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技法一　人物肖像描写
[常用词块]
1．a graceful figure优美的身段
2．a slim figure苗条的身材
3．have a good figure(人)形体很好
4．a well built man体格健美的人
5．an average build中等身材
6．improve one's figure改善形体
7．a tall figure in black一个黑衣高个子人影
8．a man with a beard留着胡须的人
9．a serious young man严肃的年轻人
10．a good looking woman 一个漂亮的女人
11．show off her lovely figure显露出她优美的身段
12．wear round glasses戴着圆框眼镜
13．a girl in her early twenties 20岁出头的姑娘
[常用语句]
1．He had a wide mouth and grey eyes.他有一张大嘴和灰色的眼睛。
2．Her face lit up with surprise.她一脸惊诧。
3．He has two big eyes under a pair of thick eyebrows.
在一对浓密的眉毛下是他两只大大的眼睛。
4．I'd noticed that his eyes were black—coal black.
我注意到他的眼睛是黑色的——炭黑色的。
5．She'd arrived late for class，her hair wet and messy.
她上课迟到了，头发又湿又乱。
6．She was fair skinned，having reddish hair and long fingers.
她皮肤白皙，有着红发和修长的手指。
7．His strongly built body and sun tanned skin make him look like a sportsman.
强壮的身体和晒得黝黑的皮肤使他看起来像一个运动员。
8．Everything about him was old except his eyes and they were the same color as the sea and were cheerful and undefeated.
他身上的一切都显得古老，除了那双眼睛，它们像海水一般蓝，是愉快而不肯认输的。
9．He has blue eyes，and silver hair that spills onto his forehead.
他有着蓝色的眼睛和散落在前额的银发。
10．The young woman was tall，with grace and elegance.She had a great amount of dark hair and a face more beautiful than any other，with dark，mysterious eyes.She was polite and well mannered，with a tender look.
这个年轻的女人很高，且很优雅。她有一头乌黑的头发，她的脸比其他任何人的都漂亮，她有一双黑而神秘的眼睛。她彬彬有礼，举止文雅，目光温柔。
技法二　人物神态描写
[常用词块]
1．a satisfied look满意的表情
2．an encouraging expression一个令人鼓舞的表情
3．be in high spirits精神高涨
4．be wild with delight欣喜若狂
5．cry one's heart out悲痛欲绝
6．be seized with panic惊慌失措
7．come as something of a surprise有点惊讶
8．be speechless with anger气得说不出话
9．get mad/cross at sb.对某人勃然大怒
10．in a polite and friendly manner以礼貌友好的方式
11．jump with joy高兴地跳起来
12．on top of the world心满意足，非常幸福
13．be keen on喜爱，对……着迷
[常用语句]
1．A look of surprise came over her face.她露出一副惊讶的表情。
2．Mom's face was full of pain.妈妈的脸上写满了痛苦。
3．He turned to me，with his eyes full of horror.
他转身望着我，眼里充满了恐惧。
4．Her eyes gleamed and her fragile face broke into a smile.
她的眼睛闪烁着光芒，精致的脸庞展露出微笑。
5．Color glowed in his face and his strange eyes widened with joyfulness.
他的脸涨得通红，那双奇怪的眼睛瞪得大大的，充满了欢乐。
6．Aleey became happy now and a gentle smile spread across her face.
阿利变得很开心，整张脸洋溢着温和的微笑。
7．She rode the rest of the way home wearing a smile of peace and grace.
她带着平和优雅的微笑，骑行完回家剩余的路。
8．He was glaring down at me，his black eyes full of disgust.
他怒视着我，黑色眼瞳里充满了厌恶。
9．His eyes lit up when she walked into the room.A smile lit up her face.The smile spread across her face，which lit up his gloomy afternoon.
看见她走进房间，他两眼一亮。她笑了，脸上露出了喜色。她满脸的微笑点亮了他阴郁的下午。
技法三　人物个性描写
[常用词块]
1．a sense of responsibility责任感
2．a good tempered woman脾气随和的女人
3．a man of great personality极有个性的人
4．an ambitious person有抱负的人
5．a promising young man有前途的青年
6．an attractive girl迷人的姑娘
7．a talkative guy一个健谈的人
8．a woman of fine character品性良好的女子
9．have a weak character个性不强
10．be optimistic and confident乐观自信
11．an outspoken man说话直率的人
12．look good natured看上去和蔼可亲
13．stand out from the crowd脱颖而出
[常用语句]
1．He has bright eyes，making people feel that he is so smart，playful and lively.
他有一双明亮的眼睛，让人感到是那样的机灵、俏皮、活泼。
2．Indeed，I grew up to be strong and fearless.
的确，我从小到大就是一副天不怕、地不怕的性格。
3．She is very clear about her goal，and is fighting for it firmly.
她对自己的奋斗目标很明确，并且在坚定地为此拼搏。
4．He is a man of extraordinary will power and never admits being defeated.
他具有非凡的意志，永不言败。
5．My grandfather loves to be clean and tidy，always keeping his room spotless.
爷爷特别爱整洁，总是把自己的房间打扫得一尘不染。
6．I am eager for independence，so I dislike it when mom does everything for me.
我渴望自立，所以不喜欢妈妈凡事都替我做好。
7．She always likes to split hairs about whose turn it is to wash the dishes.
关于该谁洗碗这个问题，她总是喜欢较真。
8．My grandma，aged 80，is still young at heart and likes to dress up in style.
我80岁的奶奶人老心不老，穿着打扮可时髦了。
9．She looks serious and is seldom seen to smile.She seems to be difficult to get along with.
她看上去很严肃，很少见她笑，似乎不好相处。
10．She has a cheerful character，like a man，and nothing difficult makes her frown.
她性格爽朗，像个男子汉，任何困难都难使她愁眉不展。
技法四　人物情感描写
[常用词块]
1．be greatly moved极为感动
2．be content with对……感到满意
3．be excited with joy at the success为成功而欣喜
4．be delighted at对……很高兴
5．yell with delight快乐得大喊
6．fall into despair陷入绝望
7．a strong sense of loss强烈的失落感
8．with a heavy heart怀着沉重的心情
9．lose one's spirits心灰意懒
10．be down in spirits情绪低落
11．complain constantly不断地抱怨
12．run out of the room in a burst of anger怒气冲冲地跑出房间
13．express one's complaint about对……表示不满
14．feel inspired/encouraged感到鼓舞的
15．be displeased with one's conduct对某人的行为感到不满
[常用语句]
1．He put it back into his pack，rose to his feet and staggered on.He was too tired to move on.
他把它放回背包里，站起身来，硬撑着向前。他累得走不动了。
2．She began to yawn，stretching her arms.She was so tired that she could hardly concentrate on her work.
她开始打呵欠，伸懒腰。她太累了，几乎无法专心工作。
3．Instead of obeying，Jim dropped onto the couch，put his hands under the back of his head，and smiled.吉姆没有服从，而是坐到沙发上，双手放在脑后，微笑着。
4．She sat on a chair in her ball dress，without strength to go to bed.
她穿着舞会礼服坐在椅子上，没有力气去床上睡觉。
5．Mariam sat on her bed，embarrassed and confused.She cupped her face with her hands and closed her eyes.She breathed and breathed until she felt calmer.玛利亚姆尴尬又困惑地坐在她的床上。她用双手捂着脸，闭上了眼睛。她深呼吸着，直到她平静下来。
6．There was clearly nothing left to do but drop herself onto the shabby little couch and weep.
很明显，除了坐在破旧的小沙发上哭泣，她什么也做不了。
7．Matthew groaned as he turned about and walked slowly down the platform towards her.
马修呻吟着转过身来，慢慢地下台朝她走去。
8．He trembled slightly，shaking his head and turned to the girl to give her a look of pity.
他微微颤抖着，摇着头，转头怜悯地看向那个女孩。
9．There was silence.I realized I did not want to listen to any more，and started to move softly away from the door，grumbling in a low voice.
屋里一片沉默。我意识到我不想再听下去了，于是开始轻轻地从门口走出去，小声地嘟囔着。
10．All the air seemed to disappear from the room in a rush.Someone coughed.I stood up，and wiped my hands on my jeans.所有的空气似乎都迅速地从房间里消失了。有人咳嗽。我站起来，在我的牛仔裤上擦拭着我的手。
技法五　人物行为描写
[常用词块]
1．keep up one's spirits振作精神
2．flame with anger气得满脸通红
3．have a worried look愁眉苦脸
4．walk gracefully优雅地行走
5．make one's first appearance首次露面
6．fail to carry out one's duties没有履行职责
7．attract one's attention吸引某人的注意
8．with the hope of doing...希望做……
9．in the belief that...相信……
10．show no signs of tiredness毫无倦意
11．cast a glance at sb.朝某人瞥了一眼
12．eat one's words收回前言，承认说错
13．make a remark upon sth.就某事发表意见
14．jump to one's feet一跃而起
[常用语句]
1．The smile froze on her lips.她嘴角的笑容僵住了。
2．Her eyes were fixed on the screen.她目不转睛地盯着屏幕。
3．They stared at each other and came near to a breakdown.
他们看着对方，都快精神崩溃了。
4．She caught her breath in a short gasp and felt herself turn pale.
她猛吐一口气，喘过气，觉得自己脸色苍白。
5．Diana stood there，white faced and breathless.
黛安娜站在那里，脸色苍白，气喘吁吁。
6．She turned to him with a frightened look.她害怕地看着他。
7．A look of surprise passed across Assef's face，briefly，and disappeared.
阿塞夫短暂地惊讶了一下，又恢复了原样。
8．The eyes turned slowly and looked at her sharply and steadily.
那双眼睛慢慢地转过来，目光锐利而坚定地注视着她。
9．She hugged them to her chest，and at last she was able to look up with tearful eyes and a smile.
她把它们紧紧地抱在胸前，最后她终于抬起头来，泪流满面地微笑着。
10．One day she came into my room laughing merrily.Putting my hand on her face，she spelled l a u g h.Then she tickled me into a burst of laughter.
有一天，她愉快地笑着走进我的房间，把我的手放在她的脸上，拼出了l a u g h。然后她挠我，痒得我发出一阵大笑。
技法六　人物对话描写
[常用词块]
1．say proudly/gently/softly/angrily/seriously/firmly/cheerfully自豪地/温柔地/柔和地/生气地/严肃地/坚定地/高兴地说
2．add that补充说……
3．remind sb.that...提醒某人……
4．explain sth.clearly清楚地解释某事
5．announce/declare that...宣布……
6．make an announcement/a declaration that...宣布……
7．whisper to sb.gently对某人温柔耳语
8．yell out/cry out to sb.大声朝某人喊叫
9．make a complaint about...抱怨……
10．comment on/make comments on评论……
11．object to/raise an objection to反对……
12．disagree with不同意……
13．claim that声称
14．reply directly to直接答复……
15．ask curiously好奇地问
技法七　背景场景描写
[常用词块]
1．a room facing south一间朝南的房间
2．a village among the hills群山环抱的村庄
3．a well located city位置优越的城市
4．a remote village一个偏远的村庄
5．the thinly populated rural area人烟稀少的农村地区
6．be situated in a quiet spot near the river坐落在河边一个僻静的地方
7．a fierce/heavy/violent storm狂风暴雨
8．in the warm spring sunshine在春天温暖的阳光里
9．a stormy night暴风雨之夜
10．in the pouring rain在倾盆大雨中
11．clear up(天气)放晴
12．continuous/constant rain连绵阴雨
13．be bathed in the sunshine沐浴阳光
14．a dark and rainy evening漆黑的雨夜
15．in a mess一片混乱
[常用语句]
1．The sun began to rise in the sky，bathing the mountain in golden light.
太阳开始缓缓升起，给山披上了一层金纱。
2．The sun rose over a quiet world and looked warmly down at the peaceful village.
太阳在一个宁静的世界里升起，温暖地俯视着这个宁静的村庄。
3．The sky is clear blue now and the sun is shining on the meadow and the river bank.
此时已是晴空万里，阳光洒在草原和河岸上。
4．The rose looks like an angel，swaying in the wind，dancing in the sun.
这朵玫瑰就像是在风中摇摆、在阳光下跳舞的天使。
5．The grounds were covered with dark green grass，through which stretched a straight stone path.
那儿处处是碧绿的芳草，绿草中延伸出一条笔直的石路。
6．The beautiful scenery is a feast for my eyes.
美丽的景色令我大饱眼福。
7．These magnificent scenes offered me the greatest comfort that I was capable of receiving.
这些壮美的景色给了我极大的安慰。
8．Nanjing，a famous historic city，is still vigorous in her new youth.
南京，这座历史名城，依然充满青春的活力。
9．It was so quiet in the classroom that the sound of a needle in the ground could be heard.
教室里静得落针可闻。
10．When we reached the top of the hill，a magnificent view of the sea greeted us.
当我们到达山顶时，我们看到了一片壮丽的海景。
P115技法三　打造续写的龙头和凤尾
1．巧用形容词/副词(短语)
①Happily and excitedly，they went to the supermarket for what they needed.
②Exhausted and hungry，I wondered if we could find our way back.
③Curious to know what was inside，he tiptoed into the dark cave.
④A few minutes later，the bear headed back to our camp.The bear roared at us，our frightened mouths wide open.(2020·浙江7月)
2．巧用分词(短语)
①Seeing the mess in the kitchen，he immediately understood what had happened，but he wasn't upset.(2021·新高考全国Ⅰ卷)
②With everything ready，Bernard started out on his new business.Feeling shy，Bernard didn't dare to peddle(叫卖) his popcorn.(2020·新高考全国Ⅰ卷)
③A few weeks later the boy arrived home from university.Hurrying home，he couldn't wait to see his old friend Poppy.(2020·浙江1月)
④We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark.Wandering around，we were still stuck in the dilemma.(2018·浙江6月)
3．巧用高级句式
①I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer.My brother came up with an idea that he could cut the pumpkin with a knife.(同位语从句)(2021·浙江1月)
②When Mrs Meredith heard of John's idea，she thought it was a good one，too.So they took immediate action as John had proposed.(时间状语从句)(2020·新高考全国Ⅰ卷)
③At the very moment，the helicopter arrived.It hovered over the camp，causing strong wind that blew the bear unsteady on his feet.(非谓语动词＋定语从句) (2020·浙江7月)
4．巧用倒装结构
①Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared.Hardly had the little dog come out when Poppy came over to lick it as if it were a long lost friend.(2020·浙江1月)
②At the very moment，the helicopter arrived.So loud was the noise of the helicopter that the bear seemed to be disturbed for a while.(2020·浙江7月)
③Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.I got a fright，so did my horse.
5．巧用强调句结构
①That video was posted the day before Halloween.It was my brother who did that for amusement.(2021·浙江1月)
②A few minutes later，the bear came back.It was with great strength that the bear shook and tore the fence.(2020·浙江7月)
二、漂亮结尾5法
1．画面定格法
(1)人物动作的画面定格
①Slowly，almost reluctantly，she placed her arm with apparently unaccustomed affection around her mother's shoulders and gently guided her back into the crowd.
慢慢地，几乎不情愿地，她的胳膊搂住母亲的肩膀，明显带着生疏，轻轻地引导她回到人群中。
②Never had Dora received such a gift.Speechless and happy，she held her son tightly into her arms，with tears welling up in her eyes.
朵拉从来没有收到过这样的礼物。她高兴得说不出话来，把儿子紧紧地抱在怀里，泪水夺眶而出。
③Then the butterfly would stay together with her lover forever.On the top of the mountain，she seemed to enjoy the sunrise and the sunset happily with them.
然后蝴蝶就会和她的爱人永远待在一起。在山顶上，她似乎和他们一起愉快地享受着日出和日落。
(2)特殊寓意的写景画面
①The sky was a billion pure eyes of light and the grass green underfoot；it was as if night and day had become one beautiful moment.Dawn had come.
天空像是十亿只纯净的眼睛拼接在一起，脚下是青草，仿佛黑夜和白昼已成为一个美丽的时刻。黎明已经来临。(黎明到来的画面)
②The crystal and cerulean water was gentle as I waded through it，the sunset like orange paint on a blue canvas.
当我涉过水晶般天蓝色的轻柔的水时，日落就像蓝色画布上的橙色颜料。 (日落时的美好画面)
③The moon under siege by stars seemed to lighten the night，bringing forth stars that shone and hung in the blackness.The never ending blackness consumed everything.
被群星围困的月亮似乎照亮了黑夜，带来了在黑暗中闪耀和悬挂着的群星。无尽的黑暗吞噬了一切。(描写夜空的画面)
④Looking up，I saw the sun shine brighter than I ever knew before.
抬头一看，我看到太阳比我以前所知道的还要明亮。(特殊寓意)
⑤A dense earthly sweet smell rises from the ground，enveloping everything within its soft embrace.
一股浓郁的泥土般的芬芳从地上升起，把一切都包裹在它柔软的怀抱里。(雨后清新的画面)
2．对话收尾法
(1)When asked how the reunion with his father will change his life，Chester said，“I got family everywhere，so it might lead to many more trips now.”
当被问及与父亲团聚将如何改变他的生活时，切斯特说：“我到处都有家人，所以现在可能会导致更多的旅行。”
(2)“Even now，I can hardly believe this dog traveled such a long distance to find us，” said Nina，“I would never give this kind of friend away again.I never grow tired of repeating this—animals are the most devoted and loving creatures.They need our love and care.”
“即使是现在，我也简直不敢相信这只狗走了这么远的距离寻找我们，”尼娜说，“我再也不会放弃这种朋友了。我从来没有厌倦过重复这些话——动物是最忠诚和最可爱的生物。他们需要我们的爱和关心。”
(3)They hung all the things back to the wall.Jack asked Paisley，“Are you really willing to lead a tough life with me？” She patted away the ashes on hands and looked at the walls with loads of stuff on them satisfactorily，saying，“Yes! For me，it is not a suffering to live.”
他们把所有的东西都挂在墙上。杰克问佩斯利：“你真的愿意和我一起过艰难的生活吗？”她拍了拍手上的灰，满意地看着挂满东西的墙，说：“是的！对我来说，这样生活并不是一种痛苦。”
3．主题升华法
(1)Someday，when I am older and have children of my own，I hope I can be just as great a parent as my mom.
有一天，当我长大了，有了自己的孩子，我希望我能成为和我妈妈一样伟大的父母。(母爱的深远影响)
(2)In my opinion，money can't take the place of everything，such as your life，your time and your happiness.
在我看来，金钱不能取代一切，比如你的生活、你的时间和你的幸福。(表达自己的价值观)
(3)As a proverb says，“Every coin has two sides.” Making full use of your strength is your achievement.Please remember that in no case will you give up especially in trouble.God is fair to everyone.
正如谚语所说，“事物都有两面性。”充分利用你的力量就是你的成就。请记住，无论如何你都不要放弃，尤其是在麻烦中。上帝对每个人都是公平的。(借用名言警句来升华主题)
4．结尾留白法
(1)“Would you be interested in joining me in a bite to eat？” I asked.“I'd love to，” she replied，her eyes sparkling like diamonds.And，this was the beginning of the end to my months of heartbreak following Betsy's death.“你有兴趣和我一起吃点东西吗？”我问道。“我很乐意去，”她回答，眼睛像钻石一样闪闪发光。我在贝特西死后几个月的心碎终于开始慢慢愈合。(故事结尾留白，给予读者想象空间)
(2)He unwrapped the white tissue paper，but to his surprise，there was no hard rock candy inside.Instead，into his fingers fell a shiny white pearl worth thousands of dollars.
他打开白色包装纸，但令他惊讶的是，里面没有硬糖果。相反，一颗价值数千美元的闪亮的白色珍珠落进了他的手指里。
5．首尾呼应法
(1)开头：I had an interesting childhood.It was filled with surprises and amusements，all because of my mother—loving，sweet，yet absent minded and forgetful.One strange family trip we took when I was eleven tells a lot about her.
结尾：Despite mom's being absent minded and forgetful，she was still a kind and nice mom.
(2)开头：It was summer，and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before.He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.
结尾：Never had I had such a thrilling yet dangerous vacation before.The special trip to the Wild West was deeply engraved in my mind.
(3)开头：A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day.
结尾：What a funny day！Arthur couldn't stop laughing whenever he looked back on this funny experience.

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