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Undoubtedly, Mother Nature is always attractive to kids. In our childhood, how often did we turn a deaf ear to our parents’ advice Very often! Thus, we landed ourselves in a situation where we greatly regretted our act of not having listened to the advice of the wise.
Such an unforgettable experience I had at the age of 7 gave me an invaluable lesson, after which I deeply understood why my gentle mother was repeating the boring suggestions and I would try to take her suggestions seriously.
In my childhood, I was so crazy about nature that even playing among the colorful flowers in our garden could make my day. Our house was next to the woods which had always stirred up(激起) great curiosity in me in wanting to find out what was within. Every time I saw fascinating butterflies dancing from the woods, my curiosity grew.
But my mother didn’t like me wandering off on my own and always ensured that I was within her sight. Even if she allowed me to explore the surrounding area on my own, it was only to be somewhere near the house. Being as curious as the cat, I always desired to explore the woods. It seemed as if my mother had understood my desire, so she had warmed me on lots of occasions never to enter the woods alone.
“Mom, can I go out and play in the garden ” I asked.
“Sure,” she would reply each time. “Kate, you can play in the garden but you must promise me one thing—only when I’m with you can you go into the woods. There are no cases of animal attacks on humans, but it’s still dangerous for a little kid like you. It’s too easy to get lost in the woods.”
“Sure, you’ve said that many times!” I answered without patience at her repeated reminders.
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第一段：However, curiosity got the better of me one morning.
第二段：“Kate ” Behind the trees covered by the rays of the setting sun came my mother’s voice.
文章大意
这篇文章讲述了作者在七岁时的一次冒险经历。作为一个对自然充满好奇的孩子，作者经常在花园里玩耍，并对邻近的森林充满好奇。尽管母亲多次警告她不要独自进入森林，但作者的好奇心最终战胜了对母亲的承诺。在一个阳光明媚的早晨，趁母亲忙于家务，作者偷偷溜进了森林，开始了她的探险。
故事山分析
引入：作者描述了对自然的热爱和对森林的好奇。
上升：母亲对作者的警告和作者对森林的渴望逐渐增加。
高潮：作者决定违背母亲的警告，独自进入森林。
下降：作者在森林中的冒险经历。
解决：作者意识到自己的错误，并从经历中学习。
结局：作者对母亲的建议有了新的理解和尊重。
五处伏笔及回应
伏笔：作者对森林的好奇心。 回应：作者最终进入森林，满足了她的好奇心。
伏笔：母亲多次警告不要独自进入森林。 回应：作者忽视了这些警告，导致了后续的冒险。
伏笔：母亲忙于家务，给了作者一个机会。 回应：作者利用这个机会偷偷进入森林。
伏笔：森林中可能存在的危险。 回应：作者在森林中的经历可能证实了这些危险。
伏笔：作者对母亲的不耐烦。 回应：作者的行为最终导致了她对母亲的新理解和尊重。
续写要点（两段）
第一段：描述作者在森林中的冒险，包括她的感受、所见所闻，以及可能遇到的困难或危险。 第二段：描述作者如何被母亲找到，以及这次经历如何改变了她对母亲建议的看法。
情感线（150字）
文章中的情感线从好奇和兴奋开始，随着作者进入森林，情感转变为紧张和恐惧。当母亲的声音在森林中响起时，作者感到内疚和后悔。这次经历最终导致作者对母亲的爱和尊重的加深，以及对自然的新认识和敬畏。
故事线（6条）
作者对自然的热爱和好奇心。
母亲对作者安全的担忧和警告。
作者对母亲警告的不耐烦和忽视。
作者的森林冒险和所面临的挑战。
母亲的寻找和对作者的担忧。
作者从经历中学到的教训和对母亲建议的新理解。
主旨升华句（5句英文）
"Curiosity may lead us astray, but it is through such detours that we often learn the most valuable lessons."
"The voice of experience, though often unheeded, holds the wisdom to guide us through life's uncertainties."
"Nature's allure is undeniable, but it is the lessons learned from our adventures that shape our character."
"Respect for the warnings of those who care for us can save us from the pitfalls of our own impatience."
"Sometimes, it takes a journey into the unknown to truly appreciate the safety and guidance of home."
写作示范
示范一
However, curiosity got the better of me one morning. The sun was shining brightly, and the woods seemed to call my name with every breeze that rustled through the leaves. I had seen a particularly beautiful butterfly that morning, and I was convinced it had come from the depths of the woods. My heart raced with excitement as I stepped into the forest, the damp earth beneath my feet and the towering trees above creating an atmosphere of mystery and adventure.
“Kate ” Behind the trees covered by the rays of the setting sun came my mother’s voice. The sound was filled with a mix of worry and relief. As I emerged from the woods, I saw the concern in her eyes, and for the first time, I truly understood the weight of her warnings. That day, I learned not just about the dangers of the woods but also about the depths of a mother's love and the importance of heeding wise advice.
示范二
However, curiosity got the better of me one morning when the woods seemed to whisper secrets only I could uncover. The allure of the unknown was too strong, and I found myself tiptoeing into the forest, my small steps muffled by the thick carpet of leaves. The forest was a labyrinth of trees and shadows, and as I ventured deeper, the thrill of discovery turned to a growing sense of unease.
“Kate ” Behind the trees covered by the rays of the setting sun came my mother’s voice, a beacon in the encroaching darkness. The fear in her tone pierced through my heart, and I realized the gravity of my actions. As I ran towards her call, I was no longer the adventurous child but a daughter who had caused her mother undue worry. That evening, as we walked back home hand in hand, I vowed to never again dismiss the wisdom in my mother's words, understanding that her advice was a shield against the world's uncertainties.
参考答案
However, curiosity got the better of me one morning. Ignoring my mother’s reminder, I slid into the forbidden world. How fascinating! Among various colorful flowers danced butterflies. With excitement, I chased after the graceful creatures, running deeper into the woods. Suddenly they flew over trees and disappeared. What’s worse, I got lost! I rushed around, crying for help, frightened and helpless, but in vain. I repeated the useless efforts until sunset. “If only I followed Mom’s reminder!” I curled up under a tree, in bitter regret and cried again.
“Kate ” Behind the trees covered by the rays of the setting sun came my mother’s voice. “Mom! I’m here!” Wild with joy, I rushed towards where the voice came from. Behind a tree appeared my mother. She dashed up, hugged me tight and checked whether I got hurt. “I’m so sorry! I should have appreciated your suggestion!” I burst into tears. Wiping tears from my muddy face, she repeated the reminders, which weren’t boring any more, but wise and affectionate, and were implanted in my life forever.

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