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As a young couple, I and my husband were overjoyed to welcome our first baby, Joey. But amidst the joy and excitement, we found Joey was born with club feet (畸形足). The doctors assured us that with treatment he would be able to walk normally— but would never run very well. Consequently, the first three years of his life were spent in surgery, casts and braces. Little as he was, he displayed great bravery and courage in the face of the painful treatment. With the medical process done, Joey was picking up day by day and finally he could walk without any aid. By the time he was eight years old, people wouldn’t know he had a problem when seeing him walk, which greatly relieved us.
The children in our neighborhood ran around as most children do during play, and Joey would jump right in and run and play, too. Hoping him to have a happy and normal childhood as other kids, we didn’t discourage him from running or playing with peers despite the fact that we were packed with concerns. We never told him that he probably wouldn’t be able to run as well as other children. So he didn’t know.
In seventh grade he decided to go out for the cross-country team. Every day he trained with the team. He worked harder and ran more than any of the others — perhaps he sensed the abilities that seemed to come naturally to so many others did not come to him. Although the entire team ran, only the top seven runners had the potential to score points for the school. We didn’t tell him he probably would never make the team, so he didn’t know.
Para.1: He continued to run four to five miles a day, every day— even the day he had a 39°C fever.
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Para.2: The names of the team runners would be announced in two weeks.
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文章大意：
本文讲述了一对年轻夫妇迎来天生畸形足的儿子 Joey，虽历经手术、矫正等痛苦治疗，Joey 勇敢面对，到八岁时行走已无异样。他热爱奔跑玩耍，和邻里孩子无异，父母也未告知他身体的局限。七年级时，他决心加入越野队，每天刻苦训练，甚至发烧 39°C 都不休息。两周后，越野队队员名单将公布，他满心期待，最终成功入选，用坚持和勇气证明了自己，实现梦想。
伏笔及续写回应：
伏笔：医生断言 Joey 虽能正常走路但跑不好，为故事埋下悬念，他的跑步之路似乎注定艰难。回应：Joey 全然不知这一断言，凭借自身努力打破限制，成功入选越野队，证明医生判断有误。
伏笔：父母明知 Joey 身体状况特殊，却未阻止他和同龄人奔跑玩耍，还隐瞒他跑不过别人的可能。回应：这份隐瞒给予 Joey 自信，让他毫无顾忌地追求跑步梦想，在训练中勇往直前。
伏笔：Joey 训练格外刻苦，比其他人跑得更多更努力，暗示他内心或许意识到自身不足，想要加倍弥补。回应：发烧仍坚持训练，这种超出常人的毅力使他在竞争中脱颖而出，最终入选。
伏笔：只有前七名选手能为学校得分，而加入越野队的竞争激烈，Joey 面临巨大挑战。回应：他凭借不懈努力成功跻身前七，达成目标，让众人看到他的无限潜力。
伏笔：Joey 发烧仍不放弃训练，展现出非凡的执着。回应：这份执着延续到名单公布前，他始终刻苦训练，最终赢得入选机会，达成梦想。
续写要点：
第一段：
情感线：突出 Joey 的坚韧执着，即便身体不适也绝不退缩，对跑步的热爱和渴望愈发炽热。
故事线：继续描述 Joey 在发烧后的训练日常，他克服身体的疲惫与不适，如何调整训练方式，可能会向教练或队友请教提升速度的技巧，每一次奔跑都离梦想更近一步。
例如：In the following days after the fever, Joey's body was still weak, but his spirit remained unbroken. He adjusted his training plan slightly, focusing more on endurance and technique. Early in the morning, when the world was still asleep, he would be out on the track, practicing his breathing and stride length. His coach, noticing his determination, offered extra guidance, and Joey soaked up every piece of advice like a sponge.
第二段：
情感线：展现 Joey 得知入选后的喜悦、自豪与感恩，同时也体现家人、队友的欣慰与骄傲。
故事线：描绘名单宣布那一刻的场景细节，Joey 的反应、周围人的欢呼，以及后续他在队里的表现，如何激励队友，为学校赢得荣誉。
例如：When Joey's name was called, the air seemed to freeze for a second, and then erupted into deafening cheers. Joey's eyes widened in disbelief before filling with tears of joy. He hugged his coach and teammates tightly, feeling an overwhelming sense of gratitude. From then on, he became the team's inspiration, leading by example and helping the school achieve remarkable results in competitions.
情感线：
整个故事的情感基调从 Joey 出生时父母的担忧，到成长过程中对他勇敢面对治疗的欣慰，再到他追求跑步梦想时家人的揪心与期待，最终在他入选越野队时化为喜悦、自豪与感动。情感层层递进，紧扣读者心弦。
主旨升华句：
Obstacles are meant to be overcome, and Joey's journey is a living proof that with unwavering determination, one can shatter any limitations.（障碍就是用来被克服的，Joey 的历程就是鲜活的例证，凭借坚定决心，一个人能够打破任何限制。）
In the face of adversity, it's not the physical strength but the strength of the will that paves the way to success. Joey has shown us just that.（在逆境面前，铺就成功之路的并非身体力量，而是意志力。Joey 向我们展现的正是如此。）
Joey's story teaches us that dreams don't discriminate. No matter what challenges we face, as long as we hold on tight to our aspirations, we can make them come true.（Joey 的故事教导我们，梦想一视同仁。无论我们面临何种挑战，只要紧紧抓住自己的抱负，就能让梦想成真。）
The power of belief and hard work combined is unstoppable. Joey, with his disabled feet, ran his way into a bright future, inspiring us all.（信念与努力相结合的力量势不可挡。双脚残疾的 Joey 奔跑着迈向光明未来，激励着我们所有人。）
When life gives you a less-than-perfect start, don't despair. Like Joey, turn it into fuel for your dreams and prove that you are the master of your destiny.（当生活给了你一个不太完美的开端，不要绝望。像 Joey 一样，将其转化为梦想的动力，证明你是自己命运的主宰。）
写作示范一：
Para.1: He continued to run four to five miles a day, every day — even the day he had a 39°C fever. The next morning, his legs felt like lead, and every step was a struggle, but Joey gritted his teeth. He knew he couldn't afford to slack off. Instead of his usual route, he chose a flatter path to reduce the strain on his weak body. He also started timing himself more meticulously, analyzing each run to find areas for improvement. His coach, seeing his dedication, lent him a training manual filled with advanced techniques. Joey devoured it, staying up late to study and then applying what he learned the next day. The fatigue was almost overwhelming, but his dream of making the team kept him going.
Para.2: The names of the team runners would be announced in two weeks. As the days ticked by, Joey's anxiety grew, but so did his confidence. He had put in the work, and he believed in himself. When the big day arrived, the sun was shining brightly, as if blessing the occasion. Joey stood in the front row, his heart pounding so hard he could hear it in his ears. The coach began to announce the names, and with each one, Joey's hope soared higher. Finally, when his name rang out, the world seemed to stand still for a moment. Then, a tidal wave of cheers crashed over him. Joey's eyes filled with tears as he hugged his parents and thanked his coach and teammates. From that day on, he became a symbol of perseverance on the team, leading them to victory after victory and proving that nothing can hold back a determined heart.
写作示范二：
Para.1: He continued to run four to five miles a day, every day — even the day he had a 39°C fever. After that feverish day, Joey's body protested, but his mind was set. He started running earlier in the morning to avoid the midday heat that drained his energy. He also befriended a senior runner on the team who shared some secrets of pacing and endurance. Joey took these tips to heart and practiced them religiously. His parents, worried sick, tried to convince him to take it easy, but he just smiled and said, "I'm fine, I'm getting closer to my dream." And indeed, he was. His speed gradually improved, and his form became more consistent, despite the lingering weakness in his legs.
Para.2: The names of the team runners would be announced in two weeks. Joey's nerves were on edge, but he channelled that energy into his final preparations. He visualized himself crossing the finish line first, hearing the cheers of the crowd. When the moment came, the field was silent, save for the rustling of the wind. Joey's palms were sweaty as he waited. The coach cleared his throat and began to read the names. Joey's eyes scanned the coach's face for any sign of his fate. And then, in a glorious moment, his name was called. The silence shattered into a cacophony of applause and shouts. Joey leaped into the air, his joy uncontainable. He had made it, against all odds. From then on, he inspired everyone around him with his story, showing that with courage and tenacity, you can reach for the stars no matter what obstacles you face.

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