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Lionel, Fandi and Iskandar often got together to play football. They dreamt of one day growing up to be professional footballers. The empty field beside the block of neighbourhood was where they would meet for their football sessions.
One sunny afternoon, they were at the field as usual. They were in the thick of their game when Fandi aimed his foot at the ball and gave a forceful kick. He himself was surprised by his strength. The ball flew past the goalposts breaking into a glass window of the house behind. The boys were too shocked for words. They were half expecting the annoyed home owner, Madam Leong, to storm out through the front door and give them a good tongue criticizing. They knew she was an ill-tempered old lady. Actually, she had scolded them several times before for being too noisy.
When no one came out of the house after ten minutes, the boys were quite surprised. They had prepared themselves for a scolding and were ready to compensate Madam Leong for breaking her window. Out of curiosity, Fandi adventured into Madam Leong’s yard. The gate was unlocked and he went in while the other two waited outside. Fandi knocked on the main door. No reply. Looking in through the broken window, Fandi let out a loud scream. Lying on the floor in a pool of blood was the old lady. There was a big cut on her forehead. She must have been cut by pieces of glass, flying across the living room.
In panic, Fandi immediately dialled 911 for an ambulance. As they were unable to enter the house without a key, there was nothing they could do but wait for the ambulance to arrive. Although the ambulance arrived soon, to the boys, the annoying wait seemed like forever. The ambulance attendants forced open the door and rushed to Madam Leong. She was unconscious, but still breathing. One of the ambulance attendants applied pressure on the wound and wrapped it. With its emergency lights flashing, the ambulance rushed off to the nearest hospital.
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1．续写词数应为150个左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The three boys decided to stay behind to wait for Madam Leong’s family to return. ________________________
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To everyone’s relief, Madam Leong received immediate treatment. _____________________________________
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文章大意：
Lionel、Fandi 和 Iskandar 三个男孩常在一起踢足球，梦想成为职业球员。一次踢球时，Fandi 大力射门，球击碎了邻居 Madam Leong 家的窗户，他们本以为会被责骂，结果等了十分钟没人出来。Fandi 好奇进入院子，发现 Madam Leong 受伤昏迷，于是赶紧拨打 911。由于无法进入屋子，他们只能在外面等待救护车，之后决定留下来等其家人回来，这一系列事件引发了后续故事，也凸显了孩子们在意外事件中的成长与担当。
伏笔及续写回应：
Madam Leong 脾气不好且之前责骂过他们：为孩子们担心被责骂以及后续发现她受伤时的惊慌做铺垫。续写中孩子们焦急等待并自责的表现，与之前对她脾气的描述相呼应，展现出他们内心的不安，回应了这一伏笔。
球打碎窗户后无人出来：引发 Fandi 进入院子查看，从而发现 Madam Leong 受伤，推动故事发展。续写中对等待过程的描述以及孩子们的心理活动，延续了因无人出来而产生的紧张氛围，回应了此处伏笔。
孩子们准备好赔偿：暗示他们有担当的一面，为后续积极弥补过错的行为做伏笔。续写中孩子们去医院看望并承诺弥补，体现了他们的责任感，回应了这一伏笔。
救护车很快到达：尽管如此，孩子们仍觉得等待漫长，突出他们的焦急心情，也为后文他们对 Madam Leong 病情的持续关注埋下伏笔。续写中他们去医院看望的情节，表现出对 Madam Leong 的关心，回应了这里的伏笔。
Madam Leong 受伤昏迷：预示着后续其病情的发展以及孩子们对此的反应。续写中提到她脱离危险及孩子们的行动，完整地展现了事件的后续走向，回应了该伏笔。
续写要点：
情感线：从一开始的惊慌、自责与担忧，到后来决定留下来等待时的不安，再到得知 Madam Leong 脱离危险后的欣慰，以及后续想要弥补过错的坚定，情感变化丰富且合理，深刻展现了孩子们内心的情感世界和成长历程。
故事线：第一段续写孩子们等待 Madam Leong 家人时的情景，包括内心的想法和周围环境的描写，进一步渲染紧张氛围；第二段续写 Madam Leong 接受治疗后的情况以及孩子们的后续行动，如去医院看望、承诺弥补等，使故事完整且有意义，围绕意外事件展开了温暖而有教育意义的后续情节。
主旨升华句：
In the face of unexpected accidents, our responsibility and kindness can turn guilt into redemption, and fear into courage.（在意外事故面前，我们的责任和善良能将内疚转化为救赎，将恐惧转化为勇气。）
Even the most unfortunate events can be the seeds of growth and transformation, as long as we have the heart to take responsibility and make amends.（即使是最不幸的事件也能成为成长和转变的种子，只要我们有承担责任和弥补过错的心。）
The journey of taking responsibility for our mistakes is not an easy one, but it is the path that leads us to become better and more empathetic individuals.（为自己的错误承担责任的旅程并不轻松，但这是引领我们成为更好、更有同理心的人的道路。）
Sometimes, accidents are not just disasters but also opportunities for us to show our true selves and the values we uphold.（有时，意外事故不只是灾难，也是我们展现真实自我和所秉持价值观的机会。）
When we take the initiative to face the consequences of our actions, we not only mend the broken pieces but also build bridges of understanding and forgiveness.（当我们主动面对自己行为的后果时，我们不仅修复了破碎的部分，还搭建起了理解与原谅的桥梁。）
写作示范一：
第一段：
The three boys decided to stay behind to wait for Madam Leong’s family to return. The evening breeze blew gently, but it did nothing to soothe their restless hearts. Lionel stared blankly at the broken window, his mind filled with regret. Fandi paced back and forth, his hands clenched tightly. Iskandar sat on the ground, his eyes fixed on the front door, praying for the family to arrive soon. The guilt was eating them alive, and they whispered among themselves, vowing to do whatever it took to make things right. The streetlights flickered on, casting an eerie glow over the silent yard.
第二段：
To everyone’s relief, Madam Leong received immediate treatment. The doctors worked tirelessly to stabilize her condition. When the boys heard the good news, tears of relief streamed down their faces. The next day, they went to the hospital, carrying a bouquet of flowers they had bought with their pocket money. They entered the room timidly, their eyes filled with remorse. Madam Leong's family was touched by their gesture. From then on, the boys visited regularly, helping with small chores around the house when Madam Leong was discharged. This experience taught them that taking responsibility for their actions could turn a bad situation into an opportunity for growth and kindness.
写作示范二：
第一段：
The three boys decided to stay behind to wait for Madam Leong’s family to return. As the night fell, the stars twinkled overhead, but the boys were oblivious to the beauty. They huddled together, shivering not only from the cold but also from the fear of the unknown. Each passing car made them jump, hoping it was the family. Their conversation was filled with self-blame and worry. They imagined the worst and tried to come up with ways to make amends. The silence of the house was deafening, and they felt as if time had stood still.
第二段：
To everyone’s relief, Madam Leong received immediate treatment. She slowly regained consciousness a few days later. The boys were overjoyed when they heard the news. They decided to raise money to help with the medical bills by doing odd jobs in the neighborhood. They mowed lawns, washed cars, and saved every penny they earned. When they presented the money to Madam Leong's family, the gratitude in their eyes was palpable. This incident became a turning point in the boys' lives, teaching them the value of responsibility and the power of redemption. They realized that even the most difficult situations could be overcome with a sincere heart and a determination to make things right.
读后续写参考答案
The three boys decided to stay behind to wait for Madam Leong’s family to return. Half an hour witnessed their anxious waiting, but they felt like a decade passing by. Heart pounding wildly and a surge of worry creeping up on them, they faced the hurried family of Madam Leong, especially Fandi, who was obviously immersed in the ocean of quit and grief, resting his head on his hand and sitting on the stairs silently. Fandi stepped forward, explaining the awful accident caused by him. To their astonishment, the family didn’t scold them by virtue of the fact that they didn’t mean to do it. What the family wanted was the safety of Madam Leong.
To everyone’s relief, Madam Leong received immediate treatment. It was not only exciting news for her family, but also a rope saving three boys from the deep cliff of guilt. When they got to the hospital, seeing Madam Leong wake up, the previous fear gave way to relief. In the following days, they volunteered to look after her in an endeavor to make up for the mistake. Gradually, Madam Leong realized their sincerity and changed her attitude to the boys. Soon after, life went back to normal, and Madam Leong sometimes even invited the exhausted football players to drink water.

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