）假定你是李华，今天的英语课前一分钟演讲，你打算倡议大家参与学校组织的各种课外活动小组，内容包括：1．活动的目的；2．活动的益处；3．号召大家积极参与。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右：
2．请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear fellow students,
That's all, thank you!
【答案】Dear fellow students,
I am glad to make a speech here. What I want to say today is that I strongly encourage all of you to join various after- class activity groups, which aim to provide a platform for us to explore our interests and passions beyond the classroom.
The activities range from sports to arts, science to culture, ensuring everyone can find something that fix you. So, participating in these groups not only allows us to develop new skills but helps us build teamwork, leadership and communication abilities. Moreover, they can foster a sense of belonging and community, creating lifelong friendships and memories.
I urge you all to take this opportunity. Embrace the challenge, discover your potential, and let's grow together.
That's all, thank you!
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生以李华的身份写一篇演讲稿。写作背景： 今天的英语课前一分钟演讲，你打算倡议大家参与学校组织的各种课外活动小组 。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括： 1．活动的目的；2．活动的益处；3．号召大家积极参与。 提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：I am glad to make a speech here. 运用了不定式作原因状语； What I want to say today is that I strongly encourage all of you to join various after- class activity groups, which aim to provide a platform for us to explore our interests and passions beyond the classroom.运用了主语从句，表语从句，非限制性定语从句；The activities range from sports to arts, science to culture, ensuring everyone can find something that fix you. 运用了现在分词作状语，限制性定语从句；So, participating in these groups not only allows us to develop new skills but helps us build teamwork, leadership and communication abilities. 运用了动名词作主语；I urge you all to take this opportunity. 运用了不定式作宾补； Embrace the challenge, discover your potential, and let's grow together.运用了祈使句，并列句。
18．（2024·南通模拟）假设你是李华，听闻《中国日报》（China Daily）为了宣传中国传统文化，正在招募志愿者向海外介绍中国著名历史文化景点，你很想参加本次宣传活动，请你就此事给报社写一封英文申请信，内容包括：
1．写信目的；2．自荐理由；3．申请参与。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Sir/Madam,
……
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,
I'm so excited to hear that China Daily is in need of some volunteers to introduce Chinese culture overseas that I can't wait to apply for the position.
As a citizen, it's my responsibility to make Chinese historical and cultural attractions known to the whole world. In addition, with an outgoing and open-minded personality, it's easy for me to get along well with others. Last but not least, I have been to numerous famous scenic spots and my hometown is a famous historical and cultural city, where I often act as a volunteer tour guide to show foreign tourists around, from which I've gained relevant experience.
So, I firmly believe that I'm the very person you're looking for. I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration and reply at your earliest convenience.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本体是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份给报社写一封英文申请信。写作背景： 听闻《中国日报》为了宣传中国传统文化，正在招募志愿者向海外介绍中国著名历史文化景点，你很想参加本次宣传活动。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括： 1．写信目的；2．自荐理由；3．申请参与。 提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：I'm so excited to hear that China Daily is in need of some volunteers to introduce Chinese culture overseas that I can't wait to apply for the position.运用了不定式作原因状语，宾语从句，结果状语从句；As a citizen, it's my responsibility to make Chinese historical and cultural attractions known to the whole world. 运用了it作形式主语。In addition, with an outgoing and open-minded personality, it's easy for me to get along well with others. 运用了it作形式主语； Last but not least, I have been to numerous famous scenic spots and my hometown is a famous historical and cultural city, where I often act as a volunteer tour guide to show foreign tourists around, from which I've gained relevant experience.运用了并列句，非限制性定语从句；
So, I firmly believe that I'm the very person you're looking for. 运用了宾语从句，限制性定语从句；I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration and reply at your earliest convenience.运用了固定句式I would appreciate it if...。
19．（2024高三上·广东模拟） 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国笔友Chris对中国的高铁技术非常感兴趣，并通过邮件向你咨询有关中国高铁的情况。请你用英文给他回一封邮件，内容包括：
1.中国高铁的发展和特点；
2.高铁在日常生活中的作用和影响。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Chris,
I'm delighted to share with you the wonders of China's high-speed rail (HSR) system. Over the past decade, China's HSR has developed rapidly, boasting the largest network in the world and continuously breaking speed records. The cradle of China's HSR is the Beijing-Tianjin Intercity Railway, which started operations in 2008. Since then, the HSR has expanded to connect major cities, covering a network of over 35,000 kilometers.
One of the defining features of China's HSR is its high operational speed, which can reach up to 350 kilometers per hour, making it one of the fastest in the world. Additionally, the trains are known for their comfort, punctuality, and safety. The development of HSR has revolutionized travel in China, reducing travel times significantly and providing a reliable alternative to air travel for medium to long distances.
In daily life, HSR has brought cities closer together, fostering economic development and cultural exchange. It has become an integral part of people's lives, facilitating business trips, tourism, and family visits. For instance, a businessperson living in Shanghai can take a morning HSR to Beijing for a meeting and return on the same day, a journey that would have been impossible without the HSR.
Moreover, the HSR has had a profound impact on the environment by reducing carbon emissions compared to other modes of transportation. As China continues to invest in its HSR network, it is set to play an even more significant role in the country's future development.
I hope this gives you a glimpse into the impressive world of China's HSR. I'm confident that should you visit China, you will have the opportunity to experience its speed and efficiency for yourself.
Yours, Li Hua
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以红星中学高三学生李华的身份 回一封邮件 。写作背景： 你的英国笔友Chris对中国的高铁技术非常感兴趣，并通过邮件向你咨询有关中国高铁的情况。 写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1.中国高铁的发展和特点；2.高铁在日常生活中的作用和影响。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：I'm delighted to share with you the wonders of China's high-speed rail (HSR) system. 运用了不定式作原因状语； Over the past decade, China's HSR has developed rapidly, boasting the largest network in the world and continuously breaking speed records. 运用了现在分词作状语；The cradle of China's HSR is the Beijing-Tianjin Intercity Railway, which started operations in 2008. 运用了非限制性定语从句； Since then, the HSR has expanded to connect major cities, covering a network of over 35,000 kilometers.运用了现在分词作状语；One of the defining features of China's HSR is its high operational speed, which can reach up to 350 kilometers per hour, making it one of the fastest in the world.运用了非限制性定语从句，现在分词作状语；The development of HSR has revolutionized travel in China, reducing travel times significantly and providing a reliable alternative to air travel for medium to long distances.运用了现在分词作状语；For instance, a businessperson living in Shanghai can take a morning HSR to Beijing for a meeting and return on the same day, a journey that would have been impossible without the HSR.运用了限制性定语从句，虚拟语气；As China continues to invest in its HSR network, it is set to play an even more significant role in the country's future development.运用了时间状语从句，被动语态；
I hope this gives you a glimpse into the impressive world of China's HSR. 运用了宾语从句；I'm confident that should you visit China, you will have the opportunity to experience its speed and efficiency for yourself.运用了宾语从句，倒装句。
20．（2024·开平模拟） 你校英文报计划举办主题为"携手行动，节约粮食"的作文比赛。请你写一则活动通知，内容包括：(1)介绍活动目的；(2)说明参赛要求。
注意：(1)写作词数应为80个左右；(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Welcome to Join the English Writing Competition
【答案】Welcome to Join the English Writing Competition
Our school English newspaper is excited to announce the upcoming writing competition, whose theme is "Hand in Hand, Save the Food". The competition aims to raise awareness about the importance of saving food.
All students are encouraged to participate. Entries should consist of an original piece of writing, focusing on the theme of food waste and showing how we can contribute to its reduction. Please submit your entries to the English Department mailbox by the deadline of June 1st.
We look forward to your participation and creative submissions.
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生 写一则活动通知 。写作背景： 你校英文报计划举办主题为"携手行动，节约粮食"的作文比赛。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括： (1)介绍活动目的；(2)说明参赛要求。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：Our school English newspaper is excited to announce the upcoming writing competition, whose theme is "Hand in Hand, Save the Food".运用了被动语态，非限制性定语从句； The competition aims to raise awareness about the importance of saving food.运用了不定式作目的状语；All students are encouraged to participate.运用了被动语态； Entries should consist of an original piece of writing, focusing on the theme of food waste and showing how we can contribute to its reduction.运用了现在分词作状语，宾语从句； Please submit your entries to the English Department mailbox by the deadline of June 1st.运用了祈使句。
21．（2024·杭州模拟）本学期你校开设了每周一节的英语文学阅读课，请你就此写一篇短文向学校英文报 "Student Voice"栏目投稿，内容包括：
1.课程介绍(目的、内容、上课方式等);
2.你的收获。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
English Literature Reading Class Opens a New World
【答案】English Literature Reading Class Opens a New World
I'm excited to share my experience with the weekly English Literature Reading class.
Starting this semester,the class is designed specifically for us to enhance our English proficiency.Each wee ek this class unfolds with a new literary masterpiece ranging from classic novels to contemporary poetry.Through interactive discussions,group readings,and insightful analysis,we are able to explore the depths of literary.Not only does literature reading give me great enjoyment,but Ive honed critical thinking skills.
Moreover,the class has sparked a newfound passion for literature within me,igniting my desire to explore further in the vast world of English letters.It has undoubtedly been a highlight of this academic semester.
【知识点】文字式应用文；日常生活类
【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇短文向学校英文报"Student Voice"栏目投稿，介绍英语文学阅读课以及自己的收获。
1.词汇积累
兴奋的：excited→thrilled
提高：enhance→improve/promote/boost
另外：moreover→furthermore/in addition/besides/what's more
无疑：undoubtedly→beyond doubt
热情：passion→flame/warmth/enthusiasm
强调：highlight→emphasize/stress
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Starting this semester, the class is designed specifically for us to enhance our English proficiency.
拓展句：The class, which started this semester, is designed specifically for us to enhance our English proficiency.
高分句型1 Not only does literature reading give me great enjoyment, but I've honed critical thinking skills. (运用了部分倒装结构)
高分句型2 Moreover, the class has sparked a newfound passion for literature within me, igniting my desire to explore further in the vast world of English letters. (运用了现在分词短语作状语)
【点评】在写作时，要求考生合理谋篇布局，有效的使用语句间的衔接成分，使全文结构紧凑。尽可能使用高级词汇和较为复杂的句子结构。要遵循以下原则：条理性原则，短语优先原则，多实少虚原则以及多变句式原则等。
22．（2024·福建模拟） 假定你是李华, 你的英国朋友Michael邀请你于下周一线上观看他的成人仪式(coming-of-age ceremony), 但你无法应邀, 请写信告知, 内容包括: 1. 表达歉意; 2. 说明理由。
注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Michael,
……
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Michael,
I hope this letter finds you well. I am extremely grateful for you inviting me to attend your school's coming-of-age ceremony online next Monday.
However, I regret to inform you that I won't be availabie at that time due to my scheduled exam and I must focus my attention on preparing for it. Therefore, I'd like to extend my sincere apology for not being able to make it, as I know it's a special moment for you.
Wish your coming-of-age ceremony a complete success. Looking forward to sharing more wonderful time together.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份写一封信，写作背景：你的英国朋友Michael邀请你于下周一线上观看他的成人仪式(, 但你无法应邀。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1. 表达歉意; 2. 说明理由。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：I hope this letter finds you well. 运用了宾语从句；However, I regret to inform you that I won't be availabie at that time due to my scheduled exam and I must focus my attention on preparing for it. 运用了不定式作宾语，宾语从句，并列句；Therefore, I'd like to extend my sincere apology for not being able to make it, as I know it's a special moment for you.运用了宾语从句，原因状语从句，宾语从句。
23．（2024·诸暨模拟）学校计划开设电子阅览室，大家很是兴奋和期待，为此Mr. Black安排大家在英语课分组进行讨论，现请你代表小组发言，内容要点包括：
1．电子阅览室的具体用途；2．能给你们带来的好处。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Hi, everyone!
That's all. Thank you
【答案】Hi, everyone! These days, we all seem to be talking about the news that an electronic reading room will be opened. It is exciting indeed! An E-reading room, in our group view, is undoubtedly multi-functional. It is where we can keep ourselves informed of the latest news, where we can have access to various learning resources and where we can solve problems using modern technology, ChatGPT, for example. So an E-reading room, in today's information age, can conveniently and efficiently meet our growing thirst for more information and knowledge. Hope that the E-reading room will be available soon! That's all. Thank you!
Li Hua
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生 代表小组发言 。写作背景： 学校计划开设电子阅览室，大家很是兴奋和期待，为此Mr. Black安排大家在英语课分组进行讨论。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括： 1．电子阅览室的具体用途；2．能给你们带来的好处。 提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：These days, we all seem to be talking about the news that an electronic reading room will be opened. 运用了不定式作表语，同位语从句，被动语态； It is where we can keep ourselves informed of the latest news, where we can have access to various learning resources and where we can solve problems using modern technology, ChatGPT, for example. 运用了表语从句；Hope that the E-reading room will be available soon! 运用了宾语从句。
24．（2024·武汉模拟） 假定你是李华，你校外教Ryan拟举办英语读书会（English Reading Bar）活动，想了解哪类图书更能吸引学生，请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：
1）推荐的图书类别；
2）推荐理由。
注意：
1）写作词数应为80个左右；
2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
Best regards,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Ryan,
I'm excited to hear about the English Reading Bar initiative. I recommend focusing on young adult fiction.
First of all, young adult literature often tackles themes and issues that are highly relevant to the teenage experience, such as identity, friendship, and coming of age, which can foster deep engagement and discussion. Moreover, the writing style in these books is typically more approachable for English learners, allowing students to focus on comprehension and enjoyment without being overwhelmed by complex language. Last but not least, they offer a wide array of stories with diverse characters and settings, promoting inclusivity and broadening students' perspectives on different cultures and experiences.
I believe these selections will not only attract students to the bar but also enhance their reading skills and cultural awareness.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份 给外教写一封邮件 。写作背景： 你校外教Ryan拟举办英语读书会活动，想了解哪类图书更能吸引学生。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）推荐的图书类别；2）推荐理由。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：I'm excited to hear about the English Reading Bar initiative.运用了不定式作原因状语；First of all, young adult literature often tackles themes and issues that are highly relevant to the teenage experience, such as identity, friendship, and coming of age, which can foster deep engagement and discussion. 运用了限制性定语从句，非限制性定语从句；Moreover, the writing style in these books is typically more approachable for English learners, allowing students to focus on comprehension and enjoyment without being overwhelmed by complex language. 运用了现在分词作状语；I believe these selections will not only attract students to the bar but also enhance their reading skills and cultural awareness.运用了宾语从句。
25．（2024高三下·武汉月考） 为庆祝创刊30周年，你校英文报以"The pleasure of Reading"为题举办征文活动。请你以此为题写一篇征文稿。内容包括：
1）阅读的乐趣；
2）介绍一本你喜欢的书；
3）你喜欢的理由。
注意：
1）写作词数应为80左右；
2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
【答案】The pleasure of reading
Version 1
There is no greater pleasure in the world than reading, which can transport us beyond the boundaries of time and space, allowing us to live a thousand lives. The pleasure of reading is a symphony of the mind and a dance of ideas that enriches the soul.
"Charlotte's Web" is such a charming tale as I read long ago but still touches my heart so much. I am greatly impressed by Charlotte's wisdom, kindness, and unwavering loyalty to Wilbur. The web she spins, with its miraculous words, is a symbol of the power of love and creativity to change lives. I can also recall the many moments I couldn't resist laughing when the light and playful humor in the book ticked my funny bone.
For me, "Charlotte's Web" demonstrates the best of what literature can offer: a story that is both entertaining and enriching, a journey that is as delightful as it is meaningful.
Version 2
The pleasure of reading lies in the expansion of our horizons as we explore diverse cultures and encounter different people. It encourages critical thinking and fosters a deeper understanding of the world around us.
"The Biography of Qian Xuesen", a witness to the transformation of a talented young mind into a leading figure in science and technology, is a story of perseverance, curiosity, and an unwavering commitment to his motherland.
The joy of reading this biography is a profound experience that transcends the written word, offering me a deep dive into the life and achievements of a remarkable individual who played a pivotal role in shaping China's aerospace industry. His decision to return to China despite personal risks has greatly resonated with me, instilling a sense of wonder and inspiration.
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生写一篇征文稿。写作背景： 为庆祝创刊30周年，你校英文报以"The pleasure of Reading"为题举办征文活动。 写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）阅读的乐趣；2）介绍一本你喜欢的书；3）你喜欢的理由。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：Version 1中的：There is no greater pleasure in the world than reading, which can transport us beyond the boundaries of time and space, allowing us to live a thousand lives.运用了there be固定式，"否定词+比较级"，非限制性定语从句，现在分词作状语； The pleasure of reading is a symphony of the mind and a dance of ideas that enriches the soul.运用了限制性定语从句；"Charlotte's Web" is such a charming tale as I read long ago but still touches my heart so much. 运用了限制性定语从句； The web she spins, with its miraculous words, is a symbol of the power of love and creativity to change lives. 运用了限制性定语从句；I can also recall the many moments I couldn't resist laughing when the light and playful humor in the book ticked my funny bone.运用了限制性定语从句，时间状语从句；For me, "Charlotte's Web" demonstrates the best of what literature can offer: a story that is both entertaining and enriching, a journey that is as delightful as it is meaningful.运用了宾语从句，限制性定语从句，比较状语从句。
Version 2部分中的：The pleasure of reading lies in the expansion of our horizons as we explore diverse cultures and encounter different people. 运用了时间状语从句； "The Biography of Qian Xuesen", a witness to the transformation of a talented young mind into a leading figure in science and technology, is a story of perseverance, curiosity, and an unwavering commitment to his motherland.运用了同位语；The joy of reading this biography is a profound experience that transcends the written word, offering me a deep dive into the life and achievements of a remarkable individual who played a pivotal role in shaping China's aerospace industry. 运用了限制性定语从句；His decision to return to China despite personal risks has greatly resonated with me, instilling a sense of wonder and inspiration.运用了现在分词作状语。
26．（2024·广西壮族自治区模拟） 假如你是李华，你校外教Robert打算开设击剑运动作为选修课，现征求同学们意见，你认为击剑课不符合你校目前实际情况。请你给外教写一封邮件。 内容包括:1. 你的观点与理由;2. 提出建议。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题卡上的相应位置作答。
参考词汇:击剑运动fencing
Dear Robert, …… Yours sincerely, Li Hua
【答案】Dear Robert,
I feel delighted to know that you are going to teach us fencing as an optional course. But I still think it is not a suitable decision. As we all know, fencing is not widely popular with students. Even worse, fencing has high requirements on facilities that we hardly meet at present. Therefore, I strongly recommend football or tennis as your optional course since both of them are also your strengths. Or in order to satisfy our needs, you'd better make a survey on what kind of sports we students prefer to learn before your final decision.
I really hope my feedback can help you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份 给外教写一封邮件 。写作背景： 你校外教Robert打算开设击剑运动作为选修课，现征求同学们意见，你认为击剑课不符合你校目前实际情况。 写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1. 你的观点与理由;2. 提出建议。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：I feel delighted to know that you are going to teach us fencing as an optional course.运用了不定式作原因状语，宾语从句； But I still think it is not a suitable decision. 运用了宾语从句； As we all know, fencing is not widely popular with students.运用了非限制性定语从句； Even worse, fencing has high requirements on facilities that we hardly meet at present.运用了限制性定语从句； Therefore, I strongly recommend football or tennis as your optional course since both of them are also your strengths. 运用了原因状语从句；Or in order to satisfy our needs, you'd better make a survey on what kind of sports we students prefer to learn before your final decision. 运用了不定式作目的状语，宾语从句；I really hope my feedback can help you. 运用了宾语从句。
27．（2024·沧县模拟） 假设你是李华，希望在未来成为一名农业专家，但是你的家长并不支持，于是你给外教Alice写信，征求她的意见。内容包括：1. 说明你的想法；2. 家长反对的理由；3. 征求老师的意见。
注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Alice,
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Alice,
I feel upset these days because I have conflicts 2025年高考英语一轮复习强化训练 专题15 写作（一）小作文
一、高考真题
1．（2024·新高考Ⅰ卷） 假定你是李华，上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：
(1)你完成的作品；
(2)你的感想。
注意：
(1)写作词数应为80个左右；
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
I'm writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday.
Yours,
Li Hua
2．（2023·浙江）上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。请为校英文报写篇报道，内容包括：
1）活动的过程；
2）收获与感想。
注意：
1）写作词数应为80左右；
2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Getting to Know the Plants Around Us
3．（2023·全国甲卷）你们学校正举办主题为"用英文讲中国故事"的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.人物简介及事迹；
2.意义或启示。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.题目已为你写好。
4．（2024·全国甲卷） 英语课要求做课堂展示，请你根据所给图片，以 Development of Transport in China为题写一篇发言稿。
注意：
1.词数100左右;
2.题目和首句已为你写好。
Development of Transport in China
From the vehicle of horses to today's convenient transport, Chinese transport has an enormous development.
5．（2024·浙江）第一节请你写一篇短文向校英文报"Sports and Health"栏目投稿，向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动，内容包括：1. 介绍这项运动；2. 说明推荐理由。
注意： 1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答：
Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody!
6．（2023·新高考Ⅱ卷）假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 说明问题；
2. 提出建议。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan, I'm Li Hua from Class 3. …… Yours sincerely, Li Hua
7．（2023·全国乙卷）学校英报组织同学们分享自己在假期中学到的新技能，请你以此为主题写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：
1. 简要描述；
2. 体验和感受。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 题目已为你写好。
8．（2022·新高考Ⅰ卷）假定你是校广播站英语节目"Talk and Talk"的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括：
1）节目介绍；
2）访谈的时间和话题。
注意：
1）写作词数应为80左右;
2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Caroline, …… Yours sincerely, Li Hua
9．（2022·天津）假设你是晨光中学英语口语社的成员李津。为招募新成员，口语社请你用英语为社团纳新活动录制一段短视频。请按照以下提示，撰写视频的文字稿：
1)向同学们发出入社邀请；
2)介绍口语社的主要活动(如英语演讲比赛、观看英语电影等活动)；
3)分享本人入社以来的收获。
注意：1)词数不少于100；
2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。
10．（2022·北京）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你打算邀请英国好友Jim 为你们班做一次关于英语写作的线上经验交流。请你用英文给他写-封电子邮件，内容包括:
1）建议交流的具体内容及其原因;
2）交流时间和其他相关事项。
注意： 1）词数100左右;
2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
11．（2022·全国甲卷）你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主，举办英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括：
1）海洋的重要性；
2）保护海洋的倡议。
注意：
1）词数100左右；
2）短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
二、模考精练
12．（2024高三上·常德模拟）假设你是李华，你应该在本周五提交Mr. Anderson布置的读书报告，但因个人原因，现在无法按时提交。请你给Mr. Anderson发一封电子邮件，内容要求如下：
1.表达歉意；
2.说明原因；
3.提出补救办法；
注意：
1.写作词数80左右。
2.可适当增加细节。
Dear Mr. Anderson,
……
13．（2024高三上·湖南开学考） 假定你是李华，你校计划在暑假期间重修图书馆，校英文报举办主题为"Small changes make an ideal library"的征文活动，向同学们征求意见，请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：（1）提出建议； （2）说明理由。
注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（1）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Small changes make an ideal library
14．（2024·宝安模拟） 假定你是李华，上周六参加了学校为高三学生举行的成人仪式。请根据以下要点，向你的外国朋友David介绍成人仪式的有关情况：
1. 活动过程；
2. 你的感受。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已为你写好。
参考词汇：成人仪式 the coming-of-age ceremony
Dear David,
……
Yours,
Li Hua
15．（2024·浙江模拟） 假设你是李华。上个月，你参加了学校开展的"职业初体验"(My First Experience in Career)实 践活动。现校英文报正向全校学生征集相关稿件。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1.你体验的一项职业; 2.你的感受。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
My First Experience in Career
16．（2024高三下·深圳月考） 假定你是李华，你校交换生Mike准备参加"厉害了，中国"(Amazing China) 短视频大赛，特发邮件向你征询视频创意。请给他回一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1．提出建议； 2．阐明理由。
注意：
1．写作词数应为 80 左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
Dear Mike,
……
Yours,
Li Hua
17．（2024·广东模拟）假定你是李华，今天的英语课前一分钟演讲，你打算倡议大家参与学校组织的各种课外活动小组，内容包括：1．活动的目的；2．活动的益处；3．号召大家积极参与。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右：
2．请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear fellow students,
That's all, thank you!
18．（2024·南通模拟）假设你是李华，听闻《中国日报》（China Daily）为了宣传中国传统文化，正在招募志愿者向海外介绍中国著名历史文化景点，你很想参加本次宣传活动，请你就此事给报社写一封英文申请信，内容包括：
1．写信目的；2．自荐理由；3．申请参与。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Sir/Madam,
……
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
19．（2024高三上·广东模拟） 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国笔友Chris对中国的高铁技术非常感兴趣，并通过邮件向你咨询有关中国高铁的情况。请你用英文给他回一封邮件，内容包括：
1.中国高铁的发展和特点；
2.高铁在日常生活中的作用和影响。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
Yours,
Li Hua
20．（2024·开平模拟） 你校英文报计划举办主题为"携手行动，节约粮食"的作文比赛。请你写一则活动通知，内容包括：(1)介绍活动目的；(2)说明参赛要求。
注意：(1)写作词数应为80个左右；(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Welcome to Join the English Writing Competition
21．（2024·杭州模拟）本学期你校开设了每周一节的英语文学阅读课，请你就此写一篇短文向学校英文报 "Student Voice"栏目投稿，内容包括：
1.课程介绍(目的、内容、上课方式等);
2.你的收获。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
English Literature Reading Class Opens a New World
22．（2024·福建模拟） 假定你是李华, 你的英国朋友Michael邀请你于下周一线上观看他的成人仪式(coming-of-age ceremony), 但你无法应邀, 请写信告知, 内容包括: 1. 表达歉意; 2. 说明理由。
注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Michael,
……
Yours,
Li Hua
23．（2024·诸暨模拟）学校计划开设电子阅览室，大家很是兴奋和期待，为此Mr. Black安排大家在英语课分组进行讨论，现请你代表小组发言，内容要点包括：
1．电子阅览室的具体用途；2．能给你们带来的好处。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Hi, everyone!
That's all. Thank you
24．（2024·武汉模拟） 假定你是李华，你校外教Ryan拟举办英语读书会（English Reading Bar）活动，想了解哪类图书更能吸引学生，请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：
1）推荐的图书类别；
2）推荐理由。
注意：
1）写作词数应为80个左右；
2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
Best regards,
Li Hua
25．（2024高三下·武汉月考） 为庆祝创刊30周年，你校英文报以"The pleasure of Reading"为题举办征文活动。请你以此为题写一篇征文稿。内容包括：
1）阅读的乐趣；
2）介绍一本你喜欢的书；
3）你喜欢的理由。
注意：
1）写作词数应为80左右；
2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
26．（2024·广西壮族自治区模拟） 假如你是李华，你校外教Robert打算开设击剑运动作为选修课，现征求同学们意见，你认为击剑课不符合你校目前实际情况。请你给外教写一封邮件。 内容包括:1. 你的观点与理由;2. 提出建议。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题卡上的相应位置作答。
参考词汇:击剑运动fencing
Dear Robert, …… Yours sincerely, Li Hua
27．（2024·沧县模拟） 假设你是李华，希望在未来成为一名农业专家，但是你的家长并不支持，于是你给外教Alice写信，征求她的意见。内容包括：1. 说明你的想法；2. 家长反对的理由；3. 征求老师的意见。
注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Alice,
Yours,
Li Hua
28．（2024·温州模拟） 你校英文报就最近举办的"当英语遇上艺术"(When English Meets The Arts)系列活动开展征文。请你写一篇短文，分享其中让你印象深刻的一项活动，内容包括:1. 活动介绍;2. 你的感想。
注意：1. 写作词数应为 80 左右;2. 可适当增加细节， 以使行文连贯。
When English Meets The Arts
29．（2024·绵阳模拟）你校正在举办标题为"过程比结果更重要"的英语征文比赛，你打算按照征文要求准备稿件。征文要求如下：1.你对这句话的理解：2.你的一次相关经历；3.你的体会。
注意：1.不能出现个人和学校等真实信息。2.词数100字左右，题目已给出，不计入总词数。3.行文连贯、完整。
It's the Journey Rather Than the Destination That Matters
30．（2024·秦皇岛模拟） 假定你是高中生李华，你校正在举行青少年模拟政协 (Model CPPCC) 提案征集活动，其中一项提案是将中国传统节日重阳节 (The Double Ninth Festival) 设为国家法定假日 (national holiday) , 请就该提案写一封信给模拟政协主席，内容需包括：1. 你是否支持此提案；2. 你支持或反对此提案的理由。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Chairman, Sincerely, Li Hua
答案解析部分
1．【答案】Dear Chris,
I'm writing to share an extraordinary experience from last Friday when our class had an art lesson in the park. You cannot imagine how meaningful and interesting it was!
We were tasked to draw or paint something that impressed us most. Inspired by the fantastic scenery, I decided to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the park's pond, surrounded by blooming flowers.
The entire experience was incredibly refreshing. Being surrounded by nature not only sparked my creativity but also offered a much-needed break from the usual hustle and bustle of school life. I felt a deep sense of peace as I painted.
In a word, it was not just an art class; it was a moment of connection with nature that I truly cherished. How have your classes been lately I would love to hear about them. Take care and write back soon
Best regards,
Li Hua
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文
【解析】【分析】本题是一封英文邮件，要求考生以李华的名义，和英国朋友Chris分享上周五在公园上的一堂美术课，属于提纲类作文。首先，为了开篇明确并吸引读者的兴趣，我们可以直接提及这次特别的美术课活动； 接着，描述自己完成的作品。由于篇幅有限，我们应简洁而具体地介绍作品内容； 然后，表达自己的感想。感想部分可以围绕这次活动的特别之处、自己的收获或情感体验来展开； 最后，按照邮件的格式，以礼貌的结束语结束信件 。写这篇文章时，要注意文中给出的细节都要包括，不要遗漏。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力，需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】 这篇范文生动地描绘了在公园上美术课的特殊体验。作者通过具体描述自己的作品——一幅水彩画，展示了公园中小桥与周围盛开花朵的美丽景色，使读者能够直观地感受到现场的氛围。同时，作者还表达了在自然环境中创作时的轻松愉悦和内心的平静，使这段经历更加鲜活和感人。 本书面表达要点齐全，上下文连贯，使用一定数量的句式结构，让句子更加生动丰满，同时运用了许多高级词汇个固定短语，提高文章的档次，体现了对英语的熟练的驾驭能力。例如：I'm writing to share an extraordinary experience from last Friday when our class had an art lesson in the park和We were tasked to draw or paint something that impressed us most都运用了定语从句；You cannot imagine how meaningful and interesting it was!运用了感叹句充当的宾语从句； Inspired by the fantastic scenery, I decided to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the park's pond, surrounded by blooming flowers运用了非谓语动词作状语。 此外，作者还以一句"How have your classes been lately I would love to hear about them."巧妙地过渡到询问对方的情况，增加了邮件的互动性和友好氛围。整体而言，这篇范文结构清晰，语言流畅，情感真挚，是一篇很好的英语作文。
2．【答案】Getting to Know the Plants Around Us
Last weekend, I participated in a "Getting to Know the Plants Around Us" activity organised by our Students' Union.
The activity began with a lecture by a local botanist, who taught us about the different characteristics and uses of various plant species. We then went on a natural walk to observe and collect samples of different plants. Throughout the event, I was struck by the incredible variety of plants that exist in our world and learned about plants that are used for medical purposes, as well as those that provide food and shelter for animals. I also gained a greater appreciation for the role that plants play in maintaining the balance of our ecosystem.
Overall, it was a valuable and enriching experience.
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生为校英文报写篇报道。写作背景：上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。 写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）活动的过程；2）收获与感想。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：The activity began with a lecture by a local botanist, who taught us about the different characteristics and uses of various plant species. 运用了非限制性定语从句；Throughout the event, I was struck by the incredible variety of plants that exist in our world and learned about plants that are used for medical purposes, as well as those that provide food and shelter for animals. 运用了被动语态，限制性定语从句；I also gained a greater appreciation for the role that plants play in maintaining the balance of our ecosystem.运用了限制性定语从句。
3．【答案】One possible version:
Confucius is a well-known figure in Chinese history. His teachings emphasized the importance of moral values, respect for elders, and social harmony. Confucius traveled throughout the country, imparting his wisdom to countless disciples and leaving a profound impact on Chinese society.
The significance of Confucius cannot be overstated. His teachings shaped the moral and ethical foundation of Chinese culture, fostering respect for authority, harmonious relationships, and the pursuit of knowledge. Even today, his ideas continue to guide individuals and communities in China and beyond.
Confucius's life offers valuable lessons. He stressed the self- cultivation, respect for elders, and the pursuit of knowledge, which serves as a guiding light in our fast-paced and interconnected world. His teachings remind us of the importance of integrity, compassion, and social responsibilty.
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿。写作背景：你们学校正举办主题为"用英文讲中国故事"的征文活动。 写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括： 1.人物简介及事迹；2.意义或启示。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：Confucius traveled throughout the country, imparting his wisdom to countless disciples and leaving a profound impact on Chinese society.运用了现在分词作状语；The significance of Confucius cannot be overstated. 运用了被动语态；Confucius's life offers valuable lessons. He stressed the self- cultivation, respect for elders, and the pursuit of knowledge, which serves as a guiding light in our fast-paced and interconnected world. 运用了非限制性定语从句。
4．【答案】Development of Transport in China
From the vehicle of horses to today's convenient transport, Chinese transport has an enormous development. In recent years, we have witnessed remarkable advancements in various modes of transportation.
One such innovation is the shared bicycle, which has revolutionized urban travel. These bicycles are easily accessible and environmentally friendly, encouraging people to adopt a healthier and more sustainable lifestyle. Another significant development is the high-speed rail network. Connecting cities across the country, the high-speed trains offer fast and comfortable travel, significantly reducing travel time. This has greatly enhanced inter-city connectivity and promoted economic development. Moreover, the introduction of new energy vehicles has been a game-changer in the automotive industry. These vehicles run on clean energy, reducing emissions and contributing to a greener environment.
In conclusion, the development of transport in China has brought significant benefits to society, improving convenience, promoting sustainability, and driving economic growth.
【知识点】命题作文；文字式应用文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇英文发言稿，要求考生根据所给的三幅关于共享单车、新能源汽车和高铁的图片，以 Development of Transport in China为题写一篇发言稿，介绍我国公共交通的快速发展。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力，需要注意紧扣文章主题。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本书面表达需要要点齐全，上下文连贯，还需使用一定数量的句式结构，让句子更加生动丰满，同时尽可能运用了许多高级词汇个固定短语，以提高文章的档次，体现对英语的熟练的驾驭能力。可参考使用下列句型和结构，例如：Firstly, shared bicycles have become a popular choice in cities, providing an eco-friendly and cost-effective way to travel short distances和Secondly, the high-speed train network has revolutionized long-distance travel, significantly reducing travel time across the country都运用了非谓语动词短语作状语；The public transport in China, which benefits us a great deal, helps us in various ways 运用了非限制性定语从句；Without shared bicycles，high-speed trains and new energy vehicles，not only would our environment be seriously polluted, but also it would bring much inconvenience to us运用了虚拟语气和部分倒装结构。
5．【答案】One possible version:
Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody!
Everybody! Are you tired of sitting in class all day How about incorporating some physical activity into your daily routine One great option is the "Stand Up and Stretch" exercise. This simple routine involves standing up from your desk, stretching your arms, legs and back, and taking a few deep breaths. It's a quick and easy way to get your blood flowing and re-energize your body and mind. This exercise is recommended for several reasons.
First, it helps to combat the negative effects of prolonged sitting, such as back pain and stiffness. Second, it can improve your focus and concentration, making it easier to stay engaged in class. Lastly, it promotes a healthy and active lifestyle, which is essential for overall well-being.
So, next time you feel a bit sluggish during class, remember to stand up and stretch! It's a small change that can make a big difference in your day.
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生写一篇短文向校英文报"Sports and Health"栏目投稿，向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动 向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括： 1. 介绍这项运动；2. 说明推荐理由。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如： This simple routine involves standing up from your desk, stretching your arms, legs and back, and taking a few deep breaths.运用了动名词作宾语； It's a quick and easy way to get your blood flowing and re-energize your body and mind.运用了it作形式主语； This exercise is recommended for several reasons.运用了被动语态；Lastly, it promotes a healthy and active lifestyle, which is essential for overall well-being.运用了非限制性定语从句；So, next time you feel a bit sluggish during class, remember to stand up and stretch! 运用了时间状语从句，祈使句；It's a small change that can make a big difference in your day.运用了强调句。
6．【答案】Dear Ryan,
I'm Li Hua from Class 3. I think it's not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training after class. The reasons are as follows.
To begin with, randomly pairing up students may lead to unbalanced language abilities within the groups. This can hold up the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve. Besides, students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don't get along with or have difficulty communicating with.
My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners. This way, everyone can feel more comfortable practicing and improving their spoken English together.
Thank you for considering my suggestion.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇英文建议信，格式为：一般开头应该先是DearMr/Miss，然后就是正文，说明具体问题，然后提出建议，感谢并写上署名。要求考生以校李华 的身份写一封邮件给外教Ryan提建议。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文。写这篇文章时，要注意文中给出的细节都要包括，不要遗漏。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。本文的人称是第一、三人称；时态是一般现在时；文章可以分为共分三段：
第一段：开头：写信的目的（将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题）；
第二段：正文：说明问题（可能每组能力不均阻碍进步；可能每组同学间感情不太融洽）；
第三段：结尾：我的建议（可以按口语能力和学生自愿来分组），然后表示感谢。
【点评】书面表达要求要点齐全，上下文连贯，并使用一定数量的句式结构，让句子更加生动丰满，同时能够运用一些高级词汇pair up，hold up the progress of students，less motivated， 和固定短语The reasons are as follows，have difficulty communicating with，group students based on their language abilities提高文章的档次，体现对英语的熟练的驾驭能力。
7．【答案】The arrival of the holiday gave me a brief break from the tense study life. Therefore, I decided to cook dinner for my parents, and they can enjoy a delicious dinner after a hard day's work. But the problem was that I couldn't cook at all.
The first time I cooked, I decided to make a soup by using mushrooms, eggplants and beef. To ensure my success, I first searched for relevant recipes online. After cleaning the materials mentioned above, I cut them into pieces respectively. Next, I put the beef in the boiling water at first and then the mushrooms and eggplants. With the help of the recipes, I finished it within two hours. My parents were greatly surprised when they tried my delicious soup.
I'm proud of myself and confident that I can cook more tasty food in the future. What a perfect holiday!
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生写一篇短文投稿。写作背景：学校英报组织同学们分享自己在假期中学到的新技能 。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1. 简要描述；2. 体验和感受。考生需要根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），并进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。最后连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点评】本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
8．【答案】Dear Caroline,
I'm writing to invite you to be on our broadcast "Talk and Talk". Let me inform you of more details.
"Talk and Talk", started in 2015, has been voted to be the most popular programme among students for 5 years in a row. In the show, we often invite a special guest to share thoughts about recent events. It's our great honour to have you on the air from 12:15 to 12:35 next Monday，during which you will talk about ways to deal with stress as the college entrance examination draws near.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以 校广播站英语节目"Talk and Talk"的负责人李华的身份， 外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。 写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括： 节目介绍；访谈的时间和话题。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：I'm writing to invite you to be on our broadcast "Talk and Talk".我写信邀请你参加我们的广播“谈话和谈话”。运用了不定式作目的状语和宾语补足语； Let me inform you of more details.让我告诉你更多细节。运用了祈使句；"Talk and Talk", started in 2015, has been voted to be the most popular programme among students for 5 years in a row.2015年开播的“Talk and Talk”连续5年被评为最受学生欢迎的节目。 运用了被动语态；It's our great honour to have you on the air from 12:15 to 12:35 next Monday, during which you will talk about ways to deal with stress as the college entrance examination draws near. 很荣幸下周一12点15分到12点35分有你的直播，期间你会聊聊高考临近压力的应对之道。运用了it 作形式主语，非限制性定语从句。
9．【答案】One possible version
Hello, everyone! I'm Li Jin, a member of the Spoken English Club of our school. I'm here to invite you to join us. This will be a good chance for all English lovers.
The club offers various interesting activities. We can participate in English speech contests, watch classic English movies, sing English songs and attend inspiring lectures. All of them help to stimulate our interest in learning English and make our school life much more enjoyable.
The club activities have benefited me a lot. I have not only improved my spoken English, but also made a lot of friends.
Now, it's your turn to join us. We are looking forward to having you in the club!
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生以晨光中学英语口语社的成员李津 的身份为社团纳新活动录制一段短视频 ， 招募新成员 。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1)向同学们发出入社邀请；2)介绍口语社的主要活动(如英语演讲比赛、观看英语电影等活动)；3)分享本人入社以来的收获。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如： I'm Li Jin, a member of the Spoken English Club of our school. 运用了同位语；All of them help to stimulate our interest in learning English and make our school life much more enjoyable.运用了不定式作宾语。
10．【答案】略
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以 红星中学高三学生李华的身份 写-封电子邮件 。写作背景： 你打算邀请英国好友Jim 为你们班做一次关于英语写作的线上经验交流。 写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）建议交流的具体内容及其原因；2）交流时间和其他相关事项。考生需要根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），并进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。最后连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点评】本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
11．【答案】When it comes to ocean, its pollution is becoming more and more serious. World Ocean Day, falling on June 8th, is aimed at raising awareness of ocean conservation.
Ocean plays a key role in our world. Not only does ocean offer us sufficient food, but also it maintains the balance of nature. Thus, it is imperative to protect ocean. First of all, what we can do is to place importance on our daily actions. For example, garbage can't be thrown into ocean. What's more, we can also hand out leaflets to call on more people to protect the ocean. The more people are involved, the better the ocean environment is.
All in all, it is high time that we devoted ourselves to protecting ocean. To protect ocean is to protect ourselves.
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生 写一篇短文投稿 。写作背景： 你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主，举办英语征文比赛 。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）海洋的重要性；2）保护海洋的倡议。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：When it comes to ocean, its pollution is becoming more and more serious. 运用了时间状语从句；Not only does ocean offer us sufficient food, but also it maintains the balance of nature. 运用了倒装句，并列句；Thus, it is imperative to protect ocean. 运用了it作形式主语；First of all, what we can do is to place importance on our daily actions.运用了主语从句； For example, garbage can't be thrown into ocean. 运用了被动语态；The more people are involved, the better the ocean environment is.运用了“the+比较级，the+比较级”固定句式；All in all, it is high time that we devoted ourselves to protecting ocean.运用了虚拟语气。
12．【答案】Dear Mr. Anderson,
I am excessively sorry to say that I won't be able to finish the reading report you assigned to us on time this Friday. Now, I am writing to extend my sincere apology and ask for permission of later submission.
I know I am supposed to finish my homework before the deadline, but unfortunately, I was caught in a heavy rain and had a high fever the day before yesterday and I am still feeling dizzy right now. Therefore, I haven't finished reading part yet, let alone the report.
I hope it would be kind enough of you to allow me to hand in my work next Monday. Sorry again for the inconvenience I'm about to cause and thanks for your understanding.
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份 给Mr. Anderson发一封电子邮件 。写作背景： 你应该在本周五提交Mr. Anderson布置的读书报告，但因个人原因，现在无法按时提交。 写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1.表达歉意；2.说明原因；3.提出补救办法。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：I am excessively sorry to say that I won't be able to finish the reading report you assigned to us on time this Friday. 运用了不定式作原因状语，宾语从句；Now, I am writing to extend my sincere apology and ask for permission of later submission. 运用了不定式作目的状语；I know I am supposed to finish my homework before the deadline, but unfortunately, I was caught in a heavy rain and had a high fever the day before yesterday and I am still feeling dizzy right now.运用了宾语从句，并列句； I hope it would be kind enough of you to allow me to hand in my work next Monday. 运用了宾语从句；Sorry again for the inconvenience I'm about to cause and thanks for your understanding.运用了祈使句，限制性定语从句。
13．【答案】（1）One possible version:
Small changes make an ideal library
As a student, I am excited about the upcoming renovation of our library. Among the many possible changes, I particularly hope for two improvements.
Firstly, I envision a cozier reading area with soft lighting and comfortable seating. This will create a relaxing atmosphere, encouraging students to immerse themselves in books for longer periods. Secondly, I believe the addition of more electrical outlets and USB charging stations is crucial. With modern devices becoming indispensable for learning, having easy access to charging facilities will be a great convenience.
These small yet significant changes will undoubtedly contribute to making our library an ideal place for learning and exploration.
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生以李华的身份 写一篇短文投稿 。写作背景： 你校计划在暑假期间重修图书馆，校英文报举办主题为"Small changes make an ideal library"的征文活动，向同学们征求意见 。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括： （1）提出建议； （2）说明理由。 提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如： This will create a relaxing atmosphere, encouraging students to immerse themselves in books for longer periods. 运用了现在分词作状语，不定式作宾补；Secondly, I believe the addition of more electrical outlets and USB charging stations is crucial. 运用了宾语从句；With modern devices becoming indispensable for learning, having easy access to charging facilities will be a great convenience.运用了with的复合结构。
14．【答案】Dear David,I hope you're doing well. I'm writing to tell you about a meaningful event, the coming-of-age ceremony for the Senior Three students, marking our journey into adulthood as we've all turned 18.
Our principal initiated the ceremony with an uplifting speech about our future responsibilities and the new stage of life that lies ahead. Then, in a deeply touching part of the program, my classmates and I read letters written by our parents, which were filled with love, advice, and memories. We then took turns to express our gratitude for our upbringing and shared our determination to face adult life with courage and integrity.
Experiencing the ritual made me incredibly excited for what's to come. I am stepping into this new phase with a heart brimming with hope and eyes wide open to the possibilities.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份 ，向你的外国朋友David介绍成人仪式的有关情况 。写作背景： 上周六你参加了学校为高三学生举行的成人仪式。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1. 活动过程；2. 你的感受。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：I hope you're doing well. 运用了宾语从句； I'm writing to tell you about a meaningful event, the coming-of-age ceremony for the Senior Three students, marking our journey into adulthood as we've all turned 18.运用了不定式作目的状语，现在分词作状语，原因状语从句；Our principal initiated the ceremony with an uplifting speech about our future responsibilities and the new stage of life that lies ahead. 运用了限制性定语从句； Then, in a deeply touching part of the program, my classmates and I read letters written by our parents, which were filled with love, advice, and memories. 运用了过去分词作状语，非限制性定语从句；Experiencing the ritual made me incredibly excited for what's to come.运用了动名词作主语；I am stepping into this new phase with a heart brimming with hope and eyes wide open to the possibilities.运用了with的复合结构。
15．【答案】One possible version:
My First Experience in Career
Last month, I had the privilege of participating in our school's initiative, "My First Experience in Career." It aimed to provide students like me with a glimpse into diverse professions.
My journey began at a local hospital, where I shadowed as a diligent nurse for a day. Witnessing her interactions with patients, meticulous care, and swift decision-making, I gained a deeper understanding of the immense responsibility and compassion required in this noble profession. It was an eye-opening experience that left me grateful for the healthcare workers who tirelessly save lives.
This practical experience transformed me, increasing my knowledge and igniting ambition. I'm thankful to our school for organizing such a meaningful program and excited for future opportunities.
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生以李华的身份 写一篇短文投稿 。写作背景： 上个月，你参加了学校开展的"职业初体验"(My First Experience in Career)实 践活动。现校英文报正向全校学生征集相关稿件。 写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1.你体验的一项职业; 2.你的感受。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如： It aimed to provide students like me with a glimpse into diverse professions.运用了不定式作目的状语；My journey began at a local hospital, where I shadowed as a diligent nurse for a day.运用了非限制性定语从句； Witnessing her interactions with patients, meticulous care, and swift decision-making, I gained a deeper understanding of the immense responsibility and compassion required in this noble profession. 运用了现在分词作状语；It was an eye-opening experience that left me grateful for the healthcare workers who tirelessly save lives.运用了强调句，限制性性定语从句；
This practical experience transformed me, increasing my knowledge and igniting ambition.运用了现在分词作状语。
16．【答案】Dear Mike,
Learning you're going to sign up for the short video competition on the theme of Amazing China, I'm writing to share my ideas with you.
If I were you, I would not hesitate to shoot a short video about China's smart agriculture. Nowadays, you can see modern farmers using cutting-edge technologies and devices for agricultural production, monitoring and management. Thanks to this, the efficiency is greatly improved and the country's grain security is guaranteed. Therefore, I'm convinced that showing the enormous changes in Chinese agriculture will hold much appeal for the viewers.
May your entry stand out in the competition!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文
【解析】【分析】本题是一封英文电子邮件。要求考生以李华的名义，向交换生Mike就他准备参加的"厉害了，中国"(Amazing China) 短视频大赛的创意回信，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）提出建议；2）阐明理由。写这篇文章时，要注意文中给出的细节都要包括，不要遗漏。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力，需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本书面表达要点齐全，上下文连贯，使用一定数量的句式结构，让句子更加生动丰满，同时运用了许多高级词汇个固定短语，提高文章的档次，体现了对英语的熟练的驾驭能力。例如：Learning you're going to sign up for the short video competition on the theme of Amazing China, I'm writing to share my ideas with you运用了非谓语动词短语作状语；If I were you, I would not hesitate to shoot a short video about China's smart agriculture运用了虚拟语气；Therefore, I'm convinced that showing the enormous changes in Chinese agriculture will hold much appeal for the viewers运用了V-ing短语作主语。
17．【答案】Dear fellow students,
I am glad to make a speech here. What I want to say today is that I strongly encourage all of you to join various after- class activity groups, which aim to provide a platform for us to explore our interests and passions beyond the classroom.
The activities range from sports to arts, science to culture, ensuring everyone can find something that fix you. So, participating in these groups not only allows us to develop new skills but helps us build teamwork, leadership and communication abilities. Moreover, they can foster a sense of belonging and community, creating lifelong friendships and memories.
I urge you all to take this opportunity. Embrace the challenge, discover your potential, and let's grow together.
That's all, thank you!
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生以李华的身份写一篇演讲稿。写作背景： 今天的英语课前一分钟演讲，你打算倡议大家参与学校组织的各种课外活动小组 。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括： 1．活动的目的；2．活动的益处；3．号召大家积极参与。 提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：I am glad to make a speech here. 运用了不定式作原因状语； What I want to say today is that I strongly encourage all of you to join various after- class activity groups, which aim to provide a platform for us to explore our interests and passions beyond the classroom.运用了主语从句，表语从句，非限制性定语从句；The activities range from sports to arts, science to culture, ensuring everyone can find something that fix you. 运用了现在分词作状语，限制性定语从句；So, participating in these groups not only allows us to develop new skills but helps us build teamwork, leadership and communication abilities. 运用了动名词作主语；I urge you all to take this opportunity. 运用了不定式作宾补； Embrace the challenge, discover your potential, and let's grow together.运用了祈使句，并列句。
18．【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,
I'm so excited to hear that China Daily is in need of some volunteers to introduce Chinese culture overseas that I can't wait to apply for the position.
As a citizen, it's my responsibility to make Chinese historical and cultural attractions known to the whole world. In addition, with an outgoing and open-minded personality, it's easy for me to get along well with others. Last but not least, I have been to numerous famous scenic spots and my hometown is a famous historical and cultural city, where I often act as a volunteer tour guide to show foreign tourists around, from which I've gained relevant experience.
So, I firmly believe that I'm the very person you're looking for. I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration and reply at your earliest convenience.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本体是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份给报社写一封英文申请信。写作背景： 听闻《中国日报》为了宣传中国传统文化，正在招募志愿者向海外介绍中国著名历史文化景点，你很想参加本次宣传活动。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括： 1．写信目的；2．自荐理由；3．申请参与。 提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：I'm so excited to hear that China Daily is in need of some volunteers to introduce Chinese culture overseas that I can't wait to apply for the position.运用了不定式作原因状语，宾语从句，结果状语从句；As a citizen, it's my responsibility to make Chinese historical and cultural attractions known to the whole world. 运用了it作形式主语。In addition, with an outgoing and open-minded personality, it's easy for me to get along well with others. 运用了it作形式主语； Last but not least, I have been to numerous famous scenic spots and my hometown is a famous historical and cultural city, where I often act as a volunteer tour guide to show foreign tourists around, from which I've gained relevant experience.运用了并列句，非限制性定语从句；
So, I firmly believe that I'm the very person you're looking for. 运用了宾语从句，限制性定语从句；I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration and reply at your earliest convenience.运用了固定句式I would appreciate it if...。
19．【答案】Dear Chris,
I'm delighted to share with you the wonders of China's high-speed rail (HSR) system. Over the past decade, China's HSR has developed rapidly, boasting the largest network in the world and continuously breaking speed records. The cradle of China's HSR is the Beijing-Tianjin Intercity Railway, which started operations in 2008. Since then, the HSR has expanded to connect major cities, covering a network of over 35,000 kilometers.
One of the defining features of China's HSR is its high operational speed, which can reach up to 350 kilometers per hour, making it one of the fastest in the world. Additionally, the trains are known for their comfort, punctuality, and safety. The development of HSR has revolutionized travel in China, reducing travel times significantly and providing a reliable alternative to air travel for medium to long distances.
In daily life, HSR has brought cities closer together, fostering economic development and cultural exchange. It has become an integral part of people's lives, facilitating business trips, tourism, and family visits. For instance, a businessperson living in Shanghai can take a morning HSR to Beijing for a meeting and return on the same day, a journey that would have been impossible without the HSR.
Moreover, the HSR has had a profound impact on the environment by reducing carbon emissions compared to other modes of transportation. As China continues to invest in its HSR network, it is set to play an even more significant role in the country's future development.
I hope this gives you a glimpse into the impressive world of China's HSR. I'm confident that should you visit China, you will have the opportunity to experience its speed and efficiency for yourself.
Yours, Li Hua
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以红星中学高三学生李华的身份 回一封邮件 。写作背景： 你的英国笔友Chris对中国的高铁技术非常感兴趣，并通过邮件向你咨询有关中国高铁的情况。 写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1.中国高铁的发展和特点；2.高铁在日常生活中的作用和影响。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：I'm delighted to share with you the wonders of China's high-speed rail (HSR) system. 运用了不定式作原因状语； Over the past decade, China's HSR has developed rapidly, boasting the largest network in the world and continuously breaking speed records. 运用了现在分词作状语；The cradle of China's HSR is the Beijing-Tianjin Intercity Railway, which started operations in 2008. 运用了非限制性定语从句； Since then, the HSR has expanded to connect major cities, covering a network of over 35,000 kilometers.运用了现在分词作状语；One of the defining features of China's HSR is its high operational speed, which can reach up to 350 kilometers per hour, making it one of the fastest in the world.运用了非限制性定语从句，现在分词作状语；The development of HSR has revolutionized travel in China, reducing travel times significantly and providing a reliable alternative to air travel for medium to long distances.运用了现在分词作状语；For instance, a businessperson living in Shanghai can take a morning HSR to Beijing for a meeting and return on the same day, a journey that would have been impossible without the HSR.运用了限制性定语从句，虚拟语气；As China continues to invest in its HSR network, it is set to play an even more significant role in the country's future development.运用了时间状语从句，被动语态；
I hope this gives you a glimpse into the impressive world of China's HSR. 运用了宾语从句；I'm confident that should you visit China, you will have the opportunity to experience its speed and efficiency for yourself.运用了宾语从句，倒装句。
20．【答案】Welcome to Join the English Writing Competition
Our school English newspaper is excited to announce the upcoming writing competition, whose theme is "Hand in Hand, Save the Food". The competition aims to raise awareness about the importance of saving food.
All students are encouraged to participate. Entries should consist of an original piece of writing, focusing on the theme of food waste and showing how we can contribute to its reduction. Please submit your entries to the English Department mailbox by the deadline of June 1st.
We look forward to your participation and creative submissions.
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生 写一则活动通知 。写作背景： 你校英文报计划举办主题为"携手行动，节约粮食"的作文比赛。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括： (1)介绍活动目的；(2)说明参赛要求。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：Our school English newspaper is excited to announce the upcoming writing competition, whose theme is "Hand in Hand, Save the Food".运用了被动语态，非限制性定语从句； The competition aims to raise awareness about the importance of saving food.运用了不定式作目的状语；All students are encouraged to participate.运用了被动语态； Entries should consist of an original piece of writing, focusing on the theme of food waste and showing how we can contribute to its reduction.运用了现在分词作状语，宾语从句； Please submit your entries to the English Department mailbox by the deadline of June 1st.运用了祈使句。
21．【答案】English Literature Reading Class Opens a New World
I'm excited to share my experience with the weekly English Literature Reading class.
Starting this semester,the class is designed specifically for us to enhance our English proficiency.Each wee ek this class unfolds with a new literary masterpiece ranging from classic novels to contemporary poetry.Through interactive discussions,group readings,and insightful analysis,we are able to explore the depths of literary.Not only does literature reading give me great enjoyment,but Ive honed critical thinking skills.
Moreover,the class has sparked a newfound passion for literature within me,igniting my desire to explore further in the vast world of English letters.It has undoubtedly been a highlight of this academic semester.
【知识点】文字式应用文；日常生活类
【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇短文向学校英文报"Student Voice"栏目投稿，介绍英语文学阅读课以及自己的收获。
1.词汇积累
兴奋的：excited→thrilled
提高：enhance→improve/promote/boost
另外：moreover→furthermore/in addition/besides/what's more
无疑：undoubtedly→beyond doubt
热情：passion→flame/warmth/enthusiasm
强调：highlight→emphasize/stress
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Starting this semester, the class is designed specifically for us to enhance our English proficiency.
拓展句：The class, which started this semester, is designed specifically for us to enhance our English proficiency.
高分句型1 Not only does literature reading give me great enjoyment, but I've honed critical thinking skills. (运用了部分倒装结构)
高分句型2 Moreover, the class has sparked a newfound passion for literature within me, igniting my desire to explore further in the vast world of English letters. (运用了现在分词短语作状语)
【点评】在写作时，要求考生合理谋篇布局，有效的使用语句间的衔接成分，使全文结构紧凑。尽可能使用高级词汇和较为复杂的句子结构。要遵循以下原则：条理性原则，短语优先原则，多实少虚原则以及多变句式原则等。
22．【答案】Dear Michael,
I hope this letter finds you well. I am extremely grateful for you inviting me to attend your school's coming-of-age ceremony online next Monday.
However, I regret to inform you that I won't be availabie at that time due to my scheduled exam and I must focus my attention on preparing for it. Therefore, I'd like to extend my sincere apology for not being able to make it, as I know it's a special moment for you.
Wish your coming-of-age ceremony a complete success. Looking forward to sharing more wonderful time together.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份写一封信，写作背景：你的英国朋友Michael邀请你于下周一线上观看他的成人仪式(, 但你无法应邀。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1. 表达歉意; 2. 说明理由。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：I hope this letter finds you well. 运用了宾语从句；However, I regret to inform you that I won't be availabie at that time due to my scheduled exam and I must focus my attention on preparing for it. 运用了不定式作宾语，宾语从句，并列句；Therefore, I'd like to extend my sincere apology for not being able to make it, as I know it's a special moment for you.运用了宾语从句，原因状语从句，宾语从句。
23．【答案】Hi, everyone! These days, we all seem to be talking about the news that an electronic reading room will be opened. It is exciting indeed! An E-reading room, in our group view, is undoubtedly multi-functional. It is where we can keep ourselves informed of the latest news, where we can have access to various learning resources and where we can solve problems using modern technology, ChatGPT, for example. So an E-reading room, in today's information age, can conveniently and efficiently meet our growing thirst for more information and knowledge. Hope that the E-reading room will be available soon! That's all. Thank you!
Li Hua
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生 代表小组发言 。写作背景： 学校计划开设电子阅览室，大家很是兴奋和期待，为此Mr. Black安排大家在英语课分组进行讨论。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括： 1．电子阅览室的具体用途；2．能给你们带来的好处。 提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：These days, we all seem to be talking about the news that an electronic reading room will be opened. 运用了不定式作表语，同位语从句，被动语态； It is where we can keep ourselves informed of the latest news, where we can have access to various learning resources and where we can solve problems using modern technology, ChatGPT, for example. 运用了表语从句；Hope that the E-reading room will be available soon! 运用了宾语从句。
24．【答案】Dear Ryan,
I'm excited to hear about the English Reading Bar initiative. I recommend focusing on young adult fiction.
First of all, young adult literature often tackles themes and issues that are highly relevant to the teenage experience, such as identity, friendship, and coming of age, which can foster deep engagement and discussion. Moreover, the writing style in these books is typically more approachable for English learners, allowing students to focus on comprehension and enjoyment without being overwhelmed by complex language. Last but not least, they offer a wide array of stories with diverse characters and settings, promoting inclusivity and broadening students' perspectives on different cultures and experiences.
I believe these selections will not only attract students to the bar but also enhance their reading skills and cultural awareness.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份 给外教写一封邮件 。写作背景： 你校外教Ryan拟举办英语读书会活动，想了解哪类图书更能吸引学生。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）推荐的图书类别；2）推荐理由。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：I'm excited to hear about the English Reading Bar initiative.运用了不定式作原因状语；First of all, young adult literature often tackles themes and issues that are highly relevant to the teenage experience, such as identity, friendship, and coming of age, which can foster deep engagement and discussion. 运用了限制性定语从句，非限制性定语从句；Moreover, the writing style in these books is typically more approachable for English learners, allowing students to focus on comprehension and enjoyment without being overwhelmed by complex language. 运用了现在分词作状语；I believe these selections will not only attract students to the bar but also enhance their reading skills and cultural awareness.运用了宾语从句。
25．【答案】The pleasure of reading
Version 1
There is no greater pleasure in the world than reading, which can transport us beyond the boundaries of time and space, allowing us to live a thousand lives. The pleasure of reading is a symphony of the mind and a dance of ideas that enriches the soul.
"Charlotte's Web" is such a charming tale as I read long ago but still touches my heart so much. I am greatly impressed by Charlotte's wisdom, kindness, and unwavering loyalty to Wilbur. The web she spins, with its miraculous words, is a symbol of the power of love and creativity to change lives. I can also recall the many moments I couldn't resist laughing when the light and playful humor in the book ticked my funny bone.
For me, "Charlotte's Web" demonstrates the best of what literature can offer: a story that is both entertaining and enriching, a journey that is as delightful as it is meaningful.
Version 2
The pleasure of reading lies in the expansion of our horizons as we explore diverse cultures and encounter different people. It encourages critical thinking and fosters a deeper understanding of the world around us.
"The Biography of Qian Xuesen", a witness to the transformation of a talented young mind into a leading figure in science and technology, is a story of perseverance, curiosity, and an unwavering commitment to his motherland.
The joy of reading this biography is a profound experience that transcends the written word, offering me a deep dive into the life and achievements of a remarkable individual who played a pivotal role in shaping China's aerospace industry. His decision to return to China despite personal risks has greatly resonated with me, instilling a sense of wonder and inspiration.
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生写一篇征文稿。写作背景： 为庆祝创刊30周年，你校英文报以"The pleasure of Reading"为题举办征文活动。 写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）阅读的乐趣；2）介绍一本你喜欢的书；3）你喜欢的理由。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：Version 1中的：There is no greater pleasure in the world than reading, which can transport us beyond the boundaries of time and space, allowing us to live a thousand lives.运用了there be固定式，"否定词+比较级"，非限制性定语从句，现在分词作状语； The pleasure of reading is a symphony of the mind and a dance of ideas that enriches the soul.运用了限制性定语从句；"Charlotte's Web" is such a charming tale as I read long ago but still touches my heart so much. 运用了限制性定语从句； The web she spins, with its miraculous words, is a symbol of the power of love and creativity to change lives. 运用了限制性定语从句；I can also recall the many moments I couldn't resist laughing when the light and playful humor in the book ticked my funny bone.运用了限制性定语从句，时间状语从句；For me, "Charlotte's Web" demonstrates the best of what literature can offer: a story that is both entertaining and enriching, a journey that is as delightful as it is meaningful.运用了宾语从句，限制性定语从句，比较状语从句。
Version 2部分中的：The pleasure of reading lies in the expansion of our horizons as we explore diverse cultures and encounter different people. 运用了时间状语从句； "The Biography of Qian Xuesen", a witness to the transformation of a talented young mind into a leading figure in science and technology, is a story of perseverance, curiosity, and an unwavering commitment to his motherland.运用了同位语；The joy of reading this biography is a profound experience that transcends the written word, offering me a deep dive into the life and achievements of a remarkable individual who played a pivotal role in shaping China's aerospace industry. 运用了限制性定语从句；His decision to return to China despite personal risks has greatly resonated with me, instilling a sense of wonder and inspiration.运用了现在分词作状语。
26．【答案】Dear Robert,
I feel delighted to know that you are going to teach us fencing as an optional course. But I still think it is not a suitable decision. As we all know, fencing is not widely popular with students. Even worse, fencing has high requirements on facilities that we hardly meet at present. Therefore, I strongly recommend football or tennis as your optional course since both of them are also your strengths. Or in order to satisfy our needs, you'd better make a survey on what kind of sports we students prefer to learn before your final decision.
I really hope my feedback can help you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【知识点】提纲作文；文字式应用文；半开放性作文
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份 给外教写一封邮件 。写作背景： 你校外教Robert打算开设击剑运动作为选修课，现征求同学们意见，你认为击剑课不符合你校目前实际情况。 写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1. 你的观点与理由;2. 提出建议。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态

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