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People say there seems to be so much negativity in this world, but there are good people out there and sometimes we are made aware of them when we least expect it.
My family had been planning a yard sale for several weeks. Our five-year-old son, Braxton, asked if he could set up a lemonade (柠檬水) stand during the yard sale. He wanted to make a little money and save up to buy a set of Lego bricks, which might add up to $100. “I will earn it myself!” he declared proudly. He had been talking about it almost non-stop and couldn’t wait for the day to finally arrive.
Two days ago, we put up the sign “Yard Sale” in front of the driveway, telling neighbors about the time and items. On the very day, Braxton woke up early at 6:00 am and couldn’t hide his excitement. After setting everything out for the yard sale, he made the lemonade and baked some cookies to begin his business adventure.
After about an hour or more, we had several customers, but Braxton still had not sold any lemonade. He was a little sad. Then a young woman walked up with her baby to browse the items. While making small talk, we told her about Braxton’s plan to save his money for his little dream. She then selected a couple of baby toys for just $6 and paid with a $10 bill. “Keep the change, boy!” she said gently. Braxton offered to give her the lemonade and cookies he made. He couldn’t have been happier to receive his first little bit of money for the day.
The woman left with the baby toys, the lemonade and some cookies. We didn’t give it much thought after that, but the story didn’t end there.
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第一段：Several minutes passed and the woman returned.
第二段：Holding the envelope and the bill, we were so moved.
文章大意：
本文讲述了作者一家举办庭院旧货出售活动，五岁的儿子 Braxton 想通过卖柠檬水和自制饼干赚钱买乐高积木的故事。活动开始后 Braxton 许久未卖出柠檬水，有些失落，直到一位年轻女士买了些婴儿玩具，不仅没要找零，还接受了 Braxton 送的柠檬水和饼干，这让他很开心。然而故事并未结束，女士离开后又折返回来，发生了更令人感动的事。
伏笔及续写回应：
Braxton 想攒钱买乐高积木（$100）：为女士后来凑齐他买积木的钱埋下伏笔，续写中女士给了他$94，加上之前的 $6，正好可以买积木，回应了这个伏笔。
Braxton 精心准备了柠檬水和饼干：女士买东西时接受了这些，这一情节为后来女士被 Braxton 的努力和真诚打动，从而再次返回帮助他做了铺垫，续写中女士回来送钱的举动，进一步体现出她对 Braxton 的认可和支持，回应了此处伏笔。
女士买东西时得知 Braxton 的攒钱计划：这一情节暗示女士可能会对 Braxton 有所帮助，续写中女士特意回来送钱，是对这个伏笔的回应，表明她记住了 Braxton 的梦想并愿意助力。
女士离开后故事未结束：引起读者好奇，为她的再次出现埋下伏笔，续写中女士回来送钱的情节使故事得以完整，解开了这个悬念，回应了此处伏笔。
女士温柔地让 Braxton 留着找零：体现出女士的善良，为她后续更大的善举（送钱）做了铺垫，续写中女士的慷慨相助进一步升华了她善良的形象，回应了这个伏笔。
续写要点：
情感线：从 Braxton 一开始因未卖出柠檬水的失落，到收到第一笔钱的开心，再到女士回来送钱时的惊喜与感动，以及作者一家对女士善良之举的感激与震撼，情感逐步升华，充分展现了人物内心丰富的情感变化。
故事线：女士离开几分钟后返回，将装有 $94 的信封交给 Braxton，帮助他凑齐买乐高积木的钱，这个情节推动故事发展至高潮，完整地讲述了一个充满温暖与善意的故事，情节连贯且富有逻辑性。
主旨升华句：
This unexpected act of kindness not only made Braxton's day but also restored our faith in the goodness of people.（这一意外的善举不仅让 Braxton 开心了一整天，也重拾了我们对人性之善的信心。）
It was a small gesture that carried a powerful message: kindness has the power to turn an ordinary day into an extraordinary one.（这虽是一个小小的举动，却传递了一个有力的信息：善良有将平凡的一天变得非凡的力量。）
In a world that often seems cold and indifferent, the warmth of a stranger's heart can light up the darkest corners.（在一个常常看似冷漠无情的世界里，陌生人的热心能照亮最黑暗的角落。）
The kindness of this woman was like a beacon, showing us that even the simplest act of giving can have a profound impact on someone's life.（这位女士的善良就像一座灯塔，让我们明白即使是最微小的给予行为也能对他人的生活产生深远的影响。）
This experience taught us that no act of kindness is ever wasted, and that the ripples of generosity can spread far and wide, touching lives in the most unexpected ways.（这次经历让我们懂得，任何善举都不会白费，慷慨之举的涟漪会扩散得很远很广，以最意想不到的方式触动人们的生活。）
写作示范一：
第一段：
Several minutes passed and the woman returned. She walked briskly towards us, a warm smile on her face. This time, she held an envelope in her hand. "I just couldn't stop thinking about how hard you're working, Braxton," she said as she crouched down to his level. She handed him the envelope and continued, "Inside is a little something to help you get those Lego bricks even sooner. You deserve it for being such a determined little entrepreneur." Braxton's eyes grew wide with astonishment and delight. He thanked her shyly, clutching the envelope tightly.
第二段：
Holding the envelope and the bill, we were so moved. As we opened the envelope, we found $94 neatly tucked inside. Tears welled up in our eyes as we realized what this meant for Braxton. The woman's kindness was beyond words. She had not only noticed Braxton's efforts but had also gone out of her way to make his dream come true. It was a simple act, but it spoke volumes about the power of kindness and generosity. This experience would stay with us forever, a reminder that in the midst of life's hustle and bustle, there are still those who take the time to make a difference, one small act of kindness at a time.
写作示范二：
第一段：
Several minutes passed and the woman returned. She was accompanied by her husband this time, and they both had gentle smiles on their faces. The woman walked up to Braxton and said, "We talked on the way home, and we wanted to do something special for you." She then presented him with an envelope. "There's some money in there to help you with your Lego set. We believe in you and your hard work." Braxton's face lit up like a Christmas tree. He couldn't believe his luck and thanked them with all his heart.
第二段：
Holding the envelope and the bill, we were so moved. When we peeked inside, we saw that it was exactly the amount Braxton needed to complete his savings. We were speechless at the couple's thoughtfulness and generosity. This act of kindness was like a ray of sunshine on a cloudy day. It showed us that kindness is contagious and that when we least expect it, people can come into our lives and change them for the better. It was a lesson for all of us to pay it forward and spread kindness wherever we go, because you never know how much of an impact it can have on someone's life.
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Paragraph 1:
Several minutes passed and the woman returned. “Is there anything wrong ” I thought to myself. I actually thought she was here to ask for her change back. Of course, I couldn’t have been more wrong. She was carrying an envelope this time. She handed it to us and said, “The lemonade and cookies are so delicious that I want to buy all of them. I hope you can give them away to whoever passes by your stand for me.” We thanked her and she walked away. We opened the envelope after she left and found a $100 bill in it.
Paragraph 2:
Holding the envelope and the bill, we were so moved. It was just a random act of kindness by a total stranger that would make a little five-year-old boy’s wish come true. At the same time, she delivered that kindness to other strangers by offering them lemonade and cookies for free. She obviously did not do it for praise or recognition. She just did it out of the kindness of her heart. Contrary to what some may think, the positivity in this world really does outweigh the negativity. There are good people around us doing good deeds, asking for nothing back.

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