山东省2025届高三上学期第三次诊断考试英语试题之读后续写--创意解难:兄妹携手打造星际奇景 讲义素材

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山东省2025届高三上学期第三次诊断考试英语试题之读后续写--创意解难:兄妹携手打造星际奇景 讲义素材

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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Lucas had always prided himself on being the go-to guy for fixing things. Whether it was a leaky faucet ora broken toy, his friends knew he could tackle any problem that came his way.But today was different—he faced a challenge that made his palms sweat.
It was Saturday morning, and Lucas had promised his younger sister, Mia, that they would spend the day working on her science project—amodel of the solar system. The night before, they had gone to the local craft store, excitedly picking out paints, foam ( 泡 沫 ) balls, and a varietyof materials. Mia could hardly contain her eagerness to present the project at school onMonday, and Lucas was determined to help her make it impressive.
However, disasters struck as they began putting together the model. Lucas had intended to use a thin piece of wood for the base, but he accidentally dropped it, and the wood ended up in two pieces. At the sight of the broken base, Lucas felt as if his heartmissed a beat. Mia's face fell, and her enthusiasm faded like a distant star.
"Lucas! What are we going to do " she exclaimed, her eyes wide with disappointment.
“Okay, let's not panic,” he replied, striving to keep his voice steady. “We can fix this. Let's just think it through.”
Lucas surveyed the mess on the floor. The broken pieces lay scattered next to the colorful foam balls they had painted with care. They needed a stable base for the model, but there was no extra wood on hand. Unfortunately, the craft store was closed for the weekend, and there was no way he could ask their parents for help—Mom and Dad were still at work.
"Mia," Lucas suddenly said, a spark of inspiration flashing into his mind," how about we use that old coffee table in the garage "
注意 :
1.续写词数应为150个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
第一段:Mia was confusedby her brother's suggestion
第二段:“Now we can start building the model!” Mia cheered.
文章大意:
Lucas 向来擅长修理东西,周六他答应帮妹妹 Mia 做太阳系模型用于学校展示。然而在制作过程中,用于做底座的薄木板意外断裂,而工艺品店周末关门,父母也在上班无法求助。关键时刻,Lucas 提议用车库里的旧咖啡桌,这让 Mia 感到困惑,但 Lucas 已有计划将其改造为合适的底座,随后两人便着手行动,最终完成了一个漂亮的模型。
伏笔以及在续写中的回应:
伏笔:“Lucas had always prided himself on being the go-to guy for fixing things.”(Lucas 一直为自己是修理东西的能手而自豪。)
回应:为后文他面对木板断裂的困境时积极想办法解决问题做铺垫,体现出他不轻易放弃的性格特点,尽管遇到困难,依然凭借自己的能力去克服,回应了他 “修理能手” 的人设。
伏笔:“The night before, they had gone to the local craft store, excitedly picking out paints, foam (泡沫) balls, and a variety of materials.”(前一天晚上,他们兴奋地去当地的工艺品店挑选了颜料、泡沫球和各种材料。)
回应:这些材料在后续制作模型过程中被再次提及和使用,如用颜料给代表行星的泡沫球上色,以及用这些材料装饰改造后的咖啡桌底座,使故事前后连贯,突出了他们为制作模型所做的准备工作没有白费。
伏笔:“Unfortunately, the craft store was closed for the weekend, and there was no way he could ask their parents for help—Mom and Dad were still at work.”(不幸的是,工艺品店周末关门了,而且他没办法向父母求助 —— 爸爸妈妈还在上班。)
回应:这就迫使 Lucas 必须想其他办法解决底座问题,从而引出用旧咖啡桌这一解决方案,推动了故事情节的发展,增加了故事的波折性。
伏笔:“Mia could hardly contain her eagerness to present the project at school on Monday, and Lucas was determined to help her make it impressive.”(Mia 迫不及待地想在周一在学校展示这个项目,Lucas 决心帮她把它做得令人印象深刻。)
回应:在续写中,通过两人努力克服困难完成模型,满足了 Mia 想要展示的愿望,同时也体现出 Lucas 对妹妹的承诺和帮助,呼应了两人的初始目标和情感动机。
伏笔:“Lucas had intended to use a thin piece of wood for the base, but he accidentally dropped it, and the wood ended up in two pieces.”(Lucas 原本打算用一块薄木板做底座,但他不小心把它弄掉了,木板断成了两块。)
回应:这直接导致了故事的矛盾冲突,引出后面寻找替代底座的情节,而用旧咖啡桌替代木板成为解决这一冲突的关键,使故事围绕解决底座问题展开,情节更加紧凑。
续写要点:
第一段:详细描述 Mia 对使用旧咖啡桌的困惑和质疑,如她认为咖啡桌太大太丑,不适合做模型底座。接着 Lucas 耐心地向她解释自己的改造计划,包括如何拆卸咖啡桌、选取合适的部分、用砂纸打磨使其光滑以及用颜料将其漆成与太阳系模型相匹配的颜色,通过两人的对话和动作展现出他们解决问题的思考过程和决心。
第二段:重点描写两人按照计划动手改造咖啡桌并制作模型的过程。可以描述他们分工合作,Lucas 负责切割和打磨,Mia 帮忙准备工具和颜料,以及在这个过程中遇到的小困难和如何克服它们。最后展现完成后的模型的样子,突出其精美和独特,体现出他们的努力得到了回报,两人的喜悦之情溢于言表。
情感线:
起初,Lucas 和 Mia 对制作模型充满期待和兴奋;当木板断裂时,Mia 感到失望,Lucas 则有些紧张但仍保持镇定;在提出用旧咖啡桌的方案后,Mia 从困惑转为信任,Lucas 则充满信心;最后完成模型时,两人都无比喜悦和自豪,完成了从期待到失望再到喜悦自豪的情感转变,突出了在困难面前通过努力和合作获得成功的情感体验。
故事线:
Lucas 答应帮 Mia 做太阳系模型,制作中木板底座断裂,因店铺关门和父母不在无法求助,Lucas 提议用旧咖啡桌,Mia 虽困惑但同意,两人改造咖啡桌并完成模型,完整地讲述了一个面对困难解决问题完成任务的故事,情节跌宕起伏,引人入胜。
主旨升华句:
In the face of difficulties, creativity and determination are the keys that unlock the door to success.(面对困难时,创造力和决心是开启成功之门的钥匙。)
Every setback is an opportunity in disguise, leading us to discover new solutions and grow stronger.(每一次挫折都是伪装的机会,引领我们发现新的解决方案并变得更强大。)
When we put our minds together and persevere, even the most unlikely materials can be transformed into something wonderful.(当我们齐心协力并坚持不懈时,即使是最不可能的材料也能变成美妙的东西。)
The journey of solving problems is not just about the destination, but also about the valuable lessons and unbreakable bonds we form along the way.(解决问题的过程不仅在于结果,还在于我们在途中形成的宝贵经验和牢不可破的纽带。)
True ingenuity lies in finding beauty and functionality in the most unexpected places, turning challenges into triumphs.(真正的独创性在于在意想不到的地方发现美和功能,将挑战转化为胜利。)
两篇写作示范:
第一篇:
Mia was confused by her brother's suggestion. She wrinkled her nose and stared at the old, dusty coffee table in the garage. "How can we use that It's so old and dirty. It'll ruin my project!" she cried. Lucas smiled reassuringly. "Trust me, Mia. We'll take it apart and cut out just the right piece. Then we'll sand it until it's smooth as silk and paint it to look like outer space. It'll be perfect!" Mia still looked doubtful, but she nodded. Lucas fetched some tools, and they got to work. With a bit of effort, they managed to detach a suitable section of the tabletop. As Lucas sanded, Mia watched in amazement as the rough wood began to transform.
“Now we can start building the model!” Mia cheered. She eagerly grabbed the painted foam balls while Lucas continued to prepare the base. They glued the planets in place, carefully arranging them according to their relative sizes and distances. Mia added some glitter to represent the stars, and Lucas used a thin wire to hang a small styrofoam sun at the center. When they finally stepped back to admire their creation, it was a sight to behold. The coffee table base now looked like a beautiful cosmic backdrop, and the model was even better than they had hoped. Mia hugged Lucas tightly. "You're the best brother ever! We did it!" This experience taught them that with a little creativity and a lot of determination, they could overcome any obstacle and turn it into something amazing.
第二篇:
Mia was confused by her brother's suggestion. She crossed her arms and eyed the dilapidated coffee table with suspicion. "That thing It's falling apart! How will it work for my project " Lucas chuckled. "We'll salvage the good parts, Mia. We'll cut it down to size, sand off the rough edges, and paint it a deep black with some silver swirls to look like the galaxy. It'll be unique!" Mia's eyes widened a bit as she imagined it. She hesitantly agreed, and together they dragged the table into the yard. Lucas carefully dismantled it, selecting the sturdiest piece. They spent the next hour sanding and painting, their hands getting dirty but their spirits high.
“Now we can start building the model!” Mia cheered. She handed Lucas the painted planets one by one as he attached them to the newly transformed base. They added some small plastic astronauts and satellites to enhance the display. As they worked, they laughed and shared ideas, forgetting about the initial setback. When the model was complete, it was a work of art. The coffee table had been reborn as a stunning platform for the solar system. Mia beamed with pride. "Thanks to you, Lucas, this project is going to be a huge hit!" This adventure showed them that setbacks are just stepping stones to greater achievements, and that with teamwork and innovation, they could make the impossible possible.
参考答案
Mia was confused by her brother's suggestion, Lucas continued, “We need to cut the table down to the size of the base." At his words, Mia's eyes lit up with excitement. He led her to the garage, where the coffee table stood, dusty but solid. Once they dragged the table into the sunlight and gave it a quick wipe, they set about measuring and marking the dimensions they needed carefully. It was quite a challenge, but through some efforts, they finally had a flat piece that would work perfectly for the model.
“Now we can start building the model!” Mia cheered. They spent the next few hours attaching the foam balls each representing a planet to the base, painting them brilliant colors, and adding labels. By late afternoon, the model was completed, and they had turned a disaster into a memorable experience of problem-solving. Mia stood back, hands on her hips admiring their work, “It looks fantastic! Thanks, Lucas!” He smiled, a sense of satisfaction welling up inside him. It was their resolve and teamwork that saved the day.

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