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浙江强基联盟2024年12月高三联考英语试题
第四部分 写作 (共两节，满分40 分 )
第一节 (满分15分)
假定你是李华，你的英国好友Peter 准备参加中文诗歌朗诵大赛，他发来练习视频询问你的建议 ，请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
1.指出朗诵问题；
2.提出改进建议。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
Yours, Li Hua
第二节(满分25分)
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Tom Young was on his way home from a hard day’s work at a construction site, carrying his worn-out hammer which had accompanied him through thick and thin. With each step, his mind was filled with worry as he racked his brain to find money for his seriously ill son, Andrew, who was in great need of heart surgery.
Tom had run out of choices and time. Desperation was beginning to set in, but he refused to let his son suffer helplessly. As he walked, the weight of his troubles pressed heavily on his shoulders. So desperate was he that he even heard a hum in his ears. The next moment the hum was entirely covered by a loud sound.
He turned in shock, and what he saw took his breath away. An expensive luxury car was wrapped around a big tree on the other side of the street, with its front twisted and flames starting to spring up from the car.
Without a second thought, he ran to the flaming car. He noticed that although the young lady in the driver's seat did not seem to have been severely injured—apparently because of the open airbag-she was unconscious. Tom saw that the flames began to grow increasingly intense. He realized that he had to get the girl out of the car immediately because there was a high risk of the vehicle exploding at any time.
He grabbed the handle and pulled it, but the door was bent and did not open. He used all his strength and tried again, but in vain. It was a sports car, so it had only two doors, and the other one was blocked by the tree. He decided that he had to break the glass to take her out as quickly as possible. He struck it forcefully with his fist but realized that there was no way he could break the thick glass with bare hands, and the flames were getting bigger.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Time was running out, and his mind raced madly. ___________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________
The girl was sad to know Tom’s trouble from the local news. _____________________________________
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第二节(满分25分)
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Tom Young was on his way home from a hard day’s work at a construction site, carrying his worn-out hammer(非谓语动词做伴随动作) which had accompanied him through thick and thin(定从). With each step, his mind was filled with worry as he racked his brain to find money for his seriously ill son(状从), Andrew, who was in great need of heart surgery(定从).
Tom had run out of choices and time. Desperation was beginning to set in, but he refused to let his son suffer helplessly. As he walked(状从), the weight of his troubles pressed heavily on his shoulders. So desperate was he(倒装句) that he even heard a hum in his ears(状从). The next moment the hum was entirely covered by a loud sound.
He turned in shock, and what he saw(主从) took his breath away. An expensive luxury car was wrapped around a big tree on the other side of the street, with its front twisted and flames starting to spring up from the car(非谓语动词做伴随动作).
Without a second thought, he ran to the flaming car. He noticed that although the young lady in the driver's seat did not seem to have been severely injured—apparently because of the open airbag-she was unconscious. Tom saw that the flames began to grow increasingly intense(宾从). He realized that he had to get the girl out of the car immediately(宾从) because there was a high risk of the vehicle exploding at any time(状从).
He grabbed the handle and pulled it, but the door was bent and did not open. He used all his strength and tried again, but in vain. It was a sports car, so it had only two doors, and the other one was blocked by the tree. He decided that he had to break the glass to take her out as quickly as possible(宾从). He struck it forcefully with his fist but realized that there was no way(宾从) he could break the thick glass with bare hands(定从), and the flames were getting bigger.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Time was running out, and his mind raced madly.
The girl was sad to know Tom’s trouble from the local news.
1. 高考读后续写分析表
分析内容 具体分析 原文反应句
续写类型 动作与情感类（以紧张事件为中心，强调人物行动和心理成长） "Without a second thought, he ran to the flaming car."
续写思路 构思围绕两部分：1. 描写Tom的紧急救援，突出勇敢与果断；2. 描写女司机如何感恩并帮助解决Tom的困境，形成情感升华。 "Tom saw that the flames began to grow increasingly intense."
框架布局 第一段：描述Tom如何克服困难救出女孩；第二段：女孩如何感恩并为Tom解决问题。 "He struck it forcefully with his fist but realized that there was no way he could break the thick glass with bare hands."
承接事项 延续Tom的无私与勇敢特质，细节体现救援过程的危险性；注意与原文中紧张的氛围衔接。 "He decided that he had to break the glass to take her out as quickly as possible."
整体注意事项 1. 动作描写细致化；2. 情感描写升华；3. 注意逻辑连贯，符合人物特性；4. 留意时间线与空间转换的自然衔接。 "He turned in shock, and what he saw took his breath away."
巧妙设计续写 设计女孩主动寻找Tom，展现感恩与善良，并安排她帮助Tom渡过经济难关，形成温暖结局。 "The girl was sad to know Tom’s trouble from the local news."
2. 故事山模式分析
思维导图内容（Story Mountain）
引入（Beginning）：Tom面对经济困境，为儿子的手术发愁。
原文句子："...carrying his worn-out hammer which had accompanied him through thick and thin."
发展（Build-up）：目睹车祸，发现情况紧急。
原文句子："...what he saw took his breath away."
高潮（Climax）：Tom冒险营救女孩。
原文句子："...he realized that he had to get the girl out of the car immediately because there was a high risk of the vehicle exploding at any time."
下降（Falling Action）：女孩获救，Tom虽受伤却坚持完成营救。
原文句子："...he struck it forcefully with his fist but realized that there was no way he could break the thick glass with bare hands."
结局（Resolution）：女孩感恩帮助Tom，解决他儿子的手术资金问题。
原文句子："The girl was sad to know Tom’s trouble from the local news."
3. 动作、心理、环境描写推荐例句
类别 英文例句
动作描写 1. He smashed the window with all his might, ignoring the pain in his hand.
2. He dragged her out just as the flames roared higher.
3. His hands trembled as he checked for her pulse.
心理描写 1. Desperation and fear surged through him like a tidal wave.
2. He felt a mix of relief and pain as she finally opened her eyes.
3. His heart pounded wildly in his chest.
环境描写 1. Smoke billowed from the crumpled car, mixing with the acrid smell of burning rubber.
2. The night air was thick with tension as onlookers gathered.
3. The flames cast eerie shadows on the pavement.
4. 高中语法与搭配现象分析
语法现象 例句
现在分词作状语 "Carrying his worn-out hammer, he walked home from work."
倒装句 "So desperate was he that he even heard a hum in his ears."
虚拟语气 "He realized that if he didn’t act quickly, it would be too late."
常见搭配 1. "run out of choices" （耗尽选择）
2. "press heavily on his shoulders" （重压心头）
3. "break the glass" （打破玻璃）
高级短语积累 1. "through thick and thin" （同甘共苦）
2. "a high risk of" （极高的风险）
3. "spring up" （突然出现）
Possible Answer 1:
Paragraph 1
Time was running out, and his mind raced madly.(状从) Tom quickly realized that his worn-out hammer might be his only hope(宾从). He smashed it against the car window with all his strength, each blow sending shockwaves through his arms(独立主格). Finally, the glass shattered, and he reached inside, unfastening the seatbelt(非谓语动词做伴随动作) as the flames drew dangerously close(状从). Ignoring the heat and the acrid smoke(非谓语动词做伴随动作), he pulled the young woman out of the car just as it burst into flames(as状从). Both of them stumbled to the ground, coughing but alive(非谓语动词做伴随动作). Tom’s heart was pounding, but he felt a wave of relief as the woman began to stir(as状从). “You’re safe now,” he whispered, exhaustion overtaking him(独立主格).
Paragraph 2
The girl was sad to know Tom’s trouble from the local news. She learned about his financial struggles and the urgency of his son’s surgery. Touched by his selflessness(非谓语动词做原因状语), she decided to help. Using her influence and resources(非谓语动词做伴随动作), she organized a fundraiser for Tom’s family. The story of his heroic act spread quickly, and donations poured in. Soon, Tom’s son underwent the life-saving operation. Standing beside his recovered child(非谓语动词做伴随动作), Tom couldn’t hold back his tears. The young woman, now a close family friend, smiled and said, “You saved my life. It’s only right that I help save your son’s.”
Possible Answer 2:
Paragraph 1
Time was running out, and his mind raced madly. Spotting a heavy stone nearby(非谓语动词做伴随动作), Tom grabbed it and slammed it against the car window. With a loud crash, the glass gave way, and he reached in to unlock the door. Pulling the unconscious girl into his arms(非谓语动词做伴随动作), he staggered away from the vehicle as the flames roared behind him(非谓语动词做伴随动作). Onlookers cheered as he placed her gently on the ground(as状从), checking her breathing(非谓语动词做伴随动作). Sirens wailed in the distance, and Tom sighed in relief, knowing she was safe(非谓语+宾从). Despite his aching body and burned hands, he felt a deep sense of fulfillment.
Paragraph 2
The girl was sad to know Tom’s trouble from the local news. Determined to repay his kindness(非谓语动词短语做定语), she reached out to him. Inspired by his bravery(非谓语动词做原因状语), the community rallied around Tom’s family, offering support and donations(非谓语动词做伴随动作). Local businesses chipped in, and within days, enough funds were raised for his son’s surgery. During the operation, Tom held the girl’s hand tightly, their bond growing stronger(独立主格). When the surgeon announced the success of the procedure(状从), cheers erupted. Tom turned to the girl with tears in his eyes. “You didn’t just save my son—you gave me hope,” he said gratefully.
Possible Answer 3:
Paragraph 1
Time was running out, and his mind raced madly. Desperation fueled his strength as he grabbed a metal rod from the roadside(as状从). With a loud grunt, he struck the window repeatedly until it cracked(状从). Shards of glass rained down as he reached in(as状从), unmindful of the cuts on his arms(adj做补语). The flames were nearly upon them, but Tom refused to give up. With one final pull, he freed the girl and carried her to safety. Collapsing onto the pavement(非谓语动词做伴随动作), he gasped for air, his clothes singed but his spirit unbroken.(独立主格)
Paragraph 2
The girl was sad to know Tom’s trouble from the local news. Grateful for her second chance at life(adj短语做原因状语), she visited him in the hospital, where he was recovering from his injuries(定从). When she learned about his son’s condition, she vowed to help. Using her network(非谓语动词短语做伴随动作), she launched a charity campaign, and the story of Tom’s heroism touched hearts nationwide. Donations flooded in, far exceeding the required amount. A few weeks later, Tom watched his son recover, his heart full of gratitude(独立主格). The girl smiled, saying(非谓语动词短语做伴随动作), “Your courage saved me; now it’s my turn to give back.”
亮点分析
语法加分点：
倒装句："So desperate was he that he forgot his own injuries."
分词作状语："Ignoring the pain, he smashed the window repeatedly."
非限制性定语从句："The girl, who had been unconscious moments before, now opened her eyes."
情感描写亮点：
"His heart ached with desperation, yet he refused to let fear control him."
"Tears streamed down his face as he embraced his son."
动作描写亮点：
"With trembling hands, he checked her pulse and sighed in relief."
"He struck the window with all his might, each blow reverberating in his chest."
Possible Answer（官方）
第一节 应用文
One possible version:
Dear peter,
Thank you so much for sharing your video with me.I’m delighted to know your participation in the Chinese poetry Recitation Competition.
After watching your video, I’ve identified a couple of areas you could improve(定从). There are some tone errors in the pronunciation of Chinese characters. Mandarin is known for its four distinct tones, each conveying a different meaning(非谓语动词做后置定语). Therefore, mastering them(非谓语动词做主语) is crucial for accurate understanding. Besides, I’ve noticed problems with the pauses, which may result from a misunderstanding of a poem’s meaning(定从). To solve these problems, I highly recommend that you thoroughly understand the meaning of the poem before your next practice. Additionally, listening to native speakers reciting the poem and mimicking their tone and rhythm(非谓语动词短语做主语) will undoubtedly help you improve.
Keep up the great work, and I’m firmly convinced that you’ll shine in the competition(宾从).
Yours,
Li Hua
第二节 读后续写
One possible version:
Time was running out, and his mind raced madly. In a moment of clarity, Tom remembered the worn-out hammer in his hand. It had been a reliable companion through countless days of labor, and now it was his only hope. With a determined swing, he smashed the hammer against the window, shattering the glass with a loud crash(非谓语动词短语做伴随动作). Carefully, he reached into the vehicle, avoiding the jagged edges(非谓语动词短语做伴随动作), and unbuckled the unconscious young lady. With all his strength, he pulled her out, dragging her a safe distance from the car(非谓语动词短语做伴随动作) just as the flames roared fiercely, engulfing the vehicle in a fiery blaze(非谓语动词短语做伴随动作). Soon, Tom’s heroic deed went viral.
The girl was sad to know Tom’s trouble from the local news. She learned about his struggle to find money for his son’s heart surgery and felt a deep sense of empathy for his situation. Remembering how he had risked his life to save her(非谓语动词短语+宾从), she decided to take action. With her family’s connections and resources, she organized a fundraising campaign to help cover the medical expenses for Andrew’s surgery. As word spread about Tom’ s story, the community rallied together, contributing whatever they could(非谓语动词短语+宾从). Grateful for the support(adj短语做原因状语), Tom felt a renewed sense of hope. The girl, now a friend, visited him in the hospital, bringing not just financial help but also encouragement. Their bond grew stronger, united by the challenges(非谓语动词做原因状语) they faced and the lives they had touched.
词汇 词性（汉语） 词义（汉语） 近义词（英语） 联想词 例句
through thick and thin 固定搭配 无论好坏或困难，始终不渝地支持某人或某事 through ups and downs, in good times and bad 忠诚、坚持 "She has always been there for me through thick and thin."
racked his brain 短语动词 费尽心思，绞尽脑汁 agonize, puzzle over 思考、努力 "He racked his brain trying to remember where he left his keys."
run out of choices and time 短语 选择和时间都已用尽，陷入困境 out of options, no time left 紧急、决定 "We have run out of choices and time, so we must make a decision now."
heard a hum in his ears 短语 听见耳边传来嗡嗡声 buzz, ring 噪音、耳鸣 "After the loud concert, he heard a hum in his ears for hours."
spring up 短语动词 突然出现，迅速产生 emerge, appear 出现、突发 "New businesses have sprung up all over the city in recent years."
with his fist 短语 用拳头（指某人用拳头做某事） with his hand, using his fist 拳头、打击 "He struck the wall with his fist in frustration."
shatter 动词 打碎，粉碎 break, smash, crack 摔碎、破裂 "The glass shattered when it hit the ground."
acrid 形容词 刺鼻的，尖刻的 pungent, sharp, biting 刺激、气味 "The acrid smell of smoke filled the room."
stumble 动词 踌躇，绊倒 trip, falter, stagger 摔倒、失足 "He stumbled over the rock while walking in the dark."
pour in 短语动词 涌入，流入 flood in, stream in 涌动、涌现 "Support from fans poured in after the athlete’s injury."
slam 动词 砰地关上（门、窗等）；猛击 bang, strike, bang shut 听觉、冲击 "She slammed the door behind her, frustrated with the situation."
stagger 动词 蹒跚，摇晃 stagger, stumble, wobble 失去平衡、摇晃 "He staggered after drinking too much and nearly fell."
roar 动词 吼叫，轰鸣 yell, shout, bellow 巨响、力量 "The lion roared loudly in the jungle."
reach out to 短语动词 向某人伸出援手，联系某人 contact, connect with 帮助、沟通 "She reached out to the organization for support during a difficult time."
rally 动词 集合，恢复，重振 gather, regroup, recover 支持、力量 "The team rallied after their defeat and won the next match."
chip in 短语动词 捐助，插话 contribute, pitch in, add 帮助、捐款 "Everyone chipped in to buy a gift for the teacher."
grunt 动词 发出咕哝声，呻吟 groan, mumble 不耐烦、声音 "He grunted in pain as he lifted the heavy box."
shard 名词 碎片，碎片状物体 fragment, sliver, piece 破碎、尖锐 "She stepped on a shard of glass that had fallen on the floor."
rain down 短语动词 （大量地）降落，倾泻 pour down, shower 下降、打击 "The leaves rained down from the trees in autumn."
gasp 动词 喘息，倒吸气 pant, inhale 呼吸、惊讶 "She gasped in shock when she saw the surprise gift."
singe 动词 烧焦，轻微灼伤 scorch, burn, singe 火、伤害 "He singed the edges of the paper when it got too close to the flame."
mimic 动词 模仿，学样 imitate, copy, resemble 模仿、行为 "He mimicked the teacher’s voice perfectly during the class."
smash 动词 粉碎，打碎 break, shatter, crush 强力、损坏 "She accidentally smashed the vase when she knocked it over."
unbuckle 动词 解开（扣子、带子等） unfasten, undo 解开、放松 "He unbuckled his seatbelt as the car came to a stop."
go viral 短语动词 快速传播（尤其指视频、照片等在网络上迅速流行） spread rapidly, gain popularity 网络、趋势 "The video of the cat dancing went viral in just a few hours."
cover the expense 短语 承担费用，支付开销 pay for, finance 费用、支付 "The company agreed to cover the expense of the business trip."

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