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应用文练习写作之求助信 讲义
第一段：问候语+自我介绍＋背景信息+写信目的
1. Knowing that you are into / interested in....I am writing to ask you for help / to do me a favor.
知道你喜欢/对...感兴趣，我写信来寻求你的帮助。
2.Knowing that you are expert in/have a good command of/have experience in....,I wonder if you could do me a favor/help me with...
知道你精通.../有经验..，我想知道你是否能帮我一把。
3. I have some difficulty in doing…which bothers me a lot. So I have no choice but to turn to you for help.
我在做 方面有困难，这很困扰我。所以我别无选择只能向你求助。
4. Faced with/ Facing so many difficulties, I have to ask you for help.
面对如此多的困难，我不得不向你求助。
5.Now I have a problem, which always troubles me a lot, so I want to ask you for help.
现在我有一个问题总是困扰着我，所以我想请你帮忙。
翻译练习：
1.我在与同学相处方面有困难，所以诚挚地写信来请求你能伸出援助之手。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（I have trouble /difficulty in getting along well with my classmates, so I am writing sincerely to ask you to give me a hand/do me a favor/lend me a hand.）
2.我在英语方面遇到一些麻烦，这很困扰我。知道您专攻英语，我迫不及待写信给你，希望你能好心地帮助我。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（I am encountering some problems in learning English,which trouble me a lot. Knowing that you are specialized in English, I can't wait to write to you in the hope that you will be kind enough to do me a favor.）
3.我正忙于准备出国度假，但不幸的是，我发现它很难处理，所以我在想您能否帮我一下
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（I'm busy in preparing for going abroad for vacation, but unfortunately, I find it extremely difficult to do with it, so I wonder if you could do me a favor.）
第二段：求助内容——描述出现困难的背景
1. I intend to do / am preparing to do / for ...,which aims to...
我打算做/正在准备做...,该（活动）致力于...
2. However, what bothers me is that ...
然而，困扰我的事情是我...
3.I have much difficulty / trouble in...
我在做某事方面有困难。
4. Therefore, I am wondering if you could give me some practical guidance on....
因此,我想知道你是否能就...给我一些实用的指导
5. What’s more / Moreover, I hope you can ...so that
此外，我希望你能...以便...。
6. Last, I wonder if it is convenient for you to help us in...on...
最后，我想知道你是否方便（在某个时间/地点）帮助我们。
翻译练习：
1.我正在为音乐会做准备，该音乐会致力于帮助外国学生更多地了解中国传统音乐。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（I am preparing for a concert, which aims to help foreign students know more about traditional Chinese music.）
2.然而，困扰我的事情是我没有任何组织过音乐会的经验。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（However, what bothers me is that I don't have any experience in organizing a concert / I am a total stranger to organizing a concert.）
3.因此,我想知道你是否能就音乐会宣传方面给我一些实用的指导。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（However, what bothers me is that I don't have any experience in organizing a concert / I am a total stranger to organizing a concert.）
4.此外，因为缺乏一些设备，我会很感激如果你能联系学校音乐俱乐部以便他们可以给我们提供一些设备。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（Moreover, lacking some equipment, I would appreciate it if you can contact the school music club so that they can provide some for us.）
5.最后，我想知道你是否方便明天下午在我们教室和我们一起讨论一下。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（Last, I wonder if it is convenient for you to have a discussion with us in our classroom on tomorrow afternoon.）
第三段:表达感谢与期待
1. I would appreciate it if you could lend me a hand. Looking forward to your early reply.
如果你能帮助我，我将非常感激。期待你早日回信。
2. A prompt reply at your earliest convenience would be highly appreciated.
我们非常希望您能尽快回复。
3. With your generous help, I believe our concert will be unforgettable.
有你的慷慨帮助，我相信我们的音乐会将会很难忘。
4. I’m sure with your help I can make great progress. I am looking forward to your early reply.
我相信在你的帮助下我会取得很大的进步。我期待着你的早日回复。
5. I believe I will benefit a lot from your valuable and timely advice.
我相信我会从你宝贵而及时的建议中获益匪浅。
6. Thank you in advance for sparing me some time and offering me guidance. I am looking forward to your reply.
提前感谢你花时间给我指导。我期待你的答复。
美文欣赏：
假定你是李华,你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括：
1.剧情简介；2.指导内容；3.商定时间地点。
注意：
1.词数80左右；2.结束语已为你写好。
Dear Miss Evans,
How is everything going these days I am Li Hua. I, together with my classmates, have adapted a short play from the text The Necklace, but we meet with some trouble. Now, I am writing to ask you to give us some guidance.
最近怎么样？我是李华。我和我的同学们根据《项链》这篇课文改编了一出短剧，但是我们遇到了一些困难。现在，我写信来请求您给予我们一些指导。
As we all know, in the story Mathilde Loisel dreamed of a wealthy lifestyle but her vain obsession ended up with her lifetime of misery and despair, ruining her life. However, we find it extremely tough to use proper tones to speak the lines, which has confused us for quite a long time. Hopefully you would be so kind as to give us some help with this problem.
众所周知，在Mathilde Loisel的故事中，她梦想拥有富裕的生活方式，但她的虚荣执念最终导致了她一生的痛苦和绝望，毁掉了她的生活。然而，我们发现很难用正确的语调来念台词，这让我们困惑了很长一段时间。希望你能帮助我们解决这个问题。
If it's convenient for you, let's meet at 8:30 on Sunday morning in the school theatre. We would appreciate it if you could do us a favor. Looking forward to your reply.
如果你方便的话，我们周日早上8:30在学校剧院见面。如果你能帮我们一个忙，我们会很感激的。期待您的回复。
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

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