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Because of my limp (跛行) since childhood, I never thought about running a marathon. However, when my head teacher said last Friday that a campus marathon was coming up, I really wanted to take part. Considering my physical condition, I started to feel afraid of signing up.
When my friend Eric learned of my situation, he volunteered to be my running partner, determined to help me reach the finish line.
Our training journey was challenging yet satisfying. We spent countless hours running together, starting with short distances and slowly increasing our running distance. Eric’s encouragement and patience were important in keeping me active.
One autumn morning, we set out for our first long training run. With each step, I felt the weight of my leg, but Eric encouraged me to push through. “Keep going and you’ve got this!” Eric’s voice rang through the air. As the weeks passed, I noticed great improvements in my distance and speed. Eric celebrated each small victory I made and I was gradually getting the confidence and courage to take part in the marathon.
On race day, we stood among a large group of runners. Nervous, I looked at Eric, who gave me a comforting smile. When everything was ready, we set off.
The first few miles were hard. My limp became more noticeable, and doubts came into my mind. But Eric’s presence was a great source of encouragement. He cheered me on, reminding me of our months of preparation.
As we neared the end of the marathon, I could see the finish line in sight. But then, just meters away from the finish line, I fell. Pain went through my leg, and at that time, I thought about giving up.
“We’re almost there! Don’t give up!” Eric, running beside me, shouted loudly.
注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1： He helped me up.
Paragraph 2： I hugged (拥抱) Eric close and felt truly thankful.
一、文章大意
本文讲述了因童年跛行而从未想过参加马拉松的 “我”，在班主任提到校园马拉松后，在朋友埃里克的鼓励和帮助下，克服内心恐惧参加训练，并在比赛中努力坚持，最终在埃里克的陪伴下即将到达终点却意外摔倒，而后又在埃里克的鼓励下艰难跨过终点线的故事，展现了友情的力量和坚持的意义。
二、故事山分析
开场：介绍 “我” 因跛行对参加马拉松既渴望又害怕的矛盾心理，为故事发展埋下伏笔，引出埃里克的出现。
发展：埃里克主动成为 “我” 的跑步伙伴，两人开始艰苦的训练过程，随着训练的推进，“我” 的能力逐渐提升，信心也不断增强，这部分详细描述了训练的场景和 “我” 的心理变化，为比赛做铺垫。
高潮：比赛中，“我” 在接近终点时摔倒，疼痛和放弃的念头袭来，埃里克的大声鼓励成为关键转折点。
结局：在埃里克的搀扶下，“我” 跨过终点线，两人相拥，体现了故事的圆满结局和情感的升华。
三、伏笔及续写中的回应
伏笔：“Considering my physical condition, I started to feel afraid of signing up.”
回应：在比赛中，尤其是摔倒后，“我” 再次因为身体状况产生放弃的念头，与前文害怕报名相呼应，突出了 “我” 面对困难时内心的挣扎。
伏笔：“Eric’s encouragement and patience were important in keeping me active.”
回应：在接近终点摔倒时，埃里克的鼓励 “‘We’re almost there! Don’t give up!’ Eric, running beside me, shouted loudly.” 再次体现了他的鼓励对 “我” 的重要性，正是因为他一直以来的鼓励，“我” 才有了继续前进的动力。
伏笔：“As the weeks passed, I noticed great improvements in my distance and speed. Eric celebrated each small victory I made and I was gradually getting the confidence and courage to take part in the marathon.”
回应：虽然摔倒，但 “我” 最终在埃里克的帮助下完成比赛，这是之前训练成果和积累的信心的延续，如果没有之前的进步和信心，“我” 可能很难在摔倒后重新站起来走向终点。
伏笔：“When my friend Eric learned of my situation, he volunteered to be my running partner, determined to help me reach the finish line.”
回应：在比赛中，埃里克始终陪伴在 “我” 身边，尤其是在摔倒后，他毫不犹豫地扶起 “我”，帮助 “我” 走向终点，兑现了他最初要帮助 “我” 的承诺，体现了他的坚定和友谊的真挚。
伏笔：“On race day, we stood among a large group of runners. Nervous, I looked at Eric, who gave me a comforting smile.”
回应：摔倒后，埃里克的鼓励和行动再次给 “我” 安慰，与之前的微笑相呼应，表明埃里克一直是 “我” 的精神支柱，让 “我” 在困难时刻感受到温暖和力量。
四、续写要点
第一段：
Eric 的行动：详细描述埃里克扶起 “我” 后的动作，比如他如何用力支撑着 “我” 的身体，眼神中透露出坚定和鼓励，还可以写他一边扶着 “我”，一边和 “我” 说话，给予 “我” 精神上的支持。
“我” 的反应：写出 “我” 在埃里克的搀扶下，内心的挣扎逐渐消失，重新燃起斗志，开始努力配合埃里克的步伐，一步一步向终点挪动，尽管疼痛依旧，但 “我” 的眼神变得坚定。
第二段：
拥抱的细节：描绘 “我” 拥抱埃里克时的动作和心情，比如 “我” 紧紧地抱住他，泪水止不住地流，身体因激动而微微颤抖，感受到他的温暖和力量。
感恩的表达：通过 “我” 的内心独白或者对埃里克说的话，深刻表达对埃里克的感激之情，以及这次经历对 “我” 的重要意义，如让 “我” 重新认识了自己和友谊的价值。
五、情感线
文章起始于 “我” 对参加马拉松的渴望与因自身残疾而产生的恐惧交织的复杂情感。在埃里克的陪伴下，训练过程中逐渐产生自信与勇气，情感变得积极向上。比赛时，前期是紧张但又有埃里克在旁的安心，摔倒后则陷入痛苦与绝望，而埃里克的鼓励又让 “我” 重拾希望，最终完成比赛时是激动、感恩与对友谊深刻认知的情感爆发，这条情感线贯穿始终，推动着故事发展，也深刻地展现了人物内心的成长与变化。
六、故事线
因为童年跛行，“我” 虽渴望但不敢报名校园马拉松。
埃里克得知后，主动成为 “我” 的跑步伙伴，开启训练之旅。
经过长时间训练，“我” 的跑步能力和信心都有很大提升。
比赛当天，“我” 和埃里克一起出发，前期艰难但坚持着。
临近终点时 “我” 摔倒，疼痛袭来，心生放弃念头。
埃里克鼓励 “我”，最终搀扶着 “我” 跨过终点线，两人相拥。
七、主旨升华句（英文）
True friendship is not just about being there in good times, but also about holding on tight when the going gets tough.（真正的友谊不仅是在顺境中相伴，更是在艰难时刻紧紧相依。）
The journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step, and with determination and a helping hand, even the impossible becomes possible.（千里之行始于足下，有了决心和援手，即使是不可能的事也能变为可能。）
In the face of difficulties, it is not our physical strength but the strength of our spirit and the support of our friends that carry us through.（面对困难时，支撑我们走过的不是身体的力量，而是精神的力量和朋友的支持。）
The finish line is not just the end of a race; it is the symbol of our victory over self-doubt and the power of perseverance.（终点线不仅仅是一场比赛的结束，它是我们战胜自我怀疑和坚持力量的象征。）
Sometimes, the greatest achievement is not in winning, but in having the courage to start and the perseverance to finish, especially with a friend by our side.（有时候，最大的成就不在于获胜，而在于有勇气开始并坚持到底，尤其是有朋友在身边的时候。）
八、写作示范一
Paragraph 1
He helped me up, his grip firm and unyielding. With one arm around my waist and the other holding my arm, he hoisted me to my feet. His eyes, filled with determination, bored into mine. "We're so close. You can't give up now," he said, his voice raspy from the exertion of running. I gritted my teeth, nodded, and leaned on him heavily. Together, we took a tentative step forward, the pain in my leg shooting up, but I pushed it aside. The crowd's roar seemed to grow louder, spurring us on.
Paragraph 2
I hugged Eric close and felt truly thankful. His body was warm and solid against mine, and I could feel his heart pounding as fast as mine. "Thank you," I whispered, my voice choked with emotion. "You believed in me when I didn't believe in myself." Tears streamed down my face, mingling with the sweat. This moment was not just about crossing the finish line; it was about the unbreakable bond of friendship we had formed. Eric had shown me that with support and determination, I could overcome any obstacle.
九、写作示范二
Paragraph 1
He helped me up, his face flushed but his expression resolute. He adjusted his hold on me, making sure I was steady. "Come on, buddy. We've trained too hard for this. Just a little more," he coaxed. I winced as I put weight on my injured leg, but the sight of the finish line and Eric's unwavering presence gave me the will to endure. Step by agonizing step, we inched closer, the cheers of the spectators fueling our determination.
Paragraph 2
I hugged Eric close and felt truly thankful. The embrace was filled with all the gratitude and relief that words could not express. I was overcome with a sense of awe at what we had accomplished. This marathon had become a metaphor for our friendship and the power of perseverance. Eric had been my crutch, both literally and figuratively, and I knew that this experience would stay with me forever. Our journey had taught me that no matter how difficult the path, with a true friend by your side, anything is achievable.
十、参考范文
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He helped me up, his hands steady and strong beneath my arms. His eyes locked onto mine, filled with a fierce determination that seemed to will me forward. "Ignore the pain. We're going to finish this together," he growled. With his support, I managed to put one foot in front of the other, each step sending a jolt of agony through my leg. But Eric's voice, constantly urging me on, drowned out the pain. The crowd's cheers grew deafening as we slowly made our way towards the finish line.
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I hugged Eric close and felt truly thankful. My body shook with a mixture of exhaustion and elation. "I couldn't have done it without you," I sobbed into his shoulder. He held me tighter, his own breath ragged. In that moment, I realized that this marathon was more than a physical feat; it was a testament to the power of friendship and the strength of the human spirit. Eric had given me the gift of believing in myself, and I knew that our bond would endure long after the cheers had faded.

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