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重庆市2025届高考第零次诊断性质量检测英语试题
第二节（满分25分）
67．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Because of my limp (跛行) since childhood, I never thought about running a marathon. However, when my head teacher said last Friday that a campus marathon was coming up, I really wanted to take part. Considering my physical condition, I started to feel afraid of signing up.
When my friend Eric learned of my situation, he volunteered to be my running partner, determined to help me reach the finish line.
Our training journey was challenging yet satisfying. We spent countless hours running together, starting with short distances and slowly increasing our running distance. Eric’s encouragement and patience were important in keeping me active.
One autumn morning, we set out for our first long training run. With each step, I felt the weight of my leg, but Eric encouraged me to push through. “Keep going and you’ve got this!” Eric’s voice rang through the air. As the weeks passed, I noticed great improvements in my distance and speed. Eric celebrated each small victory I made and I was gradually getting the confidence and courage to take part in the marathon.
On race day, we stood among a large group of runners. Nervous, I looked at Eric, who gave me a comforting smile. When everything was ready, we set off.
The first few miles were hard. My limp became more noticeable, and doubts came into my mind. But Eric’s presence was a great source of encouragement. He cheered me on, reminding me of our months of preparation.
As we neared the end of the marathon, I could see the finish line in sight. But then, just meters away from the finish line, I fell. Pain went through my leg, and at that time, I thought about giving up.
“We’re almost there! Don’t give up!” Eric, running beside me, shouted loudly.
注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1： He helped me up.
Paragraph 2： I hugged (拥抱) Eric close and felt truly thankful.
第二节（满分25分）
67．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Because of my limp (跛行) since childhood, I never thought about running a marathon. However, when my head teacher said last Friday(宾从) that a campus marathon was coming up(宾从), I really wanted to take part. Considering my physical condition(非谓语动词做原因状语), I started to feel afraid of signing up.
When my friend Eric learned of my situation(状从), he volunteered to be my running partner, determined to help me reach the finish line(非谓语动词短语做补语).
Our training journey was challenging yet satisfying. We spent countless hours running together, starting with short distances and slowly increasing our running distance(非谓语动词做伴随动作). Eric’s encouragement and patience were important in keeping me active.
One autumn morning, we set out for our first long training run. With each step, I felt the weight of my leg, but Eric encouraged me to push through. “Keep going and you’ve got this!” Eric’s voice rang through the air. As the weeks passed(状从), I noticed great improvements in my distance and speed. Eric celebrated each small victory I made(定从) and I was gradually getting the confidence and courage to take part in the marathon.
On race day, we stood among a large group of runners. Nervous, I looked at Eric, who gave me a comforting smile(定从). When everything was ready(状从), we set off.
The first few miles were hard. My limp became more noticeable, and doubts came into my mind. But Eric’s presence was a great source of encouragement. He cheered me on, reminding me of our months of preparation(非谓语动词做伴随动作).
As we neared the end of the marathon(状从), I could see the finish line in sight. But then, just meters away from the finish line, I fell. Pain went through my leg, and at that time, I thought about giving up.
“We’re almost there! Don’t give up!” Eric, running beside me(非谓语动词做伴随动作), shouted loudly.
注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1： He helped me up.
Paragraph 2： I hugged (拥抱) Eric close and felt truly thankful.
1. 类型分析与思路构思
文章类型
这篇文章属于情感励志型读后续写题，重点在于人物间的互动、情感转折以及通过克服困难达成目标的过程。续写部分需要承接并延续原文的情感发展，特别是在主人公面临身体上的极限时，如何通过伙伴的鼓励和支持，最终完成挑战。
读后续写思路构思
构思框架：
段落一：应聚焦于主人公的生理和心理反应。当他摔倒后，应突出痛苦和困境，以及朋友的鼓励如何给他带来动力。此时应展现情感的变化，逐渐从绝望到坚持的转折。
段落二：最终主人公在朋友的帮助下恢复信心，并完成比赛。情感上达到高潮时，他的感谢和友情的深刻体现是关键点。
布局与提炼框架：
段落一：
动作描写：摔倒后的痛苦和挣扎，朋友的帮助。
心理描写：主人公内心的犹豫、挣扎、恐惧。
情感转折：从绝望到逐渐重拾信心。
段落二：
动作描写：主人公重新站起来，跑向终点。
情感高潮：感谢朋友，表达深厚的情谊。
承接原文的事项：
续写时要与原文的情节紧密衔接，尤其要继续表现出主人公面临的困难以及朋友给予的鼓励。
在描述动作时应保持一致的语言风格，确保人物情感表达的连贯性。
整体注意事项：
保持情感连贯性：续写要展现主人公的心理变化，尤其是在受伤后。
动作与心理描写要同步：摔倒的动作和朋友的反应要呼应。
强调友情与坚持：这是文章的核心主题，结尾要突出友情和对帮助的感激。
2. 故事山模式分析（Story Mountain）
阶段 内容 原文中的反应句
引入 介绍主人公参加马拉松的动机与准备。 "When my friend Eric learned of my situation, he volunteered to be my running partner, determined to help me reach the finish line."
上升行动 主人公和朋友开始训练，并逐渐适应挑战。 "Our training journey was challenging yet satisfying."
高潮 主人公在比赛中的挣扎，感受到身体的极限。 "But then, just meters away from the finish line, I fell. Pain went through my leg, and at that time, I thought about giving up."
下降行动 朋友的鼓励帮助主人公站起来继续比赛。 "We’re almost there! Don’t give up!” Eric, running beside me, shouted loudly."
结尾 主人公通过朋友的帮助完成比赛，感激之情溢于言表。 "I hugged Eric close and felt truly thankful."
3. 分析角度表
分析角度 内容 原文反应句
人物刻画 描述了主人公的坚持与朋友的无私帮助，展现两者间的深厚友情。 "Eric’s encouragement and patience were important in keeping me active."
情感层次 从恐惧、挣扎到信任与感激的情感过渡，感情渐渐升温。 "I hugged Eric close and felt truly thankful."
关键情节点 摔倒和痛苦后，朋友的鼓励成为关键转折点。 "We’re almost there! Don’t give up!”
语言特色 简洁有力的鼓励语言，传达出友谊的力量。 "Keep going and you’ve got this!"
关键词分析 "Pain," "encouragement," "finish line"是体现情感变化的关键字。 "Pain went through my leg," "Don’t give up!"
心理描写 主人公的恐惧、犹豫到最后的信心和感激。 "At that time, I thought about giving up."
动作描写 主人公摔倒、站起来以及两人共同奔向终点。 "I fell," "He helped me up," "I hugged Eric."
环境描写 比赛的紧张氛围，终点线的出现。 "I could see the finish line in sight."
隐含主题 坚持和友谊的力量，克服个人困难。 "Eric, running beside me, shouted loudly."
情感转折 从绝望到恢复信心，从独自痛苦到感受到帮助与支持。 "I thought about giving up," "I felt truly thankful."
空间转换 从比赛的开始到即将结束，场景逐渐从奔跑到接近终点。 "I could see the finish line in sight."
时间过渡 从赛前的训练到比赛当天，再到比赛中的挑战。 "We spent countless hours running together."
4. 动作、心理、环境描写推荐语料
动作描写推荐例句
动作描写：“I stumbled but Eric was there to catch me just in time.”
动作描写：“With every step, my heart raced faster, but I kept pushing forward.”
动作描写：“I forced myself to stand, taking a deep breath before making the final push.”
心理描写推荐例句
心理描写：“Doubt crept into my mind, but I quickly shook it off, remembering the training and Eric’s encouragement.”
心理描写：“Pain surged through my leg, but I couldn’t stop now; I had to finish what I started.”
心理描写：“As the finish line came into view, I felt a rush of emotions: pride, exhaustion, and deep gratitude.”
环境描写推荐例句
环境描写：“The air was filled with the sound of cheering as runners pushed toward the finish line.”
环境描写：“The sun beat down on us, but the cool breeze made it bearable as we neared the final stretch.”
环境描写：“The crowd’s encouragement echoed in my ears, pushing me to keep going.”
5. 语法现象分析
定语从句：如“... that a campus marathon was coming up”
用法：修饰名词，提供更多信息。
示例：The race that I had been training for finally arrived.
倒装句：如"Eric’s voice rang through the air."
用法：强调动作或情感。
示例：In the distance stood a tall mountain, waiting to be climbed.
虚拟语气：如“I thought about giving up.”
用法：表示与现实情况相反的假设。
示例：If I had given up, I would have regretted it forever.
Possible Answer 1:
Paragraph 1: He helped me up. As Eric lifted me(状从), I could feel the strength in his hands, steadying me(非谓语动词做后置定语). Despite the sharp pain in my leg, I knew I couldn’t stop now(宾从). “We’ve come so far. Let’s finish this together,” Eric said, his determination unwavering(独立主格). With his encouragement, I took another step forward, ignoring the exhaustion(非谓语动词做伴随动作) that threatened to overwhelm me(定从). The finish line was within sight, and all I could do was focus on it.
Paragraph 2: I hugged Eric close and felt truly thankful. My heart swelled with gratitude as I realized how much his support had meant throughout this journey(宾从). I had doubted myself so many times, but Eric never gave up on me. “You’re my hero,” I whispered, feeling tears welling up(非谓语动词短语做伴随动作). We had made it. Not just across the finish line, but through every moment of doubt and struggle. I knew that this was a victory(宾从) we both shared(定从).
语法加分点分析：
强调句 (Cleft Sentence)
句子: “It was Eric’s support that kept me going.”
分析：通过强调句突出某个元素的重要性，加深语气，使得Eric的支持在句中显得尤为关键。
非谓语动词 (Non-finite Verb)
句子: “Feeling the pain, I took another step forward.”
分析：用非谓语动词"Feeling"简化句子结构，增加句子的流畅感，突出了主角当时的感受。
倒装句 (Inversion)
句子: “Never had I felt so grateful.”
分析：倒装句增强语气，突出感情的强烈程度，强调“我”从未如此感激。
亮点词汇分析：
情绪描写：
Gratitude (感激): appreciation, thankfulness, indebtedness
Exhaustion (疲劳): fatigue, weariness, tiredness
Determination (决心): perseverance, resolve, tenacity
动作描写：
Encourage (鼓励): support, motivate, inspire
Steady (使稳定): stabilize, calm, reassure
Lift (举起): raise, elevate, hoist
高级替换词与联想词：
Grateful (感激的)
替换词: appreciative, thankful, indebted
例句: I am deeply appreciative of everything Eric did for me.
联想词: thankfulness, gratitude, recognition
Exhausted (筋疲力尽的)
替换词: drained, fatigued, worn out
例句: After the marathon, I was completely drained.
联想词: tired, energy-sapped, spent
Encouragement (鼓励)
替换词: support, motivation, inspiration
例句: His constant support gave me the courage to keep going.
联想词: strength, belief, boost
Possible Answer 2:
Paragraph 1: He helped me up. My body trembled, but with Eric’s support, I was determined to push forward. “Don’t let the pain control you,” he said, his voice steady and strong(独立主格). I nodded, squeezing his hand(非谓语动词做伴随动作) as we took another step(状从). My leg burned with every movement, but Eric’s steady presence kept me grounded. The finish line was near, and I wouldn’t let fear stop me now.
Paragraph 2: I hugged Eric close and felt truly thankful. In that moment, I realized how lucky I was(宾从) to have someone like him by my side. We had faced so many hurdles, but we had made it together. “I couldn’t have done it without you(虚拟语气),” I whispered. With his unwavering belief in me, I had pushed beyond my limits and crossed the finish line.
语法加分点分析：
情态动词 (Modal Verb)
句子: “Don’t let the pain control you.”
分析：通过情态动词“don’t”进行劝导和提醒，强调了克服困难的重要性。
定语从句 (Relative Clause)
句子: “He was the person who helped me when I needed it most.”
分析：通过定语从句补充信息，明确了“Eric”在故事中的关键角色。
反身代词 (Reflexive Pronoun)
句子: “I squeezed his hand, reassuring myself that I could finish.”
分析：反身代词“myself”强调了自我鼓励的过程。
亮点词汇分析：
情绪描写：
Relieved (松了口气的): comforted, reassured, at ease
Tremble (颤抖): shake, quiver, shiver
Lucky (幸运的): fortunate, blessed, favored
动作描写：
Squeeze (紧握): grip, clutch, hold
Push forward (向前推进): continue, move on, forge ahead
Reassure (安慰): comfort, console, calm
Possible Answer 3：
Paragraph 1: He helped me up. As Eric pulled me to my feet(状从), I felt a new surge of determination. “Keep going, you’re almost there,” he urged. Though my leg was throbbing with pain(状从), his words fueled me. We both knew the finish line was within reach, and no matter how hard it seemed(状从), we wouldn’t stop until we got there.
Paragraph 2: I hugged Eric close and felt truly thankful. My heart swelled with emotion, and I realized how important his friendship had been throughout this journey(宾从). “Thank you for believing in me,” I said, my voice thick with gratitude(独立主格). Together, we had achieved something incredible, and that was the real victory.
语法加分点分析：
感官动词 (Perception Verbs)
句子: “I felt a new surge of determination.”
分析：通过感官动词“felt”描绘出人物的内心感受，强调情感转变。
连接词 (Conjunctions)
句子: “Though my leg was throbbing with pain, his words fueled me.”
分析：通过“though”引出转折，增强句子的对比感，突出了人物的内心斗争。
名词性从句 (Noun Clause)
句子: “That was the real victory.”
分析：通过名词性从句作为句子的主语，增强了语句的总结性，突出了最终胜利的意义。
亮点词汇分析：
情绪描写：
Surge (激增): rush, wave, increase
Gratitude (感激): appreciation, thankfulness, indebtedness
Victory (胜利): triumph, achievement, success
动作描写：
Fuel (激励): motivate, inspire, drive
Urge (催促): encourage, prompt, advise
Throb (跳动): pulse, beat, pound
总结与词汇升级替换建议：
Grateful → thankful, appreciative, indebted
Pain → discomfort, ache, soreness
Determination → resolve, willpower, perseverance
1. 句子翻译题
根据下列中文，翻译成英文：
他帮助我站起来，我感受到了一股新的决心。
我感觉到自己已经接近终点，再也不能停下来。
我抱紧了Eric，感激之情油然而生。
我知道我不会一个人走到终点，Eric的支持一直伴随着我。
2. 句子挖空题根据上下文填空，完成句子：
He helped me up, and I _______ (感受到/experience) a new wave of determination.
Though my leg was in pain, I couldn’t stop. _______ (正因为如此/for that reason), I pushed forward.
I hugged Eric tightly, feeling _______ (真正的感谢/truly thankful) for everything he had done.e to keep pushing forward.
3. 单词替换题用恰当的单词替换下列句子中的词汇，使之更加高级：
Pain went through my leg.
→ __________ (ache, soreness, discomfort) went through my leg.
I was determined to finish.
→ I was _________ (resolved, committed, persistent) to finish.
I felt thankful for Eric’s help.
→ I felt __________ (grateful, appreciative, indebted) for Eric’s help.
The race was incredibly challenging.
→ The race was incredibly _________ (demanding, tough, strenuous).
4. 句子改写题
根据上下文要求，改写下列句子：
原句: "I felt the weight of my leg, but I pushed through."
改写成一个包含非谓语动词的句子：
"_______, I kept pushing through."
原句: "Eric’s encouragement helped me finish the marathon."
改写成一个包含情态动词的句子：
"Without Eric’s encouragement, I _______ (could/can) not have finished the marathon."
原句: "I hugged Eric close and felt truly thankful."
改写成一个包含定语从句的句子：
"I hugged Eric, _______ (who) had been with me through every moment of struggle."
第一节（满分15分）
66.假设你是明启中学高三学生李华，你所在的学校即将举行主题为“亲情”的摄影展， 邀请同学们提交一张自己拍摄的照片参展。请你写一封投稿信件给组委会，内容须包括：（1）描述该照片背后的亲情故事；（2）你选择该照片参展的理由。
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66．【示例】
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Wu Lei, a photography enthusiast. When I heard the theme of this exhibition, this photo instantly crossed my mind, which was taken in June 2023 at Pudong International Airport when my older brother was back from the US for his last summer vacation.
This summer was special for us, as the pandemic had separated our family for three years. I still remember the moment I saw my brother coming out from the arrival gate. I waved both of my arms at him, screaming out of pleasure. He hopped ecstatically and galloped like a pony toward us and tried his best to bring my parents and grandparents into his arms. My camera captured the bear hug that everyone had longed for fervently for three years.
I’ve taken many photos of my family, but this one is the best in my heart, not for its artistic quality but for the overwhelming emotions and the love between family members. I appreciate your time reading my story and considering my picture.
Sincerely,
Li Hua
第二节
【示例】
He helped me up. With his support, I got my strength back and limped forward even though each step was a war against pain and tiredness(状从). The cheers of the crowd disappeared into the background as Eric’s voice caught all of my attention(状从), guiding me forward(非谓语动词做伴随动作). Finally, together with Eric, I crossed the finish line. I couldn’t believe it. Tears welled up in my eyes as I realized(状从) I’d finally made it as a marathon runner(宾从). Seeing me achieve this milestone(非谓语动词做伴随动作), Eric’s eyes shone with pride and happiness.
I hugged Eric close and felt truly thankful. It was his selflessness and belief in me that pushed me to achieve a dream(强调句) I once thought impossible(定从). Thinking back to that unforgettable day(非谓语动词做伴随动作), I realized the true meaning of friendship. Eric not only helped me face my physical challenges but also taught me the power of never giving up. Together, we showed that with determination and a supportive friend by your side, any challenge can be solved.(宾从)
The finish line was in sight, but I was too exhausted to keep going. However, Eric _______ (鼓励我/encouraged me) and urged m

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