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中考复习写作思路：感谢信
1.Why should we thank sb during our growth
- that’s because they have helped us.
- that’s because they have accompanied(陪伴) us (we shared happiness and sorrow together: 我们共同分享喜怒哀乐)
- that’s because they have made a (positive )difference to us (他们对我们产生了积极的影响)
- that’s because we become a better person=(a better version of ourselves) owing to them
2.So who should we be thankful/grateful to during our growth
- parents - teachers - friends/classmates/partners - a helpful stranger
3.For what:
- help - education - guidance - company(陪伴) - care
- love - trust - time - devotion
Thanks，_______.
What will you include in your passage？
1.Who:
(1)his personality：be like
(2)His look：look like
2.Why：
For his help, education, guidance, company(陪伴), care, love, trust, time, devotion
Why such things is important:
Because such things from this person brought positive change/influence on us
And we can get through difficulties because of him
3.How to thank:
(1)your behaviour
①To buy present
②To work hard; study hard; play hard
③To help him in return
(2)Your thoughts
①To remember his love
(3)Your wish:
①Be happy
②Be healthy
What should be you focus(关注) in this passage
1.why to thank him: what happened between you guys.
2.How to thank him: your behaviour is the key to thank him
演讲稿：
开头：
- to lead in the topic
- to lead in that special person
To lead in the topic:
1.每个人都会遇到一个重要的人，这个人给我们造成了积极的影响或者帮我们克服了困难。
(1)Everyone meets someone important who helps us a lot or solves our problems.
(2)Each of us will encounter an important person who has a positive impact on our lives or assists=help us in overcoming challenges.
(3)In every person's life, there's a key figure（关键人物） who positively affects us or helps us through tough times.
2.我们的生命中总会有一些特殊的人，他们帮助了我们，让我们变成了一个更好的自己。
(1)（It is admitted that = Admittedly,）There are special people in our life who help us become better.
(2)In our lives, there are always some special people who assist=help us and make us a better version of ourselves.
(3)Throughout our journey, we constantly(不断地) encounter unique individuals（独一无二的人们） whose support and guidance not only aid us but also inspire us to become better versions of ourselves.
3.在成长的过程中，总会有一些特殊的人，是他们的爱，帮助，点亮了我们的生命（青春）.
(1)As we grow, special people with their love and help light up our life.
(2)During our growth, there are special individuals whose love and assistance illuminate=light up our lives.
(3)In the journey of maturation（成熟）, it is the love and support from exceptional(杰出的) people that cast a radiant light（投下光芒） upon our youth, guiding us forward.
To lead in that special person:
1.对我来说，这个人是_______.
1. For me, that person is _______.
2. In my case, this individual is _______.
3. Personally, the person who has played this role for me is _______.
2.这个对我造成影响的人是我的_______.
1. The person who influenced me is my _______.
2. This impactful individual in my life is my _______.
3. The person who has made a significant difference in my life is my _______.
3.言语无法表达我对______ 的感谢.
1. Words can't express my thanks to _______.
2. I can't put into words how grateful I am to _______.
3. It's impossible to express=articulate the depth of my gratitude towards _______.
中间部分
1.Why should I be thankful to him:
(1)Notes1: you shouldn’t write something he had done to you, so it makes your gratitude well-grounded(有充分理由的)
(2)Notes2: since you will also show how to thank him, so you shouldn’t write too many details about what happened between you and him.
需要有你们之间发生的事情，但是又不能过于细节，因为还要表达如何感谢他！
Introduction of this person：
1.Look like
2.Be like
3.How he treats you
4.How he helps you
1.Look like + be like
1.As for ______, he/she is a(n) _______ and _______(这部分填入adj.表达了这个人的性格) person with _______ and ________. （这部分填入n. 表示这个人长相上所拥有的特质）
2.Being _______ and ________, my ________ is a person with _______ and ________.
3.With ________ and ________, my ________ is _________ and __________.
（这部分的目的在于，解决这个人的性格和外貌，不需要详细描写）
另外，表示这个人的性格，不一定只用给出形容词，也可以用他具体做了什么事情体现
2.How he treats you：（如何对待你，比较笼统的描写）
1.He/she is always _______ and/but _______ to me, and his words/company/caring/love always help me out in difficult/hard time.
2.He always treat me ______ and/but _____, and his words/company/caring/love always serve as a comfort/guidance when I meet difficulties.
3.With his ______ and ______ manners, I can always get through hard times/overcome difficulties owing to his helpful words/company/caring/love.
3.one specific example:
1.I still remember one time when I failed the _______, it is his comfort and encouragement cheered me up and made it the next time.
2.What impressed me most is one time when I __________ (遇到的困难), his company and support ___________.
3.Whenever I __________ (遇到困难), his support and guidance always cast a light on me, which enable me to _________ (取得结果).
How to thank him:
Actions speak louder than words. You need to do something to thank him.
1.What you can do:
(1)To express my thanks to him, I can buy presents for him, study hard and help him when he is in trouble.
(2)in order to show(case) my gratitude, I can first buy presents for him, which shows/symbolizes/embodies my love. Besides, I will always study/work hard to be a better person so that I may help him one day.
(3)To convey my gratitude, I can purchase thoughtful presents for him. Besides, nothing is more important than working hard, and then have the ability to offer help to him whenever he faces challenges.
2.what you will do:
(1)I will remember his love and words forever.
(2)I will remember his love all the time and his encouraging words will always be a kind reminder when I want to give up.
(3)I will always remember his love and encouragement, for which I can grow up as a better person.
3.What’s your wish:
(1)I wish he can stay happy and healthy all the time.
(2)I wish he can stay happy, and everything in life goes smoothly for him.(我希望一切都能够进展顺利)
(3)I wish he can stay happy, and may all aspect of his life(生活的各方面) goes smoothly.
1.结尾：
To repeat his help and your thanks.
1.Thanks again, ______. Your ______ and _______ help me through difficulties and become a better person.
2.______ thanks for your time and help(devotion) again. I won’t fail you and will become a better person in the future.
3.Words fails to convey gratitude for you, my ______. I will strive hard for a better self and better future because of you.
模板提炼1：(基础版本)
Everyone meets someone important who helps us a lot or solves our problems. For me, that person is _______.
As for ______, he/she is a(n) _______ and _______(这部分填入adj.表达了这个人的性格) person with _______ and ________. （这部分填入n. 表示这个人长相上所拥有的特质）He/she is always _______ and/but _______ to me, and his words/company/caring/love always help me out in difficult/hard time. I still remember one time when I failed the _______, it is his comfort and encouragement cheered me up and made it the next time.
To express my thanks to him, I can buy presents for him, study hard and help him when he is in trouble. I will remember his love and words forever. I wish he can stay happy and healthy all the time.
Thanks again, ______. Your ______ and _______ help me through difficulties and become a better person.
以老师为例子：
Everyone meets someone important who helps us a lot or solves our problems. For me, that person is my English teacher, Stark.
As for Stark, he/she is a(n) kind and humorous person with a short hair and a pair of glasses. He/she is always helpful and patient to me, and his words/company/caring/love always help me out in difficult/hard time. I still remember one time when I failed the English exam badly, it is his comfort and encouragement that cheered me up and I made it the next time.
To express my thanks to him, I can buy presents for him, study hard and help him when he needs me. I will remember his love and words forever. I wish he can stay happy and healthy all the time.
Thanks again, Stark. Your patience and guidance help me through difficulties and become a better person.
模板提炼2：进阶版本
In our lives, there are always some special people who assist=help us and make us a better version of ourselves. The person who has made a significant difference in my life is my _______.
Being _______ and ________, my ________ is a person with _______ and ________. He always treat me ______ and/but _____, and his words/company/caring/love always serve as a comfort/guidance when I meet difficulties. What impressed me most is one time when I __________ (遇到的困难), his company and support ___________.
in order to show(case) my gratitude, I can first buy presents for him, which shows/symbolizes/embodies my love. Besides, I will always study/work hard to be a better person so that I may help him one day. I will remember his love all the time and his encouraging words will always be a kind reminder when I want to give up. I wish he can stay happy, and everything in life goes smoothly for him.(我希望一切都能够进展顺利)
______ thanks for your time and help(devotion) again. I won’t fail you and will become a better person in the future.
以妈妈为例子
In our lives, there are always some special people who assist=help us and make us a better version of ourselves. The person who has made a significant difference in my life is my mother.
Being kind and helpful, my mother is a person with big eyes and sunshine smiles.She always treat me strictly but patiently, and his words/company/caring/love always serve as a comfort/guidance when I meet difficulties. What impressed me most is one time when I failed the final exam(遇到的困难), instead of criticizing me, her company and support made me regain confidence and made progress.
In order to show(case) my gratitude, I can first buy presents for her, which shows/symbolizes/embodies my love. Besides, I will always study/work hard to be a better person so that I may help her one day. I will remember her love all the time and her encouraging words will always be a kind reminder when I want to give up. I wish she can stay happy, and everything in life goes smoothly for her.(我希望一切都能够进展顺利)
Mum, thanks for your time and help(devotion) again. I won’t fail you and will become a better person in the future.
模板提炼：大神版本
During our growth, there are special individuals whose love and assistance illuminate=light up our lives. =（In the journey of maturation（成熟）, it is the love and support from exceptional(杰出的) people that cast a radiant light（投下光芒） upon our youth, guiding us forward.) . Personally, words can't express my thanks to _______.
With ________ and ________, my ________ is _________ and __________. = (可以用他做的具体的行为，来表示性格，性格不一定需要用形容词体现) With his ______ and ______ manners, I can always get through hard times/overcome difficulties owing to his helpful words/company/caring/love. Whenever I __________ (遇到困难), his support and guidance always cast a light on me, which enable me to _________ (取得结果).
To convey my gratitude, I can purchase thoughtful presents for him. Besides, nothing is more important than working hard, and then have the ability to offer help to him whenever he faces challenges. I will always remember his love and encouragement, for which I can grow up as a better person.I wish he can stay happy, and may all aspect of his life(生活的各方面) goes smoothly.
Words fails to convey gratitude for you, my ______. I will strive hard for a better self and better future because of you.
以朋友Li Hua为例子：
During our growth, there are special individuals whose love and assistance illuminate=light up our lives. =（In the journey of maturation（成熟）, it is the love and support from exceptional(杰出的) people that cast a radiant light（投下光芒） upon our youth, guiding us forward.) . Personally, words can't express my thanks to my best friend, Li Hua.
With a warm smile and two big eyes, Li Hua always comes up with good ideas for others. With his helpful and intelligent manners, I can always get through hard times/overcome difficulties owing to his helpful words/company/caring/love. Whenever I want to give up, like one basketball competition, his support and guidance always cast a light on me, which enable me to fight till the end (取得结果).
To convey my gratitude, I can purchase thoughtful presents for him. Besides, nothing is more important than working hard, and then have the ability to offer help to him whenever he faces challenges. I will always remember his love and encouragement, for which I can grow up as a better person.I wish he can stay happy, and may all aspect of his life(生活的各方面) goes smoothly.
Words fails to convey gratitude for you, my best friend,Li Hua. I will strive hard for a better self and better future because of you.

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