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In my community, there’s a much-loved street cleaner named Paul Spiers. Since 2017, the 63-year-old has been dutifully cleaning our streets. As he sweeps, he always sings along with the melodious tunes of Elvis Presley（猫王）. Paul’s beautiful voice floats in the air, adding a unique charm to our community.
Paul has developed deep and genuine friendships with many of us locals. I’m his best friend as we both love Elvis’ songs. Whenever we express our gratitude to him, he always smiles brightly and says he’s just doing his job. His presence has not only kept our roads clean but also lifted our spirits.
We, the neighbours, were deeply touched by Paul’s hard work and positive attitude. So we decided to come together to give him a special gift. We managed to raise over 3,000 to send him on a holiday to Portugal, a place he had always dreamed of revisiting since he had only been abroad once, and that was to Portugal.
However, our kind plan encountered a big problem. Paul’s employer, a waste management company, stated that employees couldn’t receive any gifts in the form of money other than their regular salary according to strict corporate rules. At this news, Paul said, “Well, rules are rules. It’s okay. I’m grateful for what everyone has tried to do for me.” He continued to sweep the floor, humming a song of Elvis Presley as usual.
We were all disappointed that Paul couldn’t enjoy this well-deserved holiday as a reward for all his hard work for our community and determined to find a proper way to recognize Paul.
I posted Paul’s story on social media, “Giving him this incredible gift would be a heartfelt way to show our appreciation for everything he does. Let’s come together to make this dream happen for someone who truly deserves it.” The post went viral and caught the attention of a package holiday company, OnTheBeach.
The manager of OnTheBeach got in touch with me, and put forward a proper way to recognize Paul.
注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
OnTheBeach announced online that it was to hold a special singing competition.
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To Paul’s relief, the waste management company had no objection to him accepting the win.
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文章大意：在社区里，63 岁的街道清洁工保罗自 2017 年以来一直勤恳工作，清扫街道时还会哼唱猫王的歌曲，他与居民们建立了深厚友谊，大家都很喜欢他。居民们被保罗的努力和积极态度所感动，集资 3000 多英镑想送他去葡萄牙度假，那是他一直梦想重游的地方。然而，保罗所在的废物管理公司规定员工除工资外不能接受金钱形式的礼物，计划受阻，但保罗坦然接受。后来 “我” 将保罗的故事发布在社交媒体上，引起了 OnTheBeach 度假公司的注意。
伏笔及回应：
伏笔：保罗爱哼唱猫王的歌曲，这为后续度假公司举办以猫王歌曲演唱为主题的比赛做铺垫，使比赛形式与保罗的爱好紧密相连，顺理成章地引出后续情节。
回应：度假公司举办的比赛要求参赛者演唱猫王歌曲，保罗凭借自己对猫王歌曲的热爱和擅长，有机会参与并最终赢得比赛，实现去葡萄牙度假的梦想，呼应了前文保罗的爱好设定。
伏笔：居民们集资送保罗度假却因公司规定受阻，这引发了后续在社交媒体上寻求帮助的情节，为故事的发展制造了波折和悬念。
回应：“我” 在社交媒体上发布保罗的故事后，引起度假公司关注，从而推动了比赛形式的奖励计划，使故事朝着解决问题的方向发展，情节连贯且富有逻辑性。
伏笔：保罗之前只出国去过一次葡萄牙，且一直梦想重游，突出了葡萄牙对他的特殊意义，为他渴望赢得比赛去葡萄牙度假增添了情感动力。
回应：保罗在比赛中获胜后能够前往葡萄牙，满足了他的心愿，也让读者感受到他梦想成真的喜悦，同时强化了故事的情感色彩，与前文的伏笔相呼应。
伏笔：保罗对居民们的感恩和积极面对不能度假的态度，展现了他的善良和豁达，使读者更希望他能得到一个好的结果，为后续大家继续努力帮助他做了情感铺垫。
回应：当度假公司提出比赛计划时，大家积极参与，最终帮助保罗赢得比赛，体现了社区居民对保罗的持续支持和关爱，也回应了保罗之前的善良形象，让故事充满温暖和正能量。
伏笔：OnTheBeach 度假公司关注到 “我” 发布的帖子，这一情节引出了公司将采取行动帮助保罗的伏笔，为故事的转折和解决提供了可能性。
回应：度假公司通过举办比赛的方式，巧妙地避开了保罗公司的规定，让保罗有机会获得度假机会，既解决了问题，又使故事富有创意和合理性，完成了伏笔的呼应和故事的完整叙述。
续写要点
第一段：
情感线：保罗得知比赛消息后，心中充满希望与感激，同时也有些紧张和期待；社区居民们热情高涨，纷纷鼓励保罗参赛，并积极为他拉票，大家都怀着对保罗的深厚情谊，希望他能赢得比赛；其他参赛者也被保罗的故事所感动，虽有竞争但也带着祝福的心情参与。
故事线：OnTheBeach 宣布举办一场特殊的演唱比赛，获胜者将获得去葡萄牙的度假机会，主题是演唱猫王的歌曲，以契合保罗的爱好。保罗决定参赛，他认真挑选歌曲并反复练习。比赛过程中，视频在网络上广泛传播，保罗的歌声打动了许多人，社区居民们不遗余力地为他投票，分享他的故事，让更多人了解到这位可爱的街道清洁工。
第二段：
情感线：保罗得知公司不反对他接受奖品时，欣喜若狂，对度假公司、社区居民以及所有帮助他的人充满了感恩之情；社区居民们也为保罗感到高兴和自豪，大家的努力得到了回报，整个社区洋溢着温馨和喜悦的氛围；保罗带着大家的祝福踏上旅程，内心满是温暖和幸福，也更加坚定了他回来后继续为社区服务的决心。
故事线：经过激烈的角逐和投票，保罗最终赢得了比赛。当得知保罗所在的废物管理公司不反对他接受这份奖励时，大家都松了一口气。度假公司为保罗精心安排了行程，保罗怀着激动的心情踏上了前往葡萄牙的旅程。他在旅途中欣赏美景，享受难得的放松时光，还不时与社区的朋友们分享他的快乐。这次经历不仅让保罗实现了梦想，也让社区居民之间的关系更加紧密，大家共同见证了善良和爱的力量。
主旨升华句：
In the tapestry of life, it is the threads of kindness and community spirit that weave the most beautiful patterns, reminding us that even the smallest acts of love can create a masterpiece of human connection.（在生活的织锦中，是善良和社区精神的丝线编织出最美丽的图案，提醒我们即使是最微小的爱的举动也能创造出人类联系的杰作。）
True rewards come not from material possessions, but from the warmth of a community's embrace and the fulfillment of a shared dream, for it is in these moments that the essence of humanity shines brightest.（真正的回报不是来自物质财富，而是来自社区拥抱的温暖和共同梦想的实现，因为正是在这些时刻，人性的本质最为闪耀。）
Sometimes, the path to a dream may be filled with obstacles, but when a community unites with love and determination, they can transform those hurdles into stepping stones towards a greater good, proving that nothing is impossible when hearts are joined as one.（有时，梦想的道路可能充满障碍，但当一个社区以爱和决心团结在一起时，他们可以将这些障碍转化为通往更大利益的垫脚石，证明当心灵团结一致时，没有什么是不可能的。）
The gift of giving is not just in the act itself, but in the ripple effect it creates, inspiring others to come forward and make a difference, and in the end, it is the collective kindness that enriches our lives and makes the world a better place.（给予的礼物不仅仅在于行为本身，还在于它所产生的涟漪效应，激励他人挺身而出并有所作为，最终，是集体的善良丰富了我们的生活，让世界变得更美好。）
A single act of kindness, like a pebble thrown into a pond, can create waves of change that touch the lives of many, spreading love and hope far and wide, and reminding us that we all have the power to make a positive impact on those around us.（一个小小的善举，就像扔进池塘的一颗鹅卵石，可以产生改变的涟漪，触动许多人的生活，将爱和希望广泛传播，提醒我们我们都有能力对周围的人产生积极的影响。）
写作示范
示范一
OnTheBeach announced online that it was to hold a special singing competition. The news spread like wildfire throughout the community and beyond. Paul was both astonished and deeply touched. With a glimmer of hope in his eyes, he began to practice his favorite Elvis Presley song day and night. The neighbors rallied around him, offering words of encouragement and helping him with the technical aspects of recording his entry. As the competition progressed, videos of contestants poured in, but Paul's rendition stood out, not only for his melodious voice but also for the genuine emotion he poured into it. People from all walks of life were moved by his story and voted for him, sharing his video with friends and family.
To Paul’s relief, the waste management company had no objection to him accepting the win. When the results were announced, and Paul's name was called as the winner, the community erupted in cheers. The vacation company promptly arranged all the details for his trip to Portugal. Paul could hardly believe his luck. As he boarded the plane, he looked back at the community that had supported him through thick and thin. This journey was not just a trip; it was a testament to the power of unity and kindness. It showed that when a community comes together with a common purpose, they can overcome any obstacle and make someone's dream come true. Paul returned from his holiday with a renewed spirit, ready to continue serving his community with even more love and dedication, knowing that he was truly part of a remarkable family.
示范二
OnTheBeach announced online that it was to hold a special singing competition. Paul was initially hesitant, doubting his chances against other contestants. But the unwavering support of the neighbors bolstered his confidence. They helped him choose the perfect Elvis song and even set up a makeshift recording studio in the community center. The competition videos flooded the internet, and Paul's performance began to gain traction. People were captivated by his humble charm and the purity of his voice. The community launched a social media campaign, sharing his story far and wide, and the votes started pouring in.
To Paul’s relief, the waste management company had no objection to him accepting the win. The moment he received the news, tears welled up in his eyes. The vacation company provided him with a first-class experience, and Paul set off on his long-awaited adventure. Along the way, he sent back pictures and messages to the community, sharing his joy. This experience was a beautiful reminder that kindness knows no bounds and that a community's love can transform lives. It taught everyone that when we come together to support one another, we can create miracles and make the world a little brighter. Paul came back with a heart full of gratitude, vowing to pay forward the kindness he had received and continue to be the heart and soul of the community he called home.
A possible version
OnTheBeach announced online that it was to hold a special singing competition. Titled “Craziest Fan of Elvis Presley”, the competition announced that the winner would have a free trip to Portugal! I informed Paul of the news immediately and encouraged him to sign up for it. Finally came the competition day! I was sitting in the audience, fully confident that Paul would surely win. When he started singing, his passion for Elvis Presley’s music filled the entire venue. It came as no surprise that Paul won the competition comfortably. Overjoyed as Paul was, he was a little bit worried that the company might stop him from claiming the award like before. (99)
To Paul’s relief, the waste management company had no objection to him accepting the win. Paul was over the moon. With eyes glistening with tears of joy, he couldn’t restrain his feeling of gratitude. I wiped away the tears from his eyes, and hugged him tight, saying, “You deserve it!” The people in the town were equally ecstatic. Everyone felt a sense of pride and warmth, knowing that their collective efforts had brought such happiness to a man who had given so much to the community. As Paul set off on his journey, there was an air of celebration throughout the town, and his story became a beautiful reminder of the power of kindness and community spirit. (102)

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