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We three were running down the path, shouting and laughing when our dog Rubby suddenly stopped in the distance. He turned around and eyed us, with his tail swinging up and down.
My little brother Toby immediately sped up and rushed to where Rubby was. He bent down. picked up something and ran back to us.
It was a bunch of keys. We gathered in a circle, examining the keys one by one. hoping to find some useful information about its owner. There were 3 keys — a house key, a mail key and a car key and a unique key fob (吊坠) very likely designed specially.
“Gosh, the owner might be in great trouble,” my sister sighed. She was right. We once lost our keys. Although we had an extra house key, it took our parents quite a long time to get a new mail key. let alone there was a car key.
Who might have lost them
Alter many wild guesses, we finally drew a conclusion. It might belong to someone in our neighborhood as only our neighbors wandered into the woods for a walk. But it was still impossible to figure out who it was. We had a very big neighborhood.
“The owner might come back to look for them,” Toby reminded.
So we decided to stay where we were, keeping a watchful eye on all passers-by. Our little dog ran in circles of excitement since we stayed so long in the wild. We remained in the woods for two hours, asking everyone we came across whether they lost their keys, but in vain.
It seemed we had to give up. But my sister wouldn’t, saying that she just couldn’t stop picturing the owner brushing aside tall grasses hoping to find the lost keys. “How anxious and upset the owner would be!”
I took a look at the bunch of keys again and quite by accident, found the key fob had the alarm button. “Look! If we press the alarm button, close enough of course, we can set off the owner’s car alarm.”
“That’s brilliant.”
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
We rushed back to our neighborhood.
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The door opened and in front of us stood an old lady.
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文章大意：
“我们” 三人带着小狗 Rubby 在小路上玩耍时，小狗捡到一串钥匙，上面有三把钥匙和一个独特的钥匙扣。想到失主可能会很着急，“我们” 猜测钥匙可能是邻居的，便在原地等了两个小时询问路人但无果。后来 “我” 发现钥匙扣上有警报按钮，于是决定回小区通过按警报来找车，进而找到失主。
伏笔以及在续写中的回应：
伏笔：“There were 3 keys — a house key, a mail key and a car key and a unique key fob (吊坠) very likely designed specially.”（有三把钥匙 —— 一把房门钥匙、一把信箱钥匙和一把汽车钥匙，还有一个很可能是特别设计的独特钥匙扣。）
回应：续写中通过钥匙扣上的警报按钮找到了汽车，进而确定了失主，体现出钥匙扣这个独特设计的重要性，推动了情节发展。
伏笔：“We had a very big neighborhood.”（我们的社区非常大。）
回应：这为 “我们” 在社区里寻找失主增加了难度，突出了 “我们” 坚持寻找的可贵，也使得找到失主后的成就感更强烈，同时呼应了按警报按钮找车这一方法的必要性。
伏笔：“Our little dog ran in circles of excitement since we stayed so long in the wild.”（因为我们在野外待了这么久，我们的小狗兴奋地跑来跑去。）
回应：在续写中，小狗虽然没有直接参与找失主的关键情节，但它的兴奋状态从侧面反映出 “我们” 在等待和寻找过程中的坚持，与 “我们” 的行为形成一个整体氛围，丰富了故事场景。
伏笔：“We remained in the woods for two hours, asking everyone we came across whether they lost their keys, but in vain.”（我们在树林里待了两个小时，问过我们遇到的每一个人是否丢了钥匙，但都没有结果。）
回应：突出了 “我们” 一开始寻找失主的困难，与后面通过按警报按钮找到失主形成对比，体现出 “我们” 不放弃的精神，同时也为后面的情节转折做了铺垫。
伏笔：“It might belong to someone in our neighborhood as only our neighbors wandered into the woods for a walk.”（它可能是我们社区里的某个人的，因为只有我们的邻居会到树林里散步。）
回应：为 “我们” 回社区找失主提供了合理的理由，限定了寻找范围，使故事的发展更具逻辑性，也让读者更容易理解 “我们” 的行为动机。
续写要点（两段）：
第一段：描述 “我们” 回到小区后，小心翼翼地按警报按钮，仔细听辨周围车辆的反应，同时紧张又期待地观察着周围的动静。当听到警报声后，如何兴奋地循声而去，最终确定是哪辆车，过程中可以增加一些对小区环境和 “我们” 心情的细节描写，比如心跳加速、眼睛紧紧盯着周围等，突出紧张刺激的氛围。
第二段：重点刻画老妇人开门后的反应，从她最初的疑惑到看到钥匙后的惊喜和感激，通过语言、表情和动作等细节展现出来。“我们” 看到她的反应后的内心感受，以及双方简单的交流互动，体现出帮助他人后的快乐和满足，升华故事的情感。
情感线：
起初发现钥匙时，“我们” 对失主充满担忧；在树林等待失主无果后，有些失落但仍不想放弃；回到小区寻找时，心情紧张又期待；找到失主后，看到老妇人的感激，“我们” 内心充满喜悦和成就感，完成了从担忧到喜悦、从失落想放弃到坚持成功的情感转变，突出了帮助他人所带来的积极情感体验。
故事线：
“我们” 玩耍时小狗捡到钥匙，猜测是邻居的并在树林等待失主，无果后回小区利用钥匙扣警报按钮找车，最终确定失主是一位老妇人，归还钥匙后收获感激，完整地讲述了一个寻找失主归还钥匙的温暖故事，情节紧凑且合理。
主旨升华句（5 句英文）：
A small act of kindness can be a big ray of hope in someone's cloudy day.（一个小小的善举可能是某人阴霾日子里的一大束希望之光。）
In the journey of helping others, we often find the true meaning and value of our own existence.（在帮助他人的过程中，我们常常能找到自身存在的真正意义和价值。）
The warmth of kindness spreads like a wildfire, lighting up not only the receiver's heart but also our own.（善良的温暖像野火一样蔓延，不仅照亮了接受者的心，也照亮了我们自己的心。）
Sometimes, the simplest actions carry the most profound impact, teaching us the power of empathy and compassion.（有时，最简单的行动却有着最深远的影响，让我们懂得了同理心和同情心的力量。）
Every act of kindness is a seed sown in the garden of humanity, growing into a beautiful flower of connection and love.（每一个善举都是在人性的花园里播下的一颗种子，成长为一朵连接与爱的美丽花朵。）
两篇写作示范：
第一篇：
We rushed back to our neighborhood. Toby clutched the keys, his face flushed with excitement. As we walked, I pressed the alarm button at short intervals, my ears straining to catch the faintest sound. The sun was beginning to set, casting long shadows on the pavement. Our steps quickened with every press, the anticipation building. Suddenly, a shrill beeping pierced the air. We dashed towards the sound, hearts pounding. There, in a driveway, was a blue car with its lights flashing. We had found it!
The door opened and in front of us stood an old lady. Her eyes widened in disbelief as she saw the keys in Toby's hand. "Oh, my goodness! I've been searching high and low. You dear children, how can I ever thank you " she exclaimed, her voice trembling with emotion. We smiled shyly, telling her it was no trouble at all. She insisted on giving us some homemade cookies, and as we munched on them, the sweetness filled not only our mouths but our hearts. It was in that moment that we realized the power of a simple act of kindness, and how it could turn a stranger's distress into a shared moment of joy.
第二篇：
We rushed back to our neighborhood. With bated breath, I pressed the alarm button, my eyes scanning every car we passed. The neighborhood was quiet, the only sound being our hurried footsteps and the intermittent beeping. My sister held Rubby's leash tightly, as if drawing strength from our furry friend. As we turned a corner, a loud alarm echoed through the street. We saw a white car with its hazard lights blinking. Relief washed over us as we knew we were close.
The door opened and in front of us stood an old lady. She looked at us with a mixture of surprise and gratitude. "I thought I'd lost them forever. You angels have saved me so much trouble," she said, tears glistening in her eyes. We handed her the keys, and she hugged us one by one. In that embrace, we felt a connection, a bond formed through kindness. This experience taught us that even the smallest gestures can have a profound impact, and that the kindness we give away always finds its way back to us in the most unexpected and beautiful ways.
读后续写参考答案
We rushed back to our neighborhood. We found a lot of cars in the neighborhood. We tried to pass each car, pressing the alarm button. But in vain. Just as we were about to give up when we suddenly discovered an old car parked in a nearby corner. When we pressed the button, the car’s lights were on and the car made a beep. We jumped with joy and at the same time, we recognized that that car belongs to an old lady near our house. She often drives this old car to go shopping.
The door opened and in front of us stood an old lady. The old lady looked unhappy. She said “hello, kids”. We took out the present and asked her if they were her keys. The old woman suddenly brightened up with surprise. The old woman said “God. It is you that find my keys.” She was very grateful to us and gave us the dessert she had made herself. We didn’t refuse it .We smiled to each other. It was a wonderful day.

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