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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was an Art lesson. Rachel sat at the desk watching her classmates busy preparing the water jars and paints. She understood why Mrs. Weston asked her to sit down and got Lisa to fetch everything for her. It was always a disaster when Rachel tried to do Art!
Rachel sighed and reached out to dip her brush in some black paint and — oh, no! She knocked over the jar. The water spread across the desk and drowned the paper. Lisa called Mrs. Weston to see what Rachel had done. Rachel went red in the face. She jumped to her feet to get a cloth. Her chair fell over backwards. She turned round and her paintbrush caught Lisa across the face, giving her a black moustache. Lisa was so surprised that she fell back against a wire bookstand. It came crashing down and the books went all over the floor.
How clumsy! Rachel thought as she went home on the bus. The bus stopped outside her house. She jumped up and her elbow (肘部) knocked a woman’s hat right over her eyes. Oh, no! Rachel said sorry, got off and ran indoors. Mum wasn’t in the kitchen but lay in bed as she caught an awful cold. Rachel offered to make a cup of tea but Mum would rather wait for Dad. Rachel sighed. She understood Mum was afraid she would spill (溅出) it.
“But would you go to Mrs. Willow for some cold cure ” asked Mum. Rachel turned to the door at once. “But Rachel, Mrs. Willow’s house is full of beautiful things, so if she asks you to come in, you’d better say no.” Rachel sighed and ran out.
Mrs. Willow was an old lady with white hair and sharp blue eyes living in an old house. She opened the door and invited her in. Rachel said why she came and that she preferred to wait outside remembering her mother’s warning. Mrs. Willow insisted Rachel come inside. Rachel took a deep breath and stepped in. She looked round Mrs. Willow’s sitting room and saw at once why Mum had been worried.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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There were beautiful things everywhere— pretty china figures and delicate vases. _______
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With a smile Mrs. Willow comforted her saying it had been broken before._____________
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一、文章大意
Rachel 是个在艺术课和生活中都有些笨手笨脚的女孩。在艺术课上，她先是打翻了颜料罐，又弄倒了椅子，还让 Lisa 摔了一跤。回家路上，她又碰掉了一位女士的帽子。回到家后，妈妈让她去 Mrs. Willow 家拿感冒药，尽管妈妈提醒她 Mrs. Willow 家有很多漂亮东西要小心，但 Mrs. Willow 还是邀请她进屋，她在屋里紧张得不知所措，担心自己会碰坏东西，结果还是不小心打碎了一个花瓶。不过 Mrs. Willow 并未责怪她，这让她有所感悟，意识到也许笨手笨脚并不是无法克服的问题，人们也可能会理解她的失误。
二、伏笔及回应
伏笔：艺术课上 Rachel 的各种笨拙行为，如打翻颜料罐、弄倒椅子等。
回应：在 Mrs. Willow 家，她同样因为紧张而表现得笨手笨脚，最终打碎了花瓶，进一步强化了她 “笨拙” 的形象。
伏笔：妈妈让 Rachel 去 Mrs. Willow 家拿药时特意提醒那里有很多漂亮东西要小心。
回应：Rachel 进入 Mrs. Willow 家后，看到那些漂亮易碎的物品时极度紧张，为后面打碎花瓶做了铺垫，回应了妈妈的提醒。
伏笔：Rachel 每次犯错后的叹气，表现出她对自己笨拙的无奈和沮丧。
回应：在打碎花瓶后，她的叹气以及内心的绝望再次体现了这种情绪，使人物的情感更加连贯。
伏笔：Rachel 知道自己总是笨手笨脚，担心妈妈让她泡茶会溅出来。
回应：在 Mrs. Willow 家，这种担心转化为对碰坏东西的恐惧，从而导致她更加小心翼翼却还是出错。
伏笔：Mrs. Willow 坚持让 Rachel 进屋，尽管 Rachel 有所犹豫。
回应：这为后面 Rachel 在屋里的经历以及两人之间的互动创造了条件，也为 Mrs. Willow 安慰 Rachel 埋下伏笔。
三、续写要点
第一段：
要点：Rachel 对打碎花瓶感到极度愧疚和害怕，不知如何是好。Mrs. Willow 看出她的不安，开始安慰她，讲述这个花瓶的故事，比如它虽然精美但自己一直担心会有意外发生，没想到这次真的碎了，不过这也没什么大不了的，让 Rachel 不要太过自责。
情感线：从极度的惊慌和愧疚逐渐转变为对 Mrs. Willow 安慰的惊讶和感动，开始放松一些。
故事线：花瓶打碎后 Rachel 的慌乱，到 Mrs. Willow 过来安慰并讲述花瓶的故事，缓解了紧张气氛。
第二段：
要点：Rachel 听了 Mrs. Willow 的话后，心里好受了许多，真诚地再次道歉并感谢 Mrs. Willow 的宽容。Mrs. Willow 鼓励她不要因为自己有些笨拙就总是小心翼翼、缺乏自信，每个人都会犯错，重要的是从错误中学习和成长。Rachel 带着药回家，一路上思考着 Mrs. Willow 的话，决定以后要更加勇敢地面对自己的不足，不再因为害怕犯错而畏缩不前。
情感线：从感动和放松转变为受到鼓舞，充满决心和希望，对自己有了新的认识和态度。
故事线：Rachel 与 Mrs. Willow 的进一步交流，得到鼓励后回家，完成了内心的转变和故事的发展。
四、主旨升华句
"It is through our mistakes that we learn the most valuable lessons and find the strength to grow."（正是通过我们的错误，我们学到了最宝贵的教训，并找到了成长的力量。）
"Embracing our imperfections is the first step towards self-acceptance and courage."（接纳我们的不完美是走向自我接纳和勇气的第一步。）
"In the face of our clumsiness, kindness and understanding can light the way to a better self."（面对我们的笨拙，善良和理解可以照亮通往更好自我的道路。）
"Don't let the fear of making mistakes hold you back; instead, let it propel you forward."（不要让对犯错的恐惧阻碍你；相反，让它推动你前进。）
"Our flaws are not the end but the beginning of a journey towards a more resilient us."（我们的缺点不是终点，而是走向更坚韧的自己的旅程的起点。）
五、写作示范
示范一
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Rachel stood frozen, staring at the shattered vase on the floor. Her eyes filled with tears, and her hands trembled. She was certain that Mrs. Willow would be furious. Mrs. Willow slowly walked over, bent down, and picked up a piece of the vase. "Oh, dear," she said softly. "I've always been a bit worried about this vase. It was so delicate. But you know, accidents happen, and it's just an object. There's no need to be so distraught." Rachel looked at her in astonishment, unable to believe her ears.
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Rachel sniffled and murmured another apology. Mrs. Willow smiled and handed her the cold cure. "Rachel," she said, "we all have our clumsy moments. Don't let this one little incident make you feel bad. You're a sweet girl, and these things happen to the best of us. The important thing is to learn from it and move forward." Rachel nodded, feeling a glimmer of hope. As she walked home, she thought about Mrs. Willow's words. She realized that she had been letting her clumsiness hold her back and decided that from now on, she would face her mistakes bravely and not be so afraid of making them.
示范二
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There were beautiful things everywhere — pretty china figures and delicate vases. Rachel's heart pounded in her chest as she beheld the shattered vase at her feet. She felt as if the world had come crashing down around her. Mrs. Willow approached, her expression calm. "Rachel," she began, "this vase has been in my family for a long time, and I always knew there was a chance it could get broken. It's just a part of life. You didn't mean for this to happen." Rachel was speechless, her guilt still overwhelming.
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With a smile Mrs. Willow comforted her saying it had been broken before. "Now, don't you worry," she continued. "You're here to get medicine for your mother, and that's what matters. We all make mistakes, and it's how we handle them that defines us." Rachel finally found her voice and thanked Mrs. Willow. As she left the house, she felt a new sense of determination. She understood that she couldn't change the fact that she was a bit clumsy, but she could change how she reacted to it. From that day on, Rachel would strive to be more confident and not let her small accidents overshadow her kindness and good intentions.
参考答案
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There were beautiful things everywhere — pretty china figures and delicate vases. Rachel stood very still, afraid of knocking something over. Mrs. Willow handed Rachel a small brown bottle. Rachel couldn’t wait to get away, feeling any minute there would be a disaster. She thanked her and turned to the door when something brushed against her leg. Rachel was so surprised that she jumped backwards. It was a cat! But her elbow hit a vase and it fell to the floor, broken. How awkward!
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With a smile Mrs. Willow comforted her saying it had been broken before. Rachel sighed and stared at her. I did, when I was young.“You couldn’t have been as clumsy as I was,” Mrs. Willow said, her sharp blue eyes shining. Keep telling yourself you are a swan and it will work. Rachel doubtfully said that several times. After they cleared up the vase, they drank tea from china cups and ate cakes off delicate plates and Rachel didn’t break another thing. It was a kind of magic. Rachel smiled.

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