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Sometimes you can count on (指望) people to do the right thing. When Dave Tally found a backpack with a laptop and an envelope full of cash in 2010, he could have considered it a very lucky day. The homeless man counted $3,300 in the bag, an amount that would make a huge difference in his life. However, as tempting (诱人的) as it was to keep the money, deep down he knew it wasn’t the right thing to do.
Back then, Tally was sleeping in the basements of local churches and trying to save up enough money to fix his only source of transportation: his bike. That money could have bought him, a brand new one. Instead, he turned the bag to his boss at the Tempe Community Action Agency, an organization that helps homeless people in the area find jobs. Tally had been working there part-time.
“Finding the envelope with the cash was just exciting. There were lots of crazy thoughts that went through my head,” Tally told ABC News at the time. “I went into the survival mode for a moment, actually more than a moment, thinking about all the things I could do for myself.”
“I beat myself up pretty hard for even thinking I would spend one cent of that person’s money,” Tally added.
After Tally made up his mind to return the bag, he faced the problem of tracking down its owner. There were no identifiers on the backpack or a way to get into the laptop without a password. But then someone suggested checking the flash drive (闪存盘) that they’d also found inside the bag to see if it held any clues (线索).
It sure did. Arizona State University student Bryan Belanger had uploaded his resume (简历) to the drive, easily providing Tally with his contact information. As it turned out, Bryan Belanger was carrying that cash because he was buying a used car from Craigslist website, and he accidentally left his belongings in a station on the way to work.
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Belanger was regretful for his carelessness and thought his backpack was gone forever.
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Tally said the day he found the money’s rightful owner was the day his life changed.
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文章大意：
2010 年，无家可归的 Dave Tally 捡到一个装有笔记本电脑和 3300 美元现金的背包，尽管这笔钱对急需修理自行车、改善生活的他极具诱惑，但他深知不应据为己有，于是决定归还。他就职于帮助无家可归者找工作的机构，在同事建议下，通过背包内闪存盘上的简历找到了失主 —— 正准备用这笔钱买二手车的大学生 Bryan Belanger，他因粗心遗落背包，本以为找不回来了。
伏笔及续写回应：
伏笔：Tally 无家可归且自行车需修理，暗示他经济窘迫，急需钱财。
回应：续写中可写 Belanger 得知 Tally 处境后，不仅感恩归还，还发起募捐帮 Tally 改善生活，解决他的燃眉之急。
伏笔：提到 Tally 工作的社区行动机构帮助无家可归者找工作，为后文他因善举获回报做铺垫。
回应：当地企业听闻 Tally 事迹，主动联系机构，为他提供一份全职且待遇优厚的工作，认可他的诚信。
伏笔：背包里有闪存盘，这是找到失主的关键线索，突出物品细节的重要性。
回应：后续 Belanger 为表感激，送 Tally 一个新的、存储容量更大的闪存盘，方便他日常工作使用。
伏笔：Tally 归还背包时经历内心挣扎，展现人性抉择，使人物更立体。
回应：续写里当面对各种回报，Tally 再次坚守本心，他的正直品格感染周围人，大家纷纷以他为榜样践行诚信。
伏笔：Belanger 用现金买二手车，这笔钱对他很重要，侧面烘托 Tally 归还行为的可贵。
回应：Belanger 买到车后，常载着 Tally 四处奔波，帮他参与志愿活动，二人成为挚友共同传递善意。
续写要点：
第一段：
情感线：Belanger 从懊悔、绝望转为惊喜、感激。
故事线：接到 Tally 电话时，Belanger 不敢相信，匆忙赶到约定地点，看到失而复得的背包，激动落泪，对 Tally 连声道谢，坚持要给予酬谢，被 Tally 婉拒。
第二段：
情感线：Tally 从归还后的平静欣慰，到因生活转变而满怀希望与感恩。
故事线：Tally 的善举传开，社区居民纷纷点赞，爱心人士送他生活用品，机构给他升职机会，他也更积极投身公益，用行动影响他人。
主旨升华句：
“Honesty is the best policy, and it always paves the way for unexpected blessings.”（诚实乃上策，它总会为意想不到的福祉铺路。）
“Doing the right thing, even in the toughest times, can spark a chain reaction of kindness.”（即使在最艰难的时候，做正确的事也能引发一连串的善意。）
“A small act of integrity can make a big splash in the pool of humanity, creating ripples of change.”（一个小小的正直之举能在人性之池中激起大水花，产生变革的涟漪。）
“True wealth lies not in what we possess, but in the goodness we share and the lives we touch.”（真正的财富不在于我们拥有什么，而在于我们分享的善意以及所触及的生命。）
“When we choose to be honest, we not only return what's lost, but also find a part of our better selves.”（当我们选择诚实时，我们不仅归还了丢失的东西，还找到了更好的自己。）
写作示范一：
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Belanger was regretful for his carelessness and thought his backpack was gone forever. But one day, his phone rang, and it was Tally. Hearing the news that his backpack had been found, Belanger was stunned. He rushed to the place Tally mentioned, his heart pounding. When he saw his belongings intact, tears streamed down his cheeks. “I can't believe it! You're a lifesaver,” he exclaimed, grabbing Tally's hand and shaking it vigorously. He reached for his wallet, intending to give Tally a reward, but Tally just smiled and said he didn't do it for the money.
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Tally said the day he found the money’s rightful owner was the day his life changed. Word of his honesty spread like wildfire in the community. People were touched by his selfless act and started to offer help. The local grocery store provided him with free food for a month, and the community center gave him a warm place to stay. Tally was overwhelmed with gratitude. He realized that by doing the right thing, he had not only restored Belanger's faith in humanity but also opened the door to a new life for himself. From then on, he dedicated himself to helping others, becoming a shining example of kindness in the neighborhood.
写作示范二：
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Belanger was regretful for his carelessness and thought his backpack was gone forever. Suddenly, a call came through, and on the other end was Tally. Belanger was so astonished that he almost dropped the phone. Racing to the rendezvous point, he saw Tally standing there with his backpack. His eyes widened in disbelief, then filled with tears of joy. “Thank you so much! I don't know what I would have done without you,” he choked out. He tried to press some cash into Tally's hand, but Tally firmly declined, saying it was his moral obligation.
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Tally said the day he found the money’s rightful owner was the day his life changed. The story got picked up by the local media, and Tally became an overnight celebrity. A local business owner, impressed by his integrity, offered him a well-paid job. Tally accepted it gratefully. Meanwhile, Belanger and Tally became good friends. They often volunteered together, spreading the message of honesty and kindness. Tally knew that his one decision had not only changed his life but also set off a wave of positive change in the community, proving that goodness always begets more goodness.
【答案】
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Belanger was regretful for his carelessness and thought his backpack was gone forever. When he saw Tally with his backpack, he was so moved that he offered a cash reward which was turned down by Tally. Meanwhile, Tally’s story made the local news, and strangers began sending him cheques and seeking him out to hand him cash in person. As a result, he had more than enough to fix his bike; what’s more, he was able to use his experience to educate others and change the way people think of homeless people.
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Tally said the day he found the money’s rightful owner was the day his life changed. From then on, people kept sending him donations to the point where he was able to get his own apartment and stop sleeping in church basements. But he never gave up helping people; he gave some of the donations to Tempe Community Action Agency and encouraged people to provide homeless people with more work opportunities. In his efforts, more homeless people found suitable jobs, improved their living conditions, and turned their lives around.

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