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Tip 1: a chain of actions (动作链)
抱住女儿=冲向前+蹲下+ 一把抱住
She dashed forward, knelt down and held her daughter into her arms.
双胞胎祝母亲节日快乐。
=双胞胎走到床边+递上早餐+说母亲节快乐。
The twins went to their mothe’s bed, handed the breakfast to their mother, and said “Happy Mother’s Day, mom!”
Tip 2: 句子 + 非谓
站在蛋糕前，Allen许愿想成为像他们一样的警察。
Standing in front of the cake, Allen wished to be a policeman like those in the room.
看着男孩泪盈盈的双眼，史密斯警官笑了。
Looking at Allen’s tearful eyes, Officer Smith laughed.
看见那个酷酷的模型车，Allen既高兴又震惊。
Seeing a cool model car..., Allen was so delighted and astonished.
看见孩子们做的早餐，母亲眼含泪意地笑了。
Seeing the breakfast the twins made, the mother smiled with tearful eyes.
Tip 3: with +O +OC
with+n./proun.+doing/done/to do /adj /adv. /prep. phrase /...
巧妙运用with复合结构作状语，可以有效合并零碎信息，使表达更加简洁，也使上下文的衔接流畅自然，给续写文章增色不少。(表示原因，条件，伴随)
He had lots of work to do, so he was unable to go home.
→ With lots of work to do, he was unable to ...
With his hands shaking gently, Allen smiled.
With his eyes wide open, Allen turned to Officer Smith with gratitude.
Allen的嗓音里充满了感动，热泪盈眶。
Allen’s voice was thick with movement, with tears welling up in his eyes.
,with his eyes brimming with tears.
Tip 4: 形容词（短语）作状语
He was eager for success,so he tried to catch every chance to show himself.
→ Eager for success, so he tried to catch every chance to show himself.
Depressed and helpless, Eric burst into tears.
Henry finally made it to the top of the mountain, hungry but excited.
Speechless and happy, she held her children tightly into her arms, with tears welling up in her eyes.
Tip 5: 形容词（短语）作状语
Allen was excited to see the policemen so he shouted loudly.
→ Excited to see the policemen, Allen shouted loudly.
Allen was curious about the gift. He opened the big bag.
→ Curious about the gift, he opened the big bag.
Tip 6: 无灵主语
无灵主语，即主语是没有生命力的东西，如时间、地点、自然现象等。常搭配有灵动词使用，即把没有生命力的东西，赋予有生命力的动作，从而增加主语的多样性，使语句更加生动，表达更加客观。
表示情感状态的抽象名词作主语
常见的名词：joy、excitement、fear、panic,anger、sorrow、despair等。
常见的谓语动词：seize、choke（使哽咽）、flood, creep(不知不觉地产生)，give way to (被取代)等。
Jim was very excited.
Excitement seized Jim.
She was hopeless and couldn’t say a word.
Despair choked her words.
He felt a sense of relief.
A great sense of relief flooded over him.
I had a slight feeling of doubt.
A slight feeling of suspicion crept over me.
A rush of exhilaration and joy engulfed Allen.
表示身体部位和音容的名词作主语
他十分高兴，容光焕发。
His face lit up/ brightened with pleasure.
约翰眼中闪着怒火。
John’s eyes flashed with anger.
笑声在房间里萦绕。
Laughter lingered around the room.
当她看到熟悉的字迹，便热泪盈眶。
When she saw the familiar handwriting, tears welled up in her eyes.
表示时间和地点的名词作主语
常见的名词：the town、the following year等。
常见的谓语动词：witness、find、see、boast(有引以为荣的事物)
南京见证了最近几年的巨大变化。
Nanjing has witnessed great changes in recent years.
这个镇引以为荣的是有一片美丽的湖。
The town boasts a beautiful lake.
表示行为和动作的名词作主语
常见的名词：sight、thought、glance、look、idea、feeling等。
常见的谓语动词：fill、strike、arouse、remind、delight、frighten、overwhelm(压倒)等。
我突然有了一个温馨的想法。
A warm idea suddly struck me.
看到这个场景让我心中充满了恐惧。
The sight of the scene filled me with horror.
焦虑的情绪压倒了他。
Feelings of anxiety overwhelmed him.
表示自然现象的名词作主语
常见的名词：fog、earthquake、rain等。
常见的谓语动词：blanket(覆盖)、come、bring、prevent、strike、hit、threaten等。
浓雾笼罩着大地。
The thick fog blanketed the field.
游客们由于下雨无法欣赏到满月。
The rain prevented tourists from enjoying the full moon.
地震到来，犹如夜贼，不做预告。
An earthquake came like a thief in the night, without warning.

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