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Calvin’s day camp teacher, Autumn, passed out a sheet of paper with pictures and descriptions of different birds and a small pair of binoculars) (双筒望远镜) to each camper. He announced, “We’re going to do a one-week challenge called ‘Big Week’, where you try to identify birds and mark them on the paper. Whoever identifies the most birds wins.”
Another challenge Ever since camp started, Gladys had beaten Calvin at everything. If he won this one, maybe he’d finally show Gladys that she wasn’t unbeatable. “How will you know if I really saw…” Calvin scanned the list. “… a glossy ibis ” “I won’t,” Autumn said. “A Big Week is based on honesty.”
The next day at the preserve, when they hid behind some brush, Gladys spotted a great egret! “That was my gift to you,” Gladys whisper-shouted with an I’m-going-to-win-this tone. “Like I would’ve missed that giant bird,” Calvin protested. Suddenly, birds exploded above Calvin’s head. Thunk! He fell down onto his back. Gladys rushed toward him, helped him up and advised, “Here’s a tip: try being OUIET.”
That evening, a large bird landed on Calvin’s neighbor’s tree. Calvin focused the binoculars. The bird had a bright red eye, a thick straight bill, a white throat and breast, and—oh, wow—long, thin, white feathers on the back of its head. “A black-crowned night heron!” he whispered excitedly. He was completely absorbed in his observation.
As the week went by, competition became fierce. Calvin had to win this contest. But chance seemed so slim! Then he remembered that he had found a feather that Autumn thought belonged to a Cooper’s hawk close enough. He marked it, plus a few extra birds. What was the difference He had seen them in the past, or he would see them eventually. He swallowed (吞咽) hard. No one will know the truth.
On the last day of Big Week, Autumn waved Gladys’s checklist in the air. “Twenty-six is the number to beat. Anybody else ”
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Reviewing the 29 birds marked on his list, Calvin felt his face heated up.
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Autumn awarded Gladys a Big Week T-shirt.
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一、文章大意
在卡尔文参加的日间夏令营中，老师奥森发起了为期一周的 “观鸟大挑战”，谁识别出的鸟类最多就能获胜。卡尔文因之前总是输给格拉迪斯而渴望在这次挑战中取胜，随着比赛的进行，竞争愈发激烈，卡尔文为了赢开始不诚实，在最后一天看到格拉迪斯的成绩后，内心产生了挣扎，故事将围绕卡尔文是否会坦白以及此事对他和格拉迪斯关系的影响展开，突出诚实与友谊的主题。
二、故事山分析
开端：老师奥森宣布 “观鸟大挑战”，介绍规则并发放观鸟资料和望远镜，引出故事核心事件，激发卡尔文的求胜心，同时也为后续情节发展奠定基础，引发读者对比赛过程和结果的好奇。
发展：比赛中格拉迪斯先发现了大白鹭，卡尔文在观察过程中遇到各种状况，如被鸟群吓到摔倒等，这些情节增加了故事的趣味性和紧张感，也展现了观鸟活动的挑战性，推动故事发展，同时进一步强化卡尔文想要赢的决心，为他后面的不诚实行为做铺垫。
高潮：卡尔文为了赢得比赛，在记录鸟类时添加了一些自己不确定看到的鸟，内心陷入道德挣扎，这是故事的关键转折点，将矛盾冲突聚焦在卡尔文的内心世界，使读者关注他将如何抉择，极大地增强了故事的张力。
低谷：卡尔文在回顾自己标记的 29 只鸟时，因不诚实行为而感到愧疚和不安，情绪陷入低谷，这种内心的痛苦与之前渴望获胜的急切形成鲜明对比，更加凸显出诚实的重要性以及他此时内心的矛盾，为后续的坦白情节营造了紧张压抑的氛围。
结局（续写前）：奥森宣布格拉迪斯的 26 只鸟是目前的最高记录，询问是否有人超过，卡尔文的内心正进行着激烈的斗争，故事在此处留下悬念，读者急切想知道卡尔文会做出怎样的决定，为续写提供了明确的方向和强烈的期待感。
三、伏笔及续写中的回应
伏笔：“自从夏令营开始，格拉迪斯在所有事情上都打败了卡尔文。如果他赢得这次比赛，也许他最终能向格拉迪斯证明她不是不可战胜的。”
回应：续写中可以描述卡尔文在坦白不诚实行为后，虽然失去了赢得比赛的机会，但他赢得了格拉迪斯的尊重和友谊。例如，格拉迪斯看到卡尔文的勇气和诚实，主动与他分享观鸟经验，两人一起去观鸟，卡尔文在这个过程中真正提高了自己的观鸟技能，不再仅仅执着于战胜格拉迪斯，而是享受观鸟的乐趣和与朋友共同成长的过程，从而呼应前文卡尔文对胜利的渴望以及与格拉迪斯的竞争关系，展现他在经历此事后的心态转变和成长。
伏笔：“‘大挑战周’是基于诚实的。”
回应：在后续情节中，当卡尔文坦白自己的不诚实行为时，老师奥森可以借此强调诚实的重要性，并给予卡尔文一个小的惩罚或教育，如让他在大家面前分享这次经历和学到的教训，使卡尔文更加深刻地理解诚实的价值，同时也向其他孩子传递这一重要品质，强化了故事的教育意义，呼应了前文对 “诚实” 这一主题的铺垫。
伏笔：“卡尔文必须赢得这场比赛。但机会似乎很渺茫！然后他想起他找到了一根奥森认为属于库珀鹰的羽毛，差不多就行了。他标记了它，还加了几只额外的鸟。”
回应：续写时可以详细描述卡尔文坦白时内心的挣扎和最终的决定过程，他可能会想到如果不诚实赢得比赛，即使得到了 T 恤也不会真正开心，而且会失去他人的信任。通过内心的对话和回忆比赛过程中的点滴，他最终选择面对自己的错误，突出他在道德困境中的成长和对诚实的回归，与之前的不诚实行为形成对比，使故事的情节发展更加合理且富有深度。
伏笔：“他完全沉浸在自己的观察中。”
回应：后续可以提到卡尔文对观鸟的热爱在坦白后并没有减少，反而更加纯粹。他开始更加专注于真正地观察和了解鸟类，不再被胜负心所左右。例如，他会主动去查阅更多关于鸟类的资料，参加各种观鸟活动，并且与其他观鸟爱好者分享自己的真实观察记录，展现他回归对观鸟本身的热爱，进一步深化故事的主题，即诚实和真正的兴趣爱好比一时的胜利更重要，同时也呼应了前文他对观鸟的投入和热情。
伏笔：“格拉迪斯带着一种‘我要赢得这场比赛’的语气低声喊道，‘那是我送给你的礼物’。”
回应：续写中可以描述格拉迪斯在得知卡尔文坦白后，对他的态度发生了转变，从竞争关系逐渐转变为友好互助的朋友关系。她可能会回忆起之前与卡尔文的互动，意识到自己之前的竞争态度可能给卡尔文带来了压力，从而主动改变，与卡尔文一起探讨观鸟技巧，互相学习，共同进步，体现出在诚实和友谊面前，竞争的胜负变得不再重要，使故事的情感更加丰富和温暖，同时也与前文两人的竞争氛围形成对比，突出了故事的发展和变化。
四、续写要点
第一段
要点：描述卡尔文内心的挣扎和最终决定坦白的过程，包括他的心理活动、表情和动作等细节。可以提及他想到之前老师强调的诚实原则、与格拉迪斯的竞争过程以及自己对观鸟的真正热爱，这些因素如何促使他克服内心的虚荣和对胜利的渴望，鼓起勇气向老师和同学们承认自己的错误，展现他在道德困境中的成长和转变。
示例：Reviewing the 29 birds marked on his list, Calvin felt his face heated up. His heart pounded in his chest as he thought about the dishonesty of his actions. Images of the week's bird-watching flashed through his mind - the excitement of spotting new species, the thrill of the competition, but also the guilt that had been gnawing at him. He remembered Autumn's words about honesty and realized that winning this way would be hollow. With a deep breath and a determined look, he stood up, his legs trembling slightly. "I... I need to tell you something," he said, his voice barely above a whisper. "I didn't see all of these birds. I marked some that I wasn't sure about. I'm sorry."
第二段
要点：讲述格拉迪斯得知卡尔文坦白后的反应，以及老师奥森的处理方式和后续大家的互动。描述格拉迪斯从最初的惊讶到理解和宽容的态度转变，老师对卡尔文诚实行为的肯定和鼓励，以及同学们的反应。最后可以提及卡尔文和格拉迪斯在这次事件后的关系变化，如他们开始互相帮助、分享观鸟经验，一起更加纯粹地享受观鸟的乐趣，突出诚实和友谊在故事中的升华，使故事有一个温暖而积极的结局。
示例：Autumn awarded Gladys a Big Week T-shirt. Gladys took it with a big smile, but then her eyes met Calvin's. She was surprised to see the remorse in his eyes. After Autumn explained what had happened, Gladys walked over to Calvin. "Hey," she said softly. "It was brave of you to admit that. We all make mistakes." Calvin looked up, a glimmer of hope in his eyes. Autumn nodded in agreement. "Honesty is what matters most in this challenge," she said. "Calvin, you've learned an important lesson, and that's worth more than any prize." From that day on, Calvin and Gladys became closer. They went on bird-watching trips together, sharing tips and tricks, and the competition that once divided them now brought them closer as friends, united by their love for birds and the newfound respect for honesty.
五、情感线
起初，卡尔文因之前总是输给格拉迪斯而充满求胜欲和不甘；在观鸟过程中，既有发现新鸟种的兴奋，也有因竞争压力产生的紧张；当他为了赢而不诚实时，内心陷入愧疚和不安；最后在回顾自己的行为时，羞愧感达到顶点，经过内心挣扎后决定坦白，此时感到释然和勇敢；格拉迪斯得知后从惊讶到理解和宽容，两人的关系也从竞争走向友好互助，这条情感线细腻地展现了人物在故事中的心理变化，突出了诚实和友谊的珍贵，使读者能够深刻感受到人物的成长和情感的转变。
六、故事线
老师奥森发起 “观鸟大挑战”，卡尔文渴望借此战胜格拉迪斯。
比赛中格拉迪斯先发现大白鹭，卡尔文在观察时遇到各种状况，竞争激烈。
卡尔文为赢添加未确定看到的鸟，内心开始挣扎。
最后一天卡尔文看到格拉迪斯的成绩后，愧疚感加剧，内心斗争激烈。
卡尔文决定坦白自己的不诚实行为，向老师和同学认错。
格拉迪斯理解并宽容卡尔文，老师肯定卡尔文的诚实，两人关系变好，共同享受观鸟乐趣，突出诚实和友谊的重要性。
七、主旨升华句
"Honesty is the true prize in any competition, for it enriches our character and paves the way for genuine relationships and personal growth."（诚实是任何比赛中真正的奖品，因为它丰富了我们的品格，并为真正的人际关系和个人成长铺平了道路。）
"In the pursuit of victory, it is easy to lose sight of what truly matters; but when we choose honesty, we find that the journey of self-discovery and friendship is far more rewarding."（在追求胜利的过程中，我们很容易忽视真正重要的东西；但当我们选择诚实时，我们会发现自我发现和友谊的旅程更加有意义。）
"True success lies not in the number of victories we accumulate, but in the integrity we uphold and the values we cherish, for they are the building blocks of a meaningful life."（真正的成功不在于我们积累的胜利数量，而在于我们坚持的正直和珍惜的价值观，因为它们是有意义生活的基石。）
"A single act of honesty can transform a moment of shame into a turning point of growth, leading us to embrace the beauty of friendship and the joy of being true to ourselves."（一个诚实的举动可以将羞耻的时刻转变为成长的转折点，引领我们拥抱友谊的美好和做真实自己的快乐。）
"When we let go of the desire for false triumph and embrace honesty, we open the door to a world of trust, kindness, and the purest form of enjoyment in life's simple pleasures."（当我们放下对虚假胜利的渴望并拥抱诚实时，我们就打开了一扇通往信任、善良和生活简单乐趣中最纯粹享受的世界的大门。）
八、写作示范
第一篇
Reviewing the 29 birds marked on his list, Calvin felt his face heated up. His palms were sweaty as he clutched the checklist, the numbers seeming to mock him. He thought of the times he had genuinely spotted a bird, the rush of excitement, and how it had all been tainted by his dishonesty. The image of Gladys's eager face, always one step ahead in the competition, flashed before his eyes. But then he remembered the look of trust Autumn had when she handed out the binoculars. With a shuddering breath, he walked towards Autumn, his legs feeling like lead. "I... I cheated," he stammered, his voice barely audible. "I added some birds I wasn't sure about."
Autumn awarded Gladys a Big Week T-shirt. Gladys's eyes sparkled with pride as she received it. But when she saw Calvin's dejected figure, her expression softened. Autumn explained what had happened, and Gladys walked over to Calvin. "Hey, we all get carried away sometimes," she said gently. "At least you had the guts to own up to it." Calvin looked at her, surprised. From that moment, a bond formed between them. They started going on bird-watching trips together, not as competitors, but as friends. Calvin learned that winning wasn't everything; it was the honesty and the friendships forged along the way that truly mattered.
第二篇
Reviewing the 29 birds marked on his list, Calvin felt his face heated up. His mind was a whirlwind of conflicting thoughts. The desire to win warred with the guilt of his dishonesty. He thought about how much he had enjoyed the actual process of bird-watching, the beauty of the creatures he had seen. But now, the false marks on his list seemed to overshadow it all. He glanced at Gladys, who was looking at Autumn expectantly. Taking a deep breath, he mustered the courage to speak. "Autumn," he said, his voice shaking. "I marked some birds I didn't really see. I'm sorry."
Autumn awarded Gladys a Big Week T-shirt. Gladys took it with a grin, but her attention was quickly drawn to Calvin. After Autumn commended Calvin for his honesty, Gladys walked up to him. "You know," she said, "I respect you for coming clean. Let's forget about the competition and just focus on the birds." Calvin nodded, a sense of relief washing over him. In the days that followed, Calvin and Gladys became inseparable. They explored different bird habitats, sharing their knowledge and love for the hobby. Calvin realized that in losing the chance to win, he had gained something far more valuable - a true friend and a newfound respect for honesty.
参考答案
Reviewing the 29 birds marked on his list, Calvin felt his face heated up. He was about to win! But he also felt a knot in his stomach. He knew he had cheated. At the thought of Gladys’s words and Autumn’s trust in him, he stood up and announced, “I didn’t see three of these birds.” Then he crossed out the Cooper’s hawk and two other birds from his checklist. “Why did you do that ” Autumn asked. “Because I didn’t see them,” Calvin said. “But I will.”
Autumn awarded Gladys a Big Week T-shirt. She beamed with pride as she accepted it. Calvin congratulated her sincerely. “You deserved it,” he said. “Thanks,” Gladys said. “And good job too. You were honest.” “Yeah, I guess I was,” Calvin said, feeling proud of himself. As they walked back to camp, Calvin spotted a bird that seemed familiar. “A Cooper’s hawk!” he exclaimed. “No way！” Gladys said. “Yes,” Calvin said, marking it on his checklist, “Now we have seen it.”

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