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One day, a friend of mine and I were walking down a deserted Mexican beach at sunset. When we walked along the beach and shot the bull, we saw a man occupying himself with something in the distance. Curiosity drove us to find out what he was doing.
As we grew nearer, we noticed that the man kept leaning down, picking something up and throwing it out into the water. Time and time again, he kept casting things into the ocean. We felt a little more confused about his odd action. So we decided to approach even closer, and then we knew that the man was picking up starfish that had been washed up on the beach and, one at a time, he was throwing them back into the water.
My friend was puzzled. He came up to the man and asked, “Good evening, friend. I was wondering what you’re doing.” Without stopping his work, the man answered, “I’m throwing these starfish back into the ocean. You see, it’s low tide right now and all of these starfish have been washed up onto the shore. If I don’t throw them back into the sea, they will die up here from lack of oxygen.” “I understand,” said my friend, “but there must be thousands of starfish on this beach. You can’t possibly get to all of them. There are simply too many. You are just wasting your time doing something meaningless. And don’t you realize this is probably happening on hundreds of beaches all up and down this coast Can’t you see that you can’t possibly make a difference ”
The man smiled, bent down, and picked up another starfish, and as he threw it back into the sea, he replied in a firm voice, “Made a difference to that one!”
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I knew what my friend would do when he looked at me.
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We said goodbye to the man, tired but happy.
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文章大意（300字）： 这篇文章讲述了作者和一个朋友在墨西哥的海滩上散步时，遇到了一个正在拯救被潮水冲上岸的海星的男子。男子的行为引起了他们的好奇，当得知这些海星如果不被扔回海里就会因缺氧而死时，作者的朋友认为这个任务太过庞大，男子的努力显得微不足道。然而，男子用简单而有力的回答“对那一个海星来说，我的行为是有意义的”来回应朋友的质疑。这个回答深刻影响了作者和他的朋友，他们最终加入了拯救海星的行动，体会到了即使是微小的努力也能带来改变。
伏笔及回应：
伏笔：作者和朋友在海滩上散步时，看到远处有个男子在忙碌。 回应：他们出于好奇走近，发现男子正在拯救海星。
伏笔：男子不断地将海星扔回海里。 回应：作者和朋友了解到这是因为海星需要水分才能生存。
伏笔：朋友对男子的行为表示疑惑，认为海滩上海星太多，无法全部救起。 回应：男子用“对那一个海星来说，我的行为是有意义的”来回答。
伏笔：男子的行为和话语让作者和他的朋友开始反思。 回应：他们决定加入男子，一起拯救海星。
伏笔：作者和他的朋友开始参与拯救海星的行动。 回应：他们体会到了即使是微小的努力也能带来改变。
续写要点（两段）：
第一段：描述作者和他的朋友决定加入男子拯救海星的行动，并表达他们的感受。
第二段：描述他们告别男子后的心情，以及他们从这次经历中学到的教训。
情感线： 文章中的情感线是作者和他的朋友从最初的好奇和疑惑，到被男子的行为和话语所感动，最终加入拯救海星的行动，并从中获得深刻的感悟。
故事线： 故事从作者和他的朋友在海滩上散步开始，经历了对男子行为的好奇、疑惑、反思，到最终的行动参与和感悟。
主旨升华句（5句英文）：
"Small acts of kindness can create ripples of change."
"Every life saved is a victory, no matter how small it may seem."
"Compassion in action is the most powerful force for change."
"It's not the size of the task that matters, but the impact of the effort."
"One person can make a difference, and together we can change the world."
两篇写作示范：
示范一：
I knew what my friend would do when he looked at me. His eyes mirrored the same spark of determination that had ignited within me. Without a word, we both began to bend down, picking up the starfish and casting them back into the ocean. Each throw felt like a silent promise to the sea, a commitment to life. The man's simple act had transformed from a solitary struggle into a collective effort, and we were part of it. As the sun dipped below the horizon, we worked, our hands dirty but our hearts full.
We said goodbye to the man, tired but happy. The beach, once a silent witness to our indifference, now bore the marks of our compassion. The sky, ablaze with the colors of the setting sun, seemed to celebrate our small victories. We walked away with a newfound understanding that in a world where problems seem insurmountable, it is the individual who chooses to act that can tip the scales of change.
示范二：
I knew what my friend would do when he looked at me. His expression was one of resolve, a reflection of the silent agreement that had formed between us. We joined the man, our hands reaching for the starfish, our hearts reaching for a purpose. Each starfish that left our hands was a tangible symbol of hope, a testament to the belief that no effort is too small when it comes to saving a life. The man's words resonated with us as we worked, our actions a quiet chorus to his philosophy of making a difference.
We said goodbye to the man, tired but happy. The beach, once a place of leisure, had become a classroom where we learned the power of collective compassion. As we left, the stars began to twinkle above, as if in approval of our actions. We carried with us the knowledge that even on the vast canvas of the world, the stroke of an individual's kindness can paint a brighter future.
【答案】参考范文：
I knew what my friend would do when he looked at me. Instead of saying a word, we nodded at each other and went to the man. My friend asked gently, “Would you mind us joining you ” “Of course not, I am glad that we have the same desire,” the man replied, as if relieved. We bent down, picked up starfish and threw them into the sea as the man did. We were so absorbed in our work that night fell before we knew it. It’s time that we had to leave.
We said goodbye to the man, tired but happy. On the way back home, we exchanged our opinions on the man and shared our feelings with each other. We reached a conclusion that we had done something worth memorizing. We ourselves feel that what we’re doing is just a drop in the ocean, but the ocean would be less because of that missing drop. Only if we all do our small part can we make the world a better place.

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