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In a coastal village named Seaford, lived a courageous young woman named Amelia. Amelia was known throughout Seaford for her adventurous nature. From the moment she could walk, she would eagerly run towards the crashing waves, feeling the sand between her toes and the cool spray of the ocean mist on her face. She was a woman with a strong will and possessed a heart full of kindness. Amelia’s love for the ocean was intense, and she spent most of her days exploring the beautiful beaches and sparkling waters that surrounded her house.
One sunny morning, while Amelia was walking along the shore, she noticed a group of restless seagulls abnormally circling above the crashing waves. Their unusual calls echoed（回）through the air. Concerned for their well-being, she followed their flight pattern, her instincts guiding her toward danger.
As she approached a towering cliff, Amelia gasped in horror. On a narrow ledge（岩架）, high above the violent waves, was a young dolphin trapped in a thick fishing net. Its shiny body shone under the golden rays of the sun, but its freedom was cruelly limited by the trap. With each struggle, the net tightened around its delicate body, leaving painful marks on its skin. Its tail flapped helplessly, each movement a request for help, while its desperate cries for assistance echoed through the air.
A sense of urgency filled her, pushing her forward with determination and resolve. Realizing that time was tight, Amelia knew she had to act instantly to free this innocent creature from its difficult position before it submitted to exhaustion or the force of the tides.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
第一段：Without hesitation, Amelia rushed back to the village.
第二段：As the dolphin was gently released into the calm, welcoming waters, it hesitated for a moment.
文章大意：在海边村庄 Seaford，热爱海洋且勇敢善良的 Amelia 某天在海边看到一群异常的海鸥，追随它们发现一只被困在悬崖岩架上渔网中的小海豚。小海豚在渔网中挣扎，身上已有伤痕，情况危急。Amelia 毫不犹豫地回村召集渔民，带着工具赶回悬崖，冒险下崖解救小海豚，最终成功将其放归大海，她的英勇事迹也在村里传颂，激励着人们保护海洋生物。
伏笔及回应：
伏笔：Amelia 从小就热爱海洋，“From the moment she could walk, she would eagerly run towards the crashing waves”
回应：为她毫不犹豫地决定救助被困海豚提供了合理的动机，体现出她对海洋生物的深切关爱，这种热爱驱使她冒险去拯救海豚，在整个救助过程中，她的勇敢和坚定都源于这份深沉的爱。
伏笔：Amelia 注意到海鸥异常盘旋，“she noticed a group of restless seagulls abnormally circling above the crashing waves”
回应：这引导她发现了被困的海豚，推动了故事的发展，使情节从日常的海边散步转向紧张的救援行动，后续她根据海鸥的指引找到海豚并展开救援，凸显了她敏锐的观察力和对自然迹象的解读能力。
伏笔：Amelia 性格勇敢且意志坚定，“Amelia was known throughout Seaford for her adventurous nature... She was a woman with a strong will”
回应：在她回村召集渔民、下悬崖救海豚等情节中得以体现，面对危险和困难，她没有丝毫退缩，而是积极采取行动，充分展现了她勇敢无畏、意志坚定的性格特点，是她能够成功解救海豚的关键因素。
伏笔：海豚被困的位置在悬崖的狭窄岩架上，且下方是汹涌的海浪，“On a narrow ledge, high above the violent waves”
回应：增加了救援的难度和危险性，为后续渔民准备绳索等工具以及 Amelia 冒险下崖的情节做铺垫，突出了救援行动的艰难，也更加衬托出 Amelia 等人的勇敢和善良。
伏笔：海豚的身体被渔网越缠越紧，情况危急，“With each struggle, the net tightened around its delicate body”
回应：强调了救援的紧迫性，促使 Amelia 迅速行动，争分夺秒地解救海豚，让整个故事的节奏更加紧张，读者也更能感受到救援的刻不容缓，以及成功后的欣慰。
续写要点
第一段情感线：从看到海豚被困时的焦急和担忧，到回村召集渔民时的急切与坚定，再到准备下崖救援时的紧张但勇敢无畏，始终围绕着拯救海豚这一目标，情感强烈且积极向上，展现出 Amelia 对生命的尊重和保护的决心。
故事线：Amelia 跑回村庄，找到熟悉且热心的渔民，快速说明情况。渔民们迅速行动，准备好绳索、刀具等救援工具后，与 Amelia 一同返回悬崖边。到达后，他们小心地固定好绳索，Amelia 深吸一口气，克服内心的恐惧，在渔民的协助下，顺着绳索慢慢下到岩架处，靠近被困的海豚，小心翼翼地开始切割渔网，同时时刻留意着海豚的反应和周围的环境，以防发生意外。
第二段情感线：看到海豚被释放时的欣慰和喜悦，感受到海豚回望时的感动，以及对整个救援行动成功的自豪和满足，最后升华到对海洋生物保护的责任感和使命感，情感真挚而深刻，从个人的情感体验延伸到对自然保护的大情怀。
故事线：海豚在被解开渔网后，先是停顿片刻，似乎在确认自己重获自由，然后用力摆动尾巴，游向大海深处。Amelia 和渔民们站在悬崖上，望着海豚远去的身影，心中充满了喜悦和感动。此后，Amelia 经常在海边驻足，回忆这次经历，而她的故事也在村庄里流传开来，激励着更多的人关注和保护海洋生物，村庄里也逐渐形成了爱护海洋、保护动物的良好氛围，大家会定期组织海滩清洁活动，避免海洋生物受到人类垃圾的伤害，并且在遇到受伤的海洋动物时，都会像 Amelia 一样积极伸出援手。
主旨升华句：
This act of kindness was not only a rescue but a testament to the power of compassion and the bond between humans and nature.（这次善举不仅是一次救援，更是同情的力量以及人与自然之间纽带的证明。）
In saving the dolphin, Amelia showed that every life is precious and that we are all guardians of this beautiful blue planet.（在拯救海豚的过程中，Amelia 表明每个生命都是珍贵的，我们都是这个美丽蓝色星球的守护者。）
The rescue of the dolphin was a small but significant step towards a world where humans and wildlife coexist in harmony.（拯救海豚是朝着人类与野生动物和谐共处的世界迈出的虽小但意义重大的一步。）
Amelia's bravery and love for the ocean and its creatures reminded us that our actions can make a difference in protecting the delicate balance of nature.（Amelia 对海洋及其生物的勇敢和热爱提醒我们，我们的行动可以在保护自然的微妙平衡方面产生影响。）
This story is a call to action for all of us to cherish and protect the wonders of the natural world, for they are the true treasures of our existence.（这个故事呼吁我们所有人珍惜和保护自然界的奇迹，因为它们是我们生存的真正宝藏。）
写作示范一
第一段：Without hesitation, Amelia rushed back to the village. Her mind was racing as she thought of who could help. She quickly gathered a group of strong and brave fishermen, her voice filled with urgency as she described the dolphin's plight. The fishermen, moved by her determination, immediately sprang into action. They collected sturdy ropes and sharp knives, knowing that time was of the essence. Amelia led the way back to the cliff, her heart pounding with a mixture of fear and hope. As they reached the edge, the fishermen skillfully tied the ropes and began to lower Amelia down. She closed her eyes for a moment, gathering her courage, and then began the descent. Inch by inch, she got closer to the trapped dolphin, her hands steady despite the danger.
第二段：As the dolphin was gently released into the calm, welcoming waters, it hesitated for a moment. It seemed to look directly into Amelia's eyes, as if to convey its gratitude. Then, with a graceful swoosh of its tail, it disappeared into the vast ocean. Amelia's eyes filled with tears of relief and joy. She watched as the dolphin swam away, feeling a sense of accomplishment like never before. The fishermen on the cliff cheered and whistled, proud of what they had all accomplished. From that day on, Amelia became an inspiration to the village. Her story was told and retold, a reminder that even one person's actions can have a profound impact on the lives of others, whether they be human or animal. And the village, inspired by her, made a vow to always protect the ocean and its precious inhabitants.
写作示范二
第一段：Without hesitation, Amelia rushed back to the village. She knew she couldn't save the dolphin alone. Her feet pounded on the sandy path as she searched for help. Spotting some experienced sailors, she quickly explained the situation. They wasted no time in gathering the necessary equipment. Ropes, hooks, and a ladder were loaded onto a cart, and they all hurried back to the cliff. Amelia's heart was in her throat as they set up the rescue gear. She was terrified but determined not to let the dolphin suffer any longer. With the help of the sailors, she carefully climbed down the ladder, the wind whipping at her hair. She focused on the task at hand, her eyes fixed on the trapped dolphin.
第二段：As the dolphin was gently released into the calm, welcoming waters, it hesitated for a moment. It circled back once, as if to say goodbye. Amelia's heart swelled with emotion. She had risked her life for this beautiful creature, and it was all worth it. The dolphin then sped off into the open sea, free at last. The sailors on the cliff clapped and hollered, celebrating the successful rescue. Amelia climbed back up, exhausted but elated. Word of her heroic act spread quickly through the village. People were in awe of her courage and compassion. This incident served as a catalyst for change. The villagers organized beach clean-ups and fishing regulations to ensure the safety of the ocean's creatures. Amelia's story became a symbol of hope and a reminder that we all have a responsibility to protect the natural world around us.
【参考范文】
Without hesitation, Amelia rushed back to the village. She grabbed a toolkit, carried a strong rope and hurried back with a group of villagers. Everything was all set before Amelia got down to the rescue. She lowered herself down the cliff little by little with great care. Somehow, she felt dizzy and nothing could be seen. She stopped. The dolphin’s desperate cries lingering through the air, Amelia summoned up all the courage to proceed. Ultimately, she arrived at the ledge. Standing on the ledge, Amelia’s heart pounded, the hands and feet shivering. After much effort, Amelia broke the thick net. With the help of the villagers, the innocent creature was let loose to the shore carefully and safely.
As the dolphin was gently released into the calm, welcoming waters, it hesitated for a moment. Delicate and painful as the dolphin was, it went to great lengths to jump, wagging its tail. Amelia stood there, appearing extremely worn-out. Then, she stepped over to the lovely creature, patting it on the head and kissing it. The dolphin snuggled up to Amelia, murmuring in a joyful voice. Amelia waved good-bye to it, feeling relieved. The sun cast the golden rays on Amelia’s face, and she went home in delight. Amelia’s story has uplifted more and more people and they have grown valorous, good-natured and persistent.

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