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My younger brother and I were home watching cartoons while my father slept and my mother was out shopping. I left my brother in the living room and went to get something to drink. As I was pulling some orange juice, I heard something break. Firsts I looked in to see if my father had woken up and he hadn’t. Then I quickly ran to see what had happened. When I went into the living room. I was shocked. My brother had broken my mother’s favorite vase.
“What did you do ” I asked.
“I broke it!” My brother answered, “It was an accident.”
Knowing that he was shocked and frightened, and not wanting him to get in trouble, I did what any friend would do. I tried to help him. I quickly ran and got some glue. I didn’t know what time my mother was going to be back or when my father was going to wake up, so I tried to hurry. I anxiously gathered up all of the broken pieces and started to glue them together. It took me an hour but finally I fixed the vase. Then came the real disaster.
“Oh, my God! Oh, my God!” I screamed.
I had fixed the vase but I had accidentally glued my hair to it!
While my brother looked at me like I was some kind of fool, I carried the vase — with my hair attached to it—into the bathroom. I looked in the mirror.
“My beautiful hair,” I cried. Realizing that there was no way to pull my hair from the vase, I grabbed a pair of scissors. With every single strand (缕) of hair that I cut, I cried again. My hair was ruined, and the vase looked as if a wig was attached to it! As I was leaving the bathroom with my ridiculous new hairdo, I heard the key turn in the front door.
注意：续写词数应为150左右。
My mother was back!
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While I was lying on my bed, I realized what I had done was an act of friendship.
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一、文章大意
作者和弟弟在家，父母分别在睡觉和外出购物。作者去拿饮料时听到东西破碎的声音，发现弟弟打碎了妈妈最爱的花瓶。出于不想让弟弟受罚的心理，作者用胶水试图修复花瓶，结果却不小心把自己的头发粘在了花瓶上。作者试图把头发从花瓶上弄下来但无果，最后只好用剪刀剪掉头发，这时妈妈回来了。
二、故事山分析
开场：作者和弟弟在家，父母不在身边，营造了一个相对自由但也容易引发意外的场景。
上升：弟弟打碎花瓶，这是事件的开端，引发了后续一系列的动作。
高潮：作者用胶水粘花瓶却把头发粘住，然后不得不剪掉头发，情节在此达到紧张的顶点。
下降：妈妈回来，紧张的氛围即将得到缓解。
结局：未给出，留给续写。
三、伏笔及续写回应
伏笔：弟弟打碎花瓶时父亲在睡觉，这为作者有时间去处理花瓶事件埋下伏笔。
续写回应：在作者处理花瓶问题的过程中，父亲都没有醒来，使得情节得以顺利发展。
伏笔：作者不知道妈妈什么时候回来，增加了事件处理的紧张感。
续写回应：妈妈突然回来，让作者陷入了更加尴尬的境地。
伏笔：作者为了不让弟弟受罚决定帮忙，体现了对弟弟的保护。
续写回应：在后续情节中，这种保护弟弟的心理得到了强化，尽管自己遭遇了头发被剪的尴尬，但出发点是对弟弟的爱护。
伏笔：作者选择用胶水粘花瓶，暗示可能会出现意外。
续写回应：意外发生，头发被粘住，推动情节发展到高潮。
伏笔：作者听到钥匙转动的声音，预示着妈妈即将出现，制造紧张氛围。
续写回应：妈妈回来看到作者和花瓶的样子，引发后续的情节发展。
四、续写要点
第一段：
妈妈的反应：妈妈看到作者和花瓶先是惊讶，然后可能会因为作者保护弟弟的初衷而感到欣慰，同时也会安慰作者关于头发的事情。
作者的感受：作者从紧张和尴尬中逐渐放松，感受到妈妈的理解。
第二段：
作者对友谊的思考：作者躺在床上，深刻意识到自己对弟弟的保护是出于深厚的情谊，这种情谊超越了物质和外表。
未来的行动：作者决定以后在面对类似情况时，依然会选择保护弟弟，并且会更加机智地处理问题。
五、情感线
文章开始时作者是轻松地在拿饮料，听到花瓶破碎声后变得紧张和担忧，担心弟弟会受罚。在处理花瓶过程中，作者变得焦虑，尤其是头发被粘住时更加慌乱。妈妈回来后，作者感到极度的尴尬和不安。最后躺在床上，作者从对头发被毁的难过转变为对自己保护弟弟行为的欣慰，意识到亲情和友谊的珍贵。
六、故事线
作者和弟弟在家，父母分别在睡觉和外出。
弟弟打碎妈妈最爱的花瓶。
作者用胶水试图修复花瓶，却把头发粘住。
作者无奈剪掉头发，这时妈妈回来。
妈妈看到作者和花瓶的情景。
作者躺在床上思考自己的行为，意识到对弟弟的情谊。
七、主旨升华句（英文）
True friendship is shown not in times of ease, but in the face of trouble.（真正的友谊不是在安逸时体现，而是在面对麻烦时显现。）
Family bonds are the ties that bind us, making us do selfless acts.（亲情是将我们联系在一起的纽带，让我们做出无私的行为。）
Sometimes, sacrifice in the name of friendship is the most precious gift.（有时，以友谊之名做出的牺牲是最珍贵的礼物。）
The love for our family members often drives us to make unexpected sacrifices.（对家人的爱常常驱使我们做出意想不到的牺牲。）
In the journey of life, acts of friendship within the family are like lighthouses, guiding us.（在人生旅途中，家庭中的友谊之举就像灯塔，指引着我们。）
八、写作示范
第一篇
My mother was back!
She stared at me and the vase with a mix of shock and confusion. I stood there, rooted to the spot, waiting for her to explode. But instead, she burst out laughing. She said, “You silly child, why did you do this ” I told her about trying to protect my brother. She then hugged me and said, “Your kindness is more precious than the vase.” I felt a wave of relief wash over me.
While I was lying on my bed, I realized what I had done was an act of friendship.
I thought about how much my brother meant to me. Although my hair was a mess now, it was a small price to pay for protecting him. I made a vow to myself that I would always be there for my brother, no matter what silly situations we might get into. Because that's what true friendship and family are all about.
第二篇
My mother was back!
The moment she saw me with the vase attached to my hair, her eyes widened. I quickly explained the whole story. To my surprise, she didn't scold me. Instead, she gently removed the vase from my head, saying, “Your intention to protect your brother is sweet, but next time, come to me first.” I nodded, feeling grateful for her understanding.
While I was lying on my bed, I realized what I had done was an act of friendship.
I understood that the bond between my brother and me was unbreakable. My act was driven by love and a desire to keep him out of trouble. I realized that sometimes, our actions for the ones we love may lead to unexpected consequences, but the love itself is what truly matters. I closed my eyes, content with my decision to protect my brother.
【答案】
My mother was back! My brother rushed to his room and quickly pretended to be asleep, leaving me to deal with Mum all by myself. Before I could explain, my mother shouted angrily at me and grounded me because she thought I had broken the vase. I went to my room to think about what had happened. I was grounded and I was also going to have to go to school looking like a fool!
While I was lying on my bed, I realized what I had done was an act of friendship. I knew that even though my brother and I fought a lot, what I had done was absolutely selfless. I had paid a great price for this–my hair and my freedom! “Knock, knock,” sounded someone at my door. “Who is it ” I asked. My brother walked in and gave me a big hug. “Thank you,” he said gratefully. “You’re welcome,” I replied. I guess that’s what a big sister is for, to be a friend when you need one.

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